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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2016 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 41

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2016 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 40

:) 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2016 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 39

Big sacrifice being away from their baby for 6 months.  :-(

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 39

Oh things are heating up

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 39

Oh my, King Edward and Queen Bella are all alone now. That makes me nervous. 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 39

Too bad there wasn't any technology back then.

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 39

Can't wait for more! ;) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 39

It must be hard for them to let Antonia go 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 39

King Edward and Queen Isabella are going to be more vulnerable now that the extended family has departed.
Will Jasper and Alice be making an appearance in the near future?
Did James unwittingly trust a woman? Tanya may be expendable, but Victoria is his wife. She will not take lightly to being replaced.
Maybe she is the key to bringing down James's plan?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 39

Eeekkkl, I feel the climb of the "Rollercoaster".

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 38

Interesting alliance.  Great update!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 37

Wow,

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 38

Shit is getting down and dirty now

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 38

For a moment there, it seemed that Emmett was in a double cross situation. Bella cleared that up by revealing to Rosalie the current dilemma the kingdom is facing.
Will Rosalie be able to assist without risking her virtue? James could easily change his mind. Is Tanya being lead astray with promises of grandeur?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 38

They all better be on their toes. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 38

intrigue galore

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 38

Wow, they have really pissed off James and Eleazar.  I hope Rose gets to hurt James. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 38

Way to go girls!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 38

What Rosalie is suggesting is very dangerous

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 38

oh my and the women plan their deeds as well. Em and Ed will not be happy

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 37

Wow -epic development.  Poor Carlisle.  He has to recover! 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 24

I love love love this story!  They are how Bella and Edward should be - they communicate, she understands him, he protects her but not in a way that shields her from the truth.  Love! 

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm very much enjoying this fic so far!

Reviewer: Figs78 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm enjoying this story.  I'm not crazy that Edward actually spoke about Bella's appearance - it was catty and disrespectful.  It was also disrespectful to admit he had been with Tanya ... How was it thought to be a good idea for a woman he's been with to be one of his bride's ladies?  I never understood that kind of stupidity.  Something occurred to me when Jessica and Samantha arrived.  The family they were referred by sound like Bella's parents in canon.  Is there a chance that Bella's their daughter?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2016 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 37

Poor Carlisle. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 37

wow

Reviewer: lillinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 37

I did not se that comming, and i do hope that Carlisle will get back to his old self again. I cant wait for more and i hopa that you will update soon. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 37

WOW poor Carlisle not in his right mind but he knows it after hurting Bella

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 37

Poor Carlisle 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 37

Probably the best decision for everyone. But is this what the Duke's family wanted all along?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 37

That was an inevitable move by the Royal family.
The question would be....are the dissenting families stepping up their time table of attack or is this what they were pushing for by dethroning King Carlisle?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 37

Loved the update!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 36

Bella is so strong. They need her strength now more than ever.

Reviewer: Mixedchik1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 36

This story has captivated me! Please continue it! I am on the edge of my seat waiting to find out if they will have more children, if they will prosecute Lord James, and if Alice will ever be discovered!

Reviewer: lillinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 36

More please and soon :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 36

It is good that Bella know now why.  Bella is so strong and smart.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 36

Love the letter from Bella's mom.  HopeEmmett can find out more of James's plans.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 36

Carlisle must live! OMG so much happening at once

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 36

Love this story!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 36

Love Emmett! Enjoyed this chapter.  

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 36

wow

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 36

Great chapter! So much going on!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 36

Loved the letter. They should  be careful that James' gloating  isn't  misdirection 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 36

:) 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 36

Oh what a tangled web...will Alice ever learn the truth and be reunited with her sister Bella?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 36

Now that Isabella has the proof of her parentage, and Emmett has discovered another ruse, will royals be able to fend off the coming attack?
How much longer will Carlisle be bedridden? There is no way he will be fit to run the country when he awakens.
Edward and his Princess are not what the anarchists expect. They are very strong together.
Will Emmett marry Rosalie even though she is older and not who James has in mind for him?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 35

Paul needs to lose his head.  Bella is so good at being her love her

Reviewer: lillinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 35

More please! :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 35

Oh wow. Glad Bella could help with Carlisle. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 35

Bella rocks!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 35

Great update! I'mready for more!  Hopefully,  Carlisle will be okay!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 35

I hope Carlisle will be alright 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 35

I didn't see that coming!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 35

Was this act a part of James' plan?
He seemed surprised to learn his King lived through the joust.
Who won the position of Princess Antonia's companion?
It would seem that Emmett and Rosalie have made some progress in their companionship.

Reviewer: eileenapr Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 34

Love this story

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 34

Congratulations to the new parents and princess. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 34

I knew she was a royal ;).  So excied for the baby and Edward is making up for the times when he has been an ass

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2016 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 34

Awe...great chapter!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 34

So happy about your mother being cancer free!!!!!!!!! God is good. 

So Bella is a twin to Alice. Wow!! Glad everything went ok with the baby's birth. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 34

Oh, I loved it! And the turn of events!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 34

Wondering if Emmett will learn of his father's plans prior to any trouble that James and Victoria might instigate?
Was Queen Cynthia murdered by her husband?
A little Princess to start the expansion of the Royal Masen line.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 34

So Bella and Alice are twins?

 

Great news about your mom.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 33

Oh no!!!!!! What will happen now?  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 33

OMG how is Emmett going to take this info . Bella is Emmett sister but doesn't know it

Reviewer: noway Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 33

I was just wondering if Isabella could actually be Emmett's sister? Could the Queen secretly had twin daughters and gave one up? And that is why she donated money to the convent? I hope Emmett can be trusted.  Thanks, Maria

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 33

Edward doesn't behave like a man who's truly in love, or soon to be a father. I have to say, my opinion of him is rather low most of the time because he seems to be pretty selfish & immature. He's certainly not ready to be king yet either. 

I hope that Emmett doesn't lash out at Bella. She's pregnant & doesn't need any stress - she's already lost one. 😕 I hope he understands that it was all his real sister's doing. 

Can't wait for more! 😊 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 33

Oh damn!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 33

dun dun dun....

Reviewer: Crazyinagoodway Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 33

Aaahhhhh!!! The world is imploding and you leave us with a cliffhanger like this?!? 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 33

Queen Cynthia is the key.
Emmett needs to seek his mother's confidence getting her to reveal the birth order of his twin sisters.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 33

Whoa...

Reviewer: Dollydimple Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 33

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Dollydimple Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 32

Nice long chapter, love it.xx

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 32

Bella needs to talk to Edward about Emmett.  He is being a young horny fool.

Reviewer: Crazyinagoodway Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 32

Oh god Emmett what are you doing?!? I can't wait for the next chapter! How often do you normally update?



Author's Response:

You will soon learn that Emmett knows what he's doing. And I update every two weeks, usually on Monday or Tuesday. Thank you for the review and the interest. 

 

AGW 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 32

Now that my 32 chapter binge fest is over I'm going to experience withdrawals. ;)
Here's what I think I know so far......
Bella's dream is telling her she is of noble birth and possibly a twin. Making Alice her sister.
I'm worried that her confession to Father Erric will spill into the wrong hands.
In Emmett's youthful ignorance, he will be played a fool by the Duke and Viscount. Isabella's words had bite, but I wonder if Emmett's lapse in judgement for this one moment will cause a rift between them?
Edward's volital personality has cost him vital areas of emotional growth as a man and husband. He is slowly learning the extra responsibilities of taking care of a wife and future heir to the throne.
The Brandon's are a truly disfuctional Royal family.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 32

Emmett is being taken advantage of I hope she got through to him.  Edward is taking care of her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 32

Wow!!!! A lot going on in this chapter. Glad Bella has friends around. Glad she is standing up for herself.  Emmett was a little different at the end of this chapter. 

Reviewer: lillinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 32

More please :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 32

She certainly has a sharp tongue when necessary. Good for he in trying to set Prince Emmett straight. Now, will he listen????

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 32

Love this! Keep 'em comin'! 😊

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 32

Love the  way  she told  Emmett  off.  Great chapter .   

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 32

Way to go Isabella! Proud of her!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 31

The beginning of this chapter was a little confusing with the time jump, but I am happy that another baby is on the way. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 31

Great update!  Thank you!  Their alone time is sweet! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 31

Time is being good to them and they have there eyes open for trouble love it.

Reviewer: Myffieberry Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 31

Love this fic! Please update it soon!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 31

So excited to see Bella pregnant again. I hope everything goes well with the birth. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 31

:) 

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 31

Love the chapter, happy that Edward and Bella are closer and pregnant! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 30

Thank you for the update! 

Very creative.....I liked it a lot!

I binge read this story so now I find myself having withdrawals. I see an update and get super excited! 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 30

I hope they both heal from this loss. Neither one is to blame.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2016 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 30

She has went through so much pain.  I love that Carlisle lit into him.  He will grow up and be the man she needs.  What was he doing when he was away from her??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 30

It is about time that Edward comes home. I can't believe he left.  I would be pissed that he did not even say goodbye. Glad Carlisle got on to him. I am worried about her telling the priest her secret.  Hope she can truly trust him. 

Reviewer: lillinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2016 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 30

Belle is really showing how strong she is, and im happy Edwardis back, an amazing chapter as usual. More please.. and soon i hope! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2016 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 30

Poor Bella.  Edward should have been with her 

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 30

I'm happy Edward is back, love the chapter really hope that father Eric won't cause a problem and could be trusted with her secret. 

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