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Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Wedding

Oh my!  Can't say I was expecting that.  Seems wrong that Wdward didn't morn her after all this time.  Disappointing turn in the story.



Author's Response:

Sorry to read you are disappointed. Hope you stick around for the rest and perhaps I can restore your faith. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Wedding

When Demetri took the heart from Bella's body, he took it right out of Edward and me, too! How can their be anymore love story , with Bella dead and Edward and Jacob bent on revenge? I hate this twist, it makes me very sad!



Author's Response:

Every great love story has to have a tradegy in it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Wedding

Wow!  See what  you  meant  about  going  off  the  rails!  Never expected that.  But look forward  to  seeing  your  own  take



Author's Response:

Hope my take isn't disappointing. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Wedding

You seriously killed Bella?  Yikes!



Author's Response:

Yep! She had to go. LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Wedding

Totally taken by surprise.  This isn't a dream sequence is it?  Wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Dream sequence? Afraid you'll have to read on. See you next time.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 2-LONG NIGHT

I really enjoyed this chapter.  I like the way you take canon characters and start to make them your own.  Edward, in canon, puts up such feeble arguments they are easy to pull apart.  For instance, and this is taken from the book or movie as well, where he asks Bella if she is ready for 'never changing,  never moving forward'.  And then he questions her about changing her mind about children.  If she doesn't want them before her change, why would she want them after it?  There are so many holes in  the original works I want to drive a B Double through them. Loved the touching moment between Edward and his sire.  I am really looking forward to your version of how it should have been.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

I did try to stay true to the orignal characters as much as possible. Glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 2-LONG NIGHT

What a lovely gesture, Carlisle gifting Edward with that pocket watch! I wish I could tell Edward to take a breath and know that all will turn out okay, but he probably wouldn't listen! See you next time!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2-LONG NIGHT

Loved the talk with Carlisle



Author's Response:

I really wanted to show the family as a family in the true sense of the word. Glad it came off that way.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 PRELUDE TO A WEDDING

Sounds pretty normal to me, just like any other well-off family planning a wedding. The women are totally involved and the guys are laying low, trying to stay out of trouble! See you next time!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I wanted the wedding to seem as normal as possible, job done. LOL

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 PRELUDE TO A WEDDING

Good start. Keep it up.



Author's Response:

I'll try. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 PRELUDE TO A WEDDING

This is very good so far.  Keep up the great work.  Look forward to future chapters.




Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I hope I don't disappoint.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 PRELUDE TO A WEDDING

Enjoyed seeing the prep from the boys perspective.



Author's Response:

I want some humor in the beginning to off set what was to come. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: banned2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 PRELUDE TO A WEDDING

So glad to see another EPOV version of BD.  I can't wait to read the story the way you see it!



Author's Response:

Thanks or the encouraging words. Hopefully I won't disappoint. 

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