Date: 29 May 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 17: That's it, baby!
Damn he kicked ass, loved it. Good thing Taylor was there to pull him off of Hyde so he didn't commit murder.
Thanks sweetie. It's been a while since we talked. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 27 Mar 2016 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 10: Salon visit
Got caught up on the story and do I ever love your Ana and Christian! Ana is no wallflower and Christian while being his old self is changing and is not fighting it like he does in the book! He sees right off what Ana is to him and how good she is for him! I also LOVE the way he is telling off Elena! Now I know he is very naive about Elena and not really understanding that she will do anything and I mean ANYTHING to break up these two. It will be hard on Christian because be it from Stockholm Syndrome or just not trusting people to let them get close to him, Christian will feel very hurt and betrayed when he realizes the length Elena will go to get rid of Miss. Ana Steele! To me it is sad and very pathetic that is only friend is the one who has abused him since he was 15 years old. When he realizes all that this abuser has done to him, has cost him that is when Ana will be in for the fight of her life, to keep Christian sane, most men and women would break from the acknowledgement of such a Betrayel and feeling like a fool for letting it happen but she and his family and Dr. Flynn will just have to give him all the support for him to come out of the dark places he has put himself in, like Flynn said in the book Ana has done more for Christian than he has done all the years he has treated him.
i think one of the saddest parts of the book Freed and loads of Fanfiction stories is when Christian is going to be a father and he realizes that he would give up his own life to keep his child safe and how wrong was what he and Elena did. I saw a documentary on older female sex offenders and it said how more sideous it is when a woman does this horrible act on either a boy or girl because women are the neuture's and the Betrayel these kids feel is even more intense in some cases than with a male pedophile. To me that is why Christian is so angry in the books, sure his real mother and her pimp did not help any, they started his abuse but when Grace and Carrick might of had a chance of helping Christian and showing him love, unconditional love, Elena swoop down and destroyed all traces of good that his parents could have given him! Elena's abuse was so much harder for Christian to take and understand, she literally was the straw that broke the camel's back!
Have ve you been reading the fanfiction story A Different Shade Of Fifty? It is so good!!! Ana and Christian meet when they are going to College and their love story begins there, of course Elena has her claws into Christian already and I will not spoil the whole story to you if in case you have not been reading it but she does have an interesting theory about Christian and Elena! Since she and Grace are close friends the author has started Christian's abuse from Elena at the tender age of 4 years old!!! Not by beating him or anything like that but by paying him attention, by being like a second mother to him and the Betrayel from Grace and Carrick's side when they learn of it and how horrible they feel for letting it happen! It is just a great story! Told in the same light as yours, the same story but with your own twists to it to make it yours! Now I am going to see if Not Strong Enough is finished! I forgot you moved to here and I thought you just were having wtiter's block! Yeah STUPID ME!!!!!!!!! I have put your stories on alerts so I know when you have added a new chapter!since it is Sunday March the 27th Happy Easter!!!!!
wow! Thank you for your review. I do try to make Ana strong but she has her moments along with Christian. But we will see where all of that leads them.
Date: 27 Mar 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 10: Salon visit
I don't think it should be Ana's responsibility to cause Elena to back off. Nor should she need to to. That is completely his mess/trash to clean up. Just saying.
No it shouldnt, it will be Christian's. Ana is a lot stronger and I think Christian will love seeing that with her.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: Sugar, yes please...
I love this chapter!! I like the dancing and the pissing off her boss! lol I am so excited for more of this!! :)
I love that song too! Crushin hard on Adam! ;)
I like the song too, I use it in my other stories too!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 7: Elena the Domme
He is setting himself a log of grief bc he is still having a relationship w/the Bitch Troll. Plus he evaded her question and he is hiding stuff from Ana. I wish Christian would go into the direction of being completely open and honest but I guess that's not to be.
Hey there Ptminor for your review. You seem to really line my stuff, thank you. As far as Christians behavior he's starting to realize some things about Elena that he hadn't noticed before. However, I have to leave some stuff for angst right? Take care.