Date: 31 Jul 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 28
Love this and cannot wait for the sequels! :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow. Descriptive words are elegant, blissful, romantic, passionate, sexy, erotic. Well done.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2015 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 28
HOLY HELL COLD SHOWER TIME :O LOL
Date: 31 Jul 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
Awesome chapter!
Date: 31 Jul 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 28
Only two more. Noooooo. Loved the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh wow for Alice's news. Ugh I was hoping someone would catch Michael.
All their dresses are gorgeous, but I think I like Charlotte's the best. Lovely Ceremony and claiming. you get extra lemon for that
Date: 30 Jul 2015 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
The dresses and the collar were all just beautiful as was the ceremony. Great chapter!
Date: 30 Jul 2015 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think I need another shower...
That was worth waiting all day for... LOL
Date: 30 Jul 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I'm loving this!!!
Your GIF's ROCK!!!!!!!
So glad my kids are in bed... LOL
Date: 30 Jul 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love that GIF... LOL
And I've actually started to read your other story...
I had NO idea that was you...
Too funny!!!
Once I read the summary, I was like... "wait a minute"...
I'm very forgetful thanks to my migraine meds... :0(
And I guess I forgot to put it on my updates... So I haven't been able to find/read it...
So I guess it's only fate that we met in the group... :0)
Date: 30 Jul 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
Way to go girl.... Next up -> ARO... He soooooo has to die!!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 27
Beautiful job with the pictures. And your selections of character pics match perfectly with my image. Great job.
Date: 30 Jul 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
Gah this story is just soo good, im not used to all those pictures but damn...
I really hope that all ends well between them all...
I can't wait for the story to be finished and me sitting there with a big smile on my face, wishing for a love like that, to hopefully one day to walk into my life....
Sighs in longing.......
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
Lived it, I hope you write a sequel
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
I love the story and can't wait 2 read about James death. Great story a d great writing.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
Bella is adjusting to her knew life so fast. She will be very successful in this life. Are they still going to open her club?
Date: 28 Jul 2015 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 27
I absolutely love this!! :)
Date: 27 Jul 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 27
Excellent chapter, I enjoyed it very much.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 27
I am so sad to see that this story is ending is there a way to get a copy of it when it's finished
Date: 27 Jul 2015 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 27
I dont want it to be over love these guys ;). I cant wait for Bella to kill James and then the reaction to her becoming Donna of the V family.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2015 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 27
OMG!! Can wait for both .great story.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 27
You accomplished so much in this chapter. I loved how careful Edward was with Bella's injuries. Love each chapter.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 27
plz tell me there will be a sequel!!!!!!!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2015 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
Sad that this story will be ending but I know you will soon gift us with something new. This has been a great story each chapter has been great the added pictures fit the telling of the story.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loving this story, can't wait to read more.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter.....every time I see an update I get so excited!
Brenda 💗
Date: 26 Jul 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am saddened that you feel you can't take this story to greater heights. I'm sure all your followers can agree that there is so much more to this story that they would love to continue reading. Several GREAT writers have taken there stories well pass the 100 plus chapters and beyond. You're probably thinking of starting a new story but why start something new when you have a GREAT story that has no end????? READ YOU SOON ♥
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your great reviews that you have given to my story. I think you will enjoy my next story just as much as you did this one, or at least I hope you will.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
I really like this story..🙋 I can't wait to read more...
Date: 26 Jul 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 27
And another great chapter, check. I especially love the older couples getting in all the planning.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
Having James and Aro at the wedding sounds a little dangerous. Can't wait to see what James and Aro 's reaction is going to be when they findout that Bella is going to take over the family. James and Aro may die at the wedding.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2015 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 27
YAY GREAT CHAPTER :) :)
Date: 26 Jul 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it and sad to see it end but looking forward of whats to come.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh no, only three chapters left! But I love this story. Have to admit I was hoping for the next generation to make an appearance. Maybe a sequel? Haha XOXO,Cheri
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
ending way too soon
Date: 26 Jul 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you! All ready to gear up now for the events to come...keep the posts coming! T
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2015 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
OH I can't WAIT for all this to go down!!! It's gonna be awesome!!! :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
Everything seems to be working toward resolution. Somehow I don't think it's going to be that smooth.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 27
Pins & needles, I tell ya. Can't wait for next update. Don"t care for mob stories, but I'm loving this one. Love love love it.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
LOL... why does the killing of James not sound as easy as it sounds??
Looking this and looking forward to more :D
Loved the pictures and Bellas pictures for Edward!! :D
Date: 26 Jul 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
While I want to see James dead, having him at the wedding and reception to see what he most desires ripped from his grasp would be icing on the cake first.
Glad Bella is getting so much family now.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2015 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 27
Lots of great plans coming together now. I'm looking forward to seeing them check off each item as it occurs.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2015 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 27
Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great update
Date: 22 Jul 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yay, Bella. Got in a few good licks there. I guess these are advantages to spike heels. Love this story and the pictures!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 26
Love your story this chapter was great can not wait for more.
Date: 21 Jul 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 21 Jul 2015 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loving the choices of people you've made for the Volturis. Glad bella has Esme to talk to and work things through with. Yey for Bella remembering her training.
Date: 20 Jul 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
They all better watch their backs.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter!
The man that came in from the front to let the other two had to be on the master list right... Hoping they find them soon. And maybe let Bella and Esme have a shot at them a little.
Date: 20 Jul 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter please update soon!
Date: 20 Jul 2015 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 26
James and Aro want Bella they will pay for that. Bella didnt even get to enjoy the ropes :(
Date: 20 Jul 2015 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
Another great chapter as always.
Date: 20 Jul 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
Love SING-ing Bella!
Date: 20 Jul 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
This story is amazing! I am excited for the next chapter!!
Date: 19 Jul 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
Hmmm who was that guard?
Date: 19 Jul 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMGosh! Those are some dead men. So glad that the girls did not get hurt.
Date: 19 Jul 2015 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well Done - again! Thank you for the love story and mafia tale at the same time. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
Date: 19 Jul 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 26
Fanfriggentastic!! :)
Date: 19 Jul 2015 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
Each chapter just makes me want more. Your story is like a drug to me! :-)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
Please, pease don't kill off Michael and Claudia.
Date: 19 Jul 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am always excited to see the update notice for this story in my inbox. Loved it, and this girl will wait for the next update patiently!
Date: 19 Jul 2015 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 26
loved it cant wait to read more!
Date: 19 Jul 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
Love it!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 26
You just have a habit of leaving my tongue on the floor. Thank god Bella and Esme remembered there training. Now!!! I have to wait f o r e v e r !!! to find out if they catch the assholes. ( but we know it has to be poor Bella's new relatives) he he he ! READ YOU SOON ♥
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am sure they were working for James
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
It IS disappointing when you don't get to kick your assailant in the groin, isn't it? LOL :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 19 Jul 2015 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
I must say that I love your version of Bella! She's a frigging bad ass! Loving this story so far.
Date: 19 Jul 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
:O :O love the dresses :)
Date: 19 Jul 2015 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you for the update. I always get excited when I see it in my inbox!
Glad that Bella and Esme was able to get away for James and Aro's henchmen. Cause we know those a-holes are behind the attack.
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 19 Jul 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
So good so good! Can't wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 26
That thug was lucky Bella didn't have her knife or gun with her or he'd be dead already. He may run, but he won't be able to hide from Edward's men for long.
Date: 19 Jul 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
I don't know who the guard was. I feel like I missed a clue. Great chapter. Very exciting.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 26
Excellent job Sweetie. The plot and execution of the story is so original. Loved the pic of the ownership tag. And Tony. And the dresses. This was such a great update.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
love it can't wait for more
Date: 19 Jul 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 26
please tell me that you are planing a long and drawn out death for aro and james i cant wait to see what you come up with to do to them
as far as the guys they are going to be some low level thugs that aro and james hired to get to bella esme would of just been an added bonus for them to play with
please let me know if i am right about the guys and just to let you know i love this story so far and cant wait to see what you come up with next
hope to hear from you soon
reneesmay
Author's Response:
Thank for for the wonderful review. I promise that all those who are needing to be hurt badly will be just that. I think you will like the next chapter, because it does answer your question. I love writing this story and I am happy so many love it too.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 26
Cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
Now that I've caught up, I'm looking forward to reading your future chapters in real time. It's been nice seeing Edward's sweet side, and watching Bella change from a shy, unsure girl to a protective lioness.
Date: 16 Jul 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
As always your writing is excellent I look daily for your updates and the pics are wonderful what a dress! Keep it up and enjoy your summer. You deserve your award.
Date: 16 Jul 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
Grandpa is a hoot glad you brought him in... the end was also great to get a small look into rose and Emmet can't wait for the party .....
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2015 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just found this from the Pay it Forward FaceBook group. It will take me a while to catch up, but I'm going to Favorite to follow. Love the pictures you've selected so far!
Date: 15 Jul 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
Grandfather was pretty funny. Rosalie and Bella are going to have a great time with those handsome fellows.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2015 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
seemed more like filler but can't wait for more
Date: 15 Jul 2015 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
I LOVE THIS!!! :)
Date: 15 Jul 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
Grandpa is the man that all the others learned from and Grandpa knows not to mess with Bella or else he is happy with that because he loves her now to.
Date: 14 Jul 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
i'm actually really excited about the Munch Party. this should be epic. :D
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2015 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
All was perfect as always... I just think Sylvester Stalone or Harrison Ford would have been a better choice for Ed sr. With Raquel Welch as Clara. Soooo... On with the MUNCH! READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 14 Jul 2015 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it. Can't wait for more
Date: 14 Jul 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love this! I would be surprised if a mob boss would allow his soon to be wife to be allowed to perform anything in public besides going to Sunday church services. Those mob guys are very 17th Century when it comes to their women. I like your idea, however. Way to go!
Looking very forward to MORE!
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
Date: 14 Jul 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 14 Jul 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved the chapter
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 25
NEED MORE :)
Date: 14 Jul 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
love her meeting the Grand parents. Aww for Em and Rose.