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Reviewer: jagbatty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 10:49 AM Title: The Truth but I still Love You

Really enjoyed reading this hope you update soon

Reviewer: Soccer1023 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 11:42 AM Title: The Truth but I still Love You

Great story but the grammar is really in need of help. You need someone to proof this for you. I love the story though. Good luck!i

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2015 11:03 PM Title: The Truth but I still Love You

OK I am curious to where you are going to go with this. So far liking this. I am not sure what to think of alice. If alice didn't want her in it. Then should of not set them up. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: bba628 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 5:31 PM Title: The Meet and greet

Great first chapter I have added you to my favorites congratulations on your first fic I look forward it.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 7:10 AM Title: Epov: Her First Time

Sweetie  you seriously need help there are simply  too many grammatical errors.  With some help I think this story is worth reading.  

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 7:04 AM Title: The Meet and greet

Sweetie you need a beta and a pre~reader obviously English  must not be your first language.  I think with a little help it will all work out.  READ YOU SOON   : )

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 3:27 AM Title: The Meet and greet

IInteresting 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 1:46 AM Title: The Truth but I still Love You

I don't know what to say.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 1:41 AM Title: The First Date

I have to be honest,there are alot of spelling errors. Do you have spell check?

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 1:36 AM Title: Epov: Her First Time

Again dark lettering and skippiny around to much.Details-first date,how they got to a second and lemon was not good.Sorry the story is in the details.One word- CONFUSED!!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 1:27 AM Title: The Meet and greet

I have a hard time reading dark lettering.Please use white it's much easier to read. I LIKE THE STORY so far. The chapter was not to long. THANK YOU!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 1:47 PM Title: The Truth but I still Love You

Love your story .

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