Date: 16 Feb 2017 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 42
So the final shot on his blog will be of them together fulfilling his fantasy. That will be some video. I can just imagine the ecstasy that he will show on his face and the look on her face when she gives him that pleasure.
Date: 16 Feb 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 42
Yes Ms Aliciaw this has been a great story. I love all of your works. This Edward is so sweet . You are writing a wonderful relationship. Thank you.
FYI I am voting Daily for Deprivation to be fic of the year. Out of so many great stories I read last year Deprivation stands out as a favorite of mine which I read on this site-original plot, nicely developed characters and some really hot a** scenes. I am a fan of yours for life!
Date: 15 Feb 2017 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
yes keep going as long as they keep talking to you. this is a unique story in that there is nobody out in fanfiction land doing anything quite like this in any story I've come across. I love reading you and this one especially does it for me. I wonder what Edward's reluctance really is about. I'm sure you will let us know. thanks for everything!
Date: 09 Feb 2017 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 41
oh wow. that was so good. i don't know what it is about you British girls. you, especially, really know how to let loose and write a good, creative, sexy lemon. I love that about your stories. I'm also reading a few books by another Brit named Jade West. have you read her? she's a bit different than you are but also good. I'm very much enjoying this. it really gives me a physical reaction to read your work!
Date: 02 Feb 2017 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 40
Now that's funny. He watches his diet so carefully so I was surprised when he indulged in the chocolate bar, the brownie, and the white roll. He was sweet asking what she got out of the experience. She was so focused on him this time, but I wouldn't be surprised if the next time they role play like this that he finds some way for her to get pleasure out of it too.
Date: 02 Feb 2017 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 40
I liked the last chapter so much that I had to go back and read it again before I read this one. It made me wish I had someone to play with like this. I'm too old to attract anyone these days, but I love reading about it. You write it so well that it just leaps off the page. I can't wait to see where they go from here. Thanks for it all!
Date: 27 Jan 2017 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 39
This chapter was so hot! Looks like Edward was able to experience another one of his fantasies. I'm curious to know what was going through his mind while Bella was spanking him. I look forward to reading the next chapter, I'm absolutely loving this story so far!!
Date: 21 Jan 2017 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 38
Thank goodness she talked to Alice and got her mind in the right head space. Edward was very worried about her and felt bad he had spoiled her surprise. I think he will be very surprised by what will happen when he gets home. What a turn on for both of them. Plus Bella will be able to get her frustrations out on Edward.
Date: 18 Jan 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 38
The pacing of this story is just right. You didn't rush the paddling scene to come and instead delved into Bella's headspace with her chat with Alice clearing things up for her and for us. Hot hot hot of you to leave the semen stains on her skirt and stockings. I think Edward will go nuts for that! See ya next time!
Date: 13 Jan 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 37
Edward is so controlling with regards to himself and his life. It really bothered him that she hasd left her shopping bags out, her clothes on the floor, and the tops off her bottles. He just had to set things right before he could relax. And even then he couldn't just relax. His curiousity got the better of him and he just had to look. What a surprise! He hadn't divulged his fantasy about the paddle to her. That will be a sexy scene when it happens, can't wait!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 37
oooooooooo Edward has been a very naughty boy. Methinks he'll get his paddling soon. Can't wait to read all about it. I freakin' love this story, it's sexiness, it's kinkiness, just everything. Thanks for the new chapter!
Date: 07 Jan 2017 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
I absolutely adored this, you really made the story yours, you changed the original plot line and I think that made the twist thta more enjoyable. How ever there was a few mistakes here and there a few sentences I had to back on and re read, some fragmented sentences but other than that I loved it can't wait for you to write more.~R
Date: 05 Jan 2017 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 36
I had a note by your story on my story list that said you wouldn't be back until 2017 so I wasn't surprised that we didn't hear from you. Sorry to hear you're sick and hope you have some antibiotics to help you get better!
Its a great chapter, one where it is revealed that Rosalie also knows about Edward so that Bella has someone else to speak to about him and his appetites. Love that she got her paddle. Can't wait to read her using it on him. Feel better, and happy new year!
Date: 06 Dec 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 35
Thanks for leaving me with the image of Bella spanking and fucking Edward in this chapter while you take an extended Holiday break! LOL! Now I can let that ruminate around in my brain until after the new year. Have a wonderful Holiday season and take care of you and yours. You know I love your stories....
Date: 30 Nov 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 34
I can't wait to see what they post next. I see Rose finding out about the blog, and them telling Alice and Jasper about it. Even with all the security he put in place Rose does know his body, since she has giving him tats and piecings.
Date: 29 Nov 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 34
Have I told you lately that I LOVE this story! I love that Edward is so free and uninhibited, love that Bella is not only accepting of his kink, but has become a willing participant, and love that they talk openly and frequently about themselves, each other, and all this! Would that people everywhere were like this. There would be no more time for war or any negativity, I think! I'm so glad I found you and your lovely stories!
So glad your enjoying this I have a great time writing it xxx
Date: 22 Nov 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
How gracious they were, in the face of such passive agressiveness that was shown to them. In my old age, I don't tolerate that well even from relatives. Good for them. I'd love to see more of that spanking that Edward seemed to like, even in his sleep! good going!
Date: 09 Nov 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
Dads never want to let go of their little girls, no matter how old they are. Charlie will get used to it. I'm glad Renee is on her side. Edward's surprise video just whetted my appetite for more! Thanks, dear, for this lovely new chapter!
Date: 27 Oct 2016 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 29
It was a relaxing chapter. I have a question. I've read this in other stories and always forget to ask. What is a "jumper"?
A very English word for a sweater or pullover . Made of wool long sleeves and usually just a crew neck
Date: 15 Oct 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
he was bound to get some flak in the reviews, once he added a woman, Bella, into the filming....some folks just want to fantasize only THEY are his lover....I'm glad she was cool with those reviews. It just shows how in love she is with him! And how mature they both are. I LOVE that she agreed so readily to move in with him. Thanks, as always, for a splendid chapter!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 27
This feels like things are winding down for the story. I hope I'm wrong, but I'll deal, eather way. I really love how compatible they are, how willing to explore things that either, or both, find stimulating and arousing. They really are a good match and you've done so well depicting this! I really enjoy reading what you write!