Date: 20 Feb 2016 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 28 Dec 2015 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
OMG I'm crying so sad they are all in pain
Date: 28 Dec 2015 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
Well that didn't go the way he hoped what a creep. Aro is very cool he sees the love I feel so bad for her
Date: 28 Dec 2015 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
James has messed in Bella s life
Date: 21 Dec 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella is such a fool.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2015 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
fin... seriously well that sucks
guess you just got tired of it but for a loyal fan I am totally dissappointed
Author's Response:
There's a third installment that will begin posting on Wednesday. I did not get tired. I just broke up the story. It was in the authors note at the beginning.
Date: 17 Dec 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 20
Fin??? That means the end. This can't be the end of the story! I understand her fears of being found out and labeled a deviant. I do. There has to be another way to salvage this lovely relationship. People can be so narrow....
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2015 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
Aro and his Brother's will see a decrease in Bella's enthusiasm for life. But, it won't affect the quality of work she accomplishes. It will however cause them to ask her to take some time off to regroup and figure out how to move forward.
Date: 17 Dec 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow, she didn't even talk it over with them. Harsh
Date: 17 Dec 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
Holy sh *t!!!! OMG!!! :( I am so sad for them.
I am excited for the next installment! :)
Date: 17 Dec 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
...or will she?
i still think a miracle will happen and she is pregnant. Maybe it's just wishful thinking. I don't know what will bring her back to her guys but something will. They belong together.
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2015 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh no you didn't! I will hunt you down and make you post sooner!
Date: 17 Dec 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Have I expressed my sadness and displeasure enough? No? Well then...I'm so sad. :( I can only hope this separation doesn't last long.
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow that was heartbreaking what will the guys do will they let her go or fight for her
Date: 17 Dec 2015 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
If you truly ended it here, I yh7nk I might have to hurl my tablet at you!!!!!
*huggles*
Date: 16 Dec 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well damn, I saw that coming. James is massive clingy little douche of a man who has to make someone else suffer for his mistakes. I'm hoping the third part of this tale involves the trio kicking ass and taking names...together. Love all your stories but this chapter got me all choked up. Damn holiday hormones.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
So sad...... Looking forward to reading the next part
Date: 16 Dec 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
You can't finish the story like that - PLEASE. I hope you have another story coming, to finish this one???
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow. That was heart breaking for all three of them. Now I will wait for next week.
Date: 16 Dec 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well at least she told them in person.
Date: 15 Dec 2015 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 19
How big is the dog?
Date: 14 Dec 2015 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
HOLY SH*T!! I am angry and sad. I don't know which to be more of. I need more soon or I am going to be freaking out! ;) You've got me going all "Sybil" over here! lol
Date: 14 Dec 2015 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella can't be weak. She loves Edward and cares very deeply for Garrett. They are adults and they did nothing wrong. They all deserve to be happy.
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2015 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
dog isn't big enough
Date: 14 Dec 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
have a feeling she's not going to tell them what is giing on and she is just going to blindside them
Date: 14 Dec 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
They won't give up with out a fight they love her to much
Date: 14 Dec 2015 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! Don't do it! Please! I'm begging here! They'll change her mind. They have to. PLEASE!!!
Date: 14 Dec 2015 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my goodness!
Date: 14 Dec 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
ugh, what a horrible place to stop. Please post soon
Date: 14 Dec 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hopefully the boys can talk Bella into seeing that there's nothing wrong with their relationship and that she has done nothing wrong! They may need to get Esme to talk to her. Poor Bella! She's finally happy and then wham! I can understand why she's upset and understandably worried about her career. Even Aro saw nothing wrong with her relationship as a consenting adult. My heart goes out to Bella! I can't wait for the next chapter.
I hope you and your family have a very Marry Christmas and a safe and Happy New Year!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
Please tell me there is a hea!? I need to know everything will be okay in the end.
Alia West aka Ashmerlin
Date: 13 Dec 2015 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
That's sad. Bella isn't even going to tell Edward and Garrett the truth is she? Dam!
3 years....James got off easy....
Date: 13 Dec 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah, well...y'know, the witch of the West did threaten the dog, too!! 😉
I I hope the boys are able to talk her down. Especially Edward. They're going to be pretty well heartbroken. James deserves FAR more than he got, but I am very glad that Aro is a fair and considerate boss.
Date: 13 Dec 2015 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my. Thought James would try to directly blackmail her not go to her clients. Sadly I'm not sure if the cops got all the copies of the videos. James may have stashed them somewhere too. Sigh for her wanting to give up both guys now. Sad
Date: 13 Dec 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
I can see why Bella would do this. She's scared and feels like if this got out people would judge. However, what Aro said is correct. It was something done by consenting adults and was a private affair. Or at least should have been. I hated Carmen at the beginning!! Hated her. I don't care if the Devil himself is representing me I want the best lawyer in order to keep my son. Her reactions were not only irelavent to the case but none of her business. I understand her caution and worry since they were in fact sent to her but that's it. She could have put her son's life in jeopardy over something that didn't have anything to do with her adoption. I don't think Bella is thinking clearly. Poor guys.
Date: 13 Dec 2015 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, didn't see it playing out like this at all.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow oh wow well before anything else could happen they put a stop to James but will she really break up with her boys she loves them will they fight for her
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2015 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
your dog is so not going to save you!!! You are in SOOOOOO much trouble!!!
Date: 11 Dec 2015 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yummy times for our kiddos. Ack for the Aro message though.
Date: 10 Dec 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
Has James already leaked an erotica video starring bella Edward and garrett
Date: 10 Dec 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for this totally erotic and awesome chapter, complete with DP. I'm such a lemon hoor....wonder what Aro wants....can't be good....
Date: 10 Dec 2015 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
uh oh, this may not be good.
Date: 10 Dec 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
James is going to cause problems for Bella.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
James has shown his cards.
Bella's activities are now very much exposed. The question is, how far reaching is the effect of her sex life on her job and current case?
Date: 10 Dec 2015 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ah-Oah!! (Mid-western uh-oh;)
why do I think Aro has been sent pictures of Bella with her men?
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
I wonder if James is going to try blackmailing her & the law firm? Can't wait to see.
Date: 10 Dec 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
I wonder how long it will take her ex to show up trying to black mail her.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2015 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no did James do something to hurt her or the case update soon
Date: 10 Dec 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think James is going to blackmail Bella through Aro.
Date: 10 Dec 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Whatever it is, it's good. He didn't say office or coffee shop. He knows after she finds out she won't want to goo home.she will be able to stay at his place until the cops find all of the cameras. James is such a dumb sleazy creep. I hope he gets locked up for this.
Date: 10 Dec 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
My guess is that James got A weeks worth of lemony goodness and is either posting it online already --- or threatening to expose Bella and her unconventional relationship together by sending it to her boss maybe even trying to get her fired make her lose everything like he did
Date: 09 Dec 2015 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love their differences.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2015 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
Is James seeing a live feed of their sex- capades? Or does he watch the taping latter in the day?
Date: 07 Dec 2015 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Soooo hawt. I'll bet James was jizzing his shorts while he turned green with envy. I can't wait for him to be destroyed.
Date: 07 Dec 2015 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
That was such a nice reconection
Date: 07 Dec 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
They have missed each other so much it is freaking me out that I know that creep James is going to be seeing there time together and make it bad
Date: 07 Dec 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh my! They had a bit of fun! ;)
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2015 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
I loved it hot damn that was hot
Date: 06 Dec 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
She's one lucky woman! I'm tired just reading this chapter!
Date: 06 Dec 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well damn. I knew this update would be hot but it was more than that. Thank you!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Unfortunately their time together will be tainted by the vile ex's need to take out his failures on Bella.
Date: 04 Dec 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
Please don't take this the wrong way because I absolutely love, love, love your stories especially this one BUT in case you are thinking of publishing later I have a recommendation. James is a douche and idiot. He is not a good person at all. I know this but he seemed so unhinge and crazy when he blamed Bella for his demise EARLIER. If you ever publish have him go crazy after he sees her with Edward and Garrett. See, he's so delusional and wants to spy on Bella and puts the cameras in because he's a creep. He wants to win her over and assumed she would be waiting for him. Who wouldnt? When he sees how hard working she is he remembers why he stayed with her for so long. She's the perfect girl for him. He starts to get angry because she won't answer any of his failed attempts to talk to her since they met. He starts to get angry and then loses it when he sees her with two guys at the same time. This is what drives him into madness. How dare she move on and with two much younger, much more handsome, well off men. This is when he flips everything and it's no longer love but hate he feels towards her. He starts to blame her.
To me this would make more sense. Just saying. I love it either way. Also, I'm not a writer so my opinion doesn't matter. Thank you for sharing. I can't wait for the next one!!! I already know it will be hot!! Like fan worthy. Get it Bella!!
Hilda
Date: 04 Dec 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
They're so sweet and sexy together! I'd love to share my bed with both of them!
Date: 03 Dec 2015 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
grrr,
oh why, why must you have james get the upper hand (with the cameras)
on the threesome...so unfair...he is obviously completely
insane to believe bella had anything to do with his demise...
it was all on him...please, don't allow james to have any real
control over them/bella...not even for one min.
ps. fire the security guy and the girl who allowed james up to bella's place.
no matter the circumstance, the story, they should never have allowed that.
Date: 03 Dec 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
James is going to go crazy with jealousy with what he will soon see. Porto live.
Date: 03 Dec 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love how you tease us and wanting more
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2015 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad the guys are finally with her, but in the back of my mind is that James is watch & taping all of this. Which makes me so sad, angry, & creeped out.
Date: 03 Dec 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm gonna be upset if they accidentally film a porno for that creep James to show everyone and put on the internet. They hopefully will spot the cameras before anything happens or I am gonna have to bail. This is touching on my rape/forced humiliation trigger. :(
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh I love it they are so happy but is James watching
Date: 03 Dec 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love this! But the whole time I'm thinking, James was in there. What is he gonna see?
Date: 03 Dec 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
wondering where james put cameras. everywhere???
Date: 03 Dec 2015 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love Garrett and his straight forwardness. yummy
Date: 03 Dec 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
James is getting an earful... Ugh!
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ah really, ugh. Fucking James!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh this isn't going to be good.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
What will Aro do once he finds out his secured buildings can be accessed?
Will Bella's sex life affect her position at work? What happens to James in the mean time?
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
Something is brewing on the James front.
I hope Edward and Garrett make it in time to protect her.
Date: 30 Nov 2015 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
I feel so bad for Bella, Edward, and Garrett. They don't deserve the trouble James wants to cause. I hope they find the cameras. I also worry about her case. That employee needs to be fired.
Date: 30 Nov 2015 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
He is blaming her for everything he did he needs help or just put down like a rabbit dog
Date: 30 Nov 2015 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
The boys are missing her so much.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2015 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
Holy snap he fucks up and it's Bella's fault I hope they can stop him before he can hurt her
Date: 30 Nov 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow! Didn't expect that side of James.
Date: 30 Nov 2015 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow That guard needs to be fired. Poor B with that prick stalking her.
Date: 30 Nov 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
He more then sucks I hope he gets his good for nothing ass kicked
Date: 30 Nov 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
WTF! What the ever liven f*ck!!! OMG!! OMG!! OMG!!
Date: 30 Nov 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
James is a sick and twisted asshole! I am so worried for Bella and what all James will get on his cameras. I hope and pray that the Volturi love Bella enough to get past whatever James throws out to ruin Bella! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 29 Nov 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
Please let one of her boys find the cameras before it's too late. That guard needs to be fired!!!!!!