Date: 27 Mar 2018 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for the update. Hopefully they will get away safely. If the authorities have any idea the sighting of Bella was true, they may need to leave the country entirely. Will be looking forward to the next chapter whenever it is ready for us.
Date: 25 Mar 2018 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh, man, Bella's got a long road to finding forgiveness for herself. As much as the others, except maybe Edward, are pissed at her for going rogue and killing Leah, I think Bella truly thought she had to be the one to kill her.
Date: 25 Mar 2018 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
"She didn’t hate me because I couldn’t stop her from being hurt. She hated me because they wanted me more than her!" It's what I was thinking, Leah ended linking it and obssessed, maybe even in love, that's why she hated Bella, she took them away from her.
Date: 23 Feb 2018 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 17
It was inevitable.... Either Leah died or she would've ended up exposing them all. I feel sorry for her, she was broken beyond repair and all thanks to Psycho Carlisle. Thanks for the update, hon. Can't wait to see how pissed Edward is going to be! YIKES!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
I really wanted to yell at Bella when she decided to go where she knew Leah would be. But, that is what had to happen. Like Bella, I wish she could have done more for Leah, but as Leah said, she was already dead.
Date: 17 Oct 2017 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
Carlisle's legacy is gonna haunt Bella for the rest of her life, damn his soul to hell! The best therapist in the world would have a hard time soothin' her soul so I don't hold out much hope for Leah when they find her *sigh!*
Date: 20 Feb 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yikes. Not sure if everyone is going to come out of this alive. Leah definitely won't, I think. Hope they get those that aren't hunting Leah safely into the bunker. I hope Leah doesn't manage to blow their cover stories sky high. She could easily out of spite. Anyways, thanks for the update, and will be looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Date: 20 Feb 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, a few surprises in this chapter. Edward gave in to Bella so quickly--didn't expect that. And, Aro blasted Bella. And, even though Alice is worried Bella won't come back, at least she seems to understand why Bella has to go with Edward.
Date: 20 Feb 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
Now if they had just listened to Bella sooner about her concerns with Leah than this wouldn't be happening !!
Edward should have paid better attention too !!
In a way I agree with Aro ..
I know I know Bella's her ownn person but still ..
Cannot wait for more
Loved it X
Thank you. I debated for awhile on if Bella should stay or go, but I just couldn't see her letting Edward go without her.
Date: 14 Jan 2017 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yikes. Bet she's on her way back to try to get at Bella again. Wondering if Mike Newton really does have any evil intent, and if he is linked to the Sandman in any way. Time will tell, I guess. Thanks for the update, and I will be looking forward to the next chapter whenever you have it ready for us.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
I was so excited to see this in my inbox !
Though you should be resting after your fall lovely X
I hope you are feeling better ??
You'd think Bella'd get a bit of a break but no such luck ..
Bloody Leah's gone missing !
Is it horrible for me to want her to be taken out by a car on her escape?
Maybe then Bella will get some contentment ..
As for the others all looking or not looking at Bella ..
I wonder if that's to do with her not wanting to go with Leah?
Surely they could put themselves or try to put themselves in her shoes and see why she can't !!
Mike .. Eek the puppy has arrived .. hopefully Edward put an end to him coming around ..
Anyways rest up !
& as always can't wait for more !
If it helps, I'm writing in bed. Thank God for laptops. Still sore. The bruising is just starting to really show. Arm and thigh are still swollen. Head aches again, and all that crap. Think my body just hates me.
Date: 12 Jan 2017 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
I had a feeling that trip with Leah was not going to go well. How will they find her? And, poor Bella--knowing she is out there as a loose cannon. It's so sad, but I have to agree with Bella--Leah is a lost cause.
I debated a lot on which way to go with Leah, but in the end, I followed my gut.
Date: 28 Oct 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can I just say that I hate Leah ??
She sure as shit is a psychopath !!
& the way the everyone just didn't say anything about the way she baits Belal ..
*Shakes head* ..
She sure is in something when it comes to Bella .. Attached ? Maybe Skeezy ? Infatuated ??
All of the above ..
As always deart .. Loving it
Date: 28 Oct 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for the update on this one. I don't think I trust Leah an inch here. Hope she doesn't cause too much damage.
I hope you enjoy writing something different for NaNoWriMo. Will look forward to updates whenever you find the time for them.
Date: 28 Oct 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Leah is beyond help in my opinion. I know she went through a lot more than a lot actually but I can't help but kinda hate her and the way she's treating Bella. I'm hoping Bella will be ok. Very curious where this story is going
Date: 13 Oct 2016 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
Girl you write such a deep emotional story. I worry about your happiness. I am reading two of your stories that are heart breaking. Sick babies and sicko men burting women.
I would just lay it on the line if Leah wants to stay and try and get through this then she has got to get help and no cornering Bella. Bella did not cause Charlie to hurt her. She is just as hurt and more so with guilt.
To be honest, these stories to take a toll on my emotional health, but I do what I can to keep them real.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
I don't trust Leah. She is acting like a right bitch. Yes she got hurt a lot, I am not saying that she did not get hurt, but she cannot hold Bella accountable for all of the rotten things Charlie and Carlisle did. If anything Bella got her out of that situation. I get that she needs to be angry at someone.
Bella and Edward, o boy. My heart breaks for them and I hope they can recover from this together!!!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
Edward and Bella don't need to leave
They should be making Leah, Jake and Seth go ..
The ranch is Bella's ..
I liked hearing Emmett's story even if it was heartbreaking ..
He helped her see what she needed ..
I just hope that someone spoke to Edward and made him see so he doesn't flip again ..
Loved it as always hunnie
Date: 08 Oct 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for the update. Bella needed to hear what Emmett had to say. Hopefully she'll take it to heart.
One little caveat - you used the word "stag" when I think you probably wanted "stallion". Don't think a stag (male deer) would be up to Emmett's weight.
Will be looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Date: 01 Oct 2016 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow...I feel for Bella, but I see Edward's point too. What a terrible situation they all are in. I worry for Leah too. How does anyone come back from this? I guess a lot of support and work from everyone. A lot of heartache too. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Thank you. It's going to be . . . interesting.
Date: 01 Oct 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
Leah's an evil bitch ..
Bella should have said what Leah said to her ..
I think Bella has the right to say what she said to Edward ..
His priority should be doing everything he can to help his wife who is struggling ..
Bella is now asking for what she needs ..
Cannot wait for more
Thank you, doll. It's not so much that Leah's an evil bitch, just more that she can't get over whats happened. Not everyone can be saved, even when they're saved.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
YOU'RE KILLING ME, LISA!!!! KILLING ME!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm scared Leah might try something. EEEK.
Lol, I'm sorry for killing you. You're right to be wary of Leah.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh dear - she certainly put him in a spot. Wonder which way he will end up going. Obviously she can't stay with Leah digging at her all the time, but Edward has commitments that would be difficult to abandon too. Will be looking forward to the next update, and thank you for this one.
Yeah, there isn't an easy answer to this problem.
Date: 23 Sep 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
Honestly, Bella is giving me whipslash. She wants Edward, but she pushes him away. She is sending mixed signals and Edward is not a psychologist nor a mind reader (at least not in this fic) to know what to do
And Edward, jesus christ, he is too invovlved in the case, in wanting to find his sister, he pretty much let his wife sacrifice herself in that quest and doesn't he see what he has done? He keeps putting everyone first, including the mission, when he should be focusing on his wife.
I really hope they can find a way to make it work, bcause otherwise, I say they should take a break and get better on their own.
Thanks for the update, bb. Can't wait to read what you give us next!
Date: 23 Sep 2016 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for the update. Ouch - that was quite the bit of drama at the end. Hopefully Edward can forgive that. It will be interesting to see if Bella is able to reconcile with Leah or not. Will be looking forward to the next chapter.
I'm not sure Edward has anything to forgive. Yet, at least.
Date: 22 Sep 2016 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
Woohooo I'm back !!
Just caught up on the chapters !
Edward sure does put his foot in his mouth a lot ..
He needs to realise where his priorities should lie and he keeps choosing wrong ;)
I hope this is the wakeup he needs and also in a way the wake up Bella needs !
Can't wait for more
Date: 21 Sep 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
I know this is so hard for both Bella and Leah, but poor Edward is stuck in the middle, trying to everything for everybody. What's it going to take for all of them to find some peace? Can't wait to see how this gets resolved.
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 21 Sep 2016 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 9
IS THIS GOING TO BE A HAPPY ENDING ..... LIKE HEA FOR BELLA AND EDWARD HE SOULD THINK ABOUT HER FIRST AND BE THERE FOR HER ... SHE NEED HIM THEY HAVE TO TALK
There will be a HEA, but it takes time to get there.
Date: 21 Sep 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
Aww this broke my heart. I thought maybe they were steering in the right direction just to have the chapter end this way. :( I know it won't be easy and with everything Bella is feeling and going through I can't blame her for wanting to be Edward's main concern and for feeling jealous. I feel terrible for them both but mostly Bella, obviously. Ready for the next chapter. Thank you for writing this.
There are a lot of layers to work through here for sure. Thank you for reading and reviewing.