Date: 27 Aug 2017 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Go Edward! Poor Bella!
Date: 27 Aug 2017 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Loved it!
Date: 27 Aug 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 22 May 2017 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the beginning of this story. What could be more perfect than a Mobward who is a Dom. It's perfection. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
Good luck finding James.
Aro you really are an idiot.
Knew he wouldn't take it lying down.
But they still have newton to worry about and now Jacob too by the looks of it.
Loved the ceremony.
Looking forward to more.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 29
I do think it had to be Bella.
I'm also glad.
Now it's just Aro.
Plus some stupid followers.
And Mike newton.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 29
I do think it had to be Bella.
I'm also glad.
Now it's just Aro.
Plus some stupid followers.
And Mike newton.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 29
I do think it had to be Bella.
I'm also glad.
Now it's just Aro.
Plus some stupid followers.
And Mike newton.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 28
Had a feeling Mike and Michael were the same.
So they do have a rat.
I hope they are covered for the wedding, that announcement is gonna cause two to kick off.
So Jasper manned up.
Finally.
Loved the collaring and the time they spent together.
So special.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm getting scared.
I know they must make it to the family take over of that I have faith, but I'm still damn scared.
What could go wrong between now and then.
Aro and James are already unhinged and they are gonna be at the wedding.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow.
Are James and Aro stepping up. Or trying too.
What a shame they didn't get to do their demonstration.
Glad they managed to enjoy part of the evening though.
Some fuckers are going to pay with that lives. Love it.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yay. So pleased for Rose.
Royce is gonna be toast.
Things are looking up for all concerned.
Love the dress.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh shit.
How close is that to the wedding.
Are they planning on announcing before this?
As for Maggie and her rapists. They got their karma. I loved their payback. That is how it should be.
Seems Alice is a little shocked about her friends new donna side.
Going to be shocks all round for sure.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward on meds is so funny.
But she can control him.
Aro and James are stepping up the threat.
It's only going to get worse when the truth comes out.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
Yeah, I think they'll let him go without the meds next time.
But then again he is funny.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 21
She could have gone all donna on him but I guess she needs ti think about Edward.
I have faith he will be fine.
I'm guessing it's either Aro or James that are being it, seeing they want the cullen's to take the fall for when they call the hit on Michael.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
Now the cat will be set amongst the pigeons.
Looks like we have another great dom/sub relationship in the making.
Their family is growing more and more.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved how she handled in Bella's words irene.
Yeah Edward should have told her about the shop before hand.
But in true form they worked it out.
Aro is gonna cause trouble.
Tonight will cause a stir and that's not even the full story.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
Go Bella.
She's going to make a fab Donna.
Will they take James out before he tries to take Michael out?
Looks like Jacob moved up to be the emermy.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh if only you knew.
They are gonna be so pissed.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Seems they are all in the same page.
Claudia seems happy about the news of a granddaughter.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can't wait to see what they can do.
Bella is going to be fab, she's going to be trained by the best.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow.
Nice.
Hot.
Cold shower, check. Lol
I think that went well.
She's bound to make some mistakes, this is her first dom/sub relationship and she's only self taught. Even experience. Each dom is different.
They are going to make a great partnership, as dom/sub and don/donna
Date: 06 Apr 2017 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yay, that's perfect.
See I said that.
That went over better than I expected, but not everyone will be so happy.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
Renee never deserved Bella.
Yes Michael merge the two families together. That's the solution.
I remembered as I started this chapter that James was also at the club that first night.
It's not going to be pretty.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
It will likely be a shock.
I'm glad he told her he loved her before though. She can see he's telling the truth and hopefully she'll remember that.
The rest well we'll have to see.
But Bella says she doesn't want to be without Edward. So hopefully all will be OK.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Yep. Had a feeling that was coming.
Shit just got real.
And I'm guessing that jimmy and James hunter volturi are the same people.
Wonder if Carlisle's search comes out with the same info? Although he won't know what Michael does.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
Uh oh.
Edward needs to show his hand soon.
Glad Carlisle and Edward appear to be on the same page.
But how long was it between this and her meeting Charlie?
Date: 06 Apr 2017 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh I think Bella will agree.
She had a reaction to his past subs and she's not met them yet.
But Edward fixed that.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
I don't know which side I love better.
His dom side or his mob side.
There is just something about mobward.
Good job we get the best of both.
Well thst didn't take long for Bella to win Carlisle round.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
Carlisle has a right to be concerned.
It's his family and son at risk.
I don't think Bella would get into it if she wasn't telling the truth.
They are going to be perfect for each other.
Maybe Esme could sign her book.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Cold shower needed her too.
I love a great mobward and bdsm Story and this has both.
I can't wait to read more and see them both mix together.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I already love this Edward.
He's been so caring yet keeping the dom.
I can't wait to explore their relationship.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
James is going to be trouble.
Famous last words there James.
Good luck you obviously have no idea who your dealing with.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Go Edward, go get your girl.
Jasper was so right.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
I love mob fics.
Date: 13 Mar 2017 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
Thank god he is dead.... 1 down and 1 to go!
Date: 13 Mar 2017 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
Thank god he is dead.... 1 down and 1 to go!
Date: 11 Mar 2017 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Getting interesting. Now I know why Charlie and Renee don't love her.
Date: 10 Mar 2017 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow so hot so heavy so fast.... love it.
Date: 10 Mar 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow so loving your story.
Date: 08 Dec 2016 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 30
I absolutely loved the story and can't wait to read the next book thank you for writing this great story
Date: 04 Dec 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it thank you for a great bdsm story
Date: 09 Nov 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 30
Great story! Can't wait to start the sequel!
Date: 09 Nov 2016 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 29
Glad she was able to do it!
Date: 09 Nov 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 28
Another great one!
Date: 09 Nov 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great great story!
Date: 09 Nov 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
So glad they were able to get away!
Date: 01 Nov 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved the dress ad the solution that Esmeralda was able to come up with.
Date: 01 Nov 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
Hope Michael survives the attempt to kill him.
Date: 01 Nov 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
Of course she's a natural.
Date: 22 Oct 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hard to imagine that someon who had been in the family so long would turn on it. Maybe if James had something to blackmail him with it would be easier to understand. Edward on pain killers was funny!
Date: 22 Oct 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wasn't expecting that!
Date: 22 Oct 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter. Loved the meeting between Emmett and Rose!
Date: 15 Oct 2016 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
I also love how Edward is helping Bella become the strong Donna of the family she will need to be!
Date: 15 Oct 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love how Bella is coming into her own.
Date: 15 Oct 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella's dress was lovely. The graphics add so much to the story!
Date: 15 Oct 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm thinking Carlisle's checkbook is definitely going to get a workout.
Date: 15 Oct 2016 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love the graphics.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2016 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I Have I'm looking for the story since you left fanfiction.net
Author's Response:
I am so glad you found me.
Date: 10 Oct 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, glad they are going to run both families.
Date: 10 Oct 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well, that was an interesting turn of events.
Date: 07 Oct 2016 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, this is really getting complicated for poor Bella.
Date: 07 Oct 2016 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
Of course she will still want him! It's destiny!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 30
Ok, I finally finished this one, and it was awesome!! I am off to the next one now!
Date: 02 Oct 2016 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
The plot thickens!
Date: 23 Sep 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
That ring
looks familiar.
Author's Response:
I had found it on pintrest and fell in love with it.
Date: 23 Sep 2016 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad that Bella has Italian heritage, but if course she would have to.
Date: 16 Sep 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
Long chapter. I can tell that you have gone to great lengths to get the information right.
Date: 09 Sep 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
Didn't realize how much I would enjoy the pictures. Great chapter!
Date: 30 Aug 2016 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I don't usually read BDSM, but this is really good.
Date: 23 Aug 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, impressive!
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Great job, love the pictures!
Date: 11 Aug 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
BDSM stories aren't really my cup of tea, but I wanted to read one of ur stories. Love the pictures and that u are using Rob and I hope Kristen as ur characters.
Date: 04 Aug 2016 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 30
omg talk about a perfect ending! this whole story was amazing!
Date: 04 Aug 2016 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 29
i am so glad that he is dead
Date: 04 Aug 2016 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 28
sooooooooooooooooo good
Date: 04 Aug 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 27
i love how it is all coming together
Date: 04 Aug 2016 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh no the poor girls! i bet it was jake and some of his friends
Date: 04 Aug 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 25
omg omg omg i love gramps!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Aug 2016 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 24
i cant wait to see james get what he has got coming to him! I hope he gets ass raped hard
Date: 03 Aug 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
hahahahahahaha poor bella having to deal with all that and then loopy edward too
Date: 03 Aug 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh no! poor bella!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
awe loved em and rose
Date: 03 Aug 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
loved bella so much in this chapter! the best so far i think!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh i so loved this chapter!!!!!!!!!! jake better watch his ass
Date: 03 Aug 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
lord love a duck james and aro are sick fucks! i hope they die slowly
Date: 03 Aug 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
damn daddy c is in top form!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh i cant wait to see the training!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
holy shit that was hottttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
yes! nothing better then a hot badass couple taking on the world together!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh shit just got real! poor bella they are fighting over her and she doesnt even know it
Date: 03 Aug 2016 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh man that was the most perfect date ever!!!!!!!!!!!! and all the sex was super hot! I love love love all the pictures that you include in every chapter thank you for that!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
omg omg omg omg
Date: 03 Aug 2016 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
oooooohhhhhhhh cant wait