Date: 31 May 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow!!! I guess Ross told him!!! lol I think Christian needs to grow up and just let her work there. He can just stay away from her. Or... He could quit being such an ass and get to know her. I hate that Anna thinks he hates her!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story. Well all your stories really, so I was excited to see the update. I'm looking forward to see Kate and Elena get knocked down. I know it will probably be Christian who takes out Elena, but I think it would be a hoot for Ana to take down Kate and what better way than to make Elliot see the real Kate. Can't wait. Update soon. Maria
Date: 01 Aug 2015 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well Elena is a bitch, no surprise there. I'm wondering how this is going to play out. Christian certainly not do anything with her still a minor. But, it may prove to be disappointing if he uses his subs after they have met. Not sure how Ana will feel about that in the long run. But, anticipating how you will spin this this web.
Enjoying it so far.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the story so far can not wait for more. Just wondering does Anna have blue eyes or brown?
Author's Response: sorry about that mix up. Ana does have blue eyes. I have gone back and changed it. I didn't realise that I wrote brown eyes until pointed out to me thanks again fiona
Date: 30 May 2015 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well that was a sad beginning. I liked it. I am in. Btw, I don't know if you are a Jamie Dornan fan but I just watched one of this movie just released this year on Amazon instant video named racing hearts. He was very mr grey like, not as handsome though.
Author's Response: Hi Thanks for the review. I just want to say that Im a big Jamie Dornan fan. Love him in The Fall and also as you said Racing Hearts. I agree. He is very much like Christian Grey but even though he may not be as handsome as he is in fifty shades, he still makes me weak at the knees during that film. thanks for the review and hope u continue to enjoy the story fiona
Date: 14 May 2015 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am excited to read your story. I have been a Twilight fan since the beginning. I read 50 Shades when it was on here as a Twilight fan fiction. So if I accidentally comment about Edward and Bella instead of Christian and Ana please forgive me.