[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Runaway Princess
Glad you're back! I've been missing this! Can't wait for more! ;)
Author's Response:
I've been missing you guys too! More to come soon! Thank you <3
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Ambush
Wow what a chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Of Vampires and Alcohol
Awesome
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 - A Hidden World
Excellent
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Fainting, Fingers & Fountains
Nicely done
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Volturi
Marvelous
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
Excellent.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
Wow what is next
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
Awesome.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
Excellent
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
Well done
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Awesome start.
Date: 17 Jun 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Runaway Princess
Loved it!! What will Edward do once he realizes Bella is in La Push? I think he's going to be one crazy vampire. Poor Sulpicia I hope she wil make it but I wonder if this is her last fight. She knows shes losing her mind so could she be sacrificing herself to save the ones she loves. You always amaze me and I can never predict what will happen next which is great!! Jessica should be close by so I hope she can be of help and Carlisle is still holding his weapon. Maybe he can have the element of surprise against Benjamin. As always I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Robin!! <3 Thanks so much for your awesome review as usual! I always love hearing from you. Great theories - more to come soon!!
Date: 17 Jun 2016 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Runaway Princess
So glad to get this update. I can't believe Bella, Sulpicia and Didyme all left without their husbands. The men are going to be pissed.
Author's Response:
So glad to hear from you too! And yes, they will be pissed... That's IF they find out xD
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2016 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Runaway Princess
Bon chapitre!
Je suis impatient de lire la suite.
Merci.
Baisers
Author's Response:
Merci aelita! <3
Date: 17 Jun 2016 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Runaway Princess
good
Author's Response:
Thanks! :D
Date: 24 May 2016 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Missing your updates. I hope all is well.
Author's Response:
Hi Robin, thanks for the message and sorry about the lack of updates, life is eating me up at the moment :( the next update should be coming up around June 17th. Hope all is well with you too <3
Lots of love,
Ara
Date: 14 May 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Request
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 12 May 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Request
I found this story two days ago and have done little but read it in every spare moment. Fabulous. I love your writing style. I'm so glad I had so many chapters to read before running out. Looking forward to more, thank you so much, I love Jessica.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It's always so nice to get a new reader :D I'm so thrilled to know that you enjoyed it and that you love Jessica! I had a lot of fun writing her :D More to come as soon as I can! The story is very near to its end. Hope you will continue to like it :)
Lots of love <3
Ara
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Request
Cant wait
Date: 08 May 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Request
Well that was an interesting conversation between Bella Sulpicia.
Date: 07 May 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Request
Edward has a lot on his plate to deal with.
Date: 07 May 2016 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Request
Can't wait until next chapter :) x
Date: 07 May 2016 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Request
Another great chapter. I'm glad Jessica was able to get her mate on their side. Poor Edward seems to be stuck. I hope that Bella and Edward find a way to not have to stay there. Everything he is doing is to save Bella and her family but he doesn't belong there. It seems she is figuring out what they're up against. It also seems that a lot of the bad things that Aro has done is to protect his mate and it's all coming back on him now. Everyone has a point and reasons to feel the way they do. Hopefully negotiations can be made. You have a way of making us sympathize with everyone involved. I look forward to your next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Robin!! I'm floating on cloud nine knowing that you can sympathise with everyone involved :) I was really interested in developing Aro's character here, and I'm glad to hear when people can relate to him to an extent. And yes, you're right, Edward doesn't feel at ease in Volterra. More to come as soon as I can. Thanks again!! :))
Date: 29 Apr 2016 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Awakening
OMGosh! Mikhail is Jessica mate. What is going to happen now?
Date: 27 Apr 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Awakening
Husband at wk kids in bed nice sit down for the next installment but oh no glad Alice and jasper stayed around x
Date: 27 Apr 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Awakening
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 26 Apr 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Awakening
Wow I didn't expect that!! Great update and I can't wait for more!! I'm curious about something in the last chapter that Tanya said to Carlisle. Why would Bella join Victoria?
Date: 26 Apr 2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Awakening
Don't rat out Edward! I still don't know how Edward's plan is going to work. I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 21 Apr 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Tick Tock
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 20 Apr 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Tick Tock
There something weird going on.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Tick Tock
hurry back
Date: 19 Apr 2016 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Tick Tock
Loved this chapter. It answers several questions I have. Wow the Denalis along with Benjamin are with Victoria! I can't wait to see what Bella is capable of. Poor Edward is just trying to take the side that will keep Bella alive. I will go back to read the earlier chapter as well. As I have said before this story is amazing and so different. I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Wow thanks so much Robin! That means a lot. I'm so happy that you're enjoying the story - it's so wonderful to know whenever a reader likes the writing, it means that all the effort has paid off :) More to come soon! Chapter 30 has already been drafted! :)
Love,
Ara
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Tick Tock
Nous vous remercions de ce chapitre !
Date: 19 Apr 2016 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Tick Tock
I hope everthing turns out ok.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Escape and Escapism
This story is so, soooo good; interesting and satisfying. When you say AU, you really mean it! The difference in character traits and personalities of Edward, Aro, Charlie, Carlisle . . . Wow!! Of course, Angela and Alice are still simply Angela and Alice :).
Thanks again for such a great read.
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks so much, your review totally made my day! <3 <3 I'm so thrilled to hear that you're enjoying the story. The new chapter should be up in a couple of minutes :)
Date: 18 Apr 2016 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
I don't know if you wanted to invoke humor in your readers, but I'm finding this story to be quite delicious and truly funny in spots. ("He was with a dancing ballerina monkey," indeed!)
Two thumbs up ;) ! I'm hoping I'll enjoy the remainder as much.
Thanks for the read.
Take care.
Author's Response:
Aw! Thanks a lot, so glad you're enjoying it :-)
Date: 16 Apr 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Metamorphosis
O hope everything goes as they have planned.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Metamorphosis
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 14 Apr 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Metamorphosis
Aw I am starting to doubt Edward for a second oh no x
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2016 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Metamorphosis
Then that's it Edward bit Bella!
Kisses
Date: 14 Apr 2016 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Metamorphosis
Bella now has began the change.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Metamorphosis
Glad Bella is being changed but I'm so confused. The journal, Aro and his weird mate, Bella 's mother, Caius seems up to something, Carlisle planning to end all vampires, Jessica having a past with Edward, Alice being left out of the loop and I don't know who to trust. I can't wait for more to see what is going on and I hope Jessica's right and they destroy each other and Bella is so powerful that no one will come near her or Edward.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 27 - A Better World
Now really don't know who to believe is good and bad. I look forward to reading this brightens my day when the next chaper is on :)
Author's Response:
That means a lot, thank you so much! :)
Date: 09 Apr 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 27 - A Better World
good
Date: 09 Apr 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 27 - A Better World
I'm glad it is simple for Bella because I am still confused. It seems everyone has secrets.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 27 - A Better World
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 27 - A Better World
I'll take updates over answers :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 27 - A Better World
I love this Edward! Bella me irrite un peu, elle veut toujours à résoudre les choses du passé.
Merci pour ce bon chapitre.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 27 - A Better World
I would rather get updates than replies to my reviews!! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 09 Apr 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 27 - A Better World
Bella have better watch out there some people out that want her and her mate Edward dead too.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Man in the Meadow
good
Date: 08 Apr 2016 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 25 - An Unravelling
good
Date: 07 Apr 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Man in the Meadow
Something are still not addicted up I feel we got more questions then answer.
I don't think Charlie tell bella everything.
Date: 07 Apr 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Operation Rescue-the-Hostages
good
Date: 07 Apr 2016 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Circuses and Semicircles
good
Date: 07 Apr 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Man in the Meadow
Oh my......How did Aro get to her before Edward could intervene? It sounds like her mother loved the man but maybe she figured out she was being used. Wth is up with Aro's wife? I guess that's why Edward had warned Bella about being alone with her. So much going on I don't know what's going to happen. Why would the journal be such a bad thing to be caught with? It seemed to only hold drawings in it and a picture of a vampire. There must be something else in there for Jessica to give it to her but then I wonder why would Jessica have it to begin with. Why did one of the wives call Renee a witch. As usual I'm so confused but as I've said before that's a good thing. Your writing keeps me guessing and lol I'm never right. I can't wait until this is finished and I can sit and read it again but from beginning to end. I'll probably stay up the whole night until I finish. Thanks for the quick update and I can't wait for more. Oh and also Carlisle...with he wants to destroy all vampires. I didn't like his anger toward Edward. I know he's mad Edward tricked him but only to try and save him and when Carlisle was changed against his will it was Edward that stuck by him and tortured his own self with Carlisle's thoughts. I'm hoping he's only at this point because of Esme. I hope Bella uses her power and blows Aro up. Ok I've got to stop now. Loving it as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Robin! It's such a huge compliment when someone thinks the work is good enough to read more than once! <3 Hope you will keep enjoying the chapters as they come out.
Lots of love,
Ara
Date: 06 Apr 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Man in the Meadow
My favorite chapter yet :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Man in the Meadow
Geesh! I'm SO confused, so I can just imagine how Bella feels. Lol I just hope it doesn't effect her relationship with E. I blame B's parents for this mess, not E or the vampires. Although I'm wondering if it was Sulpicia who set LaPush on fire now?
I'm still holding out hope for a baby between E&B, despite these new revelations. *Fingers crossed!*
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Man in the Meadow
Thank you for this new chapter.
Date: 06 Apr 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Man in the Meadow
I have always worried that when Jessica gave her the journal that something was off. I was always hoping that she would have told Edward about it. Why would she get in trouble for having her mother's journal? I still have lots of questions.
Date: 05 Apr 2016 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 25 - An Unravelling
I love this story! Your storyline is fascinating and so different. Very creative!
Author's Response:
Thank you Leslie! It means so much to me to hear that! :) I hope you'll keep enjoying the story!
Lots of love,
Ara
Date: 05 Apr 2016 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 25 - An Unravelling
I don't blame Bella for her reaction.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that was a gruesome carpet! xD
Date: 04 Apr 2016 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Eumenes
good
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much for reviewing every chapter you read! I really appreciate it! Hope you are enjoying the story <3
Love,
Ara
Date: 04 Apr 2016 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Escape and Escapism
good
Date: 04 Apr 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Of Vampires and Alcohol
good
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 7 - A Hidden World
wonder what happened
Author's Response:
Some of this will be revealed in Chapter 23 and 25, and then the later chapters :)
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Fainting, Fingers & Fountains
good
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Volturi
intesting
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
good
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
good
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
good
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
good
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
good start
Author's Response:
Glad you think so, thank you! :D
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 25 - An Unravelling
Edward manages well.
What is going to make Carlisle?
Kisses
Author's Response:
He did! And more to come regarding Carlisle <3
Kisses!
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 25 - An Unravelling
Bella gets to see her dad and jacob again.
Jacob may not like bella has to say about edward being her mate,but then again he has no say in her life anymore.
Charlie he may look happy to see bella alive he going to be angry too.
Jacob is going have to learn move on with his life,he can't have it both ways trying have a relationship with nessie and expat to have bella in his life too over guilt.
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella will see her dad and Jacob in the next chapter!
And yes, you're right, Jacob will have to move on with his life, and knowing that Bella is well will help him do that :)
Thank you for always commenting <3
Love,
Ara
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 25 - An Unravelling
This makes me so scared! What is Carlisle going to do? I hope he doesn't kill Edward and Bella. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
Yeah, Carlisle is majorly pissed! We'll see what he's planning soon enough! Thanks for commenting :D
Love,
Ara
Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Welcome
I feel so sorry for Edward and Bella. If I were Bella, I would be scared shit less.
Author's Response:
Hello,
Thank you for your review! Yes they are definitely stuck between a rock and a hard place! Good thing Edward still has some power within the Volturi.
Love,
Ara
Date: 30 Mar 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Welcome
Holy Moley! What a wonderful job you did describing this scene! Great work !
Author's Response:
Hi Leslie,
Thank you so much for your encouraging review! It made my day :-D I'm so thrilled to know that you enjoyed it!
Love,
Ara
Date: 30 Mar 2016 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Welcome
I can't wait for bella to confronted Charlie and Jacob both I have a feeling this will be good and heartbreaking for bella,but it had to happen sometime better late then never.
Author's Response:
Hello!
Thank you so much! I have attempted to write this scene several times since it is pivotal, and I find it one of the most challenging ones so far! I really hope you will like it when it comes out :-)
Love,
Ara
Date: 30 Mar 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Welcome
I hope Edward is paying close attention to everyone so no one hurts Bella. Is Edward really going to change Bella there in front of everyone or is he going to do it in private?
There seems to be so much going on around Bella that she doesn't actually know. I hope Edward knows what he is doing!!
I have so many questions. I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
Hi Lisa!
Thank you for your review! I love reading your thoughts and questions.
I don't think this is much of a spoiler so I can tell you that Bella's change should happen (mostly) in private :-)
Bella has definitely been thrown into cold water, so to speak! We will see if she manages to adapt. Edward is also navigating dangerous waters here. More to come!
Love,
Ara
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2016 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Welcome
J'aime ce chapitre. Bella n'a pas très à l'aise à Voltera.
Je ne fais pas confiance à ces trois rois et ses femmes.
Baisers
Author's Response:
Merci beaucoup! :-)
Baisers
Date: 30 Mar 2016 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Welcome
I am very interested in Sulpicia of the Gold Eyes.
Is Sulpicia unlike her mate, drinking from animals, are they brought to her?
I do wonder why Edward had not informed Bella of the courtesies, the protocols, so she wouldn't feel quite so nervous, trying to follow his lead when she should not as in the bowing & kneeling parts?
Rather obtuse of Edward, & I did not think he was obtuse!
jansails/jan2
Author's Response:
Hello Jansails!
Yes, Sulpicia definitely has a story behind her :-) If you like, you could check out my Aro/Sulpicia one-shot: Queen of the Night - that story is actually a spin-off of a future conversation between Bella and Sulpicia here. I'm not sure if it'll make it into this story, but a lot of Sulpicia's background will be based on QOTN :-)
Haha, I agree with you, Edward should've had more foresight regarding the social protocols! In my head, he thought it wasn't very important since she'll be forgiven for her youth, and he didn't want to add to the stress by making her learn them :-) Thanks for your thoughtful review!
Love,
Ara
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2016 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Operation Rescue-the-Hostages
I hope Bella gets pregnant anyway before she's changed. It's something she really wants & they are both sacrificing so much, been through so much, that I think this would be some true happiness for them. Edward will be mad at first, but he will come to love the baby, just like the original Edward did in the Twilight books. In fact, I think your Edward would make a fantastic father - finally give him a true purpose, beside Bella, in all of the millenia he's existed. I think a child would also keep him focused on his task of taking over the Volturi & changing things for the better, once & for all.
Author's Response:
Hello! Sorry for the late reply - I had a full plate during easter since some friends were visiting!
Thank you so much! It's wonderful that you think this Edward would make a fantastic father. I love your insight on his character - you're right that he'd been wandering around in search of true purpose before he met Bella. Love reading about your thoughts and guesses. We shall see what happens! :-D
Lots of love,
Ara