Date: 25 Jun 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 83
This was AMAZING! I finally got to read it in full. I hadn't thought it was something i would enjoy by just reading the summary. Then it was suggested by another writer & her description had me intrigued! I had to remember that your summaries are always vague & lets the reader be surprised at what you have cooked up! As Templeton says at the fair in Charlotte's Web "it's a SMORGASBORD, SMORGASBORD!!" By far i think my favorite story you have wriiten so far!
Also, i love when you write drabbles! There are few writers who are successful with them in my opinion but when you write a drabble youknock it out of the park!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
ohh, ok. my bad
Date: 01 Apr 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
I have to make a comment about the usage of the color red. Red means all play stops immediately, that what is happening is making the person uncomfortable and wants to stop what is happening, but yet you have them keep going. its just not right. you cant be yellow and red at the same time.
Author's Response:
He asked what her safe colours are, NOT what colour she currently was.
Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 83
I loved this one
Date: 25 Mar 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 83
This was a great fiction. I would love if you tried some more ;)
Date: 23 Mar 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 83
I have truly enjoyed reading this story. You have done a wonderful job writing it. Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 22 Mar 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 83
Haha, that is the picture perfect wedding for an perfectly imperfect couple.
Date: 22 Mar 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 82
I missed this chapter glad I found it . I have loved the story
Date: 22 Mar 2016 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 83
I loved this story! I wish there was more of their story. I always wish there was more when I am reading a great story! lol Anyway, I am glad the got their HEA. :)
Date: 22 Mar 2016 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 83
That was perfect for them. Thanks so much
Date: 22 Mar 2016 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 83
Loved it all even though I am not a fan of drabble. Great work!
Date: 22 Mar 2016 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 83
:) loved this story
Date: 22 Mar 2016 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 82
This is great! :)
Date: 21 Mar 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 82
That proposal felt random and almost hastily preformed. But maybe Edward felt like it was now or never.
Date: 21 Mar 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 81
Edward is finally able to acknowledge his true feelings for Isabella. Not based on guilt over Clair's death.
Date: 21 Mar 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 80
Well done Edward. Great element of surprise.
Jasper's men better get there soon.
Date: 21 Mar 2016 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 82
Oh wow, I was next expecting that.
Date: 21 Mar 2016 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 81
Awe! ILYs are great!
Date: 21 Mar 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 81
So glad everyone came out ok. He does love her.
Date: 21 Mar 2016 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 81
can't believe the cop gets to come off clean, even if he is dead
Date: 21 Mar 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 81
They are safe and Edward has said the words love it
Date: 21 Mar 2016 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 80
Asswipe!
Date: 21 Mar 2016 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 80
At least Edward is with Bella and Jasper and his men are onthe way.
Date: 21 Mar 2016 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 80
OMG!! OMG!! OMG!!
Date: 21 Mar 2016 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 79
HO-LY-MOTHA-F*CKIN-SH*T!!!! WOW!!!
Date: 21 Mar 2016 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 80
Hurry Jasper hurry
Date: 21 Mar 2016 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 80
Jasper needs to hurry
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 79
Oh no. So the whole time the cop was helping James.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 79
Buy all the time you can get!
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 78
Oooookkkkkk!!! James killed Claire and made it look like she did it herself. Where is Rose?
Date: 20 Mar 2016 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 79
OMFG there is a bunch of sick bastards. Where is Edward, Emmett and Jasper them bastards have mess with the wrong girls.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 78
OMG what happened to Rose. James is one sick bastard.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 79
Where is Edward?
Date: 20 Mar 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 78
He's insane and dangerous
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 79
So that's how James was able to work around Jasper's tail.
This does not bode well for the girls.
Bella was so close to escaping. But she would not have left Rosalie behind.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 78
Ah oh. What happened to Rosalie?
No we know that Clair was murdered by James in a fit of rage.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 77
oh yeah that is an understatement.
Date: 19 Mar 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 77
James has detained or incapacitated the guy Jasper had following him.
I wonder if either Emmett or Edward are armed in any way? Otherwise they will be at an even greater disadvantage.
Date: 19 Mar 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 77
So glad that Bella left them the address. She did everything she could do.
Date: 19 Mar 2016 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 77
OMG!!!!!! *biting nail*
Date: 19 Mar 2016 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 77
Thank God they are on there way
Date: 19 Mar 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 76
Oh Edward is going to see red when he see's James there near Bella. Then when he finds out that he had something to do with Claire's death.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 76
Finally they know something is going on. I wonder how long it had been since Bella left the note to now. If Emmett finds the note with the address and calls Edward back with it, maybe Edward is close to the warehouse and it won't take him long to get there.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 76
Edward, get ready to kill James.
Hopefully Emmett will find the note and the boys can converge on the warehouse together.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 75
How on earth will they two of them come up with a plan of escape? Neither one is in any position to remove their restraints.
Maybe the cab driver went to the police and told them to check out the abandoned warehouse.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 74
Well she at least took the time to rationally think through the situation.
But why not leave messages for everyone she tried to contact?
Date: 16 Mar 2016 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 76
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 16 Mar 2016 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 76
Finally he checks his phone......
Date: 16 Mar 2016 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 76
OMG they have to get to them fast like NOW
Date: 15 Mar 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 75
Oh I am so glad I was wrong. This is going to make Edward sick when he finds out. I just hope the guys find them in time.
Date: 15 Mar 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 75
So, Bella brought this all on herself by not listening to Jasper and meeting James! I hope Edward shows up soon. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 15 Mar 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 75
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 15 Mar 2016 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 75
What??????? He may have killed Claire! !! Wow. Edward will kill James if he gets the chance.
Date: 15 Mar 2016 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 75
I am so happy that Rose is not involved with James at all. Edward has to get there quick.
Date: 15 Mar 2016 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 75
Where is Edward?????
Date: 15 Mar 2016 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 74
Wondered wnhy she didn't call Charlie.
Date: 15 Mar 2016 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 74
Bella tried to so,the right thing. She called everyone. At least she left Edward a note telling him where she was. Can't wait for more.
Date: 15 Mar 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 74
Why don't you people answer your phones!!!!!! I hope Edward get there in time. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 14 Mar 2016 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 74
I hope Edward finds her note
Date: 14 Mar 2016 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 74
OH FOR THE LOVE OF SWEET BABY JESUS WOMAN!!! What in the world...OMG!!! I am dying for the next chapter!!!
I love this! :)
Date: 14 Mar 2016 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 74
Silly girl I keep on thinking that I hope this is not Rose setting up Bella
Date: 14 Mar 2016 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 74
Well at least she tried & she left a note. Still I would not have left without getting a hold of someone.
Date: 14 Mar 2016 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 73
Of course Bella won't do the smart thing & call Emmet or Edward to tell them what is going on. She'll just rush right over there.
Date: 14 Mar 2016 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 72
Well that was good. ;)
Date: 14 Mar 2016 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 73
James used Rosalie to get to Bella. He knows the hot headed blonde will be just the right incentive to bring his prey into the trap.
Will Bella leave the address behind for someone to see?
Will the building security call Edward letting him know she left the building?
Did James somehow get to Declan causing his illness?
If Emmett is at the school, and the evidence of Rosalie's car and keys remain, shouldn't he be calling the police when she cannot be located?
Date: 13 Mar 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 73
She better not be stupid enough to follow threw with the kidnapper. CALL EDWARD!!!!!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 13 Mar 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 73
Uh-oh. The bastarday is really playing hardball now!
Date: 13 Mar 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 73
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 13 Mar 2016 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 73
OMFNG!!! She better tell someone she is going!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 73
OMGosh! ! ! ! ! I am speechless. Please update again soon.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 73
She shouldn't go alone
Date: 13 Mar 2016 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 73
NOOOOOOO if Rose gets lose she will kill that prick.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 72
That's one way to control her tongue. Haha
Date: 12 Mar 2016 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 72
Gosh, can he do me that way?! Hahaha
Date: 12 Mar 2016 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 72
That's awesome! ;)
Date: 12 Mar 2016 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 72
AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I am glad Edward did allow her to cum.