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Reviewer: Laura Elizabeth Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 23

You are so mean. Meanest person in the entire world. Please update now. As in right now. Please

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loving this story. 

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 23

Epic, your writing is so great. I will be waiting by my in box until third installment. Thank you madam heartoftwilight.

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 23

Holy shit! Can't believe you ended it like that...I hope and pray you have already started part 3, the wait is going to drive me crazy. I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMG!!! I cant believe you just left us hanging!!! lol well i hope the third story is up soon!!!

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 23

You stop there, seriously. You're kiiling us. Great chapter.

Reviewer: sue blair Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

Evil woman. Good, but evil

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 22

Only one. Ore chapter?  What is the name of the next installment?  The next one has to be be huge right?  I can only imagine. Great job. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 22

awesome chapter it was hot and beautiful

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 22

OMG! ;)

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 22

So will Maria be getting together with Carmine or his father???Guess Elizabeth got Sean's lucky charm. Lol!!!

Ah Bella is starting to get tired is there a little mafia prince or priness in her belly???

What do you mean only 1 more chapter left

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑🐰

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 22

Very good

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 22

Happy for Sean and Elizabeth.

 

Bella is pregnant?

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 22

Glad for Sean and Elizabeth. Happy for Maria, too! Hope no one but the bad guys get whacked next chapter! Edward feels something bad is coming!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 22

love this

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 22

:O :O bella is preggos :) :)

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Hope Edward listens to his gut feeling that something is wrong.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it!

 

But just one more chapter? Waaa! Waaa! Haha

Reviewer: Mrsakey Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 22

Xoxo for the update

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 21

God this chapter is perfect, they are now available to rule. To me Charlie and Jessica must be watched, especially Jessica she will be trouble. I can only say maybe trouble, Edward and Bella will take on anyone.

Reviewer: Mrsakey Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 21

Whole lots of love

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 21

Love this story from the beginning and I'm looking forward for more interesting chapters. Please keep up the good work.

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it :D

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 21

I love Edwards reaction to Bella's tattoo placement ideas. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 21

awesome chapter

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

Love these two, and love all the pics!

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

Really great chapter love your stories so much x

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter as always.  Soooooo! Can we expect a third installment to this possibly never ending greatness???? It would be such a shsme to not be able to follow..... Bella's pregnancy and the birth of thee future"HEIR" 😊 ( just a thought.... he he he )   READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 21

Good  chapter  although  short .   Keep  up  the  great  work !  

Reviewer: sandezzy_ Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 21

amazing as always! can't wait for your next update!!!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

I like this fiction.

Je vous remercie.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 21

What?? The ending!!!! NO!!!!!!! I am notready for this to end but I guess all great things must come to an end. 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

Wonder when Edward and Sean will find out they are fighting the same person .

Can't wait for the explosions!!! Does Edward and Bella need fire fighters, paramedics or heck I teach and do swift water in the coven cause I do all three. Me and my crew can figure out fires and patch the team up.

KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑🍀

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 21

A good chapter.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it cant wait for more

Reviewer: Dinia Steel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 21

I do so love this Mobward and Mobella story.  I'd love to know where you got the idea for the Coven tat?  Looking very forward to MORE!

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 21

Impressive!

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 21

Don't know why but was kinda expecting a picture of a young Andy Garcia, who I think to this day is still hot. Glad it wasn't as I don't want him to wind up a bad guy. Oh yeah, go Sean! Love his irish ass.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

Love it

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 21

Excellent chapter, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: secretwritter010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 21

Awesome.... :) is there going to be another part.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter! 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 21

Very good

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 21

It was great to have a peaceful chapter before the fireworks start again. Love all the pictures you picked for this one.

Reviewer: angelahayes-mitchell Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 20

So Charlie makes an appearance wonder if he finds about Bellas new life or even care when he does

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 20

Jessica isn't very smart. It was a beautiful funeral. 

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

OMG....really Lol and the plot continues to thicken...... 

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

Good lord that was gruesome.... but well deserved love your story 😍

Reviewer: angelahayes-mitchell Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love how you put bound to the family in there as the movie the ladies were watching so perfect 

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

I had hoped Elizabeth and Sean would get together. Jessica will cause a bit of trouble, I hope Jasper is looking for her, she knows to much it seems to me that she is a loose end that should be tied up. Great chapter, great pictures.

Reviewer: goldjess94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

Love the story but I wish for more Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: Redsoxfan1984 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 20

Nice touch at the end with Jessica hiding in forks

Reviewer: sandezzy_ Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 20

Interesting chapter. RIP Lisa:( can't wait to see what jessica and charlie do and also bella and edward having a baby...so excited for that.Clo you are an amazing writer and I can't wait for your next update. Update soon! 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 20

I like very much this chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: StaceyC Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 20

Wonderful update.  Post more quickly please.

Reviewer: Bbkjv2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 20

Another great chapter can't wait for the next

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

OMG!! I love it!!! :)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 20

Glad Lisa got a good farewell. . Nice that e is giving Sean a chance. . Can't wait for Jessica to get caught

Reviewer: CGRN0611 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 19

You reap what you sow, he got what he deserved!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 20

I love this story and can't wait until the next update!!!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 19

WOW!!! Thats all I'M saying!! Well done.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

Awwww!!!!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

Jacob deserved everything he got!!!! Oh no!!! is AV Aro or Alec??? I guess we shall see!!!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 20

can't wait intill bella find her in forks let the game begain lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

So excited to get this update .  Glad Elizabeth is giving Sean a chance.  Can't wait to see what is going on with Jessica.  

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 20

Very very good

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter!  Loved that poem.  Is it really Irish?  wish I could have read that at my husband's funeral 7 months ago!  



Author's Response:

Yes it is really Irish.  Also my full first name is the River Goddess in Ireland.  So sorry about your husband.  Blessings to you.

http://www.appleseeds.org/Irish-Blessings-Prayers.htm

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 20

fantastic chapter so emotional

Reviewer: robin5589 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

Hmmm. I'm going to have to go back and read the first part of this. For some reason I thought Charlie was dead. I can't wait for an update. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 20

Jessica is in Forks and has run into Charlie!!! Will she become Bella new step mother????

Bets are up if so!!!

17 say yes

13 say no

KEEP WRITING!!!!🍀🚒🚑

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

It feels like the end is co ing soon.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 20

Thank you for the update!  Ive been missing  you :D

 

Loved the chapter :D

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

loved it, Jessica is by charlie

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: debjeanwalsh Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 20

I am really enjoying this my friend I hope see B & E have a baby and.E & s get together soon please.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 20

:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 20

Cant wait for more

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 20

I think the baby is on his or her way now. Great chapter, as always. Thank you.

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 20

Sad chapter but glad Sean and Elizabeth are opening up to each other don't look promising for jess look forward to next update. Ps . Is the chief bellas Charlie xx

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 20

The return of Jessica. Should be good.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 20

Real good

Reviewer: Mrsakey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 20

Crazy love!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

Beautifully done as expected.  Poor Edward just humping away at his task.  *snickers*

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 20

Happy times and sadness. Jessica sure is smarter than we thought except for ending up in Forks. Great chapter Clo!

Reviewer: KoolKat132 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

i love this story. i was reading it on fanfiction. i'm so glad i still have the chance to read it. hope you update really soon :)

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

I'm slightly afraid of you! lol lol

I don't get my jolly's reading torture but I never skip over those parts. In mafia stories, torture is pretty much a requirement. The torture in this chapter is fascinating since it came across more as a ceremony instead of just a slice an' dice good ole time. Good job

Author's Response:

I am so glad you saw it that way, because that is how I meant for it to come across.  Each person had a reason for what they did.  Thanks for a great review.

Reviewer: Airi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 19

I read your first story Bound and Dangerous and love it. This sequel is wonderful I love your story can't wait for the next chapters.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 19

Excellent job.

Reviewer: Daisy Mae Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 19

What about Roberto Cortez now? Aro didn't tell them anything about Aro's plot concerning Isabella. 0_0

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 19

I am so sorry it took so long to read but getting the crew together with my kindle cause TWCS isn't on my phone and this week has been us going to other fire stations due to deaths of firemen. I had to lock up my Kindle in my locker and forgot to take it.

OK now that Aro is dead Elizabeth and Sean can talk and get together but some us think Bella should have killed him since he was her father and he didn't give crap about her. She should have said and done something since she is the Donna.

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑💓🍀

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oui, Aro est mort, Il est une bonne chose.

Je n'aimais pas nécessairement la torture mais je comprends qu'il est la coutume des gens de la mafia.

Il est un bon chapitre.

Merci. Bisous.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 19

I'd have shoved all kinds of stuff up his ass and down his throat!

Reviewer: sexyalex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 19

A well deserved death sentence for aro and mike.  Jessica's next 

Reviewer: MissBlackCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19

I really enjoyed Aro's torture. Now I'm scared cause I don't know what that say about me. It was awesome. I love ur attention to details. I can't wait to see what they do to Jessica. I love that u did a Dom/Don is the best. Thanks 

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