Date: 23 Sep 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
Update soon please!!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
I am glad he is going to protect her from Elena!! Cant stand her!! lol glad your back!!
Date: 01 Aug 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
great update
looking forward to more
Date: 31 May 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow!!! I guess Ross told him!!! lol I think Christian needs to grow up and just let her work there. He can just stay away from her. Or... He could quit being such an ass and get to know her. I hate that Anna thinks he hates her!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
please please update soon
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story. Well all your stories really, so I was excited to see the update. I'm looking forward to see Kate and Elena get knocked down. I know it will probably be Christian who takes out Elena, but I think it would be a hoot for Ana to take down Kate and what better way than to make Elliot see the real Kate. Can't wait. Update soon. Maria
Date: 27 Apr 2016 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
well, how old is Christian? yeah, 16 is a little young.....
Date: 27 Apr 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
yeah, well a bitchy Kate is okay....Ana put her down...can't wait for Christian to meet her....
Date: 27 Apr 2016 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank heavens this story is back! Love love love it
Date: 27 Apr 2016 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
love it.....looks like Christian is up to his usual tricks....grumpy....resistant to change......wonder what he will
think when he meets Ana......
Date: 27 Apr 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
looks aweseome......
Date: 27 Apr 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
great update
well done
Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
Time to swallow that pride Christian. This should be interesting what will happen. Will he stop and call ana out of it to find out what is going on or act like nothing. Hmmmm
Date: 31 Jan 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hahaha!! I love that Christian shows up for Sunday dinner the same night Edward decides to meet the parents!! And now we have Elena in the mix this could get very interesting!!! lollol
Date: 31 Jan 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
So glad to get this update. I knew Christian would not like Edward.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you for updating again. Edward and Christian in the same room it's a fan girl dream come true. You are brilliant to think of it.
Date: 13 Nov 2015 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
oooooook, i don´t know what to think... can´t wait for more though
Date: 28 Oct 2015 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
Enjoying this version of FSOG. Love how they were friends at such an early age. Looking forward to learning more about how Elena did what she did to a young Christian, and how that shaped his views.
Date: 26 Oct 2015 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward Cullen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the triangle.
Date: 23 Oct 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
such a great story! so glad to know it hasn't been abandoned!
Date: 23 Oct 2015 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think it is going to get really interestingwith Edward and Christian having a thing for Ana
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this. Please update soon.
Date: 14 Sep 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love it can not wait to see what happens next update soon xx
Date: 11 Aug 2015 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
Not liking elena. Chris you could of handled that with more class.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
when is the next update
please
Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
i loooooooooooove ur story
please keep goin
Date: 01 Aug 2015 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well Elena is a bitch, no surprise there. I'm wondering how this is going to play out. Christian certainly not do anything with her still a minor. But, it may prove to be disappointing if he uses his subs after they have met. Not sure how Ana will feel about that in the long run. But, anticipating how you will spin this this web.
Enjoying it so far.
Date: 29 Jul 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
To my partner in crime loved it elena is a right old bitch tramp etc why thank you for the acknowledgement cant wait for more updates till then slan xx
Date: 28 Jul 2015 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
thank you for the update...I hope Ana gets a chance to tell Christian what Elena said....put botox betty out of her misery...until you post again
Date: 28 Jul 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Elena is a bitch. Poor Christian.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh no. Christian is mad at himself for wanting a 16 year old. Why is,everyone looking down on Ana. They don't know her. I think Elena knows that Ana is Christian's type and she is already jealous.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Boy Ana handled Kate. Lol
Date: 28 Jul 2015 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMGosh! I have not been getting the update notices for some reason. I have missed all these chapters. Can't wait to read them all.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Ana! I can only imagine her confusion.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ok!!! Ana needs to get ready to tell Elena off!! what a BITCH!!! And Christian is just an ass!! But a pretty one!!! lollol
Date: 27 Jul 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the story so far can not wait for more. Just wondering does Anna have blue eyes or brown?
Author's Response: sorry about that mix up. Ana does have blue eyes. I have gone back and changed it. I didn't realise that I wrote brown eyes until pointed out to me thanks again fiona
Date: 27 Jul 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Christian is actually genuinely attracted to someone and she is jail bait! I can understand his reaction. Elena is a witch.
Date: 26 Jul 2015 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I try a lot of 50 shades fanfictions but not all of them are good. I so hope this is.
Date: 22 Jul 2015 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love it can not wait to hear from Christian view.
Date: 21 Jul 2015 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very good so far! Can't wait gto see how you integrate Twilight characters into the story. Also loved your Elena and Kate characters! grammar check!
Date: 21 Jul 2015 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ah so thrilled you took my advice and used ellie song well done fiona lol sabrina
Date: 21 Jul 2015 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well, that went well. Poor Christian. Hot for a 16 year old. Yikes!
Date: 14 Jul 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hate kate but I love the story, can't wait for more!!
Date: 14 Jul 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
I loved that Ana didn't take any of Kate's Crap!! I can't wait for Christian and Ana to meet!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Soulf be interesting when Christian shows up. And, a nasty Kate, that's new but should be fun.
Date: 14 Jul 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
someone should put Kate on her proper place.....the dump. :D
Date: 13 Jul 2015 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks for the shout out! Who did carry Ana to the bed? She definitely gave as goog as she got with Kate!
Date: 19 Jun 2015 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Hope to see a new one soon!!!
Date: 16 Jun 2015 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like this story! Looking forward to Ana's arrival at Bellevue.
Date: 16 Jun 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love it!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
i'd like to see Christian's reaction the first time he sees her. that's always the best part. :D
Date: 15 Jun 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thinking Mia might be disappointed.
Date: 14 Jun 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
its really good can not wait to see what the next chap is going to be xx
Date: 30 May 2015 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well that was a sad beginning. I liked it. I am in. Btw, I don't know if you are a Jamie Dornan fan but I just watched one of this movie just released this year on Amazon instant video named racing hearts. He was very mr grey like, not as handsome though.
Author's Response: Hi Thanks for the review. I just want to say that Im a big Jamie Dornan fan. Love him in The Fall and also as you said Racing Hearts. I agree. He is very much like Christian Grey but even though he may not be as handsome as he is in fifty shades, he still makes me weak at the knees during that film. thanks for the review and hope u continue to enjoy the story fiona
Date: 18 May 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm intrigued. I can't wait to see where this story goes
Date: 17 May 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow!!! This story sounds like it is going to be great already!!!
Definitely love it!!! I cant wait until the next update!!
Date: 16 May 2015 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Date: 15 May 2015 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I do not like that the parents had to die.
Date: 15 May 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving it so can't wait to read more.
Date: 15 May 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh... poor Anna!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 15 May 2015 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more chapters!!
Date: 14 May 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
new reader to your story...I think I will enjoy it..can't wait for Ana to meet the Grey's...until you post again
Date: 14 May 2015 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am excited to read your story. I have been a Twilight fan since the beginning. I read 50 Shades when it was on here as a Twilight fan fiction. So if I accidentally comment about Edward and Bella instead of Christian and Ana please forgive me.
Date: 14 May 2015 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like a great start. All of your stories are always good. I think you should keep going. Hopefully another new chapter soon.
Date: 14 May 2015 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to reading this story.
Date: 14 May 2015 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
:) looking forward to reading this