Date: 31 Jan 2016 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
I wonder why they didn't mentioned the call to Roberto? if they were having survillance they should know about the meeting with Roberto.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loosing his dick !!! Great way to make Aro suffer to begin with his dick. Great chapter, I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2016 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 17
Okay soooo....We have the pleasure of looking forward to Aro's demise next chapter but now one ROBERTO CORTEZ is on board to follow through were Aro left off?????? Edward and Bella can't seem to catch a break. So much to look forward to. READ YOU SOONa86;
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2016 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
I hope Aro suffers until his last breath. He is truly evil. And now he's caused even more problems by siccing that Cortez guy on E&B. I hope he isn't a problem, but I bet he will be. 😕
Can't wait for more!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMGosh! Poor Aro, NOT!!!!!!!! I had to laugh at little at Aro's skin peeling off his dick. Can't wait to read his reaction. Lol.
Date: 31 Jan 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
Looking forward to seeing Roberto is going to try and kill Edward and take Bella. This should be good.
Love Maggie's dress!!
Aro is so screwed!
Poor Elizabeth... so sad.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 17
Cant wait for more
Date: 31 Jan 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
Mmmmmmm............Roberto!!!!! He is so hot and sinful and bad!!! Edward and Bella have no idea about the fact that Aro knows him and they are in big trouble. I believe he will be worse than Aro.
I can't wait until the pain comes down on Aro. I'm very excited to hear the anguish and torture he screams and cries and begs. Oh Cullen's - if there is anything more you can put the acid in - do it. It will be like Christmas and my birthday all in one. Such evilness!!!!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am excited for more!! :)
Date: 31 Jan 2016 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
Aro is in for a world of pain and he deserves it.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2016 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Fantastic job as usual Clo.
Date: 25 Jan 2016 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait to read the next chapter. Looking forward to hoping you get Sean and Elizabeth in a relationship.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Excellent chapter. I hope for Elisabeth and Sean to reconnect later.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love this entire series. You're an amazing author and I can't wait to see what the plan is for Aro!
Date: 22 Jan 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
I seriously cannot tell you how much I love this story!!! I think nothing that Aro endures will be enough but the tagamet was brilliant and hilarious. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Date: 20 Jan 2016 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
Elizabeth needs to finish Around and then apologize to Sean for being so cruel and hateful towards him in her grief.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow. Several things. 1. looks like the shit is heating up. 2. excellent selection on the pictures. Love that you do this for us. 3. Please don't let Elizabeth give up on Sean. I feel my heart breaking for her. Great update.
Date: 19 Jan 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2016 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
As one in the medical profession I think phase one is great to bad they can't give him a high dose of free flow vancomycin. Stevens-Johnsons syndrome is extremely painful! I do hope that Sean fights for Elizabeth and she let's him help her with the grieving process. Can't wait for Alec and Maggiesee wedding. Keep up the good work!
Date: 19 Jan 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
What a great chapter, can't wait to read more soon!
Date: 19 Jan 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Elizabeth. Hope she'll be ok and will let Sean in, in the future. Yes Aro needs to pay.
Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for the update.
Aro is going down and its gonna hurt!!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 18 Jan 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
OOMGosh! ! ! ! ! My heart breaks for Elizabeth. Can't wait to see what they (you) have planned for Aro. Hope you can update soon.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
Such a sad chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you gor the update
Sean needs to text Sean so he can comfort her
Well done
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
Such a evil man, he should be pickled and not allowed to enter even hell. Edward and Bella are totally the perfect deadly weapon, sexy and hot as the sun.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
woah!! you are soo awesome,another great chapter! finally you updated! can't wait to see aro suffer....and am sooo excited at the conversation bella and edward had about babies...eeppp!! cant wait for baby cullen!
Date: 18 Jan 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
Another great chapter. Keep 'em coming please!
Date: 18 Jan 2016 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
Such a tough emotional chapter. The suitcase could really have traveled that far? Great job.
Date: 18 Jan 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
I can't wait til they catch him! So many people want to torture him that there will be quite a long line.
Date: 18 Jan 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Holy sh*t! I love this story! :)
Date: 18 Jan 2016 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
:O :O :O :O
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Cant wait for more
Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
it keeps getting better and better...
your fic, not the situation, that is....
Date: 06 Jan 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
Peter is such an idiot. He is lucky to be alive.
Date: 04 Jan 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad everyone is there for Elizabeth and Bella too. Poor Lisa.
Date: 01 Jan 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for next update.
Date: 01 Jan 2016 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
Real good and Happy New year
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
First) You were missed more than words can say. and.. Second) I hope your holidays were filled with love and peace. Now I am so upset I can't think straight because I know what happened to Lisa and someone needs to have a sadistic Dom do to Aro all the most evil and vile things imaginable to him. Just saying. It's good to have you back : ) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 31 Dec 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update plz keep them coming. I love your story you are amazing!!!!
Date: 31 Dec 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter, thank you for the update.
I wish you a Happy New Year.
Date: 31 Dec 2015 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter. I have missed your updates and hope to see another one soon.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2015 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
Peter's quite the turd! He's lucky he's still alive:)
As always, a great chapter
Date: 31 Dec 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
A new chapter! So excited. Merry Christmas to all your readers. I was so hoping you were continuing this story as it is one of my all time favorites. I cannot wait to see the torture they inflict on Aro... nothing will be horrible enough. I hate him. I love Badass Bella too. Awesome story, cannot wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
happy new year, hope you are inspired and spend it writing more
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2015 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
dun! dun! dun! dun! oohhh i can't wait to see aro's ass get killed!! this cliff hanger has made me anxious for the next chapter! you are amazing and am wishing you update soon!!
Date: 31 Dec 2015 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
Merci pour ce nouveau chapitre.
Happy New Year 2,016.
Je vous souhaite beaucoup de bonheur, l'argent (argent) et surtout une bonne santé pour vous et toute votre famille.
Baisers
Date: 31 Dec 2015 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
I really like this story; so glad to get an update; can't wait for Aro to pay!!!!
Date: 31 Dec 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 31 Dec 2015 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
I loved it, Clo!! It was so emotionally charged and full of angst and hurt. Poor Elizabeth and Peter - when they find her, if they find her!!!
i love your writing and your pictures. Thank you for including them. I missed you when you were gone but knew that things had to work out and they were far more important.
i truly wish that you had a Merry Christmas but I think the better wish is for a Healthy, Happy and the best year with a brand new start. Xoxo
Date: 31 Dec 2015 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved the update. So glad bella put Peter in his place.
Date: 31 Dec 2015 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
SSo excited to get this update. I feel so sorry for Elizabeth. I can not believe that Peter acted the way he did when he first saw her. Of he was wanting to make up with her that was not the way to go about it. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow, absolutely blown away by this comeback. You are the bomb.
Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
WoW just WoW!!
So can not wait for the next update!!
Aro is SO dead hehehehehehe!! He doesn't deserve a quick death they should each make him suffer, torcha him, give him a slow painful death!!
Um seriously does Peter have a death wish or something putting his hands on the Doms/mob wife!!
Date: 31 Dec 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
Every chapter just gets better and better. Hopefully the next chapter comes soon. Like in the next week. Please!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good chapter, if I knew how to create Aro, then kill his ass I would. I wish Lisa had chosen to stay at the club, he hurt her so bad, when they find him they should skin him.
Date: 30 Dec 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Peter has a bit of a temper. Happy New Year!
Date: 30 Dec 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Welcome Back and thank you very much for this update...
Date: 30 Dec 2015 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
Omg! What a connection! And really an Irish temper? Idiot. Great chapter.
Date: 30 Dec 2015 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Cannot wait to read more. I do not have an ounce of pity for Aro. He is a dead man!😲
Date: 30 Dec 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
OH NO :O :O :O :O
Date: 30 Dec 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
Happy New Year!
Thank you for the update :)
This is sad. Just one more reason that Aro must die, not quick but very slowly and very painfully pulling off is his ever one of his "dangling" body parts!! LOL
Looking forward to more :D
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2015 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
Cant wait for more
Date: 29 Nov 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 26 Nov 2015 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love this story and I absolutely love how you interweave the pictures throughout. I cannot wait for Aro to go down. When he pisses off someone, he does it in spectacular fashion. He will have every family in the U.S. hunting his ass. Good first case for the Coven to test all their skills. Awesome story, just amazing.
Date: 25 Nov 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
No no no I need more!!!!!
Date: 24 Nov 2015 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think this is the beginning of another happy couple. They could make a huge organization with east and west territories.
Date: 23 Nov 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
oooh Aro now has the Irish and the Italians after him. He doesn't stand a chance...not that deserves one anyway.
Oooh go Bella....take control.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2015 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Edward I hope
Date: 22 Nov 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. Love to see the romance building, sorry that it is at the cost of her sister.
Date: 22 Nov 2015 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!! :)
Date: 22 Nov 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
I am falling all over again for this love story. I don't know who will get to Aro first but, his torture need to last longer. Aro needs some of the pain he has inflicted over the years.
Date: 22 Nov 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love this update! !!!!! Love Bella taking control of Edward and him having to safe word. Can't wait for Elizabeth to see her father. I hope Aro pays deeply.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it - and Edward's remark about Carlisle's rear end! So funny! Loving Sean and Elizabeth! She brings out a whole new side in him. I know it's possible, because my Mom brought that out in my Dad. It's a beautiful thing to see! My heart breaks for what they are bound to discover about Aro and that suitcase! Elizabeth will need Sean then more than ever! Wonderful work!
Date: 21 Nov 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. I like Bella taking the lead in bed. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
i hope you update real soon can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
Excellent update. Poor Elizabeth.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Holy hotness. Yum. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2015 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, Edward and Bella are o so hot. When will they find Lisa, Elizabeth's sister, I believe she has been murdered by that evil man Aro.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Really good
Happy thanksgiving giving
Date: 21 Nov 2015 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
I do love when the strong characters find their weakness in someone close to them. This fiction is packed with them. Edward with Bella, Emmett with Rosalie, Alec with Maggie, now Sean with Elizabeth. Each couple is unique, but each has that one trait in common. Kudos on that! They are not "cookie cutter" couples. It makes the story richer. My heart hurts already for Elizabeth when they discover what happened to her sister! Thank you for a marvelous fiction that your readers can't wait to devour!
Date: 21 Nov 2015 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
Beautiful pictures. I like the way the story is unfolding with Sean and Elizabeth.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am glad that Sean is helping Eliszabeth.
E/B HOT!!
I think it will be a joint effort with Aro.. he is going to be miserable when dies!
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
Heart warming!! : ) READ YOU SOON♥
Date: 18 Nov 2015 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
For their own happiness, it's time for a long talk.
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2015 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love your story can not wait for more.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome chapter
Date: 16 Nov 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
wow!! another amazing chapter that kept me on the edge! you are absolutely fantastic and this chapter was the bomb! can't wait for your next update....can't wait to see aro tortured and killed:) update soon!
Date: 16 Nov 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Excellent chapter. I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 16 Nov 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Glad the Servillo's took her in. Poor Elizabeth finding out about her sister this way. Aro will suffer even more now.
Date: 16 Nov 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ahhh, the plot thickens even more! So Aro is gonna have the Irish and Italians after his ass. A very painful death would be only justice for what Aro has done. Love the way this story is unfolding. Looking very forward to the next chapter.
Hard Hugs
Carol
Date: 16 Nov 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
Very good chapter ! Keep up the great work ! I voted for you!