[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2016 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
Can't wait for the next chapter
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Hello! Thanks so much for taking the time to rate and comment every chapter you read! Really appreciate it :) <3 Love, ~Ara
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2016 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
Glad she said yes
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2016 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Love this storyline
Author's Response:
Thank you! ^_^
Date: 17 Jan 2016 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 7 - A Hidden World
Will we ever find out what happened that Edward is running from? Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
Yes, it will be revealed in the future chapters! Thank you for taking the time to comment :) Love, ~Ara
Date: 17 Jan 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 7 - A Hidden World
Edward sure taking bella around the world, I'm glad she on the road to recovery. Bella will get knew edward more about his past. But something tell me bella going have to talk to her dad sooner or later.
Author's Response:
That's sharp of you, Bella will have to talk to her dad in the future. Thanks again for taking the time to comment :)
Date: 17 Jan 2016 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 7 - A Hidden World
What is going on with Edward? What about the paper in her pocket? Where did Edward go when he left Bella in the human room?
Author's Response:
Excellent questions!! They will be answered in the future chapters :)
Author's Response:
Excellent questions!! They will be answered in the future chapters :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 - A Hidden World
Oh you did it again you ARE an original. Didyme... Rarely is she ever in a fic and I loved your description of her very fitting. I look forward too Edwards back story. Danke for another chapter!
Author's Response:
Vieeelen Dank für den super lieben Kommentar!! Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! *hugs* I'm so glad to hear that you like Didyme, I had a lot of fun writing her too! More to come :)
Author's Response:
Vieeelen Dank für den super lieben Kommentar!! Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! *hugs* I'm so glad to hear that you like Didyme, I had a lot of fun writing her too! More to come :) Lots of love, ~Ara
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Fainting, Fingers & Fountains
so good
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Fainting, Fingers & Fountains
Hi
Edward has a special fondness for Bella because her blood sings for him, or because she is his mate? I understood why he looked to Aro not put your hands on Bella because he suspects that Bella is a shield cuz he can not read her mind? :)
PS: I wish you update very soon, because I'm in love for history and love to read Hi
Edward has a special fondness for Bella because her blood sings for him, or because she is his mate? I understood why he looked to Aro not put your hands on Bella because he suspects that Bella is a shield cuz he can not read her mind? :)
PS: I wish you update very soon, because I'm in love for history and love to read more, each line is addictive :)
Author's Response:
Great questions! They will be answered as the story progresses. Thanks so much for your wonderful comment on my writing :) There will be more history and action coming up in the later chapters. ~Ara
Date: 14 Jan 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Fainting, Fingers & Fountains
I started reading and got straight into the story I can't wait until next chapter X
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words! Next chapter coming in a couple of days X
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Volturi
Hi
Curious here, what did Edward spoke to Aro who convinced him not to touch (without gloves) Bella's hand? While I believe that he could not read anything, lol. I wonder if Edward told Aro that Bella is her "La Cantante"? curious :(
Author's Response:
Hello! More to be revealed soon! Thanks for taking the time to comment :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
Hi
She is beginning to disconnect from Jacob, just like Edward said he would, when he proposed to her (the first time) to stay with him XD
Author's Response:
Hello! Thanks so much for reviewing every chapter you read! I reallyyyy appreciate it. And yes, Bella is beginning to heal, Edward is a good influence on her :D
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2016 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
Hi
Poor Jacob and Bella. Have a saying around here that says "The loss of one is the other's gain", Bella loses and Nesse win. To Jacob she it is no longer important, but the girl he printed. As Billy said "You can not fight this."
Author's Response:
Love how you put it 'one man's loss is another man's gain' - definitely true. Although I'm not sure it's really Nessie's gain. She did lose a best friend. And yes, poor Jacob - the imprinting took over his free will. More to come...
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2016 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
Hi
Well, that Jacob had to swallow, lol
Bella the vampire drank from you that day and so after he said he was not thirsty, but now he is thirsty again, tahh: P
Author's Response:
Hehe, yes, more like he's thirsty for her, I would say ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2016 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
Hi
Billy and Leah have some reason, Bella be better staying away from new wolf couple and their imprinting for her to heal. And that Cullen did not kill, more like he knows where Edward is? Not in Forks? Carlisle is a doctor of Forks and his family is with him?
Author's Response:
Yes you're right Bella needs some time alone to heal. She can't do it when they're hovering all around her! As for your question, Carlisle is a doctor in Forks. More about the background to be revealed soon! :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2016 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
Hi
Well, after putting the frustrations out, nothing is better than starting to smile. And Edward knows how to distract Bella, sex and juggling, lol.
He and a love, even though vampire and all :)
Author's Response:
Hi again! Hahaha I love how you put it 'sex and juggling' yes he sure knows how to distract people, including himself :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2016 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Hi
I'm new here, but I'm loving what plot in the first chapter, promises to be a great story :D
Author's Response:
Hi, welcome to TWCS! I'm still pretty new as well, just started posting for two or three weeks now. Thanks for reading, I'm so glad you like the plot! <3
Date: 14 Jan 2016 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Fainting, Fingers & Fountains
Bella had some bad things happen to her, I think with edward she feels more comfortable with him then she did with jacob. Bella starring to feel more lighter than darkness, she changing some.
Author's Response:
Yes, she definitely is lightening up :) Thank you for commenting! <3 ~Ara
Date: 13 Jan 2016 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Fainting, Fingers & Fountains
It looks like you've made a likeable Aro as well
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad you noticed. I love painting my characters in shades of grey, no one is a hundred percent bad or good :)
Date: 13 Jan 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Volturi
So Edward and Aro are friends in your story. Hope things go well for their visit. Glad be felt so safe with Edward that she let him feed from her in front of them.
Author's Response:
Hello! Thank you for your regular comments, I really appreciate them! And yes, they are getting closer :) Let's see how their visit will go. Love, ~Ara
Date: 13 Jan 2016 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Fainting, Fingers & Fountains
Edward is really start to fall hard for Bella. I hate that James did that to Bella's fingers.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Volturi
great great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! Really appreciate your consistent support :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Volturi
Very enjoyable, thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for commenting! :) <3
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2016 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
Love the chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your wonderful reviews, I love reading them :-) ~Ara
Date: 11 Jan 2016 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Volturi
I really love your Edward
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm really happy to hear that :)
Date: 11 Jan 2016 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Volturi
Bella got a curious mind wanting to hear about edward weathered its good or bad. And Edward he wanted to knew about bella too.
Author's Response:
Yes, they're discovering more and more about each other. Thanks so much for your consistent reviews, I really appreciate them :)
Date: 11 Jan 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
Nice! But, I hate that she doesn't care if he's with other women.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Bella still hasn't fallen for Edward in this chapter. She will grow to realise her feelings in time :)
Date: 09 Jan 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
👅👅👅
Author's Response:
😁😁😁
Date: 09 Jan 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
Hot time at the club. Can't wait for more. Hope there is more Dom/sub time.
Author's Response:
Glad you think so :D Thank you :) Yes, there will be Dom/sub time and fluffiness scattered throughout the story :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
hope you post often
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much for commenting and rating <3 I really appreciate it! I will be posting every few days until it catches up with FFn :D
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2016 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
wow
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2016 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
this is great
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
great start
Date: 07 Jan 2016 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
Date: 07 Jan 2016 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
At least bella trying something new that different. It got jacob and her trouble life out of her mind at least a while.
Author's Response:
Yeah :) Thanks for commenting!
Date: 06 Jan 2016 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
😢😢😢
Author's Response:
😿😿😿
Date: 05 Jan 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
Bella made the right decision to stay with edward, I think it would be very good for her health.
Jacob head must be in overload all the trouble that started three years ago and bella deciding to stay with a vampire. But there isn't anything he could do about it if he kept forcing bella back she could very while hurt herself worse then he think.
Author's Response:
I agree with you, Bella definitely needs time away from La Push to clear her head. Thanks for commenting :)
Date: 05 Jan 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
Annnd this is why you don't marry a wolf unless you are their imprint. Eff that!
Author's Response:
Yeah I always wondered what would happen if a wolf met his imprint after he already has someone!
Date: 05 Jan 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
I am glad that Bella is going to stay with Edward. Hope Edward can help her. Thanks for giving us Jacob'sPOV.
Author's Response:
Yes, hopefully she will recover quickly with his help. Thank you for taking the time to comment :)
Date: 05 Jan 2016 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
NEED part 2! I LOVE this story. I hope it's very long! Lol ...I was confused at first in that last chapter, but this definitely cleared things up. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Part 2 coming up soon! Thank you for the love <3 <3 :D PS. The last chapter has been tweaked so that it's clearer if you wanna check it out! Lots of love, ~Ara
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
Interesting chapter. I like the snippnet into Jacob's pov. As for being a donner she will need more iron tha mushroom ravioli can supply. tut tut.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Love your thought process with the iron supplements!! That will actually be in one of their future conversations :D Lots of love, ~Ara
Date: 05 Jan 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
Okay I am going to be honest with you. I have come this story several timesn ow and have not read it. Tonight I could not find anything else to read, I was thinking IIt will be the same old Edward and Bella story how Wrong I was. I love this Edward and now I can not wait for the next update. Awesome storyline and telling of it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words! I have to admit you got me anxious there for a moment with the ominous start 'I am going to be honest with you' LOL. Hope you'll keep enjoying the chapters to come! Feel free to also tell me if there are any actual problems :)
Date: 03 Jan 2016 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
His donor?????? What does that mean.
Author's Response:
More to be revealed in the next chapter! Thanks very much for commenting! :D
Date: 03 Jan 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
So Billy likes,he Cullens. Well that is different.
Author's Response:
Yes! It's an AU - more will be revealed in time :)
Date: 03 Jan 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
Very interesting. I like how you are writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!:)
Date: 03 Jan 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
More to come!
Date: 03 Jan 2016 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
It will take time for bella to heal but she going have to confront nessie, jacob, dad, and everyone who add to her pain she need to let knew how much it hurt for her to be there and why she feel she can't be around jacob and nessie anymore.
Author's Response:
They need to communicate better, you're right again! We will see if Bella eventually manages to confront her demons. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
Date: 03 Jan 2016 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
I'm bella enjoying being away from home, but I think that what she need right now time to heal and I don't think she can did it with jacob pack, her father, and doctors watching her. Billy knew this is what bella need in order to heal. But both nessie and jacob need to leave her alone I know they never meant to hurt her but they are by making her stay where she feel more uncomfortable then anything else. I'm glad Leah voiced her thoughts on the matter.
Author's Response:
That's true - Edward is taking her on holidays for that very purpose. Thank you for your thoughtful comments :) Love reading your observations.
Date: 03 Jan 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
Jacob must feel pretty guilty for what he to bella, but I feel he hurting her more then he think.
Author's Response:
You are right, he is hurting her far more than he realises. Jacob is trying to protect Bella from external threats - more to be revealed in the later chapters :)
Date: 03 Jan 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Poor bella to have that happen on your wedding day of all things.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was the ultimate disaster for poor Bella... Let's see if Edward will cheer her up :)
Date: 03 Jan 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
I'm so hooked on this story I hope Edward is supper kinky
Author's Response:
Yay! So happy to hear that, thanks :)) Kinkiness coming up in a few :D
Date: 03 Jan 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
this story kind of refreshing. i like the character of edward its... different. i hope u can update it soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) I'm glad you like Edward's personality - he popped up in my head one day and wouldn't shut up! More coming up!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2016 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
Wow, should we now call her Bella Bloodbank?
Author's Response:
Hmm... that might actually work ;) Hahaha. Thanks for commenting!
Date: 03 Jan 2016 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
Oh no, I did not expect that. LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
Haha, THANK YOU! <3 Glad to hear that!
Date: 31 Dec 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
I like it alot. Happy new year to you to!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D Enjoy the celebrations!
Date: 31 Dec 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
Awesome story! I can't wait to read more! :)
Happy New Year!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you like it :D Have a great year!
Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
I am loving this story! I love the playful Edward.
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad to hear that :D
Date: 31 Dec 2015 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Can't wait for more! C'mon Part 2. I really like this Edward, he seems like a lot of fun but at the same time, sad? That he has a vunerable side. I don't know. Would like to know what is going on in his head. Will there be an EPOV at any time in this story?
Author's Response:
Thank you for your thoughtful comments! Yes, you're right, he definitely has a vulnerable side. We will get to know him better as the story progresses - and yes, there will be an EPOV in the later chapters :) Hope you'll keep enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
Where are you taking this story I LOVE IT I wanna party with you! 🍸🍾🍾 Vamp Edward tied up on a St. Andrew's Cross you deliciously twisted author just keep them coming. Artistic Entertainer indeed. Best wishes in 2016
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Thank you so much for your kind words :D Made me smile :))) Cheers and happy 2016!!
Date: 30 Dec 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
Happy 2016 to you all another great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2015 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
awesome
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 28 Dec 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
Really really liking this story
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: 28 Dec 2015 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
Thata girl! To hell with those smelly wolves~
Author's Response:
Yeah! Less moping around for her:)
Date: 28 Dec 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
I'm gonna love this story, I just know it. ;)
Author's Response:
Yay! That's just what every writer loves to hear! :D
Date: 28 Dec 2015 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
LOVE IT,please continue I hate when I find a great story and then it just stops. THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT WITH US!!!!!!! LOVE YA
Author's Response:
Awwie, thank you for the love! :D Love ya too! And I am definitely planning to finish this ;)
Date: 27 Dec 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Great start! I'm hooked
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you think so :)
Date: 26 Dec 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Interessting, I like it! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you :D so pleased to hear that!
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
great start
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 26 Dec 2015 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Wonderful idea for a fic gotta love the title I will definitely be following. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you! Makes my day to know that you will be following :D
Date: 26 Dec 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Sounds good so far. More please.
Author's Response:
Thank you! More to come :)
Date: 26 Dec 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Great start you've pulled me in I want to know what comes next
Author's Response:
Glad to hear that - thanks!