Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

Reviews For Tie the Knot
You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

Poor Edward.  I am starting to feel sorry for him. I think he means well but his mouth keeps getting in the way. OMGosh, what is he thinking in the teaser. He has lost his mind or is he drunk.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, Edward sure needs to learn what to say and what to keep in his head. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

I love that Bella is hard to get to know and she's not swayed by Edwards looks 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, looks isn't all. She'll have to let him get closer eventually or they'll end things with a divorce. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

 Ok this time edward was just letting the mood direct him on the cuddling on the night beach. However hes got cocky in the preview im sure bella is gonna hit him with the vibrator



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. Well, Bella can't know when Edward's jut letting his mood direct him. She's not in his head like we are. And he's acted like a player too often for her not to suspect ulterior motives. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

:) 



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

Edward isn't as bad as I thought. I wish Bella would ease up a little bit. If she was on a date, she probably would have let him kiss her good night. Why won't she even let him touch her any? They are married after all. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. If Bella had been on a regular date, the guy probably wouldn't have tried to get into her pants with lame pick-up lines several times before. She's not in his head liek we are so she can't know he was being sincere for once. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

He needs to drop the attitude



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. That he definitely needs to do. But will he be able to? We'll see.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

I'm enjoying their banter. Edward sure has a way to rile Bella up. He does need to take it down a notch or two and really be serious and get to know her, without any of the camoflauge. I think he may be afraid he might really fall for her. Undoubtedly, she's gonna be hurt in the end, but I'm hoping he'll redeem himself. 

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for readind and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoy it. It's so much fun to write. Yes, Edward will redeem himself eventually, but up until now, he'll appear rather bipolar. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

It is a start, I would say ;) Edward IS a nice guy when he does not try to get Bella into the sheets... They do have a long road in frint of them, but I am sure that you will not leet them be on different paths all too long. 

Mh I can't really guess in what exact moment they are right now, but maybe a real small argument between the two?

Looking forward to the next chap :)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, Edward can be nice but somehow his mouth tends to run away from him, lol. I promise I'll get them together eventually but it will take some more time. See you Monday with the next update.

Reviewer: Hina-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

Sweet. Update soon.



Author's Response: Thanks. Next chapter will be up Monday. See you then.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

I think she needs to let up on him a little.  She DID know what she was getting into when she agreed to marry him.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. She knew she was marrying a stranger, but she couldn't know what he'd be like and there were no requirements about sex or kissing. I promise they'll eventually find some middle ground, but it'll take time. See you Monday with the next update.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

They are too funny together 



Author's Response: Thanks! I love writing their banter. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

I guess he was bragging about his conquests. I really wish Edward would try a little harder! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullne

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. It's not exactly that, but you're close. Yes, Edward will have to put more effort into it if he'll win Bella for himself. We'll see if he gets that too. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

:) 



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

I'm team Edward so I'm just gonna say "Bella take that stick out of your behind and loosen up some." No one is ever gonna live up to her high standards if she doesn't let up. She seems to be just looking for any reason to hate him. While Edward could let up on the cockiness he really hasn't done or said anything to wrong.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. You can believe me, I'm Team Edward, but since I wouldn't go for his blunt lines, I don't expect Bella to do so either. If he will just be a bit more real, they'll get on pretty well. But his severe case of foot-in-mouth disease is hard to cure, lol. See you Monday with the next chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters

wow  insensitive is too nice a word.  What a dick.  Sadly too many men are that way.

I usually never say this, but I love overprotective Jacob.  Sadly in this case I fear it will be warranted.

While I agree sex should come naturally and not demanded like that, at least a kiss would have been warranted, esp at the alter.



Author's Response: I'm glad you're not a member of team "she should have slept with him because he's Edward." About half my readers are. Next up will be the honeymoon in "Off On The Wrong Foot." See you tomorrow.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

oooh my bad on last comment.  Vicky is his FWB not Tanya.   Not a good start with the kiss thing though.  Can't believe he invited Vicky though. Sooo not good



Author's Response: No, in hind sight, Bella should have kissed him and she knows it. But what's done is done. And Edward didn't react to well. Yes, he invited Vicky, but I'm sure you already read my A/N explaining his reasoning.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Announcements

hmmm now is that the same Tanya who knows them both???  Eeek.  Can understand Charlie reasoning though.



Author's Response: I know you already noticed the mistake but Tanya's Bella's friend and the woman you think would be a bad friend to Bella is Victoria. She's quite nice, too, though.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

I get Bella's feeling about men.  here in vegas, they only seem to want arm candy or a new mommy for thier kids.....and I'm not either.  Ah well.

At least one of them is going in for the right reasons.



Author's Response: That's really bad. So Vegas is a particularly bad dating pool. Yes, Bella's in it for the right reasons, but that doesn't mean it's going to work out.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Best Laid Plans ...

Poor Bella getting stuck with such a "prize" as Edward. 



Author's Response: Yep, Edward's not much of a prince right now. But maybe he has potential.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

Ugh men and thier bets.... Poor girl ends up with him and his lies.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad to have you with me on this journey again.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters

I don't understand Bella's attitude.  She wanted this, so she can at least be pleasant.  I'm not saying have sex on the first night,  but at least be friendly and learn about each other. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm sure Bella would be pleasant if Edward showed some respect and was pleasant himself. This is a typical case of we reap what we sow. They'll have better moments but I'm not sure they're out of the woods yet. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters

I'm glad she put him in his place even though she was looking what she saw to lol. Two weeks to long lol I know I will wait like a good girl 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you agree and didn't want Bella to just lie down and let Edward have his wicked way with her. Many readers wanted that. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters

Such a great chapter



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. Bella's reactions stirred very different emotions as it turns out. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters

That was the way I kind of saw the night going.  I did not think she would sleep with him so soon. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you agree with Bella's decision. Many readers wanted her to jump his junk as soon as they were alone. Others wanted her to neuter him, lol. We'll have to wait and see if either one will happen any time soon ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters

Bella is a bit of a prude and kind of an idiot. Maybe I feel that way cause I'm team Edward all the way. I get her not sleeping with him on the first night but she did agree to marry him. She wanted a husband, she should do her wifely duties. She should have at least kissed him properly, I'm a little pissed about that. Can't wait to see her fold

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I don't think Bella's a prude. Edward just doesn't come across as very sincere. Had he flirted and maybe woed her a bit instead of hitting on her the way he did, I think the night could have gone very differently. His cockiness really rubs Bella the wrong way. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters

:) 



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters

I love Jacob's threats. lol

Edward is a riot. Bella will is strong. I can hardly wait for Edward to wear her down. lol

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. In my opinion, Jake acted like Bella's father usually would had he been there. He's very protective of his best friend. It'll be a while until Edward wears her down, but I think it will be an entertaining while ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters

Yeah well all good things come to those that wait. Edward needs to learn this. I think she sees this when he comes out of the shower or when they are at the beach on their honeymoon.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, I think Edward has to learn the art of waiting first. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

Hehe now it's gettin interesting :)

I liked the bachelorette party very much, and the presents are good ideas and I'm sure once Edward and Bella will be over the first hurdles, they are gonig to make use of them sooner or later :P
That Bella tried on 20 dresses that she did not like does not really fit with her I think, but in the end she found what she wanted so that's perfect of course!

The wedding itself was ok and a good start. I suppose Edward already knows that things with Bella won't always go his way when she didn't let him kiss her, so this will repeat itself when he will try to make the most of the first night as a married "couple". I suppose that Bella will try to get out of his way and I really like him calling her "Spice" which may be a good nickname for her. I'm curious how she will react to this and whether she can resist him at night. 

What I'm interested in the most is whether she will find out about Edward's true motivation to do all this, and I sincerely hope that this will happen before they fall in love since this will only cause drama... I think that we are going to ahve ewnough drama with these characters, so I cross my fingers that you'll spare them from this special one ;)

See you nect time!

Bella89



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading sharing your thoughts. Well, I had Bella try on all those dresses because I love watching "Say Yes To The Dress" and that's the way it mostly goes, lol. But what was important was that she made her own choice in the end. I agree, Edward will have realized by now that Bella's not a pushover, and if not, he'll find out soon ;). Well, I can't give away too much but I assure you, Bella will find out about Edward's plot in due time. What's a story without a little drama ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

Bella signed up for this.  She should have given the man a kiss. What she did was more awkward. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, Bella signed up for the show, but it didn't say anywhere that she had to kiss him. However, it was a spur of the moment decision and afterwards, she wasn't sure she even did the right thing. But it sure helped make things more interesting for us ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

Nice surpise for her what was she thinking turning head silly girl.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, she did what she did. Now they have to move forward. We'll see how that goes on Monday.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

Can't wait for more



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. See you Monday.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

Really? He invited Victoria? Bad form. Is he even going to try to make it work? Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. You're not the only one asking about Victoria, so I added an explanation to next chapter's A/N. See you Monday.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

Loved the bachelorette party & the gifts. They fit the characters perfectly. The wedding was great. Beautiful dress.

I think there is going to be a lot of struggling for both Bella & Edward in the coming 6 weeks. Bella is going to be struggling with her total attraction & the sexual tension that is there between the two. Edward is also going to struggle with keep his heart from falling in love & keeping to his plan.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the party and the wedding. Oh, I assure you there will be some struggling, but it will be fun to watch ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

Great chapter. Loved the bachorlette gifts. Hopefully, Bella will get a chance to use them. I'm surprised Edward invited Victoria to the ceremony. Looking forward to the honeymoon.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the bachelorette party and the wedding. As for Victoria's presence, I added an explanation to next chapter's A/N. See you Monday.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

Loved the bridal shower.  I had to go Google the WeVibe. Lol. I hope Edward and Bella get along.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm sorry this reply is late but I was a little busy. However, I'm sorry but Edward and Bella are in for a bumpy ride. See you Monday.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Here Comes the Bride - And Groom

:) 



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Announcements

Congratulation of Two Blue Lines making it to the Top 10 Fic Completed in 2015. Awesome story.

I agree, I can't see Charlie attending the wedding, let alone, taking part in it. Sucks for Bella though. Glad she has Jake to step in for her.

I recommend The Dominant series by Tara Sue Me; Heartbreak Remedy series by dariachenowith; Involuntart Rapture by Nocturnal Emissions (not for the faith of heart); and Generational Sins by TwilightDarkness82T

Sherry



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. So, now you know why Jake will be leading Bella down the aisle. I'm glad you agree he's a good friend to her. And her girlfriends aren't too bad either ;). Thanks for your rec as well. I already know Tara Sue Me's series but none of the others. I'll definitely look into them. See you next chapter for the bachelorette party, the wedding and a whole lot more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Announcements

I could not see Charlie doing it either but one always hopes.  I like her friends they are all so different but all good together.  Cant wait for 2 weeks.



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. So, now you know why Jake will be leading Bella down the aisle. I'm glad you agree he's a good friend to her. And her girlfriends aren't too bad either ;). See you next chapter for the bachelorette party, the wedding and a whole lot more.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Announcements

I'm so disappointed with Charlie. He should put aside what he feels and be there for his only daughter! thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Yeah, maybe he should have come but to be honest, I didn't know what to do with him there, lol. I just couldn't see it. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Announcements

I knew Charlie would not be happy. Glad Bella has everyone else support.  Can't wait to see what she did to him from the teaser. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Charlie is more traditional. But Jake's always in her corner. Next chapter, we'll have the bachelorette party, the wedding and a lot more See you then.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Announcements

Love jake 



Author's Response: Thanks! So do I ;).

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Announcements

:) 



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

I bet Bella isn't going to tell anyone until she sees what happens.  She has made her own life in New York.  Jacob is her steady support person.  



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Bella WILL tell her family. Yes, she's a grown woman with her own life but who wouldn't want their father to walk them down the aisle? Monday, you'll know why he didn't. See you then.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

Bella is so sweet and smart and knows she needs her other have. I think she asked Jake because she could not chose between Charlie and Phil or she did not tell them cant wait to find out



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and Happy Birthday to you ;). Yes, Bella knows what she wants, and she'll know how to handle our cocky Edward. As for the wedding, her parents know and the problem's not that she can't decide between the two :(. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

Oh boy....lets see how the parentals take the news....not to mention her reaction to seeing her hubby for the first time!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. The parents will have very mixed reactions, but I think that's no surprise. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

I like Bella very much :) She is a down-to-eartch person that will not accept any of Edward's hassles :P I think they match up perfectly since they both know where they are and where they want to go (even if it is not the same direction at the moment), so it will not shatter them if things  would not work out in the end. This is a good basis and because they are independant enough they will learn that together some things are just nicer than doing them alone.

Looking forward to the next chapter!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm really glad you're liking Bella so far. She's quite different from the ones I've written before. But in this case, I'm sure different is good. Considering what kind of Edward we're dealing with here, Bella needs to have her wits about her to not let him steamroller her. Next up, we'll meet the rest of Bella's gang and learn why Jake will be the one walking her down the aisle. See you in two weeks.

Reviewer: vaganski vrh Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

Two weeks?

oh come on...

 



Author's Response: I'm sorry about the two weeks, but my full-time job, two kids, a house and a husband don't allow for more writing time :(. Thanks for reading and reviewing. See you in two weeks.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

Great chapter, loving the story.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you love the story. The characters are so different from the ones I've written before. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

So Bella is serious about finding a husband.  I have a feeling that Charlie and Phil are not wild about what Bella is doing.  Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, Bella actually wants a husband. And she'll get one as we know. But will she be happy? We'll see. As for your guess, you're pretty close. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

Happy happy to see your post



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to post, lol. Glad you liked it. See you in two weeks.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

I'm guessing she didn't tell her parents, but most likely neither father agrees with her choice, therefore refuses to walk her.

Getting input from Bella really lets the readers see where she's coming from.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. Well, her family knows. That's all I'm going to say for now. But I think Jake is a good choice to give her away. See you in two weeks.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

Maybe Bella doesn't want to have to pick between Phil and Charlie so Jake is the next best option. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, Bella won't have to choose, but you'll have to wait until next chapter to find out why ;). See you in two weeks.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

:) 



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Girl Can Dream

Ok either Bella doesn't tell her family or they don't agree with her choices. Those are two of the reasons I think Jacob walks her down. I'm sure there are other reasons but those are the first two that come to mind.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm really glad you're liking Bella so far. She's quite different from the ones I've written before. But in this case, I'm sure different is good. Considering what kind of Edward we're dealing with here, Bella needs to have her wits about her to not let him steamroller her. Next up, we'll meet the rest of Bella's gang and learn why Jake will be the one walking her down the aisle. See you in two weeks.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Best Laid Plans ...

Loved this chapter.Edward's parents took it better than what I thought.  I can't wait to find out the reason Bella is doing the show. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. You'll get the answers to your questions and more. See you Monday with chapter 3.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Best Laid Plans ...

Cant wait for 2 weeks lol



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Two weeks are almost over. See you Monday with chapter 3.

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Best Laid Plans ...

Oh wow. Can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder what Bella's backstory is and if it's as similar to Edward's as her answer to the sexologist. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. You'll get most of Bella's backstory in the next two chapters and her reasons for participating in the show as well. See you Monday with chapter 3.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Best Laid Plans ...

I have a feeling Bella is gonna turn Edward's life upside down. She's not gonna be anything like he expected. I'm looking forward to meeting Bella and seeing her POV as to why she chose this plan of action to find a husband.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Bella sure will change things for Edward. And she's not going to put up with hi callous behavior. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Best Laid Plans ...

What we have to wait that long 



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I'm sorry but the two weeks wait is necessary for me to get a chapter done. With a full-time job, two small kids, a house and last but not least a husband, time for writing is unfortunately rare :(. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Best Laid Plans ...

I can't wait for Bella's side. I want to know why she is doing this. I hope it works out for them.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. You'll learn a lot about Bella in the next few chapters. As for them working out, I'm a strictly HEA girl. Everything will work out, though not always in the straightest of ways ;). See you Monday for chapter 3.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Best Laid Plans ...

:) 



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

A bald headed Edward,  I just can't imagine.  I have a feeling that Edward'sparents are going to be shocked. Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, they'll be shocked for sure. But they love their son. As for the bald head, you don't have to imagine it. I'm pretty sure you know he won the bet ;). See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2015 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

I am looking forward to this!!!!  



Author's Response: Thank you so much for checking out my new story and leaving me a review. I'm really overwhelmed with the response the first chapter received. This Edward and Bella are embarking on a journey that won't be easy and will certainly have its ups and downs, all with a camera shoved in their faces. I'm really looking forward to finding out how they'll handle that. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and that 2016 will be good to you. See you Monday with chapter 2.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2015 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

I'm so intrigued by this story. I'm looking forward to more. I don't dislike Edward, nor do I like him either. He's gonna be a work in progress. I can't wait to see how he tries to get out of marrying.

He's gonna have one interesting conversation with his parents about getting married, lol.

Sherry



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, he IS a work in progress. And he's not realy a bad guy, just very inconsiderate. His parents are in for a surprise, lol. They didn't expect him to get married liek that. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: Intsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2015 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

Can't wait for your next update.  I hope to meet Bella soon.  Edward is not quite what I expected - I understand there will be changes to his outlook regarding marriage.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, Edward will change over time. Deep down, he's not a bad guy, he just never cared for a girl before. That might change as well ;). See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

Great start. I'm on your Facebook group & have been waiting for this story.  Love the show especially season 1 & think you are going to have a lot of fun with this. 

Your first chapter was great. Can't wait until Edward has to let everyone know he is getting married to someone he hasn't met.

 

Have a Merry Christmas & Happy New Year



Author's Response: Thank you so much for checking out my new story and leaving me a review. I'm really overwhelmed with the response the first chapter received. This Edward and Bella are embarking on a journey that won't be easy and will certainly have its ups and downs, all with a camera shoved in their faces. I'm really looking forward to finding out how they'll handle that. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and that 2016 will be good to you. See you Monday with chapter 2.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

Yay, first chapter! Seems like Edward picks up well on the challenge and we already know that his plan will work... His parents will probably ne quite shocked, but the have to accept it in the end, so they'll calm down.

I'm really looking forward to the upcoming story,when will the next chapter come?I

Dir und deiner Familie aber nun erstmal ein schönes Weihnachtsfest und besinnliche Tage!

Liebe Grüße,

Bella89 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, let's say his parents aren't anticipating his announcement, lol. Chapter 2 will be up Monday. Vielen Dank. I hoffe, Du hattest schöne Feiertage. Unsere waren gefüllt mit Essen und Familie, wie jedes Jahr ;).

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

So happy for this to continue



Author's Response: It does, on Monday ;). Thanks for reading and reviewing. See you then.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

Once again I think this will be a GREAT story. I can't wait for more. HAPPY HOLIDAYS and LOVE YA!!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for checking out my new story and leaving me a review. I'm really overwhelmed with the response the first chapter received. This Edward and Bella are embarking on a journey that won't be easy and will certainly have its ups and downs, all with a camera shoved in their faces. I'm really looking forward to finding out how they'll handle that. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and that 2016 will be good to you. See you Monday with chapter 2.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

Love that you posted this again can't wait for more



Author's Response: Thank you so much for checking out my new story and leaving me a review. I'm really overwhelmed with the response the first chapter received. This Edward and Bella are embarking on a journey that won't be easy and will certainly have its ups and downs, all with a camera shoved in their faces. I'm really looking forward to finding out how they'll handle that. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and that 2016 will be good to you. See you Monday with chapter 2.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

:) looking forward to reading more of this 



Author's Response: Thanks for another really nice review. See you Monday.

You must login (register a new account) to review.