Date: 02 Dec 2017 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thank goodness Peter has loyal friends that came through. And I'm glad that Jasper is dead (in this story at least). He was a complete asshole. So happy Bella and Peter got to see each other again. I wonder who else is dead. Loved this chapter.
Date: 01 Dec 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Yup. As long as they don’t know Bella is alive, they can’t try and kill her. Hope Randall keeps her safe and they get along okay.
Normally, I hate it when Jasper gets killed, but he deserves it this time. Killed Charlotte? Just to try and piss Peter off? Hurt him. Break his heart?
Of course, Jasper used his power on her; otherwise she’d have hurt him, at least.
Yeah, so why did Jasper pawn off the leftover humans on Peter? Alice tell him it was the right thing to do for the “family?” Why would he even care? Guess he had to pretend to care.
Peter should keep a souvenir. A little something to give to Alice for being the bitch she is. Maybe a little something for all the Cullens. I’d have brought you his heart, Alice, but he didn’t have one.”
Carlisle’s bitch. Alice’s bitch. Carlisle may not even know that Jasper called and had Edward’s leavings taken care of. Maybe Jasper was just “cleaning up” to protect his own ass. Whatever. He’s a dick.
Can’t wait for Peter to make him suffer.
Date: 29 Oct 2016 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
You betcha, Bella! You belong to two vampires in one body. Now that could be interesting!
This story is getting interesting and exciting! Can't wait to see where you will be taking it.
Sorry about you losing your Granma. She'll always live in your heart.
Date: 01 May 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad that they are talking a little more, even though Peter is still being a jack ass. I wish he didn't have such a bad headache when they switched or better yet, that his 2 personalities would merge. I guess that is just him though.
The part about Jasper faking emotions was interesting he can feel others' and send them out, but has none of his own. Seems like Jasper is going to be one of the most evil in this story. Can't wait to see where you go from here.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
It's been some time since I've read twilight fanfic but you seem to have gotten better as time has passed. I will be keeping track of this story as it has a lot of great things going for it. While Peter is great, as always in your stories, my favorite is what you've done with Bella. Can't wait to see where you go with this. I love your take on the making of vampire gifts as well!
Date: 24 Mar 2016 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
Jasper IS a bastard then. Too bad. Bums me out when he gets killed, even if he is a dick.
But to give up his friend, Peter. I guess Peter wasn't a friend so much as a tool to be used for his own convenience.
Too bad. Jasper's going to to die.
Now I'm wondering if the Cullens think Peter and Bella are dead and gone.
Jasper could very well call Charlotte to pretend to see how she is. He ought to know Charlotte knows him as well as Peter does.
But now, to find out why, after all this time, Jasper decided to get rid of Peter. If nothing else, Peter has been useful.
And after all the girls Edward has left in his wake, that Peter's killed for them, how is Bella any different than the rest of them?
My mind still goes to Alice. She saw something that changed things.
Date: 24 Mar 2016 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Caius!?! Looks like he’s chosen his team. #TeamPeter
Yes, to wipe out a few school kids. Locked doors and fires.
They took out the wolves, too. My goodness. I suspect that seed has been sown far and wide, so there may be another wolf pup or two out in the world somewhere.
Okay, maybe Caius hasn't chosen yet. He needs to think long and hard about how much he wants to live.
Ahhh. The Volturi thought Peter was there to try and protect Bella. He was so obviously set up. I don't think Jasper would do that. I'm still leaning toward Alice.
Date: 24 Mar 2016 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
Peter kicked her ass thoroughly.
She probably should stop trying to start shit with him. She's going to lose. And he's right. She's been starting the shit all along.
Guess who's coming to dinner! Is it the person Peter called before? He might enjoy Bella kicking the guy's ass.
Date: 24 Mar 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
I like that idea of picking them off one by one. No one is ALWAYS in the company of someone else.
Well now. Peter's having a bit of difficulty.
Yeah, why would Bella think she'd be better at vampiring than anyone esle? Oh, right. We all think we're special.
Kick her ass, Peter!
Date: 24 Mar 2016 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah! Who is Peter callling?
Exactly! Why go to so much trouble just to get rid of a couple of folks. Bella's human. It's not like she's dangerous.
Edward did it again and got caught? Another girl right after Bella? Didn't give them much time to settle into their new digs before he was dicking around again.
Peter going in later to clean up after Edward? What the hell for? Edward should have cleaned up his own messes. Now he's got Peter on his ass.
Or, do they feel they were caught because of Bella? How would the Volturi know unless one of the Cullens told them?
I'll still blame Alice. She's protecting her boy Edward. Or she thinks she is. She's got no problem with throwing Jasper or the rest of them under the bus. It's all about her Edward. She's underestimating Peter.
Date: 24 Mar 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Cogratulations on your nominations in the 2016 Noncanon Awards Twilight Round 5!
Yes, she's loyal to a fault, but she's starting to finally realize she placed her trust in the wrong people.
Ya gotta wonder why the Cullens would up and leave and then later decide to off Bella. It would have been so much easier if Edward had just snapped her neck in the woods. Problem solved. Throw her off a cliff or into a gully or something. It would have been easy. The girl trips over air. A little hike in the woods would be deadly, right?
That makes me think it isn't necessarily the collective Cullens that made that decision.
I can only hope my beloved Jasper wasn't fully aware of what was going on. Can I blame Alice? The manipulative little bitch. I'll blame her. Perhaps she *saw* something that led her to think Bella being remaining alive would be a *bad thing* for the *family*. And she never liked Peter anyway. Uncouth ruffian that he is.
Jesus. Wiping out the town. Or damn near all of it. The Volturi have overstepped just a bit. There was no need for that. Can hardly wait to hear their reasoning for THAT! It's not like anyone knew Peter was there.
No one but Alice and Jasper.
And it makes it look like Jasper set him up. Bloody hell. If Jasper is asking him for *favors* why would he set him up? I think it's Alice. But then, I dn't like her anyway.
Ooo! The Cullens may not be aware that half of Forks has been decimated! Depends on what sort of story the Volturi come up with. I mean, towns do get fucked up now and then. Gas pipeline explosions, chemical plant leaks and/or explosions. School shootings. Crazy dudes with knives on a rampage ... it happens. Hell ... even terrorist bombings. Like what just happened in Brussels.
So, I'll go with the Cullens don't know what's really going on in Forks just yet.
Yeah, there's no way Bella can stay human and survive beyond the first volley, so to speak.
Don't screw around and be wishy-washy, Bella! Just do it!
Date: 19 Mar 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
excellent!!! I like to read everything you write and I would like to know where I can find the books that you have published. Do you share that information? Thank you for writing, It allows me to feed my obsession.
Date: 24 Feb 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think both Loa is a judgmental pin head who boo boo can not bury the Cullens but what they did to everyone... well if I was Peter I would have said then kill your self knowing that they used your ass and hurt killed everyone and you would rather go love up to them. Bella needs Peter that she really is brain damage.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ooh this is good. I will be glad when Bella wakes up and catches a clue and some backbone. I get she is a naive teenage girl, but faced with everyone she has personally known being killed; that naivety would be out the window for most people. I can't wiat to see what Peter has in store for the Volturi and Cullen's. I not able to figure out why they would go to such lengths to get rid of Bella and frame Peter. Other than Peter knowing and eliminating their previous fuck ups. Aro would have to had known so why would he risk breaking his own laws and risk the Volturi's power base and standing with vampires, just on the word of Carlisle. Aro never seemed stupid to me and I believe he would always cover his own ass first.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
Bella - I just want to slap her.
Though I guess everyone feels like they're the only one to get dumped. Ever.
She's hooked into the Cullens' security? Apparently.
Whoops. Looks like the Volturi came for a visit and Peter got snagged.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you, baby! So excited to get a Peter/Bella story.
I am actually re-reading Never Saw That Coming over on FF because I just can't get enough Peter/Bella or Jasper/Bella. Especially Jasper. Even after all these years. Twilight is ten? P-shaw. Drop in the bucket.
And I really do enjoy your style of writing.