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Reviewer: LITTLEREDCRANE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 26: The rest of our lives...

Awesome story! Can't wait for sequel or maybe the epilogue choose a teaser. Good luck!!!

 

LRC

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2016 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 26: The rest of our lives...

Great ending glad he sooke with his dad. 

Reviewer: SV2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 26: The rest of our lives...

Tht was a amazing story, looking forward to more stories from u

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 26: The rest of our lives...

:)  loved this story 

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 26: The rest of our lives...

Great story

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 22: The party

Good chapter

Reviewer: Lucky84 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 15: The jealous, dark, and possessive side.

Oh my that was hot!!

Reviewer: SV2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 25: Love me like you do

Great job 

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 25: Love me like you do

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 24: Kidnapped

Good chapter

Reviewer: Gwenb Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 25: Love me like you do

Nice chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 25: Love me like you do

:) 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 24: Kidnapped

She is an evil bitch. Jose is an idiot. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 24: Kidnapped

:) 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 22: The party

Loved the proposal so sweet and romantic. I love these two. 

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 23: Auction

OMG!!! Did Elena take her??? Please let him get her back!!

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 23: Auction

Good chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 23: Auction

Does Elena have her? 

Reviewer: twimad55 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 23: Auction

elena and jose

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 22: The party

:) 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 21: Meeting Dr. Flynn

Woohoo party is next. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 21: Meeting Dr. Flynn

:)

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 21: Meeting Dr. Flynn

Good chapter

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 20: Moving in and security

I Love the two of them and lol elliot is a riot.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 20: Moving in and security

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 20: Moving in and security

thank you for the update..well done

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 20: Moving in and security

Good chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 19: SIP

:) 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 19: SIP

Loved it. 

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 19: SIP

Good chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 18: Honesty

:)

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 18: Honesty

I think Anna is going to be pissed about the SIP situatuion!! But she loves him and i think she is smart enough to work it out with him!!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 17: That's it, baby!

Damn he kicked ass, loved it.  Good thing Taylor was there to pull him off of Hyde so he didn't commit murder.



Author's Response:

Thanks sweetie. It's been a while since we talked.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 17: That's it, baby!

I liked this chapter!! I wish it would have happend this way in the book!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 17: That's it, baby!

:) 

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 17: That's it, baby!

Good chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 16: Who's the fool now?

:) 

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 16: Who's the fool now?

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 15: The jealous, dark, and possessive side.

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 14: You. Are. Mine!

Good chapter

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 15: The jealous, dark, and possessive side.

thank you for the update...lol..Christian ain't nothing to f with..hot mess!1 And I love him and Ana together

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 15: The jealous, dark, and possessive side.

Hot hot hot. Loved it. 

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 15: The jealous, dark, and possessive side.

hmmmm I think she should tell him no!!! He is being a possesive ass!! lollol Even though he is rather sexy!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 15: The jealous, dark, and possessive side.

:) 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2016 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 14: You. Are. Mine!

Good job on this  chapter !   Have  to  agree  with  Christian ,   José  is a jerk!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 14: You. Are. Mine!

thank you for the update.....well done

Reviewer: SV2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 14: You. Are. Mine!

great job

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 14: You. Are. Mine!

:) 

Reviewer: twimad55 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 14: You. Are. Mine!

i don't trust jose, there is something about him

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 10: Salon visit

I am glad she did not back down from Elnea.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 9: Vanilla?

What an emotional chapter 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 8: Sugar, yes please...

Hot hot hot 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 13: Out in the open...

Loved it. 

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 13: Out in the open...

I love the way you spun this chapter!!



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Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 13: Out in the open...

:) 

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 13: Out in the open...

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 12: Dirty little secret

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 11: Ana's new do

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 10: Salon visit

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 9: Vanilla?

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 8: Sugar, yes please...

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 7: Elena the Domme

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 6: Breakfast

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hollywood Kiss

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 4: Vanilla?

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 3: Green-eyed Monster

Good chapter

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 2: My Past and Future

Good chapter

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12: Dirty little secret

I always wanted to know what Grace asked Christian about his relashionship with Elena. I hope you let us hear!!! lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 12: Dirty little secret

:) 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 11: Ana's new do

Evil cliffie. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 11: Ana's new do

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 7: Elena the Domme

How the hell did Elena get in Christian's apart?  Yes Elena is jealous. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 6: Breakfast

Christian and Jose are too funny

Reviewer: Mitzi1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 10: Salon visit

Got caught up on the story and do I ever love your Ana and Christian! Ana is no wallflower and Christian while being his old self is changing and is not fighting it like he does in the book! He sees right off what Ana is to him and how good she is for him! I also LOVE the way he is telling off Elena! Now I know he is very naive about Elena and not really understanding that she will do anything and I mean ANYTHING to break up these two. It will be hard on Christian because be it from Stockholm Syndrome or just not trusting people to let them get close to him, Christian will feel very hurt and betrayed when he realizes the length Elena will go to get rid of Miss. Ana Steele! To me it is sad and very pathetic that is only friend is the one who has abused him since he was 15 years old. When he realizes all that this abuser has done to him, has cost him that is when Ana will be in for the fight of her life, to keep Christian sane, most men and women would break from the acknowledgement of such a Betrayel and feeling like a fool for letting it happen but she and his family and Dr. Flynn will just have to give him all the support for him to come out of the dark places he has put himself in, like Flynn said in the book Ana has done more for Christian than he has done all the years he has treated him.

 

i think one of the saddest parts of the book Freed and loads of Fanfiction stories is when Christian is going to be a father and he realizes that he would give up his own life to keep his child safe and how wrong was what he and Elena did. I saw a documentary on older female sex offenders and it said how more sideous it is when a woman does this horrible act on either a boy or girl because women are the neuture's and the Betrayel these kids feel is even more intense in some cases than with a male pedophile. To me that is why Christian is so angry in the books, sure his real mother and her pimp did not help any, they started his abuse but when Grace and Carrick might of had a chance of helping Christian and showing him love, unconditional love, Elena swoop down and destroyed all traces of good that his parents could have given him! Elena's abuse was so much harder for Christian to take and understand, she literally was the straw that broke the camel's back! 

 

Have ve you been reading the fanfiction story A Different Shade Of Fifty? It is so good!!! Ana and Christian meet when they are going to College and their love story begins there, of course Elena has her claws into Christian already and I will not spoil the whole story to you if in case you have not been reading it but she does have an interesting theory about Christian and Elena! Since she and Grace are close friends the author has started Christian's abuse from Elena at the tender age of 4 years old!!! Not by beating him or anything like that but by paying him attention, by being like a second mother to him and the Betrayel from Grace and Carrick's side when they learn of it and how horrible they feel for letting it happen! It is just a great story! Told in the same light as yours, the same story but with your own twists to it to make it yours! Now I am going to see if Not Strong Enough is finished! I forgot you moved to here and I thought you just were having wtiter's block! Yeah STUPID ME!!!!!!!!! I have put your stories on alerts so I know when you have added a new chapter!since it is Sunday March the 27th Happy Easter!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

wow! Thank you for your review. I do try to make Ana strong but she has her moments along with Christian. But we will see where all of that leads them.

Reviewer: ericzmic Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 10: Salon visit

I don't think it should be Ana's responsibility to cause Elena to back off.  Nor should she need to to. That is completely his mess/trash to clean up.  Just saying.



Author's Response:

No it shouldnt, it will be Christian's. Ana is a lot stronger and I think Christian will love seeing that with her.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 10: Salon visit

Go Anna. Loving this story. 



Author's Response:

Thank uou Gloria, Glad your are liking it.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 10: Salon visit

I think Ana wasn't  mad  enough at Christian .   I would have been  seriously  puss ed at him for taking  me  to  his old  girlfriend 's salon ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 10: Salon visit

:)

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 9: Vanilla?

I love that this is CPOV.I always wanted to know what was going on in his head!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 9: Vanilla?

:) 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 8: Sugar, yes please...

That was hot hot hot. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 8: Sugar, yes please...

:)

Reviewer: SV2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 8: Sugar, yes please...

tht was soooo hot and great

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: Sugar, yes please...

I love this chapter!! I like the dancing and the pissing off her boss! lol I am so excited for more of this!! :)
I love that song too! Crushin hard on Adam! ;)

Author's Response:

I like the song too, I use it in my other stories too!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 7: Elena the Domme

:) 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 7: Elena the Domme

This is really great!! :)

Reviewer: ptminor Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 7: Elena the Domme

He is setting himself a log of grief bc he is still having a relationship w/the Bitch Troll.  Plus he evaded her question and he is hiding stuff from Ana.  I wish Christian would go into the direction of being completely open and honest but I guess that's not to be.

GREAT WRITING!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey there Ptminor for your review. You seem to really line my stuff, thank you. As far as Christians behavior he's starting to realize some things about Elena that he hadn't noticed before. However, I have to leave some stuff for angst right? Take care.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 6: Breakfast

:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 6: Breakfast

LOVE THIS!! :)

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Date: 14 Mar 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hollywood Kiss

Fantastic!! ;)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hollywood Kiss

Good  chapter !  

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hollywood Kiss

Well I can tell right now Jose is going to be a problem. But I think Christian can handle him lol!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hollywood Kiss

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hollywood Kiss

Christian and Jose and their passing contest.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 4: Vanilla?

So glad that they are talking and being honest 

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: Green-eyed Monster

Glad he is being honest with her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 2: My Past and Future

Enjoying this again 

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 4: Vanilla?

Great chapter I adore the way you combine film and your story. Thank you

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 4: Vanilla?

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: Green-eyed Monster

:) 

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