Date: 14 Jan 2018 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Well, she finally knows. I wonder what Lizzie is going to think. She did not seem to like the idea when they were going to meet Rose and her baby for lunch right before they were attacked in their home.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, the rat was Charlie. Jacob was his son. Charlie had a long time affair with Sue. Sue pretended to be a friend to Bella. I wonder what will happen to Sue now. Poor Bella, she will learn that her father was a rat and sent those men to kill her.
Date: 14 Jan 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama
Omgosh!!! Victoria is a piece of work. Now we know where Tanya got her attitude from. Poor Jasper. I hope Carlisle does not put a hit out on Jasper. That would make Alice very upset with him.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)
Good chapter, but she did just what I figured she would. She brushed it off. It didn't matter that she might loose the baby she still should have been told. That was her child too. We're they just not going to tell her if she miscarried? We're they not going to let her grieve her lost child. She caved way to easily in my honest opinion and I really hope she starts thinking about his secret keeping and confronts him about it and he actually own up to it instead of distracting her with sex. You can always tell a good writer when they make you either like or not like a character with such emotion. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
Great chapter although I can't believe he is still keeping it a secret from her. I really hope she doesn't just brush it off when she finds out he's been keeping such a huge secret from her. She had every right in the world to know and I can't stand it when Bella just brushes it all off like oh well he lied and kept secrets but it's okay cause I just love him so much.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
The Woods where lucky to walk out the door they could of been leaving in a body bag such hatful ass holes. Lizzie is so cute OMG. The seceret will be out of the bag about the baby. I think she is going to freak out when she finds out that Edward knew about it and didnt tell her.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1
I'm so loving this story right now and I can't seem to put it down, can't wait for your next update however, please do it soon as I'm looking forward to how everyone will react when Bella tells them she's pregnant especially Edward as he's already in the know x
Date: 04 Dec 2017 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
First, didn't Edward just recently give Bella some lecture about how whatever she did proved that she didn't trust him? Well, pot meet kettle.
Second, as a future healthcare provider, I find it absolutely appalling that any health professional would treat their patient like that. I understand that dealing with a mob boss changes the game of this fiction, but a doctor's first duty is not to the person paying them, but to the patient in their care and it should be a huge red flag to Edward that he is employing a healthcare professional with such a skewed moral compass as to suggest keeping secrets from their patient. (Also that feels a little bit like the doctor is trying to move a person of their interest into Edward's bed like a Henry the VIII drama)
I was really happy to see an update, and I hope to see another one soon.
Date: 03 Dec 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
I think she’s going to be pissed if she finds out he knew the whole time that she was pregnant and he never told her, I can understand his protectiveness but secrets are never good in a marriage. Most of the time the secret comes out so I hope he’s prepared for that. Awesome chapter, can’t wait to read what happens next.
Date: 01 Dec 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
He may be doing it for the right reasons in his head, but secrets always come back to bite you. If she knew that he has known all this time and didn't tell her when she has every right to know she could loose all trust in him. Once trust is lost it's hard to get back. Great chapter can't wait for the next one.
Date: 27 Nov 2017 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
Well they are all underground now and perhaps Bella, Edward and Lizzie can start to settle down. I think Edward should just go ahead and tell her what the doctor said and please don't get mad it is what is best for everyone.
Date: 26 Nov 2017 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets
I get why Edward has kept the secret, can’t fault him for that. The way this is written Bella seems to have withdrawn from the family a little, throwing herself into work. Or knowing Bella was prego at the beginning of this chapter, her working so much could explain why Edward hasn’t had sex with her. Just throwing it out there.
Date: 13 Oct 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
WOW! It was so good I immediately reread it twice. It was more than I looked for, but then you are one of my favorite authors. You always make me feel your characters' emotions intensely and although there is violence there are such sweet and loving moments. This is one of my favorite stories which I have read more than twice.
I hope life treats you better ... you certainly make mine better with your wonder stories.
Wishing you all the best.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
As always, a great chapter and great storyline, great writing and exciting to read. I love this story and I love your writing style. Never any mistakes in either english or punctuation etc. I know you are updating as quickly as you can and I appreciate this. Just please keep it coming until the end, which I hope doesn't come for a looooooong time.
Your Edward is so sexy and strong and just WOW. Thank you again, Pamela Hanley