Date: 05 Feb 2017 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 49
So glad that Major has learned his place too. This has been a very interesting story.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 48
Glad they got rid of Edward together!!!!!
Date: 05 Feb 2017 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 47
I am little confused with the end of this chapter.
I was worried about Edward coming back when Aro did not have him killed.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 46
Wow, they have been separated for a year. They have not even talked. Jasper needs to have a talk with the Major and set him straight.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 45
So Jasper does not remember what the Major has done. How does Bree feel about what the Major has done to her? Does Bella know that the Major has been with Bree?
Date: 05 Feb 2017 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 44
Can't believe this has happened again. It is like Jasper is bi-polar.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 43
What is Jasper doing? Why is he commending Bella to the "room"? How did the footage of Lisa get on the Internet?
Date: 05 Feb 2017 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 42
Glad things seem to working out for them.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 41
Glad Lisa is going with Jasper and Bella. I hope Phil gets some type of punishment.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 40
I hope hope that Jasper used the biggest dildo on them and throw their ass apart with them.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 39
I do feel that Jasper pushed a little to much here. Glad the hospital is going to go after Phil. I can not believe that he would hurt Renee while she was in the hospital . I hope he suffers. I hope he death is a slow very painful one.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 38
Why does it not surprise me that Phil has cameras and recording devices down there.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 37
Phil is one sick fucker. Why would Jasper mention taking Bella to the basement?
Date: 05 Feb 2017 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 36
I can't believe that Bella left Jasper in the "room". That she left him again. It always seems to be that she is leaving him and running game away. I can't believe that Jasper hasn't killed Phil yet.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 35
Ok, where did Bella get the strap on from? So Edward and Carlisle are not dead. Well, that is interesting.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 34
I sorry but Bella is acting like a spoiled brat.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 33
To be honest I do not blame Jasper for being upset with Bella. They agreed not to let anyone be with the other and she did. She got Peter to fuck Jasper. What if he had done the same thing to her. What if he felt it was the best for her? She should not have shared Jasper until she discussed it with him.
Date: 05 Feb 2017 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 32
Glad Bella went back in the "room" also glad that she let Jasper claim her in the shower. But whyou is she allowing Peter in the "room" while they are in there?
Date: 05 Feb 2017 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 31
I would like to know too!!!!!!!!
Date: 05 Feb 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thanks for giving us Bella's POV.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 29
Poor Bella. Why did she not enclosed Edward and Carlisle earlier and make the lighting strick them?
Date: 04 Feb 2017 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 28
So glad that Jasper is controlling his temper. Glad no one on the Coven was serious hurt.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 27
So now Bella knows how Edward knows about Florida.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh no. I was afraid that it was to soon for Jasper to play with her in there. He should have everything claimed her in their bedroom 1st and for a while before ever attempting the pain room
Date: 04 Feb 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
I don't know what Bella is sorry for but I think Jasper could not be any happier.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 24
Edward and Carlisle both have different plans.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh boy, what does Bella have planned for Master or sorry, her submissive?
Date: 04 Feb 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
Love Esme's idea.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
How is Esme going to help Bella? Is Jasper mad at Peter?
Date: 04 Feb 2017 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
Glad they are talking and Bella is seeing that she can enjoy certain things.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bad Bella is coming out to play!!!!!! Mistress is in the room!!!!!
Date: 04 Feb 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no. I am thinking Carlisle had something to do with the attack on Emmett and Peter. I hope Jasper listens to Emmett and Peter.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
What are Carlisle, Edward and Alice up to?
Date: 04 Feb 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
I hope Jasper torches Phil and those other men. I hope they feel as much if not more pain than Bella.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
So glad that Bella is telling Jasper willing. Jasper is going to go to Florida and kill Phil.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am glad that Jasper found Bella. Hope we find out soon. What happened to her on Florida but I hope Jasper does not hurt her to find out. What is the deal on the Carlisle? Why did he fall behind them and why was he not there to help rescue Bella?
Date: 04 Feb 2017 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward has just lied to Bella BIG time!!!!!! Hope Jasper can get there in time. Jasper is going to kill Edward for lying to Bella and for hitting her.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
Could it be Edward or Alice? Or maybe Jacob? Oh, maybe whoever took Bella into a room of pain.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
That conversation went very well I think.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hope that scene did not set Bella back. She seemed to have handled it ok. Maybe after she has had a chance to talk to Esme and get her side of being a submissive she will see it different.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Carlisle screwed up. I am assuming that Carlisle is not head of the coven. That Major is. I hope this does not set Bella back
Date: 04 Feb 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait to find out who has abused Bella in her past.
Date: 04 Feb 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
This was a good chapter. I am glad that Jasper did not try anything with Bella either time.
Date: 03 Feb 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, she has interesting powers. I agree with Emmett. Things are going to be interesting.
Date: 03 Feb 2017 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am guessing that Bella has tried to commit suicide.
Date: 02 Feb 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMGosh!!!!!!!! I feel so sorry for Bella.
Date: 02 Feb 2017 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Jasper was gentle with her but he really just raped her because she did not want it.
Date: 02 Feb 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jasper did not handle that very well. I don't blame Bella for being fearful and pissed.
Date: 02 Feb 2017 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 49
love the story thank you for shareing it
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2015 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 47
when does ch 47 happen in the story becase of this last part ?
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 37
oh why do you stop it there please update soon please please
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2015 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 32
i wonder what she what's peter to do
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2015 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 30
well i hope there dead but i don't think so great ch's
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
great ch can't wait to read it all
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2015 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh no it was jane with carilse he is a bad bad boy lol
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
hey great ch keep em comming
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
i do hope they go after them and let her it them all back
Date: 17 Sep 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
How is she still alive? Why didn't she not tell her stepdad and Phil were abusing her? And again how did Edward know? That was I'm at a loss for words. Please have Bella go back and make them all pay including Edward.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2015 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
great ch i did't think it wood be them
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow, so Phil is a real bastard and what can i say about Renne. How did Edward know and why did he leave and came back if was interested in this lifestyle why hide it from Bella in the beginning? . I hope Jasper rips them all apart. Hope now he really understands Bella. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
i bet the masters is aro and caius but i think edward and alice are pain junkes great ch keep up the great job
Author's Response:
That's an interesting idea. When Bella explains you will get her insight into what happened to her.
Date: 14 Sep 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Somehow, I knew Edward is at the bottom of Bella's "pain room" problem! How bad must it have been for Bella to block it out so completely!? God help Edward when the Major catches up with him! Nice twist on this story! Loving it! Thank you!
Date: 12 Sep 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Really confusing chapter. Not understanding why Edward and Alice were gone and just pop back. And really is Bella going to be so stupid that she believes Edward after running from Jasper. And then for Edward to suddenly become abusive. I'm lost.
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
great ch jasper needs to find them now
Date: 12 Sep 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
I cannot tell you how much I love this story! Feelings are put into excellent, viable words and allow anyone reading to see and feel the pain that Bella is being subjected to. I understand there is more to it than that, but for some readers that alone is a wonderful beginning and start of discussion. I look forward to reading much more! Thank you for an original!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Cliff hanger is kill me. Loved the chapter.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm glad they talking but to have to watch that punishment. Especially after the abuse she had and the beating Jasper gave her was awful before hanging herself I would think it would be fresh in her mind. Even Carlisle said she would have had trouble recovering from that as a human. It was brutal. I'm anxiously waiting for Bella's backstory ( I have a feeling it has to due with the wolfs). Thanks for the update.
Date: 09 Sep 2015 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well I guess there was a lot more going on behind Bella's back in her time with the Cullen's. What's Jasper punishment going to be for his abuse of Bella? We know Carlisle doesn't see Bella as a daughter but Esme does, who wants to see there mom displayed like that and having sex with the house. Aghhh gross. And is Bella going to have any feelings knowing Jaspers been having sex with most of the house? Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
i wood tell jasper hell to no
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2015 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
great ch they don't get what she is saying and i will be dam if my mate lets others use me i wood be out of there so fast i wish i could get more then one ch a day i love this story keep up the great job
Date: 08 Sep 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
Is major going to show up? I sure hope so
Date: 08 Sep 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow. They really don't get it. Poor Bella. Hope Jasper doesn't traumatize her anymore.
Date: 07 Sep 2015 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for the update. Surprised Bella chose Peter to sit in on the conversation. Thought maybe Rose or Emmett.
Date: 07 Sep 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
great ch keep up the great job
Date: 05 Sep 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
Kick pass Bella
Date: 04 Sep 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
I have to admit that when I fiirst started reading this I wasn't a fan. But, now that it has progressed to a point where I feel Bella's not being abused anymore I'm starting to enjoy it. No matter what Jasper says or thinks he did rape her. Also, I still don't understand how Edwars fits into this. How could have Bella been her mate and leave, what about Alice?
Date: 04 Sep 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Not sure with this chapter. I guess Im wishing for more insight, more back the forth in their conversations. I'm not getting any emotions from them. Bella tried to kill herself. Has anyone talked to her about it? She has some extreme stuff to deal with, but Im not feeling it. I realize I'm just greedy for more. Thanks for updating.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
jasper has not learned yet i don't think he ever will
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
you tell them all how it will be lol
Date: 03 Sep 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hooray! Good for Bella. Jasper is so frustrating. Nothing he said in that chapter made me feel he understood the damage he did. Thanks again. Looking forward for more.
Author's Response:
No he still doesn't see it but don't worry it will take time but he will see what he has done. Thanks for review.
Date: 03 Sep 2015 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
lets bloody hope so because he has hurt bella enough and who can say what she will do to hurt him . bella should tottaly do the same to jasper that he has done to her and bombard him with all her feeling too and then perhaps he will learn
Author's Response:
What a good idea. Yes she has been hurt by him but he will need to learn or loss her. Thanks for the review.
Date: 02 Sep 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh wow, I wonder what Bella has done.
Author's Response:
it takes a while but all the secret will be revealed.
Date: 02 Sep 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love how Jaspers so blasé with the situation " she just needs more time". Well now she needs a doctor, therapy and a butt load of time. Apparently 4 years Hope that's to just be in the same room as him without throwing up. Thanks again for another chapter.
Author's Response:
oh don't worry Jasper have a long wait and lots of time to think.
Date: 02 Sep 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
Nous ne laisse pas trop lontemps Sans un SES de Chapitre cruelle (lol) La Fin
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2015 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
you go bella go
Date: 01 Sep 2015 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow. That was horrible, poor Bella. She's probably black and blue everywhere. Not sure how shes still conscious after that beating. I don't see how Jasper "the empath" can be so disconnected to the situation, Even if Bella is blocking him. Its like BAM! Here it is. This is your new life now. No middle ground. He ignored the feelings she had all week after Carlisles kiss before she shutdown her emotions. And I'm still having trouble with letting Carlisle kiss her before having this discussion. How can she not think he is going to just pass her around with his unemotional comments. How much more abuse is she going to have to endure? I hope Jasper has a long painful road before he gets any redemption. Its obvious there something else from her past that not been uncovered yet. Besides being a terrible mate Jasper sound like terrible friend. Soooo since I've ripped Jasper apart and am having trouble see any good about him here. Thanks for another chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2015 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
you go you tell them
Date: 01 Sep 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow. Rivioting chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2015 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow!
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: 31 Aug 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok. I love reading Jasper and Bella stories, and I don't normally mind the BDSM component but this is clearly rape. And I can't understand why he thought it was ok to let Carlisle touch her first knowing she has no understanding of their real lifestyle. I like that she is able to block his gift. There are so many stories I've read where he's able to push lust or love at her and she just gives in. Of course I always love a HEA but sometimes I think they come too easily. I hope you make he pay and understand what he's doing is wrong. I read one story where Bella chose death then to continue living with the abuse. As much as I hate that. I felt it was justified it prove her point and was the only power she had left for herself after dealing with supernatural beings. Curious to see where you go with the story. Thanks for putting your work out there.
Author's Response:
More will come out about what Jasper was thinking or as the case may be. Bella doesn't give in easily as you will see but there is a hea it just takes a while to get there.
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2015 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
alright bella let him have it lol i wood
Date: 31 Aug 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
That was not BDSM, that was rape. This makes me very uncomfortable and I can no longer read this story. Even rape victims can orgasm which often makes them hate themselves even more. I just can't with this any more. Good luck.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry that you can't continue with this story but i do understand. Yes it was defiantly rape and Jasper does come to see that. i hope you find other story that you enjoy.
Date: 31 Aug 2015 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter
Author's Response:
Glad your enjoying it.