Date: 09 Jun 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 52
Ooookkkk!!! How did Edward get away?
Date: 09 Jun 2015 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 51
So glad that they got Garrett. But it is to late for Edward and his army.
Date: 09 Jun 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 50
I knew he was not on the up and up. So glad that Jasper talked her out of going
Date: 09 Jun 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 49
Edward told her not to leave the walls. But I would be the same as Bella, wanting to go to my husband. But I agree with Jasper, out in the open she will be a target.
Date: 09 Jun 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 48
Oh no. I am worried that Garrett is the spy. I hope Bella rememberso what Edward told her about the hidden room of she were ever in trouble.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 57
Dearest Ms SD85~
I read My Laird today. I am in love with your characters and look forward to more. There were a couple of them that I thought were rather questionable from the get go and crave more of the "miscreants of the underground".
Bella and her uncanny ability to attract danger made me smile more than once. Can you imagine the relief Jasper and Emmett felt each time the other was assigned to keep her in tact. One can only imagine the tenterhooks they felt while awaiting the assignment. On the other hand I loved Bella defended their honor to her husband. Yes Edward is the laird and he is the husband but sometimes I could not help but stifle my giggle when she was the one that wore the kilt. A let me tell you I was more than happy when Jasper put his foot down on her going with Garrett.
I don't know how sympathetic a few of your readers may have been to Bella's plight. Anyone that has ever walked in her shoes knows how difficult it is to leave all that is familiar behind when entering into a whole new world. Compound that with going to live with a people you know as natural enemies. She tried so hard to fit and not be a burden to anyone. Then there are always the few that will make your life just a little more difficult that need be. Take for instancee the first kitchen girl that showed Bella to her room via the dungeon. Certainly she knew better but chose to make Bella's transition uncomfortable. (She must have been one of the infiltrators, huh?) Tiffany was so kind to Bella and will certainly take Bella further under he wing as the story continues.
Edward and Bella may have come from different stations within their countries but they learned to adapt to one another. A lot more adaption will be necessary but as they grow together so shall their love.
Another thing I liked is how you were able to keep this in drabble format. Imho you kept the story at a comfortable pace. You answered "questions" as the story unfolded and I don't think you left any stones unturned. I have a great deal of admiration for authors that can do that. Thank You!
The timing of the sequel could not have been any better for me. I do hope to be with you every chepter of the way. :)
Ruby
Author's Response:
Wow, your review blew me away. Are you sure it was my story that your read? hehe. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will see you soon, hopefully x x
Date: 08 Jun 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 47
OMGosh! You mean to tell us that half of Edward's army was against him. Why? Was it because he married a English girl? But why help the English?
Date: 08 Jun 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 46
So Edward will meet Bella's father. Interesting. Will Edward tell Bella he killed her father if he does?
Date: 08 Jun 2015 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 45
They are already in lovewith each other. I can't believe they have not realized it and told each other
Date: 08 Jun 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 44
she would not be as worried her attacker could be found in quote. I would be scared to death if my husband was going off to war.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 43
Bella 's in trouble.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 42
glad Edward is taking precautions with Bella's life. I don't like Bella for being scared.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 41
That was awful what they did to Collin. Bella will have nightmares I sure. I know I would.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 40
OMGosh! When ithe rains, it pours bad new
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 39
Glad Edward listened to his wife.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 38
If Tiffany did not do it I hope Bella can get Edward to listen to her.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 37
Bella getting excited about having sex with her husband.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 36
GGlad Edward realizeso that he is changing.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 35
I like how Edward keeps telling himself that he is just going to indulge her just this one time everytime he turns around. Lol
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 34
Well I have to say I am nor surprised that Edward hit Emmett. I am surprised that he was no more upset.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 33
Off to see what Edward's reaction is going to be. Glad she told him because if she did not Emmett would have had to tell him
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 32
Poor Emmett. He was just trying to do his job. Edward was right, Bella could find trouble in an empty room. Glad she had the knife and she was not hurt.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oh no. Someone in Edward's household has taken her. So glad I do not have to wait for an update. I am so off to the next chapter to see what is going on.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 30
I hope Carlisle has not betrayed Edward.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 29
Trouble is brewing
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 28
Edward does not beat around the bush. He is straight to the point.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 27
She was not insulting him, she was just concernedfor him.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
Lol. I can't help but laugh at Bella wanting more of a compliment and Edward not knowing what her really wants.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
They both have to do a little give and take.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 24
She is so emotional.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 57
Fantastic story! I read it all in one sitting like a goof so I'm truly looking forward to the sequel!
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bless her heart.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
Why did he answer her that way? Glad Bella enjoyed her 1st time
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad he is being gentle with her
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am glad that Edward is being patience with her
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 45
Good God this is fantastically well written! I'm totally falling in love with the both of them!
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward needs to understand that Bella is not a woman of the world.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
Glad she made it through the wedding without fainting.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
I wonder what Edward's staff is going to think.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
WHAT???????????? Wow that was sudden.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
It seems like Tiffany is going to be her friend. Thank goodness
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
I can understand why Edward would be worried
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
I was so afraid that something was going to happen to her. Glad she was safe.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward will be upset when he finds out that no one served her breakfast. I hope she is safe with the priest.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
I just knew that he would have kissed her. At least on her cheek or her hand.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
I hope that Tiffany will be her friend
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
If I were Bella I would be worried to death of what was going to become of me.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
II understand Bella's uneasiness. My husband's family is Scottish. I have heaRd stories of how the English and the Scottish did not like each other.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
I have a feeling that things are going to get interesting.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
For Edward to be a "savage" he seems very polite and we'll mannered. They both have a pull to each other.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Like your feisty Bella. Lol
Date: 08 Jun 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
They are both hard headed. This could be fun. Lol
Date: 08 Jun 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
I really like this story! I normally don't read period stories but there's something about it I had to check out! I'm glad I did!💖
Author's Response:
Hey! I just want to say a huge thank you for your review(s) on My Laird. I truly appreciate your support.
I had a lot of fun writing the story and can't wait to start the sequel. See you in July!
Kara x x
Date: 08 Jun 2015 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
I imagine Bella is a little scared, not knowing what to expect. Edward could explain what was going to happen with her.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
Glad Edward came her rescue.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more of this story
Date: 08 Jun 2015 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 57
Love it as always and I am very excited that there will be more! :D
Author's Response:
Hey! I just want to say a huge thank you for your review(s) on My Laird. I truly appreciate your support.
I had a lot of fun writing the story and can't wait to start the sequel. See you in July!
Kara x x
Date: 08 Jun 2015 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 57
looking forward to the sequel. enjoy your vacation :)
Author's Response:
Hey! I just want to say a huge thank you for your review(s) on My Laird. I truly appreciate your support.
I had a lot of fun writing the story and can't wait to start the sequel. See you in July!
Kara x x
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 57
I will be looking forward to then I am loving this story thanks so much
Author's Response:
Hey! I just want to say a huge thank you for your review(s) on My Laird. I truly appreciate your support.
I had a lot of fun writing the story and can't wait to start the sequel. See you in July!
Kara x x
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 56
Garrett is getting what he has coming to him he is beyond evil
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 57
:) loved this. Looking forward to reading the sequel
Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 57
I like your writing style. The chapters are just about the right length. Short enough to post frequently and long enough to satisfy. You give enough information to make a good story but don't drag it out with every little detail. All in all a good job.
Thanks Xanath
Author's Response:
Hey! I just want to say a huge thank you for your review(s) on My Laird. I truly appreciate your support.
I had a lot of fun writing the story and can't wait to start the sequel. See you in July!
Kara x x
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 57
Like I said in the last chapter thank you in advance for the sequel. I really love this story & characters. It really does fill the void know that Outlander is in hiatus.
Edward thinks he is doing the right thing by not telling Isabella but that can back fire on him like it has done in the past.
I will wait paitently for your return. Enjoy your vacation.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 56
First thank you, thank you for the good news about a sequel.
Second I know there is 1 more chapter but enjoy your vacation
Third Garrett deserves a long painful death.
Fourthly Edward is going be always on edge with Isabella & when she gets pregnant it will be unbearable. Even more so with their children.
Which I'm sure is what the sequel will be about.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 57
I have enjoyed every chapter of your tale. I love the strong Isabella and the changes in Edward. I'm looking forward to your sequel. Thank you for writing so eloquently in Scotish.
Author's Response:
Hey! I just want to say a huge thank you for your review(s) on My Laird. I truly appreciate your support.
I had a lot of fun writing the story and can't wait to start the sequel. See you in July!
Kara x x
Date: 07 Jun 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 55
Love it! Really happy Edward is safe and that they are getting to know each other
Date: 07 Jun 2015 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 55
So glad Edward is finally sharing more with Isabella.
Date: 07 Jun 2015 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 55
So good info she is getting to know her husband.
Date: 07 Jun 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 54
I love how their relationship has grown even in this short period of time.
Date: 06 Jun 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 54
Edward has to be impressed with his wife
Date: 06 Jun 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 53
So glad Edwards is back with bella
Author's Response:
Hey! I just want to say a huge thank you for your review(s) on My Laird. I truly appreciate your support.
I had a lot of fun writing the story and can't wait to start the sequel. See you in July!
Kara x x
Date: 06 Jun 2015 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 53
That explains how Edward was able to get back to Isabella. Did he and his men kill the Baron & Isabella's father?
I hope we aren't coming to the end? Especially since Outlander is done for the season, I need my Outlandward.
Date: 05 Jun 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 53
So glad Carlisle came to help. Did they kill the baron and her father??
Date: 05 Jun 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 52
Did I miss something? I thought Edward was captured~~color me confuzzled.
Date: 05 Jun 2015 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 52
Oh thank god he is home and Garrett is going to die. Bella going to have a baby???
Date: 05 Jun 2015 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 52
Yay he returned home! Excited to read the next chapter to find out what happened.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 51
Bella is going to get them all killed.
Author's Response:
Hey! I just want to say a huge thank you for your review(s) on My Laird. I truly appreciate your support.
I had a lot of fun writing the story and can't wait to start the sequel. See you in July!
Kara x x
Date: 02 Jun 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 51
Great chapter pleas update soon!
Author's Response:
Hey! I just want to say a huge thank you for your review(s) on My Laird. I truly appreciate your support.
I had a lot of fun writing the story and can't wait to start the sequel. See you in July!
Kara x x
Date: 02 Jun 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 51
Wow, I love your story, it's s unique! Please go on !
Hugs- Tiina
Author's Response:
Hey! I just want to say a huge thank you for your review(s) on My Laird. I truly appreciate your support.
I had a lot of fun writing the story and can't wait to start the sequel. See you in July!
Kara x x
Date: 02 Jun 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 51
I love the chapter. Bella has grown so much as the mistress of the house! Love that and I really hope Edward is okay. Cannot wait for more :D
Date: 02 Jun 2015 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 51
She is going to take the blame for everything
Date: 02 Jun 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 51
So we finally found out who Isabella's attacker is. Now we need to know who is behind all of this and what is going on with Edward?
Date: 01 Jun 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 50
Great story and chapter please update soon!
Date: 01 Jun 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 50
Garrett is a character I always like. This proves he is not innocent.
Date: 31 May 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 50
He was not a nice guy Jasper was right