Date: 14 Aug 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
OMG!! Please hurry on that next chapter!! I know I am selfish cuz I understand RL really can suck at any given time so just want to say, I have missed this story!! I hope you are able to continue with updating regularly now cuz I really enjoy your writing!! Thank you for sharing your gift of story telling with us!!
Date: 12 Aug 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Wow!! My heart is racing! That was an intense chapter, AND I LOVED IT! I'm glad Bella and Mrs. Cope are going to be ok. I think Edward needs to tell Bella who the traitor is. It may have helped her know who to trust. The Lion is beyond furious! I'd be very afraid if I was Aro, William, and Jacob!
I started over and read from the beginning to this point and I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope things are better for you.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
Yeah, you've managed to update. What a great chapter and it was certainly worth waiting for. Please update soon as I can't wait to see Edward unleashing his fury on Aro and William and maybe being too overprotective due to Bella being injured and maybe pregnant x
Date: 06 Aug 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat
What an action-packed chapter. Though I do have to disagree with Edward telling Lizzie it was ok, he should've encouraged her to have done what Bella told her.
Looking forward to Edward unleashing his wrath on Aro and William.
Date: 05 Jun 2017 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
I will stay with you till the end. We all need to remember you all have a life and sometimes shit happens. I am so excited when you update so thanks so much. Sam is a great guy. I cant wait to hear what happens to Jacob I hope Bella gets in on some of the act.
Date: 05 Jun 2017 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
thank you, thank you for this update. I check every day for an update on this story and was thrilled to receive one today. I love this storyline, this Edward and this Bella. This is the best Edward and Bella that I have read -- and I read a lot. Every day. Please keep up the good work and more updates if you can find the time. Regards, Pamela
Date: 05 Jun 2017 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
One jay baby making time whoop whoop he is Edward freaking Cullen right he can get he's wife over he's shoulder and run of with her yay second sam and Claire yay she needs her happy ever after I wonder how her daughter will react to Sam how would Sam react to her daughter third Jacob is an ass and he has disgraced he's family he's father the mafia family every thing he gets it's because he earned it so Edward let loose the lion inside you get him
Date: 04 Jun 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 21 down to business
I am so loving your story; keeps you on your toes and waiting to see what happens next. So by your comments it sounds like Bella may not be pregnant yet but it also sounds like they are going to have a lot of fun making a baby. Ooh Jacob is in trouble now; ha ha can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 28 Apr 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
I love the lion and his kitten! I can't wait for more!
I wonder who the rat is?! Bella is extremely lucky that Paul got to her in time I can't wait to see what's next for Leah and her girls. I look forward to the torture Edward has planned for Jacob!
Date: 11 Apr 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
thank you for the update...well done...Edward ain't nothing to mess with...lol jacob Black will find out soon enout ..also the rat...I wonder who that is....Mrs Cope was lucky Edward didn't pounce on her for the way she spoke to him...until you post again
Date: 05 Apr 2017 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections
I figured he was not cheating, but I am still pissed she left like that. I'm not sure that her doubt of him won't leave a crack in their relationship. Regardless of her insecurities, he has never given her a reason to doubt his love for her.
Date: 09 Mar 2017 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
hmm, not a big fan of Edwards at the moment, nor Bella - shes too weak, I thought she could shoot, but she doesn't carry even though they live in a dangerous family. I guess the fact that im thinking about it all shows how well written it was. Well done
Date: 07 Mar 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Yeah! I was hoping for another chapter this AM and you delivered in more ways than one. It was quite suspenseful with Jake's treachery and I loved how you resolved it so quickly...but what really surprised me was Edward's return. That was also tense as you left so many avenues for this situation to go down. Needless to say, once again you WOWed me with the sensuality, love and caring. I am looking forward to Jake getting his just desserts and what Edward has to show Bella.
You are a favorite author of mine and I have been following you for sometime.
Your appreciative and avid reader,
Date: 07 Mar 2017 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour
Bella was so stupid. She knows better. They need to change their work schedules so they spend more time together. They can't spend months apart. She needs to work from home and only travel when they can go together. This is especially true since Elizabeth is now in school.