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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

Awaiting another chapter soon



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. The next one will be up Monday.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

Soooooo, YAY!! That's just great and I like the two of them actually getting along :) It's good that they shared something about their dreams and work, that even brings them closer together.
The only constant fear I still have is the moment Bella finds out about Edward's original motivation for the show... I'm mpretty sure this will be devastating for her since she is building trust - that will definitely ruin this! But for now let's enjoy the nicer times and see what happens next :)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, they have only two weeks left of the show until they have to decide to stay married of get a divorce. If Edward can keep his secret until after that, then maybe things will work out. See you next week.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

So glad that they are still getting along. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. They're not only getting along but falling for each other. If things go well, they maybe stay married. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

I love how they are getting to know each other.  cant wait for more



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, they're getting there, albeit slowly. Now we can only hope they stay on track. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Three Date Rule

They are perfect together and what is not to love about Bella.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bella finally knows what the game means to Edward. He also learned a bit about her plans for her future. Now we'll have to wait and see if they'll be able to reconcile their plans. See you next chapter with the party and the answer to where E and B are doing what.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

I'd like to get something cleared up for myself. I'm wondering is there one or two cash prizes if they stay married?

Sherry



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I want to explain the thing about the money since the details have been pretty vague about that. Each participant gets the $50,000 if they adhere to the rules of the show for the duration of the six weeks. Nothing changes about that whether they decide to stay married or not. I know Bella never commented on the money, so there are some readers who believe she won't get a compensation, but that's not true. She just never mentioned it because, to her, it's not important. It's a nice add on, but she really wanted to get married. So, I hope things are clearer now. See you in two weeks.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

I like how their relationship is coming together. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, they're finally getting into the groove. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

a closet? bathroom?

 



Author's Response: Nope, no closet, no bathroom. Way naughtier ;).

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

good =)



Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

:) 



Author's Response: :-)

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

Love them 



Author's Response: I'm glad you do. So do I ;).

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

Finally they are on the right track. I'm glad they are getting to really get to know each other. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. Yes, they're getting there, even though they're doing things backwards. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

Great chapter so glad that they are finally talking & getting to know each other.  There are still 2 things that may upset Edward's new world with Bella.

1) his friends with benefits girl Tanya.

2) Bella finding out why Edward went on the show in the first place.

1 he'll be able to explain much easier than number 2.  He needs to tell her before she finds out some other way.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing on so many sites. It really means a lot. So, yes, he should tell her, but when do men ever do what they should? See you next week.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

This was a cute chapter. Still feel that Edward is trying harder then Bella is. And is it really fair to unleash all her friends on him at once? At least Edward was kind enough to ease her in a little at a time. If Brlla had any honest real friends they would have already pointed out to her her fault in some of the actions she has taken and told her it's not all on Edward.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. If it's not fair to have him meet all her friends at once, does that mean she should have turned down the invitation? I promise, they'll have fun at the party. You'll see. That and more will be up in a week. See you then.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Getting Into The Groove

Glad she is taking the time to get to know him and his passions better.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, they're finally acting the way they should have been from the start. Now they only have to keep it up. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: mycajunlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2016 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Three Date Rule

I am so thrilled they are finally getting this!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, they're getting it - for now. They still have to make it through the next two weeks until they have to decide to stay married or get a divorce. See you Monday with a little bit of getting to know each other.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 14 - The Three Date Rule

OMGosh!!!! That was perfect.  When Edward stopped trying to get in her pants at every turn and quit having a smart mouth, things started to change

 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a review. Yeah, maybe everything could have been smooth sailing from the get go. But what's done is done. Now let's hope things continue to go that well. See you Monday

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 14 - The Three Date Rule

looks like b is falling. worried when she finds out the truth about why e got married and his friends with benefits



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, she seems to be falling and hard. I agree, she probably won't be happy when she finds out what he did before they got married. Maybe her reaction depends on how and when she learns about it all. See you Monday

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Three Date Rule

This is the sweetest chapter so far.  From him trying to make her breakfast of burnt toast & coffee. To them going grocery shopping (many dates at the grocery stores with my now husband but then boyfriend). To baking the pie. Then meeting the parents & having to learn about each other. To them finally getting over the "we need to wait" stage to just going with the mood and moment. 

That was a beautiful written lemon too.

I think both of them are falling in love with the other.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review. It's a relief to have Edward and Bella finally move on from bickering. And isn't squeezing lemons a much better way to spend time, lol? Next up, Bella will finally get a glimpse of what Edward is really about. See you Monday.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Three Date Rule

OOh nice dinner.   Happy Lemon Dance for first lemon

dl



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. It was actually the second lemon, though. However, I'm glad you liked it. and the dancing lemon is really cute.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Three Date Rule

Loving the way their relationship is progressing



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review. It's a relief to have Edward and Bella finally move on from bickering. And isn't squeezing lemons a much better way to spend time, lol? Next up, Bella will finally get a glimpse of what Edward is really about. See you Monday.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 14 - The Three Date Rule

:) 



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 14 - The Three Date Rule

So glad to see them getting along so well. Yet, I have a feeling this is the quiet before the storm.

Glad you're back, I hope you had a great vacation.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, they're getting along great at the moment. I guess you should be right, though, and there's a storm brewing somewhere.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date

Have a great vacation.  I think the date was so very cute perfect.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. The date was definitely a step in the right direction. And there's some fun in their near future ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date

Lovedthis chapter 



Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you did. See you next chapter with some fun.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date

That was such a sweet date & finally a start in the right direction. Let's hope they keep moving in that direction.

 

Have a great vacation.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next up, they'll have some fun. See you Monday.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date

Enjoy  your  trip!



Author's Response: Thanks. I did. But now I'm back and working on the next chapters. See you Monday.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date

good



Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date

The date night was a success. They both done well, and yes, Edward was very sweet to kiss her on her cheek. The night ended perfectly.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, the date went well, and they actually talked. There will be more of that soon. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date

Awe adorable. Enjoy your vacay



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, they can be adorable when they don't bicker about everything and anything, lol. And there are some fun times ahead. See you Monday.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date

wow progress.  Sounds like E might actually be wanting to make it work......



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. He definitely wants to make it work. But will he be able to? We'll see. But I promise there are some good times ahead. See you Monday.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date

:) 



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

Wow good night and I think she did what she needed to do to get him to make the right move.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, I don't think she planned to have that outcome. To be honest, I don't think she planned much at all. It was probably just dumb luck that things turned out this way, lol. However, it cleared the air. See you next chapter with the date.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2016 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

I hurt for bella, i really hope she stops going out of her way to try and makes edward do all the work until he earns her trust back



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Oh, she will, but you've already read that ;).

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

Great so far, please write another chapter soon



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the story so far. Next chapter will be up Monday. See you then.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

progress



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. It definitely is. See you next chapter with the date.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

Bella's actions certainly justified the end result. *fans self* Looks like they are well on their way making progress.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you liked the chapter. I was so nervous about it. Next up, we'll go on the date with them ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

good



Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. And I hope you'll like the date, too, because that's next. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

Finally some progress!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you agree. Next up is the date. See you then.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

Yay 



Author's Response: Definitely yay! Thanks for your review. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

Loved it. 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you did. I was a little nervous about posting it. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

I don't agree with Bella's actions completely but I also don't agree with Edward sleeping with Victoria the day before he got married to Bella! I definitely feel that when Edward tells Bella that he slept with Victoria before their wedding that she will freak out and probably ask for a divorce which hopefully won't happen but Edward did a bullshit thing especially when he didn't tell her right away about it when the card asked about it.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, they're both at fault here, but at least Bella's actions brought on some change. Well, the revelation about Victoria won't go over very well, but hopefully they'll have a much stronger foundation once it will come out. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

Still don't like Bella, if situation was reversed she would have yelled at Edward and called him a dog and every other thing she could think of. I won't be satisfied until someone knocks some sense into her.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm not saying what Bella did was right, but it was the catalyst for some much needed change. See you next chapter with the date.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

:) 



Author's Response: Thanks :).

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

Well done 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

Maybe he is being a gentleman and didn't want her to think he is only taking her out to have sex. At least that is what I hope.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I don't think you're too far off with your guess ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Unrestrained Collision

Was wondering how long it would take for those two to get it on.......and sadly makes me wonder if it won't be long till she finds out about his real reason for getting into this in the first place.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, it was time, and hopefully, it will take enough time for them to establish a solid foundation before his sordid initial plan comes out. See you next chapter for the date.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2016 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

good



Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Things will definitely heat up next chapter ;). See you then.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 10 - No Kiss And Make Up

good

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Date: 21 May 2016 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

good

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Date: 21 May 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

good

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Date: 21 May 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

good

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Date: 21 May 2016 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters

good

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Date: 21 May 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

good

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Date: 21 May 2016 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Announcements

good

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Date: 21 May 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

good

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Date: 21 May 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Best Laid Plans ...

good

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Date: 21 May 2016 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2016 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

They are so frustrating



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, they are. But things will change soon. See you Monday.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

Can understand b"s frustration. He isn't making it easy



Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews. Damn TWCS for not showing what chapter it's for in the reply window. So, you basically got my reply already. So, I'm giving you a little hint about tomorrow's chapter: someone will be making lemonade ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 10 - No Kiss And Make Up

They are def fire and gasoline.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

They both are at fault, but E more so only because hes in it for the wrong reason,



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, neither one is perfect, but they have to learn to appreciate their quirks instead of being pissed. Things will change next chapter. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Texas Twimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

Really enjoying this story, just like all of your other stories! I am anxious to see how Bella finds out Edward's original reason to do the show and what her reaction is. Also curious to see how she reacts to the FWB relationship he had with Vicky, especially since he was with her right before the wedding! That is something I would have a hard time with if they remain friends after Edward and Bella decide to take a true go of it together, maybe that is just me though. Looking forward to the next update to see where things go from here. Thanks!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, I'm sure that wouldn't go over well, at least now. They need a much stronger foundation to be able to get through those revelations. We'll have to wait and see if they'll ever get there. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Devils Fate Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

But he has a hidden agenda.   he is not serious about this and Bella is?  how can anyone wonder at Bella being cautious and suspicious.  He I think she's  giving him better than he deserves considering how often he has let his other head talk for him.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bella might be a bit too cautious but Edward hasn't given her much reason to trust him so far. Things will change soon, though. See you Monday.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

Bella is really getting on my nerves. She continues to get super pissy about this game but refuses to ask for any sort of clarification, nor is she upfront about the stuff that's bothering her. Actually neither of them are but that was addressed. The game thing is really irritating though, I hope she talks to Tanyaor someone and they tell her to pull her head out of her ass. Also Edward needs to relearn boundaries... and masturbate. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I don't see how Bella's pissy about the game. She actually enjoyed it. Now, as for masturbation, maybe he won't need to do that any longer ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

Edward really does need to get his head out of his ass if he wants things to work with Bella. He needs to make and effort. I'm looking forward to seeing who Edward is threatening in the next chapter.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. He'll make an effort, for sure, but will it be the right one? See you Monday ;).

Reviewer: pookie12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

Bella should have forced an answer from Edward about the last time he had sex, even if it went against Carlisle's instructions, not just that she would think about that later. She needs to call him on his BS and get to the truth about when he had sex and why he was there in the first place to get married. Hope that she doesn't fall for him and then get her heart broke when she finds out the truth. Hopefully the truth starts coming out in the next chapter  



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, some things will definitely come out next chapter, but not necessarily the truth, lol. See you Monday.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

This  certainly  doesn't  bode well  for  Edward's ability  to  make  this  work .    Is he really  that immature  and inconsiderate ?   I think  I  would  have  started  divorce  proceedings  by now!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. If they'd start divorcing now, they'd breach their contract. Edward wouldn't get his money and Bella would have to admit defeat. Now, they'll see it through until the bitter end. But things will change next chapter. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

I was thinking Bella was just being a prude for not just giving in and having sex with him, but how he can just blow her off on her only day off it just not right. He is such a dick. He just isn't trying.
I guess, during the game, he had to call a dare because Bella would probably just leave him if she knew he had sex just before the wedding with one of his guests. Edward is such a sleaze.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, Bella wouldn't have reacted favorably to his revelation. I think they need a much stronger foundation to be able to handle that blow. Next chapter, things are definitely going to change. See you Monday.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

Trying? What trying and bending over backwards has she actually done? She only gives half truths to her friends, is she afraid they would call her out and take his side? I still really dislike Bella, don't see that changing any time soon. Edward no matter what you do it will never be good enough for her. Yeah your a bit of a screw up, but she really isn't giving you a fair chance.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. They're both not perfect but they have to either find a way to live with their imperfections or get the hell out. Next chapter, some things will definitely change. See you tomorrow.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

I was so glad that they were getting along but then Edward had to screw things up again. I don'tblame Bella for being pissed and throwing him out of the bedroom. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Edward messed up again, but not all is lost. See you tomorrow with the update.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

Can't wait 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Wait's almost over. See you tomorrow ;).

Reviewer: Dollydimple Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

I think Edward is all talk about his sex experiences all his talk and innuendos are just a front. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. Edward may have some experience, but he hasn't slept around as much as Bella thinks. He's totally enraptured by Bella, and that's a first for him, leaving him insecure and messing up. Next chapter, he'll do the right thing, for once ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

I like your story...I usually don;t comment until the end.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm sorry I tricked you into reviewing by mentioning the latest drop in review numbers ;). However, this chapter got more reviews in one day than the last one got in two weeks. Now, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Bellinha_95 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

One of my favorite chapters so far! Had so much fun.. Wish u could update sooner, bur I really understand!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. If you liked this chapter, I'm sure you'll love the next one ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

Poor Bella 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. She sure is. But things will change soon - Monday to be precise ;). See you then.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 10 - No Kiss And Make Up

I think he is just telling her what he wants to do to her



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Bella and Edward's constant fighting sure is tiresome, but the sparks are flying, too. And now they have homework to do. To keep you on your toes, here's one of next chapter's Truth or Dare question: “What's your favorite sexual position and why?” Now, that's a question I'd like to know the answers to. Wait, I do, lol. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2016 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 10 - No Kiss And Make Up

I'm sorry but Edward was an ass in this chapter. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. No need to be sorry. He WAS an ass, lol. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 10 - No Kiss And Make Up

I think Carlisle suggestion Truth and Dare was a great ideal. Looking forward to them playing.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, Truth or Dare is definitely going to be interesting. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 10 - No Kiss And Make Up

I Thinking that sneak peek is from their truth or dare night. I love it



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a review. Yes, definitely Truth or Dare. But Truth or Dare? See you next chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 10 - No Kiss And Make Up

:) 



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 - No Kiss And Make Up

I'm guessing it was a dream on Bella's part. Seems more likely to happen. I'm still firmly in the team Edward camp. I really hope during the solo section Carlisle lit into Bella so to speak. She is so hypocritical that it makes me hate her.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. No, not a dream. But not a Truth question, either. Now, what can it be? See you next chapter.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

Edward was trying to be nice. He didn't know what was in the box. Bella needs to get the stick out of her butt. She knew she was marrying a stranger was a straight man, not a gay man. He is going to expect some intimacy.  She has to at least have some baby steps like hand holding,  hugs, and even a peck kiss. She needs to stop the ice queen act. Edward is attracted to her. It's a compliment. Jacob and Mike probably at least kissed on their first date.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

she needs to loosen up and needs to control his mouth

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

she is an ice maiden and can't really be trying to make their "marriage" work

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

so good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

I can not believe Edward said what he did to Bella. I don't care whay the circumstances are that was just rude and crude.

Reviewer: fairfax19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

Ok, just found this. I actually watched the first season of the real TV show so can easy see what you're doing. Doing very well, I might add. Totally wrong of Edward to go through her things, totally. My reaction would have been much more violent. He has a long way to go, Bella not so far. I can't imagine trying this but it's a practice old as time and still ongoing. I'm hooked :-)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

What is going on with that boys mouth lol.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

Edward is giving me whiplash, so I know he's giving Bella whiplash. They really need to get into a deep heart to heart about why he behaves the way he does.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

Not OK to look through  her things. Does he just not have a filter? How has he not gotten that Bella  doesn't do crass?

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

I really hope Edward didn't sleep with Vicky the night they were apart. I'm not sure Edward should have snooped in the box. But since he did, he should have had more tact and just asked her about what he found, then maybe they could have gotten somewhere.
I think maybe the teaser is going to be a turning point for them. They both realize they need to do thing differently.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I can assure you, Edward's being faithful to Bella. Vicky will return eventually but as his friend. They don't have the kind of relationship where they lust after each other. It's more like they scratched in itch as long as they didn't hurt anyone with it. The only one Edward wants right now is Bella. The turning point is coming soon, I promise. Next chapter? We'll see ;).

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

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Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

Bella is an idiot. He tries and send a sweet text, which she ignored by the way. If I was Edward I would treat her the same way. I can say it looks like he is trying more then her. She admitted to herself for teasing him and then gets upset when he does/says what most men would have. Bella and her double standards are getting really old. I'm hoping she changes soon because I'm getting tired of hating her this much. She is going to drive Edward right into cheating on her soon. Obviously she isn't ready to be married, since nothing he does is good enough for her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

I think Bella needs to keep putting him in his place lol.  He needs to work for it I think she has pickup on his mouth going out of control.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a review. I don't think Bella will simply back down now. But they'll have to find a way to get along soon or their experiment is doomed to fail. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

She is a bit of a prude. He just kissed her a bit. Ah well



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. Bella overreacted, but it's not like she knows what we know. To her, everything Edward does has always been a means to an end. So why should she expect anything different this time? We're getting closer to the point where they break, though, I promise. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

Think they both need to come from their polar ends to the middle. Sadly I'm sure B will find out about why he's really there, maybe by overhearing a phone conversation?



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, they have to meet somewhere. Bella will sure find out about Edward's real - initial - motives, but we're not there yet ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

Really Bella. Get off you high horse and act like a normal person and not a stuck up witch. For once there at the end Edward did absolutely nothing wrong, if you'd loosen up a little maybe you would actually get to know your husband. Bella is way to judgemental to make any marriage work, passionate or not if she is t willing to bend or change a little then it's doomed from the start. Edward was trying here, when is she going to start trying?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, Edward was sincere but we only know this because we were in his head. Bella wasn't and from the few days of experience she has with Edward, another cheap move to get into her pants is a more reasonable assumption. She still overreacted, that's for sure. In my opinion, they both have to compromise. It's not like Edward is making a great effort to get to know Bella. They're both mostly on the defense. Maybe they need to clash big time ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

Poor Edward, he's thinking with the wrong head. I get where Bella is coming from, wanting to make a connection and get to know him better, but something's got to give. They are driving each other nuts. Maybe they should just get drunk to lower her inhibitions to get busy, if he could ever stop saying the wrong things. Then again, this hard to get thing she's got going on is making him take time to get to know her, and possibly fall in love. 

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a review. I know this slow burn is hard to take for most readers, but I promise it will end eventually … and with a bang, lol. Just bear with me and we'll get there. Before we can get there, though, Edward and Bella have to learn a thing or two about the other and what they want for themselves. See you next chapter.

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