Date: 13 Apr 2016 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
I think that is all fine but Edward has a gf/finace or whatever she is..maybe wife.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Loving this x
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Of course Edward doesn't flake. He's getting rid of Tanya. I have complete faith in this Edward to do the best thing for himself.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Ahhhhhhhhh.......
Awaiting your our next update....
Date: 12 Apr 2016 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
If he doesn't kick that beyotch to the curb I won't be reading anymore. Just sayin'.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Please post quickly - can't wait for the Tanya explosion!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Can't wait to see her gone. Great chapter
Date: 11 Apr 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
So glad to see the story is back. Keep the chapters coming!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
Great chapter! Hoping he doesn't pussy out.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
I was wondering about the fake blond that tripped Alice
Date: 11 Apr 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 4 fights, painting and cheating sluts
He will not pussy out can't wait
Date: 10 Apr 2016 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
I hate Tanya! Eward needs to get rid of her NOW! LOVE YA!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
OH I love this! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
I'm going to guess that the Blonde Bimbo is Tanya and that Bella got her on tape cheating in case Edward needs that for future reference. I'm also guessing the that Jasper's cousin is Rosalie, just because it'll bring the whole thing full circle. Six degrees of seperation and all that stuff.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
😀 I loved this chapter d84;a039;
Date: 09 Apr 2016 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
Can't wait for more!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
Absolutely loved it ! By the way 5 is mom's name Sheila or Shelia? Sheila is the most common spelling . But I have seen the other version Keep up the good work
Date: 09 Apr 2016 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
SOOOOO happy you updated this story!
I want more! Lol
Who was the blonde bimbo? I kept thinking Tanya.
Who is Jasper's cousin? Rosalie? Emmett?
Looking forward to to the upcoming chapters!!
Date: 08 Apr 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
Is Rose the cousin that Jasper wants to meet?
Date: 08 Apr 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
First of all: never apologize for long chapters. I'm delighted about the update, I had thought you had abandoned the story. Jake is such a "dog" dog, but I guess it gests boring around the house all alone. The meet-the-parents was epic. I wonder if the bimbo goes by the name of Tanya.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
That is just to much fun lol
Date: 08 Apr 2016 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
Yeah! Your back. Looking forward to more :)
Date: 07 Apr 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 3 Mansluts, Dogsluts and freak outs
OMG I love you !!! I have been following this and waiting for you, Thank you so much.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
Oh....I think I'm a like this story.... very much h!!!
Date: 24 Aug 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
Good story
Date: 23 Aug 2015 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
I hope he dump Tanya. She need to go.
Date: 23 Aug 2015 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
It is a good chapter.
I can't wait that Edward gets rid of Tanya!
Thank you
Date: 14 Aug 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
Tanya is a royal bitch and he can't get rid of her fast enough. What is Edward up to can't wait for more
Date: 13 Aug 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
Sounds great
Date: 13 Aug 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
Great start! Looking forward to more.
Date: 12 Aug 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
Tanya needs to go. She is so nasty because she's hungry.
Date: 12 Aug 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
Like the story, but please check grammar. It is very distracting.
Date: 12 Aug 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
Excellent beginnings.
Kate
Date: 11 Aug 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
Great start!! Interested to see where this leads. I can already tell that I like the character traits in the story. Hope it updates often! :-)
Date: 10 Aug 2015 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
Please tell me he will dump Tanya! She is such a bitch and is probably with Edward because of his money. Love it and please update soon!
Date: 10 Aug 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
Oh, please, please, make him ditch Tanya! She wasn't even looking at him when he came home, texting away to God knows who. Maybe her plan B? She was so rude to Rosalie, she needs to go. Everybody else noticed he was away, didn't Tanya? I'm curious about Edward's secret project.
Date: 10 Aug 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
oooh yeah Eward, ditch the bitch
Date: 10 Aug 2015 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
aww Edwars with a lettuce lover - poor Sod
Date: 10 Aug 2015 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
That should prove a fun talk... I bet she is sexting and she cheating on Edward. She just wants his trust fund. She's a bitch and very shallow.
Date: 10 Aug 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 06 Aug 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
First of all I would love to taste-test at Bella's bakery. Edward shouldn't give a fluff and just enjoy the cupcake. He seems to be in pretty good shape judging from Bella's reaction and if Tanya is going to start an "epic battle" over something her boyfriend eats it's time Edward put his combat-boot down. Look forward to Edward's POV.
Author's Response:
I'd def be a taste tester as long as I dont have to clean up the mess from baking, my poor body wouldnt like it though lol. Thank you for you sweet review. yeah Edwards being a pussy right now lets hope those boots get to knockin soon. working on EPOV as we speak hoping to post it tonight or tomorrow. If you are intersted I started a blog for this story on blogger the address is gunsandpies.blogspot.com. I posted Bella's nutty monkey cupcake recipe there and I will be posting pics and spoilers to this story there as well I will put the link in my bio notes or story notes
Date: 03 Aug 2015 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
Love it!!! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
Cute!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
I certainly hope so ! Good job!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
love it so far, cant wait for more
Date: 01 Aug 2015 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
You've roped me in! I like where this story is going. I'm looking forward to your next post. Thanks for sharing your work.
Date: 01 Aug 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.I hope Tanya is Edward's sister and not girlfriend.
Date: 01 Aug 2015 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
HOOKED... Keep it COMING!!!!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
I am enjoying this story. Keep it coming. Thx
Date: 01 Aug 2015 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
That was fun! I look forward to more.
Date: 01 Aug 2015 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
Possibilities. Enjoyed this first chapter.
Date: 01 Aug 2015 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
loved it! great start, cant wait to read more
Date: 01 Aug 2015 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Sweet Tooth
LOVE IT! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!