Date: 22 Dec 2018 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Date: 15 Dec 2018 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
So cannot wait for the next chapter, on edge. In shock here at the cliffhanger. So hope Edward teaches his uncles a lesson
Date: 03 Sep 2018 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 20
Can't wait for more!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2018 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
Omg, I'm on the edge of my seat now. I started reading this last night and after finally making myself go to sleep ... I finished to this point this morning. I have never read a Carlisle and Charlie that I have disliked more. So much reminds me of the movie Trading Places ??? Is that it? Eddie Murphy? Anyway, same kind of vibe except this one pulls me in so much more. I certainly hope that at some point the brothers get what's coming to them. And I hope that Edward is able to rescue Bella. I will be on edge here till the next chapter. Now... to go make myself like the taste of coffee while I wait. Thanks for writing such a very interesting story.
Date: 05 Jul 2018 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Update please and thank you. Missing this one
Date: 02 Jan 2018 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
I so hope you will be able to finish this story. I am really loving it.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
New reader to your story..wow...well done...I can't believe these uncles...Thank god Esme talked to Bella about what he did to those guys who attacked her...Angela is getting what she deserves, I don't know if the evidence she has will hold up in court against Edward but hopefully the uncles...I hope Esme gets to Bella before who ever has her takes her. Edward needs to hurry home. Why did Edward give money & key card to Scorch, what was he planning?...I can't wait for next chapter....BRAVO!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2017 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Crap. Edward just needs to get rid of his uncles.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2017 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMG! Love your story can't wait to read more hope you post soon!
Date: 30 Nov 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow. Angela is a skank
Date: 29 Nov 2017 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
No, you can't leave it there!! Please update SOON! I honestley thought you abandoned this story. THANK YOU!
Date: 28 Nov 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMFG the uncles will pay as soon as Edward figures out what has happened. I hope they do not hurt Bella.
Date: 28 Nov 2017 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG I have missed you. I think Angela is getting what she has asked for
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh snap who took Bella was it his uncle’s update soon please
Date: 30 Jul 2017 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love this story so much I had to reread it.
Date: 21 Jun 2017 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
I really hate those guys. I do hope Bella gets what's going on & knows the 2 bastards are behind it. Can't wait for them to get what's coming to them. Waiting anxiously for next update.
Date: 08 Apr 2017 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
This is great story. Please continue it.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2017 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh shit!!! Please tell they will get passed this speed bump and destroy all who threaten it!!! Family be damned!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
please up date soon.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2016 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
I just finished reading this is ur page, can't wait!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2016 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love the story
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
I sure hope you update soon. This is quite the cliffhanger!
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2016 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh Snap. Did the uncles have something to do with this. I hope you can update again soon on this.
Date: 23 May 2016 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well damn! Angela sure knows how to make an appearance! Lol. I've just started reading this story today and fully caught up. I've thoroughly enjoyed it and I cannot wait to see where else you take these characters. Love it!
Date: 20 May 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no she didn't. Edward better take care of this floozy quickly.
Date: 17 May 2016 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh I thought you wouldn't update anymore! This is my first time commenting but I love this story, the wait is worth it everytime!
Date: 09 May 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
Why??!! Just when they were moving forward Angela is back. Just hoping this doesn't set bella back on her feelings towards Edward I'm hoping she sticks by him.
Good chapter can't wait for more, loving this story
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no!!! Just when everything was going so well! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 09 May 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've just started reading this and love it! I'm all caught up and hope you update soon! :)
Date: 09 May 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
ugh another set up I'm guessing. Wonder who let her in.
Date: 09 May 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
oooh why do I get the feeling that wine was drugged??!?!?!?!
Date: 09 May 2016 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella being manipulated by those two evil gits.
Date: 09 May 2016 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
Seriously, does no one change their locks when they break-up with someone who had a key? Security? Elevator access codes? It's not like he can't afford it.
Date: 08 May 2016 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
No!!! Not her showing up when things are starting to go so well. I've done a poor job of reviewing, but this is one of my drop everything and read stories.
Date: 08 May 2016 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh Good Lord what has Carlisle done now!! It's time for Edward to bring them both down. Thanks for update :)
Date: 08 May 2016 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
This is so good! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON. LOVE YA
Date: 08 May 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
Shit things where going so well and now Angela is back I hope Bella kicks her ass to the curb and does not get to upset with Edward.
Date: 08 May 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
Angela? Great chapter otherwise. I like that they are taking things slow and I am so happy Bella is strong.
Date: 08 May 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
Omg! Angela? Ugh. Things were going so well! Edward has done a complete 180. Totally different person. Let's hope he treats their unexpected visitor delicately...
Date: 07 May 2016 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
It was popcorn Edward was going to say right? lol Angela is really gross. I hope she is shown the door right quick! I also hope Bella will let Edward explain their relationship. I think that particiular conversation needs to be had. You've thrown us for a loop here...Carlisle running for office on an anti-drug campain? How very daring and short-sighted of him. Does he really think he can pull this off? Or does he think he can secretly keep his drug operation going because of his high government position? Or does he think he can frame Edward and gain control of the company? What is his end-game? Looking forward to your next update......Can I dare hope for sooner rather than later? You tell such a great tale................
Date: 07 May 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope Bella knows it's obviously a set-up by his uncles, which will make Edwards revenge that much sweeter.
Date: 07 May 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wonderful chapter. I kept waiting, like Bella, for something to happen. And Oops it did. Thanks
Date: 07 May 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh hell no! who is THAT?? just when they start to get closer, an old fuck appears?? It's good to get a new chapter of this story.
Date: 07 May 2016 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
Fucking angela, i hope bella kicks her out or edward does in front of bella
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
I wouldn't be surprised if Charlie and Carlisle were behind this stunt!!!
Date: 07 May 2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am grossed out that that horrible bitch is there...like that. Carlisle and Charlie need to pay for this, they have to be behind it.
Date: 07 May 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Awwww and they were just on their way to to their real first kiss! I'm sure Carsile had something to do with Angela showing back up and having drugs with her especially after his little speech. Can't wait to see how Bella and Edward deal with her. Especially since Edward got rid of her befor he married Bella. Don't leave us hanging for long!
Date: 07 May 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
Carlisle and Charlie have gone too far.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2016 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
Holy snap after such a great day the crazy bit*h is back what will Edward do
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
i hope both go off on her and call the cops
Date: 07 May 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG, I can't believe they came home to that! It will be very interesting to see how Edward handles it.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 07 May 2016 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh boy-Angela? the uncles are up to no good?
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2016 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
Dammot, Angela!
Everything was going so well and then BAM! The cokehead is back. ARGH! I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for the update.
xoxo Mina
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2016 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks good chapter
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
wow very very good chapter keep up The graet work and post soon Bye bye bye bye bye
Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Carlisle and Charlie are despicable! Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks good chapters
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
Shew she made it!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
These dirty jerks! I hope esme has a plan up her sleeve to destroy the brothers & help e&b
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hopefully when edward awakes he will tell her everything.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
How is her face? And he controlled himself w/o cameras.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Why they have not explained about his tourettes i will never know.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
Angela might just end up dead with an accidental on purpose overdose!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
So now he should know bella is not out for his money hopefully.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward might just have his hands full with bella.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Those dirty rotten scoundrels! I hope esme is edward's aunt.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
The uncles are really terrible people.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
I can't wait to find out what his disorder is!
Date: 07 Apr 2016 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
Beautiful. Thank you!
Date: 04 Apr 2016 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
hopefully e saved some of the monster to deal with his uncles
Date: 04 Apr 2016 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
yikes. wondering if it is angela
Date: 04 Apr 2016 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
didn't realize you already started posting here. glad i came across it :)
Date: 31 Mar 2016 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
Very good chapter...thanks.
Date: 30 Mar 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
This is one of my most favorite stories so far. You truly have a way with words ans stories that let you feel. Well done :) xx
Date: 28 Mar 2016 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
What the hell was in that wine? How come it made Bella so sick? Did those rotten Uncles' have someone taint it? To keep Bella away? Thank goodness she made it before he signed the papers. Now he can work on making that wonderful dream come true.
Date: 27 Mar 2016 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
Phew, nails bitten down to my knuckles there!!! Well, it was a good test for E as well, he didn't revert back to Jerkward ...... baby steps. Thanks for update :)