Date: 22 Sep 2016 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 34
Poor Jasper! I hope Edward is alright!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it! Poor Jasper!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it! Uh-oh!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
Fantastic chapter
Date: 22 Sep 2016 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
I really hate Esme!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
I really hate Esme!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it! I think that Bella will help Edward get out of Esme's evil clutches!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 97
Aaawwweee!
Date: 21 Sep 2016 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 97
I am so happy with how Edward reacted to the baby and how he is treating Charlie.
Date: 20 Sep 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Poor Edward! I hate Esme!
Date: 20 Sep 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 97
Huh, placebo birth control pills. What are the odds of that actually happening? I presume lawsuits would be plenty.
Charlie has his work cut out for him. Let's hope he gets it right this time.
Date: 20 Sep 2016 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 20 Sep 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 20 Sep 2016 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 97
Things are going in great directions for these love birds, I hope Charlie can man-up now...
Date: 20 Sep 2016 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 97
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 20 Sep 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 97
Being a grandparent is the greatest gift, hopefully Charlie won't piss it away.
Sherry
Date: 20 Sep 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 97
I'm overjoyed that Bella is pregnant and that Edward heartily supports their coming baby and their marriage! I have a bone to pick, however with your timing. I have 3 children, 2 born in April and 1 born in May. For the first 2, I got pregnant on July 4th. I'm absolutely certain of that. One was born April 6th and one April 9th. My third child was conceived on his father's birthday, August 6th, and was born on May 6th. So a child conceived in August would be due in May and one conceived in July would be born in April. Welcome to my life....
Date: 20 Sep 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 97
awww what a wonderful surprise. I remember about that pill thing happening in real life.
Date: 20 Sep 2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 97
I still wouldn't trust him one little bit.
Date: 20 Sep 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 97
I am going to miss this story!!
Date: 19 Sep 2016 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Bella! Riley is a prick!
Date: 19 Sep 2016 9:18 AM Title: Prologue
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 19 Sep 2016 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 96
I can totally understand why they are both so mad at CHarlie but I really hope he makes teh attempt to try to repair their relationship as much as possible. So glad that Edward it doing so wel.
Date: 18 Sep 2016 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 96
So glad Edward has moved on and is on his way to having a normal life.
Sherry
Date: 18 Sep 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 96
Great chapter. Cool that they are letting Alice manage one of the properties for them. Happy jazz is doing better too
Date: 18 Sep 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 96
This is fantastic!! :)
Date: 18 Sep 2016 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 96
I'm impressed how "easy" Jasper took to the news of Edward moving away... Though I'm happy he doesn't have any I'll wishes for him, I would feel pissed off. He went through so much with Alice to get them.to move to Seattle and now his best friend switches places without second thoughts of him:(
It's great knowing Edward did come around so well. I love seeing him so happy with his mom and the adopted family he grew into and of course his relationship with Bella. Let's hope they'll be able to get back "home" without any set backs
Date: 18 Sep 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 96
What's the matter? Surely you can afford that on the tremendous music teacher's salary you are now receiving?
Date: 18 Sep 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 96
I loved it every one is finding there way it great
Date: 18 Sep 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 96
Moving forward to create that future lifestyle Edward has only dreamed about.
Date: 18 Sep 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 95
The death penalty was a more fitting sentence. Not sure the general public should have to pay for her incarceration until she dies a natural death.
Maybe someone on the inside will reduce the cost by creating a life threatening injury.
Date: 18 Sep 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 94
Charlie could not expect any other reaction from Edward regarding his uncalled for actions towards his daughter's and her situation.
Will Bella force Charlie out of the family business?
Date: 17 Sep 2016 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 96
I am so excited for them and how much they have grown together.
Date: 17 Sep 2016 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 96
Great!! I'm in Palo Alto now, going to the Stanford football game tomorrow! How apropos!
Date: 17 Sep 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 96
I am not a big reviewer, but, I just want to say I adore this story. I love a vulnerable Edward that overcame and is now a stong more confident Edward. I will miss this story when it ends. I know Twilight has been over for a while, but I do so enjoy the fanfiction stories that came from it. I hope they never end.
Date: 17 Sep 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 96
We're in the home stretch now! I'm so happy they're finally finding the life they were always meant to have. What a great story this has been. Are you going to kill off Esme in prison? I would like that....
Date: 16 Sep 2016 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 95
She needs to suffer everyday of her life. Death is too quick.
Date: 14 Sep 2016 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 95
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 13 Sep 2016 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 95
So Charlie really tried to get Bella angry at Edward? Stupid fool...
I'm glad the judge decided on a "hard" verdict for Esme, though the brawl at jail came at an interesting timing... I hope she's really that bad hurt and didn't use it to flee!
Date: 13 Sep 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 95
If this beating Esme got while in custody is any indication, she will die in prison much the same way, I believe, and good riddance. Thanks for this story. It has brought out the beast in me here at the end....
Date: 13 Sep 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 95
I am happy with the sentence as long as she gets more of what her fellow inmates gave her and she becomes big Bertha's bitch . Charlie is an asshole.
Date: 13 Sep 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 95
someone will beat her to death ,,, I hope
Date: 13 Sep 2016 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 95
Again I think death would've been better for many reasons, yet life in many ways is more humane. It was an interesting chapter, Edward is obviously still not over things; he's using sex which is unhealthy no matter the intention behind it.
Date: 13 Sep 2016 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 95
I think she will die by someone's hands she hurt children men and woman she is going to suffer
Date: 13 Sep 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 95
Charlie is an idiot. I know kindergardners who play nicer than him. I think its good you aren't waving a magic wand and making him all better. I have mixed feeling on the sentence. On one side, I want her to suffer, on the other hand, she risks some idiot judge to overrule the sentence and her getting out....or escape... or something else that will set back Jasper and Edwards recoveries
Date: 13 Sep 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 95
Looking forward to more.
Sherry
Date: 13 Sep 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 95
I know really the judge would throw the book at her.
Date: 13 Sep 2016 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 95
She will probably get the crap beat out of her in jail again and again until she is murdered. Charlie is a sack of shit!
Date: 12 Sep 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 94
I am so proud of Edward for standing up and going off on Charlie.
Date: 12 Sep 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 93
Perfect perfect chapter!!!!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 94
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 12 Sep 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 92
I am finally getting to read. Real life has been crazy. Hopefully I will get caught on this amazing story. I am sad to see it coming to an end but happy that Edward and Bella are moving forward.
Date: 12 Sep 2016 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 94
Go Edward!!!! I'm so proud of him for standing up for himself and I'm positive that Bella will be also. He is definitely not a doormat any longer! I do not blame him or Bella in how they feel about Charlie at this point in time. I do wonder if Edward Sr. ever mentioned Charlie or their friendship to Elizabeth. Definitely something Edward needs to talk to her about. I think with time and lots of counseling they can forge some sort of relationship with Charlie, but certainly not as close as it could have been. And I think Charlie most definitely needs to seek counseling and work to become the man he should be and could be especially with Bella and Edward. I can't wait to hear what Carlisle and Peter think about Edward being co-owner of Swan Industries!
Date: 11 Sep 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 94
Im glad Edward felt abl o face Charlie and go through with it, that was probably the biggest ego boost he could get; )
Date: 11 Sep 2016 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 94
I think Bella will be very proud of him for how he confronted Charlie I know I am :)
Date: 11 Sep 2016 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 94
Kudos to Edward.
Sherry
Date: 11 Sep 2016 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 94
Don't blame E one bit. Charlie is a douche nozzle
Date: 11 Sep 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 94
I love that man!! He is just so fantastic!! Big hug for Edward!! :)
Date: 11 Sep 2016 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 94
I think that Edward needed to say what he did. But I know from experience that a cold day in Hell eventually comes. Time doesn't heal all wounds, but it make the reason for the wound fade away, then the wound closes up and all that is left is a scar with a memory attached. As long as Charlie takes their hate for awhile and continues to try and be a better person, life will change for them all.
Date: 10 Sep 2016 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 94
I understand why Edward doesn't forgive Charlie, but would have a difficult time if Bella felt the same. Can't wait to see how it plays out. Parents often do things they think are in the child's best interests, only to have those things come back to bite them in the ass when the children grow up. I know this from personal experience. Nobody is perfect and people make mistakes. Forgiveness heals everyone.
Date: 10 Sep 2016 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 94
I think Bella will be so proud of Edward for letting Charlie know he feels about everything. It made me so happy!!!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 10 Sep 2016 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 94
Good for Edward. He kicked ass with that speech!
Date: 09 Sep 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 93
Wow I was so far behind damn I was really missing out I loved everything more please
Date: 09 Sep 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 93
Yes, it was beautiful.
Sherry
Date: 08 Sep 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 89
Glad Edward went to talk to his dad.
Date: 07 Sep 2016 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 93
That really sounded like they had an awesome time in Hawaii, I hope they can take it back home as well...