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Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 77

I was shocked that I somehow missed reading this story. I thought I had read all of your works.

This had me on my toes, never knowing what to expect next.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 57

NO! Not Jasper!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 43

I think Bella has bigger balls than Edward. He just doesn't seem like a "family" boss.

Reviewer: Nellybean0710 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2019 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 46

Great story keep me up late to finish it. 

Reviewer: twilover24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2018 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 77

Love it . Keep writing girls

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 77

I love it.great job

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 77

AMAZINGLY!!! cool story ;) thanks so much for sharing it with us ;D

Reviewer: Bella Scissom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2016 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 77

Awesome story, I have to say I'm team Edward but I really liked this Jacob the best out of all the stories I've read.  If you write another Mafia story I'll definitely read it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2016 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

I love gay Jake. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 77

Absolutely loved this story. I will definitely read it again in the future.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 72

That rapist pig should have been skinned alive...slowly.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 62

I'm guessing the test results came back? 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 59

While Tanya was at the restaurant with her 'date' Tanya did say that she wanted to hurt Bella because Bella hurt her. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

All I have to say is "Thank goodness Jake is gay." Otherwise he'd probably be a dead man walking!

Reviewer: Afwife2016 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 77

Loved this Jake and the whole story. I get so tired of weak Bella, this was refreshing.  

Wish you would write a sequel! 

Great job 

Reviewer: MistySummer Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 77

Awesome. I couldn't stop reading it. I always love your stories but wait until you mark it completed. 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 77

OMG! I think this is my favorite one by you two! Loved it...every minute. Great job! I especially loved Maria!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 77

Fun mafia story. Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 77

really like that neither of them left the family business to be together. they accepted each other for who they were. great story

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 31

that Tanya needs a smack to the mouth from someone...urghhh

Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 77

Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: KdanielleB Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2015 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 38

Soooo happy you didn't make her sick I was gonna cry lol

Reviewer: KdanielleB Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 22

Have I mentioned I LOVE this make lmao

Reviewer: KdanielleB Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2015 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

Looove this jake!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 77

Wonderful epilogue esp Alice's part.  TY fro writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 76

Jake is so cool.  Wow Jasper is an arsehole. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 75

Jake is such a trip.  Maria is def an asset to them all.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 74

Glad so many are getting a happy ending.  Umm what about Tanya though?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 73

awww nice of Aro to give him the rings. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 72

Buh Bye Rayce.  He def had is coming.  Hard for me to admit Tanya was really a good guy. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 71

hmm  no condom and B is still on antibiotics?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 70

wow You've def surprised me with lots of twists and turns.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 69

noooo how could a skank like Tanya get the drop on Jasper and Bella. No nonono

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 68

Yea Tanya needs to pay along with Royce and Mike.  Hope Alice will be ok.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 67

Poor Alice.  Royce and Co really need to pay.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 66

Royce really needs to be dealt with. How many times does Aro have to tell him off.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 65

grr why hasn't someone neutered Royce

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 64

Jake's plans for Sinatra are cool.   LOL for Jasper being a baby

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 63

Tony is just too hilarious.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 62

wow Eleazar really put his foot in it this time.  Guess Tanya was telling the truth for once.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 61

Tanya is really pushing her luck.  Does sound like Alistair was stuck in the middle of the mess.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 60

Love B telling off the FBI weenies.  awww jake has a crush.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 59

poor b.  lost so much already.  Sounds like Tanya really has some answers to give.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 58

Poor Jasper.  Glad B is mostly ok too.  Sounds like Tanya has some explaining to do.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 57

oh Royce and Mikey really will pay for this trechery.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 56

Royce really wants to die.  Mike too.   Maria is a great asset to the gym.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 55

OMG  I so freakin LOVE Tony already

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 54

Great Idea alice had about Maria.   Knew Esme would agree.  Glad Em is going to talk to Rose's grandpa.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 53

Eleazar really is a moron.  He's going to get himself and his whole family killed at this rate.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 52

Skankya is really a delusional moron.  Can't wait for Rayce to be neutered.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 51

Oh Royce really needs to be neutered, mouth and dick.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 50

I actually like Maria.  LOL

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 49

LOVE royce getting pulled over.  That was good.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 48

lol for the door.   Sounds like Jasper is a tight arse.  So Loving your jake

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 47

Bella really does need to learn to fight and protect herself.  Don't blame Alice for not quite trusting Jasper yet.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 46

Go Jake!!!   Hmm wonder how Bella is going to take to E trying to train her. hmm

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 45

oooh Jenks really stuck his foot in it.  LOL.   Jasper is a little too smug for his own good.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 44

Royce really needs to be taken out.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 43

LOL for the Amex card playing a part.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 42

hmmm wonder how long till Heidi gets her heart broken.  I'm worried that its a setup for her.   I didn't catch Aro's sneaky wording either.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 41

Jasper does need to explain things to Alice.  The boys really do need to quit walking in on our couple

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 40

Wow  Jasper really has his work cut out for him with Bella and Alice mad at him.  LOL

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 39

Wowsers.   Surprised E didn't call out Aro for trying to get E to marry Jane.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 38

Holy crap.  You are spinning this in ways I hadnt even considered.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 37

Holy Crap..... I totally was not expecting that.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 36

hmmm now I'm sure that its Caius or Eleazar behind the attack.  Mike is a real idiot doing that in public.    However now I;m thinking that B's grandpa is an old mafia family and maybe its an arranged marraige she is trying to avoid.

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 35

Ugh Tanya now Jane.  eww.  Poor B being sick.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 34

hmmm Yea the Royce/Skankyathing was not a coincidence.  Go jake bitch slapping her.  ROFL for parting commend

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 33

yea eleazar is really pushing E's buttons.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 32

Dont blame E for losing his temper.  Tanya is a skank.   Hope the shopping goes well.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 31

Tanya needs a sock in her mouth before someone uses a fist to do it.  Glad Bill stepped in.

If Charlie is some big inspector, how does he not yet know about who/what E and all area?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 30

ooh Eleazar and Tanya are def delusional.   This is going to be a interesting night.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 29

hmmm the cop at the mobs house.  That should be interesting 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 28

aww nice date time.  Charlie and Bill really need to give it a rest/

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 27

hmm wonder if they really dies in a car accident now.  Wow Julia is certainly a nasty piece of work.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 26

Genetics huh.   Wonder if she has whatever killed her mom? or maybe 2 years before she can't have kids? you have my mind spinning and spinning.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 25

hmm don't think the bubble will last long.  Wonder if E will get Jenks to look into medical stuff.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 24

hmmm Sick or something else going on......hmmmm

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 23

awww for protective, inquisitive Jake.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 22

Ugh Royce is so pathetic.  Hope someone kills him off soon.   Jake is too funny.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 21

Men and thier double standards.  Wonder what Charlie will find?   lol for Jazz and A 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 20

Bill and Charlie are def arseholes when it comes to Jake and B

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

Hope b and alice don't get hurt in all these male machinataions.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

Ugh Royce really needs to just die.  Feel sorry of Heidi... don't think matt is on the up and up.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 17

wow  Royce really needs a broken jaw and to be put into his place.  hmm now what is Aro up to

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

Yup you are fucked E.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

Kings or not, I'd be pissed if I were Alice too.  Surprised she isn't already promised in marriage to someone anyway, esp with how old school Aro seems.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

oooh e is falling fast

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Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

LOL for Jasper and Jake stripping.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wonder what Royce and Aro will say about this little trip with the enemy

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

hmm Edward is getting himself in deep.  Hope B doesn't get hurt

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

Yea  Royce is a scheming coward.  Almost hoping he tries something with Bella and she takes him out.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

lol  Loving your Jake.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

Don't blame Alice for being pissed off at E and at E's attempt at being bought.  Sadly too many women would which give all us women a bad name.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

Can't blame cock-blocking Alice.  I'd be pissed too.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

Sounds like E is going to have a hard time following his own rules where Bella is concerned.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

hmm wonder if Alice will listen or not....I'm guessing not. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

sounds more like Mafia Princes are the PITAs.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hope Aro doesn't have an issue with Em and Rose.  lol for picking the restaurant Jasper works in

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

hmm  E seems like a real arse.

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