Date: 09 Mar 2017 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
hmm, not a big fan of Edwards at the moment, nor Bella - shes too weak, I thought she could shoot, but she doesn't carry even though they live in a dangerous family. I guess the fact that im thinking about it all shows how well written it was. Well done
Date: 07 Mar 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Yeah! I was hoping for another chapter this AM and you delivered in more ways than one. It was quite suspenseful with Jake's treachery and I loved how you resolved it so quickly...but what really surprised me was Edward's return. That was also tense as you left so many avenues for this situation to go down. Needless to say, once again you WOWed me with the sensuality, love and caring. I am looking forward to Jake getting his just desserts and what Edward has to show Bella.
You are a favorite author of mine and I have been following you for sometime.
Your appreciative and avid reader,
Date: 07 Mar 2017 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Bella was so stupid. She knows better. They need to change their work schedules so they spend more time together. They can't spend months apart. She needs to work from home and only travel when they can go together. This is especially true since Elizabeth is now in school.
Date: 02 Mar 2017 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
I think Edward is a fucking dumbass for not telling her what is going on, but I can see he would rather tell her in person instead of over the phone/email/text. But he better have a good explanation. I have a feeling that it really is his former in-laws or Jacob.
Date: 01 Mar 2017 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
God I just love this story so much! Every chapter has me falling more and more in love with the characters and the plot itself! Of course I wish the updates were faster and more often but at the same time that would mean shorter chapters and I love a good long chapter that I can read and tide myself over with until the next update! Anyway loved the chapter and can't wait for the next update! I can guarentee that the photos of Edward's so called affair are some ploy from Jacob and Charlie and maybe even Sue and Leah to drive Bella to doubt Edward and his love for her! So can't wait for a baby Masen to come! I want one so bad! But I don't see that happening for a little while until everything is settled down! Can't wait to see what the next chapter holds! I am definitely curious to know who the blonde is with Edward in Russia. Probably Tanya. But I seriously doubt Edward would ever cheat on Bella. No he loves her too much!
Date: 01 Mar 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
So maybe he is isn't actually cheating by having sex with someone else, but being out with someone, touching and carrying on in public is a form of cheating in my book. How would he like it if Bella was out doing things like that instead of taking care of his daughter? Edward could have explained what was going on instead of getting angry. I am a bit irritated with him right now.
Thank you for writing. I love this story.
Date: 01 Mar 2017 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love
UGH that son of a ..... GAH! It better be nothing ... But still i hate when they get all "It's not what it seems..." If he is "looking" at her in an intense way then shame on him.... Boooooooo on the Russian blonde!!!!!!
Date: 31 Jan 2017 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Another great chapter. I live this story. Equal parts mob storyromance. I enjoy some asngst but like E & B to be united agasagasinst an outside angst and this is a great story for that formula. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 11 Jan 2017 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Absolutely loved this last chapter. I love every word of this story. One of the best mobwood stories so far. Please keep updating and make it a loooooooooooooooog story. Thank you, Pamela Hanley firstname.lastname@example.org
Date: 10 Jan 2017 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
Jasper sure put himself in a spot! That is a horrible thing for Carlisle to send him away to get killed. Poor Alice will be heartbroken. Maybe she should insist that she could go with him. That might change Carlisle's mind.
Thanks for writing.