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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 7:42 PM Title: Epilogue

that was such a cool and fun little story ;) i took my eldest daughter to a party in a place like this when she was young but i just dropped her off when i noticed all the chaos!!! thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 10:13 PM Title: Epilogue

What a really happy ending! This was a darling little story and so much fun to read!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and always give me your opinion :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

Boy! Talk about all's well that ends well! That was just great!



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor embarassed Edward! Shame on Micheal for laughing at his discomfort!



Author's Response:

But really, the joke was on Michael. Lauren is his sister after all.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

I knew something was about to go bad, sure enough!



Author's Response:

Yep, and it's only beginning ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

And so it starts! Things are about to go south, just as sure as I sit here typing! By the way, good for Rose, leaving those awful men in her dust!



Author's Response:

Well, I know to expect the unexpected when children are involved (though now are the grown ups who ar making the mess). It's what makes life interesting.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

Good luck with that thought! The setup is playing out nicely!



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Thanks :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can already see a few problems in a couple of futures! Poor brow-beaten Rose, for instance. Hopefully, she and Emmett see each other before it's too late! As for both little girls having a Cinderells party, what could possibly get mixed up there, right?



Author's Response:

By now you already read (sorry, I just came back home from work) but you know I thrive for HEA for the good guys.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2015 10:07 PM Title: Epilogue

Very happy ending for everyone while expected Mike Newton mom.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I wanted to write one sweet story.

I based Michael's mom in my ex-mother in law :(

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 3:44 PM Title: Epilogue

Such a cute story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I really appreciate it, and I'm glad you liked it.

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 1:47 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this



Author's Response:

Thanks! I appreciate your support :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

Now that what call a happy ending for two parties and a wedding that never should have been planned in the first place. Lol!!!

Have Happy Thanksgiving!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it was all for the giggles. 

It really surprised me when you mentioned Thanksgiving, I wasn't aware... Happy thanksgiving to you and your family!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

Bella aren't going to be happy to see Lauren there.



Author's Response:

Bella isn't aware of Lauren, but she's nothing to Edward... or to anybody else ;)

Thanks for always supporting me and listening.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

So glad the girls found Rose. Out of the mouths of babes...



Author's Response:

Yep, they always say what is on their minds and in their innocence they give you the best advice.

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 4

Poor girls I knew what feel like to be afraid of the dark.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's the only angst that will be on the story. There wasn't a way those girls would remain inside that room.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

Everything going to be a mess.



Author's Response:

That's the fun part :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

 All the men wanted to watched a game while the girls are taking care of there children.  It was very funny that kid puke on Alice.



Author's Response:

I don't know if that's common in your country, but here, they always have screens with the game so the Dads watch the game while watching their kids.

I always wanted someone puking on Alice :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Rosalie is going to be in a loveless marriage and now two Cinderella theme parties.



Author's Response:

Hi! 

Yeah, it looks like they are all not related, let's see what happens :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story idea!  I cannot wait to see where you will take it.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you like the mess this will turn out to be ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

WOW, a lot going on in this.   Looking forward to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you'll like the next chapter.

May



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you'll like the next chapter.

May

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

looking forward to reading more of this



Author's Response:

Thanks! This will be a short and fast ride :)

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