Date: 28 May 2016 10:25 AM Title: The Dance
Renee probably searched Alice out because Renee wants to be right. She wants Bella to know she is right about dancing being a waste of time. She wants power over Bella.
Date: 27 May 2016 6:14 PM Title: The Dance
I think there's something to the theory that Alice and Bella's mother are working together to undermine her. We'll see! I like that finally Tyler and Bella can become friends again. Her relationship with Edward just thrills me. Thanks for the lovely chapter!
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 3:46 AM Title: The Dance
I loved it and I love Edwards parents but I think Taylor is right about Malice and her mom update soon
Date: 27 May 2016 2:56 AM Title: The Dance
wow Alice has a hell of a destructive rep. Her Mom sounds like she could be in it too. Along with Bella's egg donor too.
Date: 21 May 2016 2:41 AM Title: I Know You Want Me
Renee probably wants the attention. She is going to try to steal Bella's sparkle.
Date: 16 May 2016 6:57 PM Title: I Know You Want Me
Ugh Malice need to get cut and soon....but I know you'll draw it out to the end with her...sigh.
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2016 2:35 AM Title: I Know You Want Me
Renee is going to try and take credit for Bella's gift of dance all while making her feel guilty that Charlie is no longer amongst the living. She will also try to get her hands on what ever money Bella may be entitled to after the show.
Maybe Edward's mother can stick around for a bit so Bella can have some actual motherly attention. Rose could also use a partner in protecting Bella against the selfish woman.
Date: 15 May 2016 6:29 PM Title: I Know You Want Me
just fabulous! i'm loving this story. once again, Alice is up to her old tricks. I'm glad they seem to have her well in hand. I can't help but think there are more dirty tricks up her sleeve, though. I guess I'll wait and see! WTH could Renee want? Edward, maybe? Ugh! I love a good cliffie and this one was a doozy. See you next time!
Date: 15 May 2016 2:45 PM Title: I Know You Want Me
So glad they finally kissed!!! This is my favorite WIP right now. Can't wait for the next update!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 5:49 AM Title: I Know You Want Me
I loved it so great and that first kiss damn and the next hehehehe yummy more please and her mom just wants to use Bella to be seen on camera
Date: 14 May 2016 11:13 PM Title: I Know You Want Me
It was nice to get caught up and Bella and Edward finally got their kiss! Yay! Somehow I am sure Alice is not done however. And hopefully having rose and Edward to support Bella will help her deal with whatever her mom comes up with. Maybe she is interested now that Bella is getting more attention and possibly money?
Date: 09 May 2016 8:29 AM Title: Time
I want to tar and feather Alice then I want to pluck her every hair on her body and then toe nails and finger nails very painful and I dont think that would be enough spitful little bitch. Bella will have to forgive him he did nothing wrong.
Date: 04 May 2016 8:13 PM Title: Time
Alice is seriously in need of a major ass kicking! I'm glad Bella is finally listening to Edward. Looking forward to their talk.
Date: 03 May 2016 6:59 PM Title: Time
Tar and feather is too good for her. I sooo want her to get hit by a bus, then a car, then...... well you get the picture.
Wonder when Renee is going to show up? Sadly I know she will
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 6:23 PM Title: Time
Love your story can not wait to read more Loved the show too !
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:40 AM Title: Time
love this story
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 2:20 AM Title: Time
Alice's actions were in breach of contract as much as the cameraman. She should have been eliminated based on the extenuating circumstances. But to keep the storyline exciting we'll keep her for a bit longer. Has Tyler redeemed himself even a little in Bella's eyes?
Date: 29 Apr 2016 8:06 PM Title: Time
Alice just keeps getting more and more vile! They should have cut her, the bitch! I'm glad Bella is giving Edward another chance! Love that Mia gave Bella a job offer!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 3:37 PM Title: Time
kind of surprised that jasper is hanging out with alice. wonder if he still will after what happened
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2016 2:17 AM Title: Time
I loved it I knew it Alice was going to do something like that as soon as she got on his lap but now the are watching her will she screw up again or will the people kick her off
Date: 29 Apr 2016 1:33 AM Title: Time
I think every competition ends up with at least one Alice. Even if she ends up with a successful career, she will never have a successful life. And I know Bella has had a bad string of luck lately, but hopefully Edward can help turn it around. I am glad Rose is there to help talk some sense into Bella.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 4:31 AM Title: Eyes on Fire
Wow Tyler that was a douche move. I think Edward should see the tapes. Purposely hurting another competetor is serious business.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 5:25 PM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
Je suis certain que Alice a fait délibérément blessé Bella.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 6:18 AM Title: Eyes on Fire
I loved it thank goodness Bella is ok but I really hope she fights back now update soon
Date: 15 Apr 2016 10:09 AM Title: Eyes on Fire
Tyler was a bad boy.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 3:27 AM Title: Eyes on Fire
I totally think Alice did it on purpose. She knew about Bella's issues and tried to use it to her advantage. As for Tyler, he gets what he deserves. I agree with Bella that he needs to start doing more than just simple apologies. I'm glad she is going to make him work for it.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 1:23 AM Title: Eyes on Fire
Heck yes, I think Alice tripped Bella on purpose and I hope Karma gets her for that, if Edward doesn't first. Good for Bella for ramping up her attitude to win!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 1:40 AM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
Alice needs an accident. Rose needs to get her phone and find out what she is up to this time.
Date: 07 Apr 2016 7:24 PM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
I love the conection that's growing between them
Date: 06 Apr 2016 9:35 AM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
Alice is a bitch and did it on purpose. Who is Alice talking to I think it is Renee. Edward is so worried about her
Date: 06 Apr 2016 4:07 AM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
I love this story....😍😍
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2016 7:20 AM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
I loved it poor Bella and yes Alice did it on purpose Bella is the one to beat every one loves her and it seems she will do anything to win even cheat I hope karma bites her in her nonexistent ass
Date: 02 Apr 2016 6:44 AM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
Good chapter !
Date: 01 Apr 2016 5:49 PM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
Accident my arse. Wouldn't put it past Alice to have messed with Bella's phone. Maybe texting her bitch of a mother.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:11 PM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
Somehow Alice found out details regarding Bella's prior knee injury and resulting surgery. Who has she been texting to get this confidential information? The fall and consequential contact Alice had with Bella was intentional.
A week off from competition is just what Bella needs. She can rest up both emotionally and physically. Alice may have unintentionally given Bella the edge she was starting to lose? Bella won't have any problem dancing her way out of the bottom two positions.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 12:05 PM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
hating Alice
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 10:50 AM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
:)
Date: 01 Apr 2016 3:51 AM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
I'm sure Alice running into her was no accident. She is probably aware of Bella's injury and I wouldn't put it past her to use that as a way to get her out of the way. If you can't beat them honestly.... It reminds me a little of the way survivor has become. But I guess it wouldn't be reality TV without drama. But I am glad Edward is there to help her.
By the way, I love that OneRepublic song. I have it on my ipod.
Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:25 AM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
I think Alice did push Bella intentionally. I also think she is up to something, maybe even tampering with Bella's cell phone! Ugh. She's so mean! I can't stan mean girls! Thank goodness Bella has good friends who help and stick by her!
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 1:17 AM Title: Someone to Watch over Me
I'm giving Alice the benifit of the doubt, for now. She hasn't really done anything vindictive yet. She's just a bitchy diva that we don't have privy to her personal life.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2016 4:15 AM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
I'm exhausted just from reading this.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 5:55 AM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
Love!!! Update soon.
Date: 11 Mar 2016 8:49 PM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
Loved the chapter.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 9:30 PM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
This is absolutely fantastic!! I am all caught up and dying for more!! :)
I hate Alice! >:(
Date: 08 Mar 2016 6:17 PM Title: The Green Mile
I completely love this story!!! :)
Date: 08 Mar 2016 4:53 PM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
Thank you.... Another fabby chapter t
Date: 08 Mar 2016 4:50 PM Title: California Dreamin'
I just want to knock Alice out!!! Of the competition that is! ;)
Date: 08 Mar 2016 11:32 AM Title: New York Minute
I really love this!! :)
Date: 08 Mar 2016 4:50 AM Title: You are the New Day
Absolutely fantastic!!! I love it!! :)
Date: 07 Mar 2016 11:20 PM Title: Pas de Deux
I love this!! I can't wait to read more!! :)
Date: 07 Mar 2016 5:34 PM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
Ugh I had a roommate like Alice once. Glad B had a great first week. Hopefully Alice doesn't do something to hurt her leg though. I got images of Tanya Harding/Nancy Kerrigan flowing through my head.
Date: 07 Mar 2016 5:23 PM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
Alice is such a bitch when will she get what she deserves
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 12:21 PM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
Will Alice pull some stunt that gets Bella either in trouble or hurt?
Will she, as the antagonizer, make it to the final show? Let's hope her negative behavior is not rewarded for that long.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 11:58 AM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
A
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[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 9:04 AM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre, je vous remercie.
Date: 07 Mar 2016 6:57 AM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
good
Date: 07 Mar 2016 1:25 AM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
Fabulous story, looking forward to more!!
Date: 07 Mar 2016 12:27 AM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
Fabulous chapter! The only thing that marred it was including Alice! I can't believe what a bitch she is and wouldn't put it past her to try to sabotage Bella in some way. I hope she gets caught doing something that will get her kicked off the show!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 12:03 AM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
That was great I loved it the first show went great but poor Bella is rooming with the she devil ice queen I hope Bella can keep putting her back in her place
Date: 06 Mar 2016 11:41 PM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
I am just glad that Bella is standing up to Alice. Maybe one of Alice's tricks will backfire on her.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2016 10:25 PM Title: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section
:)
Date: 01 Mar 2016 9:58 AM Title: The Green Mile
Renee is a bitch how can a mother be that way. Bella has a great support system
Date: 29 Feb 2016 5:43 PM Title: The Green Mile
Great chapter. Yea she need to talk to the doc office. HIPPA is not something to break these days.
Glad E helped with her knee.
Date: 28 Feb 2016 10:23 PM Title: The Green Mile
Edward is just what Bella needs in her life.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2016 12:05 PM Title: The Green Mile
There are two villians. Alice and Renee. I wonder how much trouble they're going to cause?
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2016 5:05 AM Title: The Green Mile
I loved it wow go Bella I hope her knee will ok soon and that the PT works but as for her mom no not mom you have to earn that the woman who gave birth to her needs to leave her alone and just stay the hell away
oh Edward just seems to know just when she needs him the most so sweet he is
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2016 10:59 PM Title: The Green Mile
The angle Rosalie mentioned about a negative character on the show with Alice filling the bill, seems accurate. Conspiracy theorists believe all reality shows are preplaned to some extent.
Renee will be singing Bella's praise if she wins the show and wanting some form of compensation for being her mother.
Edward is a sweet talker, but honest in his praise.
Date: 26 Feb 2016 6:59 PM Title: The Green Mile
She made it! I'm worried about her knee. Something tells me that Alice will do something sneaky to sabotage her. Renee should not be a mother, with that attitude! Thanks for the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2016 11:24 AM Title: The Green Mile
no surprises hurry back
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2016 6:49 AM Title: California Dreamin'
Let's hope Edward can put in a few choice comments to keep the judges informed of Alice's attitude problem.
Bella needs to seek out a medical professional to ease her discomfort.
Date: 17 Feb 2016 8:38 AM Title: California Dreamin'
Alice needs her ass kicked. Bella needs to see the medic
Date: 15 Feb 2016 11:20 PM Title: California Dreamin'
Alice needs to be brought down.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2016 1:47 AM Title: California Dreamin'
amazing
Date: 12 Feb 2016 8:59 PM Title: California Dreamin'
good chapter. Your descriptions of the dancing were fabulous. I felt like I was right there. Alice is such a bitch and I hope she's cut! you've got several stories going now at once and all of them are very easy on the eyes. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2016 12:02 PM Title: California Dreamin'
Alice is a bitch
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2016 6:46 AM Title: California Dreamin'
I loved it wow Edward really cares for her already and I think she is too there is just too much going on for her but Alice needs to be bitch slapped and will Bella be ok
Date: 12 Feb 2016 3:59 AM Title: California Dreamin'
I love SYTYCD and I am loving this story. I look forward to seeing this story develop. Thank you for sharing it with the world.
Date: 12 Feb 2016 3:21 AM Title: California Dreamin'
Glad B and E got to talk a bit. Alice is such a witch. I hope she gets cut soon
Date: 02 Feb 2016 4:46 AM Title: New York Minute
They are getting to know each other as friends that is the best way.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 9:59 PM Title: New York Minute
So cute seing the two flirt via text and such. Glad Jacob is firmly in the friend zone.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2016 2:45 AM Title: New York Minute
I like how you took a character and repositioned their entrance into this story. Jakob will be an intricate factor in helping Bella balance sheet feelings for Edward with her desire to dance for a living.
Date: 29 Jan 2016 7:06 PM Title: New York Minute
Nice chapter! As Bella and Edward's friendship grows, I root for them to slowly become more! It's refreshing to see a nice Jacob Black here, and one who won't try to come between Bella and Edward, I think. I just may have to try watching this show when it airs again in RL....
Author's Response:
I don't know if there is going to be SYTYCD this summer. So far, no word on whether or not they are renewing for a thirteenth season. If they do, it might be a SYTYCD Jr. version. o.O
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2016 10:14 AM Title: New York Minute
I'm having a difficult time picturing Edward as sexy. He comes off as more effeminate to me.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2016 6:02 AM Title: New York Minute
I loved it Edward is so very sweet and caring too now how will it be when they see each other again
Date: 29 Jan 2016 2:40 AM Title: New York Minute
Another great chapter
Date: 23 Jan 2016 10:53 PM Title: You are the New Day
I'm so excited about this ff! Can't wait for more!!
Date: 22 Jan 2016 3:43 PM Title: A Dream Fulfilled
Ok scrolled down real quick to say I LOVE SYTYCD!!! Hopefully one of my friends daughter will be on the show soon she's not quite old enough yet but is good friends with Travis Wall fingers crossed! Ok, back up to start this fic 😁