Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: Loopylisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 17

The story focuses on pointless information instead of the true gritty parts I feel the turning up of Edward could have been expanded and more gripping . The poor Grammer is really irritating. The story as a whole has great bones, just needs a good editor. 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 17

thanks for the ch's



Author's Response:

no worries.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

can't wait for more more it's a ten



Author's Response:

Thank you, sweets, and i will put another chapter or two up for you.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 12

great ch's



Author's Response:

thanks darlin', putting another chapter up now.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

i love it so far



Author's Response:

thank you, will put another one up soon

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

lmao



Author's Response:

I know, right? Anyway i am putting another up later.

Reviewer: wendy1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi ladies,

I am so sorry for the slip up in regards to chapter 7 going up twice. or was it 8. Anyway, i deleted and reuploaded them and added chapters 9 and 10.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

great ch and love the part were she meets granddad lol



Author's Response:

I know you like it and i do appreciate it.

next chapter is coming up.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

can't wait for more  to read about her horsies



Author's Response:

thank you and i will put the next chapter up now.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

great ch can't wait for more to read



Author's Response:

thank you and i will put a chapter up soon

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds like a blast!  Bella needs to get all the pain off her chest....and Peter will make a great ally!  



Author's Response:

thank you, this is one of my favourites

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wonderful!  You bring out how very much Bella still loves Jasper, but will not let her heart be trampled again.  Good for her!  They need to work together to get things working again - especially for Maria's sake!  I loved it!



Author's Response:

I fall back on what i know at times not by my experience but from what i am told when i can be there as a sounding board of advice. but i have broad shoulders and a safe for a mind. when it remembers ;D

Reviewer: Hina-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love it....!! Maria is soo cute!:-):-) Update soon. 



Author's Response:

i love her to bits

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love it.



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

Maria is a smart girl making her daddy prove himself. She is protecting her mama. 



Author's Response:

she is very protective of her momma, as momma is of her.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

Great update 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 4

i wood hit him too keep up the great job



Author's Response:

i know, right. i would do it more than once though

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

Very good



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love Maria!  She'll love having an aunt and uncle!  Wonderful!



Author's Response:

it is going to be good for her and she will meet daddy eventually

 

how about Peter, momma Whitlock, and Jasper confrontation? what are your thoughts on that

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

Flas Peter and Charlotte are getting closer to Bella and Marie, hope jasper gets to see them soon xx



Author's Response:

do not worry, it will happen

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 3

can't wait wendy to see what you come up with lol



Author's Response:

putting up ch 4 once reviews are done.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

Peter better watch it Maria has him wrapped around her finger.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Men never learn, sugar and excitement is a nightmare when it is caused by a man.

I learnt that from experience.

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it.



Author's Response:

next chappy coming up

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

it is coming

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 2

My heart is breaking for Bella, Jasper, and their daughter!  Wonderful idea and and I can't wait to read it!  Thank you!



Author's Response:

I know, darl', but it will get better

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love it. 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yes please continue this sounds really good look forward to next update x



Author's Response:

coming up in a few minutes

Reviewer: Hina-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please do. Loved it



Author's Response:

okay then, no problemo

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

okay it is going up online now

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please add!  I don't usually read J/B stories but occasionally one will catch my fancy and I end up rooting for them.

 



Author's Response:

I hope you end up liking it

Reviewer: Chocolate Heals All Wounds Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope that you decide to continue the story. Little Maria is so precious. I quite enjoyed the chapter. If you don't mind me saying, some of the wording during Bella's conversation sounded slightly awkward but it was still readable.  



Author's Response:

I love Maria, simply because i made her their daughter, not some hussy or nasty momma or anything. as writers we can do as we wish, within reason, to the characters

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

More please



Author's Response:

no worries it is coming

Reviewer: sarahplumb Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

yes please asap

 



Author's Response:

okay, i will

Reviewer: ArabellaWhitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome start! I can't wait to see what will happen next!



Author's Response:

it will be up soon

Reviewer: jenni1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved the start. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

it is coming

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am glad you tell people you are writing your story and you should stick to that. Just write it and they will read.

 

 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

I would love for you to continue the story!  I'm positive that "Pete" is Jasper's brother.  Can't wait to see if you continue!



Author's Response:

of course he is



Author's Response:

of course he is

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yes more chapters please. I love your stories. 



Author's Response:

no worries

You must login (register a new account) to review.