Date: 20 Dec 2021 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great story! You should continue it! Along with my viking. I have enjoyed all of your stories. Thanks for writing you are great!
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2021 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wonderful end and quite a yummy lemony time.
Thanks for sharing.
Date: 17 Nov 2021 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow How have I not read this story earlier. LOVE it.
PS Love The Viking too
Date: 14 Jun 2020 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Thank you!
Date: 09 Mar 2020 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Perfection. Thank you for sharing your gift.
Date: 09 Mar 2020 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
God, I love this more every time I read it. You're Good!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2018 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW THAT WAS GREAT
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2017 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
Touching story. :)
Date: 27 Sep 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
I know it's been a while, but I wish you would consider writing an extension of this. Or even drawing this bit out into a full story. I love everything about this little two-shot - I've probably read it twelve times.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
thanks for sharing this is the 1st story ive read of yours ;) i did enjoy it but it was a bit odd ;D
Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it. Different take on mating - likes a lot!!
Date: 04 Jul 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
WOW!! I just read this and again, WOW! I loved it. I loved how you took the characters to a deeper level. You made Edward's inner monster so animalistic, very terrifying, yet so hot. The story was great! Nice job!
Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
AWESOME! Love this one...
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
I loved it it was different and I loved that too thank you
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
That was a sweet ending, so glad she didn't turn him down. Congrats on the win, it was a great competition. Debbie
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
I missed the contest and this beautiful retelling. So happy I found it anyway! Thanks for sharing it with all of us.
Date: 16 Mar 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Where did this contest take place? I'd love to read some similar stories! And I agree - I'd love to see a future take or something of the like! I just don't want it to end (Sorry I already commented on the second chapter LOL)
Date: 21 Feb 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
I have read this story numerous times on both FF and TWCS. I just love it so much.
Date: 21 Feb 2016 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awe! "Come and get me!" Love it!
Date: 10 Feb 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
I really enjoyed your story this morning!
Date: 09 Feb 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thank you! Can you suggest other stories that are similar to this style? I just don't want it to end.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
I hope you countine this story
Date: 08 Feb 2016 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
"More" is what I say. How about a futuretake chapter? This is too good to stop now. Please??
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2016 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
thank you for shairing this
Date: 08 Feb 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!!!!! You have done another great job writing a really good story. Thank you for sharing it with us. I hoping that you will finish your story "My Viking". Please please please.
Date: 08 Feb 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for posting it.
Date: 07 Feb 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! You should totally continue their story.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2016 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was great! I loved this Edward. :)
Date: 07 Feb 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely loved this story! I would love to see it continue a little longer. It was raw, and didn't sugarcoat. It was so well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: 06 Feb 2016 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Waiting anxiously for the 2nd chapter. Really enjoyed the first.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a treat. Another location to read this awesome story.
Congratulations once again on your first place award.
Date: 06 Feb 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
amazing, please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Update Now! I don't want to wait!!!!
Date: 05 Feb 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was a fabulous vampire Edward, thank you! Impatiently waiting for next part...
Date: 05 Feb 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my soooooooooo wonderful!! :D
Date: 05 Feb 2016 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great start
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2016 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Why do you keep stealing my heart?
Date: 05 Feb 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMGosh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is amazing!!!!!!!! Will you be continuing this story or is this were it ends?
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish MY VIKING! !!!!!!!!!! You are an awesome writer.
Author's Response:
LOL! You didn't read the AN at the bottom of the chapter, did you? :) There's a part 2 and then it's complete. Thank you for reading. <3