Date: 07 Dec 2017 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
New reader to your story..wow...well done...I can't believe these uncles...Thank god Esme talked to Bella about what he did to those guys who attacked her...Angela is getting what she deserves, I don't know if the evidence she has will hold up in court against Edward but hopefully the uncles...I hope Esme gets to Bella before who ever has her takes her. Edward needs to hurry home. Why did Edward give money & key card to Scorch, what was he planning?...I can't wait for next chapter....BRAVO!!!
Date: 23 May 2016 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well damn! Angela sure knows how to make an appearance! Lol. I've just started reading this story today and fully caught up. I've thoroughly enjoyed it and I cannot wait to see where else you take these characters. Love it!
Date: 07 May 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
It was popcorn Edward was going to say right? lol Angela is really gross. I hope she is shown the door right quick! I also hope Bella will let Edward explain their relationship. I think that particiular conversation needs to be had. You've thrown us for a loop here...Carlisle running for office on an anti-drug campain? How very daring and short-sighted of him. Does he really think he can pull this off? Or does he think he can secretly keep his drug operation going because of his high government position? Or does he think he can frame Edward and gain control of the company? What is his end-game? Looking forward to your next update......Can I dare hope for sooner rather than later? You tell such a great tale................
Date: 07 May 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Awwww and they were just on their way to to their real first kiss! I'm sure Carsile had something to do with Angela showing back up and having drugs with her especially after his little speech. Can't wait to see how Bella and Edward deal with her. Especially since Edward got rid of her befor he married Bella. Don't leave us hanging for long!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
What the hell was in that wine? How come it made Bella so sick? Did those rotten Uncles' have someone taint it? To keep Bella away? Thank goodness she made it before he signed the papers. Now he can work on making that wonderful dream come true.