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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

Great job with this chapter.  So glad you are back to writing. Can't wait for your next update.  

Reviewer: mass88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 6

You did good girl!!  Well, I loved it!!!  Can't wait till the next one!!!!

Reviewer: Goldielover Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2016 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for the update.  The chapter seems ok to me.  Will be interesting to see how Leah is coping when she arrives.  Hope things will go smoothly.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

There were some pivotal information and maybe foreshadowing suggested. I think it was important. 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 5

Bella appears strong on the outside but she's crumbling on the inside and I'm not sure Edward will know what to do when she implodes.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

James?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

How old is Edward?



Author's Response:

Around 25 or so. 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love this story 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

Glad you're  back. It is a good chapter 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

Good to have you back! I think this chapter showed so much of Bella's self-doubt, though I have trouble believing Leah will blame her for what happened. At least, I hope she doesn't. And, I'm with Bella there at the end--what price will have to be paid for Bella's safety? 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: kuch44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter!

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Glad to hear from you.  Your stories always incredibly well written and packed with emotion.  Thank you for this update.

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

I am so glad for the update.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 6

I can't begin to imagine how Bella is feeling. This has to be hard for all of them. Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: admiration Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

A new Chapther yah! I a glad you came back to continue this. I love this story and I really mised your writing. Please do not let the nay-sayers get you down. I am sure that there are more of us who love your writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

This is me when I saw the email alert

And this is me at the end of the chapter

So happy to have you back!

Thanks for the update!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Haha, thanks for the visuals! 

Reviewer: hikingurl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

So many great updates today and now this one!!  Thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: piperann_25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love this chapter. It allowed us to see a different side of Bella other than strengths but learning to feel and learning to rely on those around her who care for her. Great chapter and was so excited to see an update can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you! She's fighting me hard on this one. Keeps telling me she's strong, but I know she's not. 

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 6

Good chapter. Tough to deal with the stresses.



Author's Response:

Thank you! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

Please continue this story

 

Reviewer: dinise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

I am going to go along for the ride 

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2015 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 5

A stong story. Well done.

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

A lot of scars this woman is carrying. I cannot imagine being in her shoes. Leah situation is gonna be nasty I see it already.

Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews for this story and Carlisle's Gift. 

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2015 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 5

holy crap didnt see that coming.  i see nothing but bad news with leah....poor alice my heart breaks for her.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

Welcome back.  Can't wait to see what you do with these characters. 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

Still up for the crazy ride

Reviewer: janedoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks so much for the update.

It's so hard to read, but such a good story.

Reviewer: jenniroxy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

Happy to see you back. Hope there's eventual happiness for Bella and Edward and everyone 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

Looking forward to the next chapter! ! 

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

Bella needs to talk to Rose before she cracks under the pressure. And I'm scared Leah is going to make things worse. I just don't want more blood on Bella's hands.

So happy to see this update. I wish you all the best with your book!

xoxo

Mina

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 5

love this - as dark as it is - just as good, if not better than CG



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 5

Looking forward to more as always !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, sweets!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

I can't imagine what Bella is going through...what all the girls are going through. I can't wait to see what happens when Leah gets there. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! It's going to be a long road, I'm afraid, but we'll get there.

Reviewer: roselynne Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

yea!!!!!! thanks for the chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm buckled up! 



Author's Response:

Yay! Thanks!

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh, I'm definitely here for the long haul. Bring on the drama; I'm ready. 

Bella thinks Alice is barely hanging on? I don't think Bella is doing a whole lot better. Can't wait to see what happens when Leah gets into this mix. 

Thanks!

Sally



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Goldielover Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for the update.  Sounds like there's plenty of damaged people that need healing, and a few nasties to take down yet.  Will be looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you! There is a lot of healing needed.

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

Glad to see you back. Thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: piperann_25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 4

Really miss this story..... Love your writing. I'm not an angst person but with your talent I can read anything.

Reviewer: stinal102 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

I want to start by saying that I really like this story.  Bella is right.  Who is taking care of her?  She did what she set out to do; but she is completely destroyed.  I believe that no one knows what to do or where to start.  With Carlisle videoing everything, Edward has to be aware of at least some of the horror she went through.  I'm sure we're suppose to be feeling some rage for Bella at this point.  I can't wait to see how you have everyone help her deal with her reality.

Reviewer: mrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 4

Awesome! Edward is going to take care of her though....right?

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

i dont know how i feel about edward lying to her.  or even bringing leah there...they have been through so much and bella is just there existing...sigh...ready and waiting for the next update oh evil one lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love Jasper and Alice 's reaction to each other. Hope Bella can work thingsout. 

Reviewer: mass88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved the chapter Lisa!!!  Feel so sorry for Bella and Alice!!!  Love the story!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 3

What Emmett,  Rose and Jasper work for Edward. Bella did not know this but did Emmett, Rose  and Jasper  know who Bella was all this time?  Who was on the phone with Edward?  It did not sound good.  Glad I can go on to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, Edward and Bella are married. When did they get married? Loved the history. I hope they can find Edward's sister. 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2015 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

WHY DIDNT EDWARD SAY SOMETHING ...I MIGHT HAVE THE WRONG BUT DOES HE TRULY LOVE HER ???

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Just found this story.  I guess I did not have you on alert after I read Carlisle'sGift.  But I do now. Lol. 

Ok, it has been a year right? Why has it taken  Edward  a year to see her? 

Reviewer: Izzy54 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

 I was thinking this was going to be her healing but, is she really going to go under cover again...to find Elizabeth? Oh hoedowns someone recover from that?

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

I figured sooner or later one of the girls was going to snap. Sort of thought it would be Alice. But, it was poor Leah. Wonder how much better it will be if they bring her to the ranch? 

Loved the very small progress Alice has made, though. At least, she's sitting on the same sofa with Jasper. Cu[cakes are great for bribery. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

If anyone has earned the right to be a bit seflfish, Bella has. This is a great story.

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 4

She's struggling 



Author's Response:

She really is, and it's only going to get harder for her.

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

Bella’s eyes fluttered closed. “Maybe, but who’s taking care of me, while I take care of everyone else?”

When nothing but silence filled the air, she knew nobody had an answer for her.

 

That's where Edward should have said me :(

Poor Bella .. I felt sorry for her moreso in this chapter

Can't wait for more !



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

I feel like Bella is being put into a corner too much. She's going to snap, and I'm scared Edward or Aro, or even worse Alice, will be at the receiving end.

I don't think it's a good idea for Leah to move. Someone must be watching her, especially if they know she worked for Carlisle. I just don't trust they'll be safe is she goes to the farm.

I guess whatever happens, they'll face it together.

Thank you for the update. xoox Mina



Author's Response:

Yeah, I really debated with myself on whether or not to bring Leah back into the story or not. But I kept feeling the story to go there. Still not sure I should, but I always tell people to follow the story. I think it's going to get intense quick. 

Reviewer: BandE 4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm usually not a fan of stories like the first one but gave it a chance because I love some of your other work I can't wait for the next chapter to this story. Glad I gave the first story a chance.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, didn't see that coming. 

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

love it

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yeah! I'm loving the sequel. 

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow. Wasn't sure you could do much with a sequal. But you have a heck of a story going. Twists, complications and real characters. Great chapters. More soon, please.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

True. Bella is strong willed. Edward has to be as well to let her.

Reviewer: Izzy54 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter. Still a little shocking anyone would/could support anyone going under cover the way Bella did, let alone her husband.  But I'm guessing she didn't ask permission. But... They did let her stay, for weeks, even after they knew where she was.  I guess when it's your loved one your despirate to find, you'll do much you wouldn't normally do.

Wasn't shocked to find Em, Jazz and Rose watching out for her.



Author's Response:

Yerp, a lot of issues to be resolved.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

Hmmm...

Can't wait to find out what that phone call was about.

Thanks for the update, bb. xoxo Mina



Author's Response:

Lol, thank yih

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

Ohhh, she's not going to be happy.

Great chapter, the plot twists are starting already.  I like it.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 3

As always, I love your stories but I thought Bella was a little older & the idea of Edward (or anyone) bring ok with their significant other having sex, even it was rape, with someone else seems a little out there.



Author's Response:

She's 18 now, but she was 16 when she and Edward got married. And he wasn't okay with her having sex, even rape, with him, but she left him little choice in the matter.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent start

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

Will there be flashbacks to Bella's and Edward's wedding?



Author's Response:

Probably not, but I might write it as an outtake.

Reviewer: jenniroxy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm intrigued to see what's gonna happen here. I hope we can get more glimpse into Bella and Edwards relationship and see Bella heal. 



Author's Response:

probably not, but I might write it as an outtake.

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow some more insight into how Bella and Edward met !

Total shockewr that Jasper, Emmett and Rose are all part of the crew .. I wish i could say i seen that coming but alas i didn't ;)

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: mass88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow!  I'm loving this!!!!!

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

The twist was great didn't see Edward and Bella married coming would have made Edward a little Older but that's just me hope you post again soon

Reviewer: Jamieraelynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

nice

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 2

omg you are evil you end it there??!!!!! i want more please.

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, they were so young when they got married! I wonder how she tricked her father into giving consent? Aro was so sweet to say he would have walked her down the aisle. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: janedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

Whoa. New turns everywhere!

Reviewer: msbullcullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh my. Edward is in trouble.

Reviewer: dana2928 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

love it!

Reviewer: Goldielover Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for the update.  Looks like the team is getting bigger and bigger.  Hope they find out what happened to Elizabeth. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2015 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wowza......loving the twists and turns.

Reviewer: sabrina01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2015 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing story.

 

Something that distracted me in the last story that continued in this chapter: Forks, Washington and Sacramento, California are on the West coast. The previous story, you mentioned that Carlisle ran the biggest human trafficking organization on the East Coast. This chapter, it mentions something about Sacramento being on the East coast. 

 

But love the story (both, actually) and wonder where you'll take this next!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2015 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow!

Reviewer: msbullcullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2015 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh my the plot thickens love it.

Reviewer: mass88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

It's one of those storie that I just stay away from!!!  I love it!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

I thought it was awesome, I love the twist.  Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice surprise for Bella.

Reviewer: janedoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

Sandman is going down!

I still can't believe Bella had all that done to her voluntarily :(

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh, wow! Bella is married to Edward. Didn't see that coming. I just figured she knew him. I love all the mystery. Well done!

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

poor alice...poor bella...i cant even imagine that this happens in real life.  i look forward to the next chapter. you know me an my ocd ways lol

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

Fabulous !

Loved finding out more on Edward and Bella !!

I hope we find out when they married !

Damn Alice butting in; in that exact moment hahaahaha

The Sandman .. good lord .. sounds creepy !

So will Bella's redemption be finding Edward's sister ?

 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow. Edward was okay with Carlisle abusing/raping his wife all for the greater good?

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh, now it makes sense! How Bella was so sure of what she was doing, why she threw herself into this mess. Wow...KUDOS TO BELLA! She's a fucking hero! xo

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

I need to read the other story,but this sounds great so far! Thanks

Reviewer: mrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yay! Can't wait for the next chapter! *smirks and rubs her hands together evilly* 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Here we go again and can't wait! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: msbullcullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yes yes yes yes

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Obviously, something happened between Bella and Edward in the intervening years. Can't wait to hear that story. 

Great beginning. Looking forward to more. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it.  I am very happy you decided to do a sequel

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Now somehow I just knew Edward either knew Bella already or caught up to her and got the whole story!  One way or the other, hopefully he can help her heal!  So happy to see the sequal up!!  Love it!

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh.betty so glad your back are they married 

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