Date: 18 Jan 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 38
The pacing of this story is just right. You didn't rush the paddling scene to come and instead delved into Bella's headspace with her chat with Alice clearing things up for her and for us. Hot hot hot of you to leave the semen stains on her skirt and stockings. I think Edward will go nuts for that! See ya next time!
Date: 13 Jan 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 37
Edward is so controlling with regards to himself and his life. It really bothered him that she hasd left her shopping bags out, her clothes on the floor, and the tops off her bottles. He just had to set things right before he could relax. And even then he couldn't just relax. His curiousity got the better of him and he just had to look. What a surprise! He hadn't divulged his fantasy about the paddle to her. That will be a sexy scene when it happens, can't wait!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 37
oooooooooo Edward has been a very naughty boy. Methinks he'll get his paddling soon. Can't wait to read all about it. I freakin' love this story, it's sexiness, it's kinkiness, just everything. Thanks for the new chapter!
Date: 07 Jan 2017 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
I absolutely adored this, you really made the story yours, you changed the original plot line and I think that made the twist thta more enjoyable. How ever there was a few mistakes here and there a few sentences I had to back on and re read, some fragmented sentences but other than that I loved it can't wait for you to write more.~R
Date: 05 Jan 2017 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 36
I had a note by your story on my story list that said you wouldn't be back until 2017 so I wasn't surprised that we didn't hear from you. Sorry to hear you're sick and hope you have some antibiotics to help you get better!
Its a great chapter, one where it is revealed that Rosalie also knows about Edward so that Bella has someone else to speak to about him and his appetites. Love that she got her paddle. Can't wait to read her using it on him. Feel better, and happy new year!
Date: 06 Dec 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 35
Thanks for leaving me with the image of Bella spanking and fucking Edward in this chapter while you take an extended Holiday break! LOL! Now I can let that ruminate around in my brain until after the new year. Have a wonderful Holiday season and take care of you and yours. You know I love your stories....
Date: 30 Nov 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 34
I can't wait to see what they post next. I see Rose finding out about the blog, and them telling Alice and Jasper about it. Even with all the security he put in place Rose does know his body, since she has giving him tats and piecings.
Date: 29 Nov 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 34
Have I told you lately that I LOVE this story! I love that Edward is so free and uninhibited, love that Bella is not only accepting of his kink, but has become a willing participant, and love that they talk openly and frequently about themselves, each other, and all this! Would that people everywhere were like this. There would be no more time for war or any negativity, I think! I'm so glad I found you and your lovely stories!
So glad your enjoying this I have a great time writing it xxx
Date: 22 Nov 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
How gracious they were, in the face of such passive agressiveness that was shown to them. In my old age, I don't tolerate that well even from relatives. Good for them. I'd love to see more of that spanking that Edward seemed to like, even in his sleep! good going!
Date: 09 Nov 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
Dads never want to let go of their little girls, no matter how old they are. Charlie will get used to it. I'm glad Renee is on her side. Edward's surprise video just whetted my appetite for more! Thanks, dear, for this lovely new chapter!
Date: 27 Oct 2016 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 29
It was a relaxing chapter. I have a question. I've read this in other stories and always forget to ask. What is a "jumper"?
A very English word for a sweater or pullover . Made of wool long sleeves and usually just a crew neck
Date: 15 Oct 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
he was bound to get some flak in the reviews, once he added a woman, Bella, into the filming....some folks just want to fantasize only THEY are his lover....I'm glad she was cool with those reviews. It just shows how in love she is with him! And how mature they both are. I LOVE that she agreed so readily to move in with him. Thanks, as always, for a splendid chapter!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 27
This feels like things are winding down for the story. I hope I'm wrong, but I'll deal, eather way. I really love how compatible they are, how willing to explore things that either, or both, find stimulating and arousing. They really are a good match and you've done so well depicting this! I really enjoy reading what you write!
Date: 18 Sep 2016 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
Edward was totally turned on at the thought of Bella using the harness with the dildo in it on him. Funny that he asked her about a drink so he could get away and take care of things. I'm sure he was very turned on seeing her wear it. I wonder if there will be some action after Edward posts those pics on his blog. Or will he post the action on his blog too. That's so hot.
Date: 29 Aug 2016 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
YAY! :) I'm sure that Bella will not yet be fully up to it, but I'm also sure that she will try playing with Edward and he will SO play with her as well :P *phew*
I think this brutal honesty is very important to their relationship and it will bring them SO much pleasure and trust.....
And BTW: My man is also not opposed to this stuff and it IS a lot of fun indeed, seeing him come apart like this! ;)
Date: 23 Aug 2016 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ok I saw a rec for this fic in a different one and was hooked after the first chapter.
You write wonderfully and I really like the development of the story so far! Edward and Bella for once are quite normal people who act how real humans would. That Edward has some of the more special 'interests' that get him off is desribed very well I think, at least it feels like it.
I'm curious to see Bella's answer to his hidden enquiry - he does not know that he's going to probably have the time of his life coming up ;)
Date: 20 Aug 2016 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Edward! I feel for him. I think he wants her to peg him and is afraid she'll run away, screaming! I don't think she would, but I may be wrong. I love this conversation they're having, everything from the ice cream to sex! I wonder if he has been rejected before by another woman for this and that is why he's so skittish....great chapter!
Date: 14 Aug 2016 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think that went well! I half expected him to be embarrassed that she was one of his followers, but instead, her telling him make him come in his pants! Wow! That was awesome. I wonder what more there is for him to tell her? Can't wait to find out....thanks so much for both stories. I love them both for different reasons.