[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2016 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
I feel like something major is going to happen at the wedding.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
I love this story so much. Can't for more.
Date: 15 Aug 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Fun chapter!
Date: 15 Aug 2016 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 15 Aug 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Wonderful chapter. Glad that Sue is looking out for Leah since her husband is a pathetic louse. Lizzie is just too cute.
Date: 15 Aug 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Wow. Tense. Jacob seems to have wrapped himself in a stench that, I think, won't easily go away. Edward and Isabella will need to teach him a lesson in part II of discipline. Such a good chapter. Thank you.
Date: 08 Aug 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
just found this and im totally hooked. Well written and not too wordy
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2016 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
please update soon!!!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
I love it keep it going
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Hell yes Edward.....You fucking handle them all. Put them in their place no matter who your wife is you clean shop. You go boy they'll never call you soft lol. Love it
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
So good! It was like watching a movie!
Date: 27 Jul 2016 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Don't mess with Edward
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Is Jacob going to be a future threat? He deserved every bit of pain he has. Hehe
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Jacob is a pig and needs putting down.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2016 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
I like this new powerful Bella. Great stuff.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Big steps for bella. I bet Charlie nearly had a heart attack. lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2016 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
A double reward for Bella. lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
Wonderful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2016 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
Edward ever messes about, awesome.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2016 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten
Lovely chapter.
Date: 27 Jul 2016 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
That was fucking epic! Loved it! It would be nice for Leah to receive some protection from this asshole though.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2016 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time
So cute but poor Isabella will not be able to walk soon. :D
Date: 26 Jul 2016 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Yeah Edward and Bella. Jacob should die.
Date: 26 Jul 2016 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
i love this story. it's very smart!
so civilized with documentations for
both legal and illegal...isn't that dangerous?
to have so many illegal documentations? but i supposed
there is little choice in order to keep the "peace".
love how edward can change his facade so quickly
from cool to deadly within millisecond...as needed.
the only complaint i have is that...
you don't update fast enough.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2016 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous
Wow. :D
Date: 26 Jul 2016 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
💞💞💞
Date: 26 Jul 2016 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Yes it was a lot and thank you.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
wow
this was a long chapter (thank you!!!!)
full of events
I love your story
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Je ne l'aime pas ce Jacob!
Ainsi, je suis ravi de ce qui est arrivé à lui / elle.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
OMG.....😨😨😍😍...NO WORDS...SO GREAT
Date: 25 Jul 2016 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
OMFG Edward is amazing and Bella just wow I cant belive Charlie is not proud of her. Charlie got a lot more than he deserved and Jacob I cant believe that fucker is still alive he is still going to cause problems. I love this story thanks so much for the update.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Jacob isn't go away so easily, I don't think. Bella did an amazing job holding her cool and directing the first half of the meeting. Jacob isn't gonna accept what just happened without coming back for some revenge.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
I can’t thank you enough for writing a new chapter in this wonderful story as I absolutely love this wonderful story. One of the best Mafia stories I have come across and have read with out stopping. My only wish is that would update more often, but sometimes things come up and they must come first. I absolutely love the way Edward handled Jacob and Charlie. I can’t figure how stupid and childish Charlie is that he can’t see pass his nose and see what Jacob is really like. Pretty please don’t take so long to put the next chapter up please. Your story are such a good read and you writer them so well that I’m always on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter to see what is going to happen with B and E next.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Wow amazing chapter. Bravo Isabella. Oh loved when Claire walked in. Then the kiss as Bella left yeah that was so good. Charles really is so naïve.
Another part I loved when Edward told Jacob how disgusting he is when Jacob was telling Edward what Claire was good for.
My favorite was the ending though Edward literally took Jacob down a couple notches.
I think Jacob is going to be the problem though, especially if he teams up with the Russians and/or Irish.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 25 Jul 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
WOW!! OMG!! FANTASTIC! ;)
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
I loved it. I wished that Bella would have gotten a chance to bitch slap Jacob but Edward did a fine job on him. I hope Leah runs for the hills and gets away from that scum bag. Better yet, maybe the Russians will take care of him. Some how I don't think we have heard the last of the jerk.
Don't wait so long until the next chapter please. You're such a good writer I'm always on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter to see what B and E are up to next.
Great chapter
Mickie
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Wow! Can't wait to see how Bella takes the news. Great chapter
Date: 24 Jul 2016 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
I absolutely love this story. It is one of the best Mafia stories I have read. I only wish you would update more, but I know real life comes first. You are an incredible writer, thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 24 Jul 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
I loved how Edward handled Jacob and Charlie! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
He certainly wastes no time. :D
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Wow that was awesome, yay for kicking jacob's a**! He is such a prick, how he treats his wife, how he treats his mistresses, how he was stealing from someone who trusted and how he wanted to do human trafficking inside the USA is disgusting.mim glad Edward shot him several times but I think even with the rules he should have killed him because it will most likely come back and bite him in the tush. I can't wait to read the next chapter this is an awesome story!
Melissa
Date: 24 Jul 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Awesome 😝😝😝😝
Date: 24 Jul 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Charlie is an ass. Even with proof he still believes that rat bastard..... Edward should have killed Jacob I don't trust him to not be a shit starter later on... That's if the Irish/ the Russiand don't get to him first.
Date: 24 Jul 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Super good
Date: 24 Jul 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Fantastic chapter. So worth the wait. Thank you
Date: 24 Jul 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
I just love Mobward
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Oooh I am loving this.
Date: 24 Jul 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Jacob got exactly what he deserved and Charles should be ashamed for trusting jacob and no his daughter.
Date: 24 Jul 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
AWESOME!
Date: 24 Jul 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Finally I was waiting for Edward to use his gun on Jacob
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
He probably should have killed him regardless! Oh so good, so SAS that Charles was so blind....so totally blind!
Date: 24 Jul 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Sooooo...great rip it up chapter
.....but it does make me want another one right away!
Thank you. T
Date: 24 Jul 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Omg. So worth the wait. Yet I was hoping for Jacobs death. Poor Charlie. Even after everything he believed in Jacob. I hope he eventually sees how wrong he is. Great, awesome chapter.
Date: 24 Jul 2016 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
trop bien je m'attedai a se ke jacob et charles meurent mes l'histoire est super bien former on pourrai avoir un autre chapitre dans pas lontemps ses super long a attendre merci bonne journée a tous
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
OMG!!!!!! Please Please update soon.. Getting GOOD!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Jacob was a pig and got what he deserved. Charles was a disappointment also. I really he opens his eyes soon.
Date: 24 Jul 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Great meeting. Loved Claire as PA
Date: 24 Jul 2016 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
Love, love, love it. So glad B is helping Claire. Buh bye jake.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Please hurry and write the next chapter. I'm waiting for Bella to rip Jacob a new one and Edward take him out. Oh, the joy!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
I have just started reading this wonderful story and I have founded very refreshing. I love the way Edward loves his wonderful daughter and how he loves Bella also and how good they are getting on. I also love the way Edward is encouraging Bella to come out of her shell a bit more in the business and in the bedroom, I also hate Jacob and how disgusting he is and how he is trying to take every bodies business away without anybody knowing except Edward and his people. I hope he gets what’s coming to him! I can't wait for the next update. Great storyline and interesting characters! Please update soon it looks like it’s been a while since this wonderful story was updated. Please give us some more wonderful reading soon
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2016 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Ewwwww! Jacob is so disgusting! I can't wait for the next update. Great storyline and interesting characters!
Date: 27 Jun 2016 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Omg I borderline hate Jacob. Please put him in his place Bella
Date: 26 Jun 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
It'll be great to see him get his just desserts!
Date: 26 Jun 2016 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten
Great story
Date: 22 Jun 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Kudos Ed...can't wait to see Jake fall
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2016 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
In twilight I never got the whole team E or team J thing. Yes E was stalkerward. Inexperienced yes. But he cared for Bella. And wanted what was best for her. Let's not mention NM. O.k.? But Jerkob was an abuser in training. It was all about him. His wants. His needs. His hopes and wishes. His feelings. Any way he could manipulate things to his advantage. There's half a footfall distance to his fists and words hammering home the point over physical and emotional bruises. So. I agree. I hate that character.
Now this chapter was an excellent insight to how really stupid he is. However, I'm sure he won't go without a fight. Oh. The Pain. Lol.
Date: 22 Jun 2016 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York
So pleased Edward was supportive without being dominant through her meeting. Such a good chapter. Thanks.
Date: 22 Jun 2016 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters
Goodness. I wonder what expression had settled on Charlie's face by the time Bella hung up? Jerkob to is going to be spitting chips or is he to dumb to realise how much trouble he is in? Looking forward to finding out.
Date: 22 Jun 2016 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
Good on Bella.
Date: 22 Jun 2016 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
Such a good chapter.
Date: 22 Jun 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
A most enjoyable chapter.
Date: 22 Jun 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten
I'm hungry too, but cake or bikkies will have to suffice. Drat. Loving this story and your characters.
Date: 22 Jun 2016 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 5 - About time
A nice look into their early life together. Thanks
Date: 21 Jun 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous
Um. A really good chapter. Yep. That's way at I wanted to say? Lol
Date: 21 Jun 2016 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
Nice! Lol. Whatever will they do?
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
He seems to good to be true for her....Does he have a bad side?
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2016 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Okay so its obvious that Edward is older then Bella but by how much?
Date: 21 Jun 2016 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
A good start. Thanks
Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Oh I hate Jacob! Get him good Bella
Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
I hate him a lot, I think you hate him so much as for you to dissappear him in the next two chapters 🤓
Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Omg he's such an ass with a huge ego can't wait for Bella and his confrontation x
Date: 20 Jun 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! NOW I'M IMPATIENTLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2016 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Jacob is right up there with Tanya where ever she is. LOL
Date: 20 Jun 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Jacob needs to go down. Let the fun begin.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
thank you for the update...well done..The Tigeress is coming out...lol...Jake won't know what hit him
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
I wish Leah could say to him w/o getting hit "maybe your not man enough to produce a boy!" Great chapter!
Date: 20 Jun 2016 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Jacob is such a creep and hate would not even cover it. He better not even think about Bella the wrong way. I cant wait for Bella to tear into him.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
oh he is a pig. I can't wait for Bella to take him down & Edward to make him suffer slowly.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Can't wait to see Jacob taken down. Bella's daddy won't be pleased with her either, but me and Edward? We are going to love it!!!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Jacobs a dick and needs to die
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Jacob deserves all that is coming to him
Date: 19 Jun 2016 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
HATE HIM TONS!! I love this story and I am excited for more!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
I have no words for how much Jacob irks me. That menace has got to go, but I expect him to be around for a while. I can hardly wait for the next chapter to see how Bella handles this meeting.
Sherry
Date: 19 Jun 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
Oh wow, so glad you've updated this story as I'm always eager to read what you've written and I'm enjoying this story so much. I hope Bella or Edward cotton onto what Jacob is planning against them. Please update soon x