Date: 13 Apr 2020 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
Enjoyed this story. Sad that it wasnt finished
Date: 27 Oct 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love your story. Missing your updates :)
Date: 26 Aug 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
That was a pretty darn good Christmas, for everyone! It's going to be difficult for the two of them to keep there feelings in check for the next six weeks!
Date: 26 Aug 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
I am so glad that Edward and Bella are having a good time at their family dinner
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2016 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm so glad he pushed his mother away. She is causing so many problems. I'm going to have to google that tattoo. I can't picture it.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
TheY need to have several serious conversations before they can move on to be a couple. They have 6 weeks to get it done. Edward needs to straighten some things out with his family as well.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter, keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
Out of the mouths of babes. Wonderful chapter.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad Edward chose to spend Christmas with Bella's family and friends. His parents and sister have to get their sh** together and start to treat Edward and Jennifer right, Bella too. Christmas at the Cullens must be an unhappy, uncomfortable affair.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 25
Got to love kids lol. I hope this means that he stayed away from his mom for the holiday?
Date: 12 Jul 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
Someone needs to stand up for Bella and Alice and Bella need help
Date: 12 Jul 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
Esme is causeing all kinds of crap this is not good
Date: 12 Jul 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story. Can't wait to see the difference in Esme & Alice when they get the help they need. I'd also like to see all the assholes in town realize what assholes they've been.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 25
I have loved getting all these updates. I hope it doesn't get out about Edward and Bella before her probation period is up. I have never heard of a tattoo like Bella has. It sounds neat.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, Edward's mom is out of control. I am glad that Aro talked to Edward about his sister, Bella and Alice and Edward's mom. Glad Carlisle listened to Edward and is going to get both Esme and Alice checked out.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
they are now moving in the right direction. good for them.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh no Edward's mom did not call them. She had gone to far this time. Is some thing mentally wrong with Edward's mom? Edward is a copy for goodness sake.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved the update. Thanks
Date: 11 Jul 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
Are you kidding? I have to read the chapter where his mother grovels and begs forgiveness for her crazy behavior! That double tattoo sounds really cool. The things Charlie told Edward about Bella were pretty heavy, but as he said, we can't change what's happened, only learn from it!
Date: 11 Jul 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
Even doctors don't always see what is right in front of them, especially if it involves family. Looks like Aro is Edward's friend, as well as Bella's.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well, that cooks it, his mother is totally inane! What in the wold makes her think she's the onlt arbiter of truth around here? I hope CPS don't give Edward too hard a time, or scare Jennifer! I was tickled he had it out with Mrs. Cope, too, the bitch!
Date: 11 Jul 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
I can't wait until all of the truths come out and Esme gets hers....
Date: 11 Jul 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hope Alice will get the help she needs. Where is Carlise?
Date: 11 Jul 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 23
Esme, what did you do? or Mrs. Cope?
Date: 11 Jul 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
Carlisle is still in denial I think. At least Bella has a few people to support her.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Esme is a total bitch!
Date: 11 Jul 2016 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
Why would Edward willingly go to Christmas dinner and expose himself and his daughter to the mad-woman? A fine doctor we have here. I can see Alice go willingly to a doctor, but her mother? They probably have to put her in a straight-jacket. Aro made my day. I like him.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
So - I had to take a deep breath. The audacity and self-righteousness of Edward's so-called mother is making my blood-pressure soar. He should send child-service over to the hater who is obviously incapable of taking care of her own daughter. Bitch should get her life in order before she goes around accusing somebody else.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm hooked! Stayed up all night reading trying to catch up, now I'm sad to have caught up and waiting for an update! Love this story!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
FINALLY! Then here comes esme! Crap!
Date: 21 May 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
Edward needs to have a come to Jesus talk with his mother. She is horrible.
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2016 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
bitch-me is in the house!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
Nooooo, you can't leave it there. Please update soon & oh I hate Esme.
Date: 17 May 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
NOOO you can't stop there😩😩
Date: 17 May 2016 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 22
NO! Not Esme right now. How will Edward handle this situation?
Date: 16 May 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
Atleast now eward knows the truth...Bella is a great friend....Jen is adorble and esme is batshit crazy or a drama queen..........
Date: 16 May 2016 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
Esme annoys me to no end and I hope Edward puts her in her place, the self-righteous cow. I think it's time for her to learn some unpleasant truths.
Date: 16 May 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
What on the hell is wrong with his mother learning to knock before entering? I was not a bit shocked to hear the real story about Alice, I suspected he had it all wrong to begin with! Now I look forward to what he tells his clueless mom!
Date: 16 May 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh Edward, he has a lot to learn. I would have expected him to ask Jennifer what made her punch the other child and I would have expected him to not just nod when told that "it doesn't matter". The reason for Jen's behaviour does matter indeed. Maybe the other child's actions were punishable under school rules, too? Jennnifer has good reason to yell at him. She needs his support and that he takes her feelings serious. Cheers to the brave little girl to make herself heard!
Like the Edward-Charlie-interaction.
Date: 16 May 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
A lot of stuff is coming clear right about now! Edward is finally getting a clue!
Date: 16 May 2016 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my. Esme is fixing to lose her shit. I am thinking that Esmeaye have some mental issues also. Can't wait for more.
Date: 16 May 2016 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
Esme has great timing. Really funny since her son is the elder here
Date: 16 May 2016 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
So glad Edward knows what is going on now it is Esme's turn and I am sure she just pissed Edward off to no end. Edward needs to hold on to Bella
Date: 16 May 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
OMG Esme, really???
Please let Alice get the help she needs
Date: 16 May 2016 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bella is teaching him lessons all the time. He is learning and so happy it is out that Alice stole the stuff not Bella.
Date: 16 May 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 22
love this...esme is a bitch though
Date: 16 May 2016 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 21
So Edward finally finds out that Alice was the one stealing not Bella.
Date: 15 May 2016 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
He has a lot of making up to do. He can start by telling his mom (I'm guessimg that was Esme) to shut up and get out of his house.
Date: 15 May 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
MORE PLEEEEEESE this is a good story.
Date: 15 May 2016 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story.
Date: 09 May 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
lOVE THIS...UPDATE SOON...............
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love your story can't wait to read more.
Date: 29 Apr 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am so glad that Edward and Charlie are talking. I meant to ask in the other chapter how Bella got the paint/walls to change in Jennifer's room?
Date: 29 Apr 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Jennifer talked!!!!!!!!! Awes
Date: 29 Apr 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Jennifer. Bless her heart. To be so young and to have been through so much hurt.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm not convinced that Bella's explanation of Esme's behaviour is the sole reason. Love that Edward and Charlie are getting along so well.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wouldn't we all like to know what Esme did?
Jennifer's room is a magical place now thanks to Bella. It's wonderful she's brave enough to talk to Edward.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
Edward is falling for her all the time
Date: 28 Apr 2016 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
Something is wrong with his mom she needs help just like Alice. Bella is magic
Date: 28 Apr 2016 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
Now some of the truth is coming out.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
So happy to see the updates. Please keep them coming
Date: 28 Apr 2016 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hearing that sad tale, it kind of makes you wish you knew how to send Renee to Hell! I like that Charlie and Edward get on so well. After all, they really have a lot in common.
Date: 27 Apr 2016 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella seems to have magic when it concerns her art! This chapter was full of hope and changes in attitude. I really liked it! Jenny saying those few words was very touching.
Date: 27 Apr 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
I really love this story. Waiting for updates is so hard. Can't wait for next one (or several).
Date: 27 Apr 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so glad you gave us some Bella background! The girl is all kinds of a good person, caring and responsible. It amazes me that people read her so wrong! And I still want to smack his mother! Poor little Alice, having to live with that!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
Esme has issues and Edward needs to keep Jennifer safe. She doesn't feel safe with Esme. Edward is in a tough spot, but Jennifer comes first.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward needs to have a heart to heart with mom. She is out of line. He needs to fix this with Bella and Jennifer.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
Aaah!!! I have to wait for updates now!!! I love this story and am so glad I gave it a chance! Also, I'm going to have to have a few words with Esme...
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2016 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love this story. Edward is finally opening his eyes and getting to the bottom of it. Great job! Mike creeps me out, and Esme, bit of a wicked witch!
Date: 06 Apr 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
More please!
Date: 06 Apr 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great story!
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Esme is on the verge of being cut out of his life.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
His mother is crazy!!
Date: 05 Apr 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Suspected something like this. Curious to know what happened to make her so bitter and angry. Probaby to do with Renee since she reacts so badly to Esme.
Date: 05 Apr 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter! Esme seems like an epic bitch. Poor Jenny
Date: 05 Apr 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
What was Edward's reaction to what Jenny "told" him what Esme did? That was left out of the chapter. Glad Rose and Emmett see the real Bella. Wow, Bella has been helping not only Sue but Charlie. You always leave me wanting more.
Date: 05 Apr 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMGosh! ! ! ! ! What is Esme's problem? Is something mentally wrong with her? Can't wait for more.
Date: 05 Apr 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
So glad your back. I look forward to more updates. I'd like string Esme up for a public flogging. She is one of those holier than thou types that are in reality the worst kind of person.
Date: 04 Apr 2016 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
Finally Edward gets some answers and not just cryptic messages and snippy remarks. Again, the way Esme treated the traumatized little girl shows that she is not fit to look after and bring up children. She has Alice to show for it, too.
Date: 04 Apr 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Old hag sums it up nicely. Edward invited Bella to come and paint, it was not Esme's place to throw her out. Why would Jenny ever want to speak to Esme? She's always horrible around her. Poor Bella and Jennifer. I think the little girl was told not to speak or her parents would be harmed. I guess she believes that it is her fault that they were killed and she doesn't want to put anyone else in danger.
Date: 04 Apr 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
so good.... please update soon!!! Thanks
Date: 04 Apr 2016 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
Eyes wide open! Glad Rose told Edward what's really going on.
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
Esme needs a cold dose of reality! She's blaming Bella for everything wrong in her life when in reality, Bella is protecting her & Alice. Seems like Edwards eyes may be beginning to open to the truth.
Date: 04 Apr 2016 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
Tun tun tun and know?
I'm glad Rose told Edward and he believe what she said :)
I'm really hate Esme this time....and I also feel sad because she's loosing Alice :(
can't wait for the next chap!
Date: 04 Apr 2016 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Don't leave it there. No!!!!!! Love the chapter. Update soon.
Date: 04 Apr 2016 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Now the truth is starting to come out
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella. Esme is a bitch