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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2017 1:49 AM Title: 33: Secret Messages

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: Mannco Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2017 2:41 PM Title: 33: Secret Messages

I can't tell you how much I look forward to a new chapter of this story!! You have a way of writing that pulls me into the story and all that is happening. You have such a wonderful talent and hope that you continue to write and bring us all that are reading into your creative world through your written words. Thank you for your creativity and allowing us to share in it!! Thank you. I look forward to the next chapter you upload!! Hope to hear from you soon!! 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 2:58 PM Title: 33: Secret Messages

Thank you for the update... I love this story, can't eait to see how it all unfolds

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Date: 31 May 2017 12:53 PM Title: 33: Secret Messages

:) 

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Date: 11 May 2017 2:22 PM Title: 32: Unplanned Visitors

:) 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 1:42 AM Title: 32: Unplanned Visitors

Loving this a second time around

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 1:26 AM Title: 32: Unplanned Visitors

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 31: Mission accepted

So sad for her, I hope Edward get revenge.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2017 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 31: Mission accepted

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: Mannco Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 2:48 PM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis

Love Love Love this story!! Can't wait for the next update. Will be here waiting anxiously.... ”

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2017 2:38 AM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2017 3:45 AM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2017 3:37 AM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis

Is this a new part of the story, i don't remember reading this, I like it

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2017 7:21 PM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis

Loved it. Lmao he's having two girls and will be in jail by the time they're teenagers. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2017 8:10 AM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis

:) 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2017 8:00 AM Title: 30: The Real M Lewis

Love your story can't wait to read more! 

Reviewer: missdawn1974 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2017 8:34 PM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep

was good but would like to see the ending it let you hang 

Reviewer: christyculln138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 1:26 AM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep

Are you going to finish this story?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2016 12:50 AM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep

Awe! 

 

Such an emotional chapter!  I have faith that they'll all be okay!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2016 4:55 PM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow

Yes! That bastard deserves ALL of it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2016 12:47 PM Title: 24:Bad father examples

LOVED IT! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 3:52 AM Title: 6) Family Elopment

Great chapter!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 9:06 PM Title: 1) secrets and proposals

Love LOVE Love your torture methods!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 4:11 PM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep

I can't rearrange the letters to make sense of who M Lewis could be.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 12:21 AM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 10:19 AM Title: 29: X-rays and sleep

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2016 4:42 PM Title: 28) Walking down memory lane.

I hope she is alright 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2016 4:55 AM Title: 28) Walking down memory lane.

Thank You....Happy Holidays

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2016 4:36 AM Title: 28) Walking down memory lane.

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 4:03 AM Title: 27: Traitors within

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 3:54 AM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 3:36 AM Title: 25: Rendezvous

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 3:23 AM Title: 24:Bad father examples

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 3:01 AM Title: 23: Two against One

Loved it!

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Date: 25 Sep 2016 1:17 AM Title: 22: Family Buisness

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 1:00 AM Title: 21: Family Traditions

Loved it!

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Date: 25 Sep 2016 12:44 AM Title: 20: Holiday Souvineers

Loved it!

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Date: 25 Sep 2016 12:09 AM Title: 19: From Beautiful Swan to a true Cullen

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:20 PM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises

Loved it! I hate Charlie!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 11:05 PM Title: 17: Wedding gifts

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:50 PM Title: 16 Don't mess with mama bears (Safe)

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:45 PM Title: 16 Don't mess with mama bears (CAUTION)

Uh-oh!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 10:22 PM Title: 15: Family Buisness

Loved it!

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Date: 24 Sep 2016 9:53 PM Title: 14: The wedding plans

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 6:50 PM Title: 12: Father Daughter time

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: Hospital escapes

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 9:58 AM Title: 10) Arrogant police

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 9:37 AM Title: 9: Bumps first picture

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 9:29 AM Title: 8) Sleeping Beauty

Loved it!

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Date: 24 Sep 2016 9:14 AM Title: 7: Medical Emergencys

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 8:56 AM Title: 6) Family Elopment

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 8:17 AM Title: 4: Mafia sit downs and heart to hearts

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 7:58 AM Title: 3) Room of Memories

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 7:41 AM Title: 2) Parental Truths

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 7:17 AM Title: 1) secrets and proposals

Loved it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2016 5:00 PM Title: 27: Traitors within

I guess Bella will be delivering her triplets early.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2016 4:46 PM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow

Hope Mary is alright.
Charlie is delusional.
Getting everything he deserves.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 2:42 AM Title: 27: Traitors within

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2016 7:37 AM Title: 27: Traitors within

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2016 2:11 AM Title: 27: Traitors within

exciting chapter can not wait till the next

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2016 10:46 AM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow

Love your story can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2016 12:13 PM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2016 2:24 AM Title: 26: Revenge best served slow

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2016 6:10 PM Title: 25: Rendezvous

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2016 6:49 AM Title: 25: Rendezvous

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:04 AM Title: 24:Bad father examples

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 9:20 PM Title: 24:Bad father examples

loved it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 6:14 AM Title: 24:Bad father examples

:)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 3:42 AM Title: 24:Bad father examples

Much  better  detail  than  the  original  version .    Good  job ! 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 12:16 AM Title: 24:Bad father examples

You added more Teagan and Mary. 😈 Nice.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 5:08 AM Title: 23: Two against One

Good  work on this rewrite    I  am  sure the  next  part  will  be  challenging .   Keep  up  the  great  work !  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:49 PM Title: 23: Two against One

:) 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:18 AM Title: 23: Two against One

LOVE THE CHAPTERS, HOW EVER LONG IT TAKES I READ IT ALL BEFORE AND LOVED IT AND KNOW I AM READING IT AGAIN...I LOVED IT SO MUCH,

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 12:43 PM Title: 22: Family Buisness

:) 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 12:52 AM Title: 22: Family Buisness

THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER, I HOPE EVERYTHING GOES WELL FOR YOU SOON, TAKE YOUR TIME AND I WILL BE HERE WHEN YOU COME BACK

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 7:15 PM Title: 21: Family Traditions

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 4:55 PM Title: 21: Family Traditions

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

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Date: 03 Mar 2016 2:30 AM Title: 20: Holiday Souvineers

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 9:52 AM Title: 20: Holiday Souvineers

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 9:51 AM Title: 19: From Beautiful Swan to a true Cullen

:) 

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2016 7:50 AM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises

Bella sounds a lot like me with the food situation! Lol I ate a watermelon a day with kid no 2

Reviewer: rockymickey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2016 4:34 PM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises

Great Story but something is wrong with this chapter

 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 1:29 PM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 2:24 AM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises

Me Too, can not wait for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 12:12 AM Title: 18: Wedding Surprises

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 8:42 PM Title: 17: Wedding gifts

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 6:22 PM Title: 17: Wedding gifts

Loved it...bring on the wedding and no surprises

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 6:38 AM Title: 17: Wedding gifts

Excellent  job , 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 5:14 AM Title: 17: Wedding gifts

:)

Reviewer: piperann_25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 2:09 AM Title: 1) secrets and proposals

? I see the sequal but not the Family Secrets- caution...is it on this site or FFN?



Author's Response:

It's in this actual story it's on the end in brackets

 

http://www.twcslibrary.net/viewstory.php?sid=11237&textsize=3&chapter=16

Reviewer: piperann_25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 1:01 AM Title: 16 Don't mess with mama bears (Safe)

Love this story!!! Do you have the original chapters? I would love to read the full chapter. 



Author's Response:

The complete chapter is the one stating caution in the title

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 12:48 AM Title: 16 Don't mess with mama bears (CAUTION)

The Somalis are evil 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 12:11 AM Title: 15: Family Buisness

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2016 8:30 AM Title: 15: Family Buisness

:) Happy New Year to you

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Date: 30 Dec 2015 8:36 AM Title: 14: The wedding plans

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 3:14 AM Title: 14: The wedding plans

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

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Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:19 AM Title: 12: Father Daughter time

:)

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