I am loving this story so much! Team Jacob lovers wrong story and yuck on top of that. I prefer him as the gay best friend or the dead first husband even. Or mostly just the family dog minus the mythical roid rage. But the biggest upset is that Bella will have to change the company name from Elite Guardians to WTF Protection??because Edward not being secured by someone at intermission was beyond a rookie mistake. Even Carlisle should have been his escort. Shame really. 

Thanks for replying,I actully had to go and remind myself of what the story line was. I usually remember this stuff, but I have been half out of my mind with drugs and pain and had to have a reminder. I so loved that story! I think I might have to read it again.

thanks awsome story

A good ending...just right for this story.

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Thank you, artri...glad you've enjoyed it!

Lovely wedding...

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Thank you, artri...glad you liked the wedding!

Cute.

The describtions of both of them are so cute.

Bella is in love with him, yeah!!!  And Alice's vision is too cool.  So, Edward will be a vampire by spring time?!?  That is exciting, but now we have to deal with freky nutcase 1 and 2.  This mother/daughter team really creep me out.

This Lauren is creeptastic!  Sending her used panties?  Can you say, yuck?

On a nicer note, I think it is sweet that Jessica is naming the baby after Mike and Edward.

Bella's human story is so sad.  But I like that Esme was the one who found her and took her to Carlisle to change.

Oh and I loved Emmett's comment about her being a horse theif and it being a hangable offense.  I just love Emmett!

I am so glad Jessica wasn't actually hurt, but still that whole thing had to have freaked her out.

That girl is seriously sick and twisted.  And it is obvious from the way she talks about her 'mamma' that we know what branch of that family tree needs to be cut down and mulched!   I would be very worried about Edward if he didn't have Bella and the rest of the family looking after him.

Hmmm, he is pretty perceptive.

Poor Bella.  How is she ever going to be around Edward when she wants to eat papers that he has touched?

LOVED IT! I'm anout to cryy! It was perfect...LOVE IT!! ♥

I really liked Edwards story. The part where they listened to the baby is precious.

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Thanks, MPB!  Glad you liked it...I loved the baby part too...

Emmett is so sweet. The camera thing was so nice.

Cute. I like the name of the music studio.

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Thanks, Sweets!  I had a lot of input on those...it was fun!

Nice job. I like how Edward took his music with him in his new life.

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Thank you...he really needed his music...it is so much a part of him.

I thought Edward tossing Emmett was awesome. I also like that emmett wants to have Edward prank with him.

I'm glad the wolves seem to be getting along with the cullens.

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LOL...I LOVED the tossing of the vampires!!!  Much better than my family's ideas!

I like that Edward stood up to the wolves.

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Glad you liked that, MPB!

lmao my little sister's name is Tessa!

Awesome wedding!

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Thanks, MPB...glad you enjoyed the wedding!

It's so nice that vamp speed can get things done so quickly. I am excited for the wedding.

Esme's sex talk was pretty funny to me.

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LOL...given enough money, a wedding can be done in a day!  Oh, and Alice's foresight to have that dress ready!

Jasper....dripping wet...*swoon*

I wonder if I sent a letter to Esme that I could persuade her to adopt me too lol

You did a very good job of laying out the cons for Edward. I liked his idea of a headline.

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Ah, full disclosure!  LOL

yes well carlisles internal monologue has always been rather abundant , probably what drove edward away the first time in the books.

nice chapter 

I hope Edward doesn't feel pressured into becoming a vampire. I do like how well he's taking all this new information.

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That's why they are telling him all the pros and cons...so that he can make an informed decision...

OMFG Christmas is so Emmett! I'm surprised he didn't go all secret Santa on everyone, but it was still so adorable!

Nice job with all the questions and answers.

It's so fun that you get your kids involved in your writing.

I love this chapter. Edwards reaction is so cool. Just what I hoped for - without being mundane.

I felt that it was mostly my fault that Edward had been taken and injured. If only I had realized sooner that there were two stalkers. - silly Bella. He would have been dead if humans would have been watching him.

I'm really excited about them being in co. I had forgotten about the painting. I think he'll notice with her standing in front of it.

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True...he would have been!  They were not nice people...

How does the coffee cup thing work?

I was surprised by Edwards question. I really liked Emmett and the hunt.

I liked Carlisle coming in to see Edward and laughing at the question. I read that part a couple of times to make sure I didn't miss anything. Nice.

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At the bottom of your review box, there's a RATING button...a 10 gives me five steaming coffee cups...I do love those...LOL

I can't wait for Edward to really wake up and hang out with Bella.

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Soon!

Ok that is horrible. Really.

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Sorry!  Hurry, click NEXT...

Nice job. I liked jasper's way of getting info from Lauren. I like all the parallels with the book I'm seeing.

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Thank you!  I try to make them when I can...

Yes thanks Kathie!!

By the way i never told you about myself! I'm a mother of 4 but all adolescents and one is 23.And reading is a hobby.Thanks for the info.

Have a nice day

Carole

I would totally be checking out the traffic page if I had a story posted. You should see me when I'm tracking ups numbers online. ;-)

something about Bella helping Edward into his tux is just yummy.

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Yes, it's addictive!  LOL

I can't guess what the missing scent is either.

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Not to worry...disclosure will come!

loved that Alice finally found some peace over her human family 

short, yes, but important because of the treaty

i'm glad you do 

because i like reviewing good stories and yours is one of the best

cant wait for the epilogues

I really like the way you cemented Edward's determination to be a veggie vamp, and that the wolves look to Esme as a surrogate mother so quickly 

Oh you really do have my sympathry! With help like that I am surprised that you get any chapters written! LOL Has your daughter not read book four? Jacob will get his true love and it will be mutual! Your hubby is really into humor noir. I bet your daughter was after him for that remark!

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LOL...yes, their HELP sometimes isn't!

For me, HEA is a must as well! This was a good chapter - he is accepting and not rejecting Bella. Thanks!

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For me too...HEA all the way...well, eventually!

I can't believe that she called Emmett and Rosalie her favorite siblings when she knew that Alice would see! She better clarify that she has 4 favorite siblings!! This was a sweet chapter.

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Glad you liked it, JVJV!

Thank you for making the hand surgeon a woman, I liked that! I am also glad that he will paly again so that his destroyed hand is not why he wants to become a vampire.

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You are welcome...GIRL POWER you know...LOL

I liked bella's story and so relieved that James seems to be out of the picture for the rest if hhis story.

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Glad you enjoyed the back story...I just saw it and had to write it..