Date: 17 Jun 2023 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 05 Nov 2020 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really he is just going to get rid of her house without asking her first. He really does not want his marriage to work. How does he know she even wants to keep it
Date: 04 Aug 2020 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hello, I love this story and I hope you will one day finish it. I know RL can pile crap upon crap on us. I love that you and others allow us to escape for a little while into another world. Thank you. Hope to see you someday soon.
Your fan
Elaine
Date: 16 Mar 2020 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
Kara, my dear friend, will you ever finish this story? I hope you will someday soon!
Date: 21 Jul 2019 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Please update and finish this story
Date: 18 Jun 2019 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
More, please.
Date: 30 Jan 2018 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love love love this story. I love mobward, I would have to say he is one of my favourite Edwards.
I look forward to an update l can’t wait for the conclusion of this story.
Well I’m off to read your other Mobwards.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
So yesterday i brought myself up to date and read this again. Of course hoping you will be updating this soon. So the housekeeper is dead and there must be another reason then just beeing a bit to nice, and Maggie too. who was certainly pushing it and being a bit to cosy with the housekeeper. I mean when you out to get to know someone, your not back before the person you ll send on a wild chase. The rat is someone close to them. 1 day to organize that stunt Japer? Afterall Alice suggested it. so imagen me with big blue eyes, pouting in the hope for an update. Pretty, please ! greetings Susanne Nossek
Date: 07 Dec 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
ack what a cliffy. I wouldn't have wanted E to leave without an escort either.
Date: 16 Sep 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Omg love your story can't wait to read more.
Date: 15 Sep 2017 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG! So who is waiting for Edward?! The Russians maybe? Or Volturi?
I went back and re-read through the whole story again starting with The Ties That Bind! I love this series and loved it even more the second time. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2017 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
Omgosh!!!!! Another cliff hanger.
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
How is it Edward's home didn't have any special security measures in place?
Emmett must know he needs to follow his brother for safety purposes. Why didn't Jasper bring Alice to the main house so the guys could be together to figure out their next move?
Date: 13 Sep 2017 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no who is it? And r they the ones that have bella hidden?
Date: 11 Sep 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
thank you for the update...I sure hope Carlise and Bella are alright...and who is the rat?
Date: 11 Sep 2017 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward will get her back and kill the ones that took her
Date: 11 Sep 2017 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 06 Jul 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is definitely a danger magnet.
Date: 01 Jul 2017 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
My mind is blank! That is freaky! Edward must be losing his mind looking for her!!
Date: 27 Jun 2017 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh wow! Poor Bella everything was going so good, she was so happy. Now she is stuck in this creepy place. Hopefully Edward is out looking for her and not thinking that she is dead.
Date: 13 Jun 2017 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 13 Jun 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Uggg Cliff hanger 😣😣😣
Date: 13 Jun 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
When will Bella ever learn to quit traipsing off by herself?!?
Date: 13 Jun 2017 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
That chapter was so creepy, It gave me the shivers.
Date: 13 Jun 2017 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh carnt wait for next chapter :)
Date: 13 Jun 2017 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
Omgosh!!!!! Poor Bella. Someone is playing mind games with her. Glad to have you back. Can't wait for the next update
Date: 12 Jun 2017 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Holy crap, you just stopped here? Please post soon
Date: 12 Jun 2017 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG! I bet Edward is freaking out looking for Bella. And Bella is a Cullen and she can do what she needs to do. I on the other hand would have lost my shit! LOL. That would be scary as hell to be locked in a pitch black room with body parts. I wonder who it was that said boo?
Date: 12 Jun 2017 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh man.....so good! Hoping you update soon.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
I think I would have fainted, too! Keep up the great work !
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
Holly SHIT OMFG someone is messing with her bad. Is it Maggie and the Rusain dudes? Where is Edward. So many questions I need answers stat lol.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG!! I hope you can update soon I want to know what's next
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
What a CLIFFIE!!!!! Hopefully, the next update will be soon! :)
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow. She's holding it together better than I expected. Reminds me of the scene in Silence of the Lambs when she is in the house and he has the infrred goggles on.
Date: 20 Apr 2017 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella needs to think before she acts. It is time to grow up. Edward has been so patient.
Date: 12 Apr 2017 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
He is so unsure of himself he is so silly
Date: 11 Apr 2017 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
thank you for the update...well done
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 08 Apr 2017 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Nice! Glad they talked it out!
Date: 07 Apr 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
Man the sex scene shaded to black...I'm a lemmon whore I know. I am glad they had sex and reconnectee, if I remember it's been awhile since they had sex...was the last time right before the Russian shoot out? No wonder edwards grumpy it'd been months since he had sex, granted that's his fault he left her.
Date: 07 Apr 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
It's about time one of them finally spoke up about their feels of increasing love within the confines of their unique situation.
Date: 07 Apr 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love it can't wait to read more ! Hope you feeling well. My prayers are with you
Date: 06 Apr 2017 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yay! Marcus is back for Bella to annoy because that's what she'll do even within ur trying Her confession to Edward was so sweet and heartfelt. Can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Apr 2017 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
Finally!! Marcus saved the day again!! I hope edward didn't beat him up!!
Date: 05 Apr 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Finally some one talked. Communication any kind is good.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
A handbook would be nice.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well, I think maybe Bella is growing up a little. She did not scream and yell when she got aggravated with Edward or Marcus. Love what she told and word in the shower. Can't wait to read more. Was so excited to get this update.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awe Edward just loves her so much but they are so stubborn lol
Date: 03 Apr 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 15
They really need to have some fun together!!
Date: 29 Mar 2017 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 28 Mar 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad that he took the time to come talk to her for a few. Sounds like she's learning about talking to him about what Alice wanted to do
Date: 27 Mar 2017 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
Perhaps enough people have died she has finally stopped being head strong and will listen to him.
Date: 26 Mar 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bless her heart, she just needs her Edward. Please update soon.
Date: 24 Mar 2017 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is trying. Bella is getting mixed messages from Esme. This is just a mess. There is no communication between the two which will cause all kinds of problems.
Date: 24 Mar 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Pleased to see an update to this story.
Some time being free to enjoy life will be good for them. But somehow, someway, trouble always enters the picture.
Date: 24 Mar 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Pleased to see an update to this story.
Some time being free to enjoy life will be good for them. But somehow, someway, trouble always enters the picture.
Date: 24 Mar 2017 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad Edward came up for Bella and stayed with her till she fell asleep. But she needs to be honest with her feelings.
Date: 24 Mar 2017 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
So glad to see an update. I absolutely love your stories!! XOXO
Date: 24 Mar 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
She is changing I think she is worring Edward now that she is not fighting anything. So happy to see your post.
Date: 21 Mar 2017 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 14
Looking forward to some updates ;) love this story so far.
Date: 08 Mar 2017 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm still not clear on why he killed Nora and Maggie...... why the housekeeper? I can undwrstand a lottle about Maggie...but still.
It would be nice to hear Edward's reasons.
Date: 23 Feb 2017 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella needs to put her big girl panties on before it gets Edward killed.
Date: 14 Feb 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad Esme was there for her. She really needs someone like her. I'm sure she will start getting better now and hopefully Edward will try to be the kind of husband she needs and start actually being there for her. Great chapter as always.
Date: 11 Feb 2017 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 08 Feb 2017 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, please post the next chapter soon
Date: 07 Feb 2017 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad Esme listened and let her get it all out
Date: 07 Feb 2017 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
She needs some lovin from edward & all will be alright!!
Date: 07 Feb 2017 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
She is coming around to this way of life so much better!
Date: 07 Feb 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Esme helped Bella put her big girl pantys on. I see a big change in the way Bella acts she will grow up
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella needs a mom now. I'm glad Esme is being one to her now.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
So excited to get this update. Loved reading your story the RUB. I am also enjoying reading the ALPHA. Can't wait for it to update again. So glad that Bella has Esme to give her motherly advice.
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
A little direct talk from her only mother figure should be just what Isabella needs to put here life on a direct path to being the wife a man like Edward needs.