Date: 30 Jan 2018 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love love love this story. I love mobward, I would have to say he is one of my favourite Edwards.
I look forward to an update l can’t wait for the conclusion of this story.
Well I’m off to read your other Mobwards.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
So yesterday i brought myself up to date and read this again. Of course hoping you will be updating this soon. So the housekeeper is dead and there must be another reason then just beeing a bit to nice, and Maggie too. who was certainly pushing it and being a bit to cosy with the housekeeper. I mean when you out to get to know someone, your not back before the person you ll send on a wild chase. The rat is someone close to them. 1 day to organize that stunt Japer? Afterall Alice suggested it. so imagen me with big blue eyes, pouting in the hope for an update. Pretty, please ! greetings Susanne Nossek
Date: 15 Sep 2017 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG! So who is waiting for Edward?! The Russians maybe? Or Volturi?
I went back and re-read through the whole story again starting with The Ties That Bind! I love this series and loved it even more the second time. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
How is it Edward's home didn't have any special security measures in place?
Emmett must know he needs to follow his brother for safety purposes. Why didn't Jasper bring Alice to the main house so the guys could be together to figure out their next move?
Date: 12 Jun 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG! I bet Edward is freaking out looking for Bella. And Bella is a Cullen and she can do what she needs to do. I on the other hand would have lost my shit! LOL. That would be scary as hell to be locked in a pitch black room with body parts. I wonder who it was that said boo?
Date: 07 Apr 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
Man the sex scene shaded to black...I'm a lemmon whore I know. I am glad they had sex and reconnectee, if I remember it's been awhile since they had sex...was the last time right before the Russian shoot out? No wonder edwards grumpy it'd been months since he had sex, granted that's his fault he left her.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well, I think maybe Bella is growing up a little. She did not scream and yell when she got aggravated with Edward or Marcus. Love what she told and word in the shower. Can't wait to read more. Was so excited to get this update.
Date: 14 Feb 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad Esme was there for her. She really needs someone like her. I'm sure she will start getting better now and hopefully Edward will try to be the kind of husband she needs and start actually being there for her. Great chapter as always.
Date: 17 Oct 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Nora, unfortunately ended up as collateral damage. Maggie put her nose where it didn't belong. Interesting that Edward felt the need to compensate her father for the loss.
Maybe Edward finally realized the only constant Bella felt she still had was Marcus. It's about time they begin to work together as the powerful couple they really are.
Date: 13 Oct 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
I wonder what Edward did to compensate Maggie's father for her life? Just curious. Everyone that made Bella feel uncomfortable was eliminated! I hope they will be happy in Detroit.
Thanks for writing,
Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can't believe he shot him in front of her. They really need to sit down and talk and he actually needs to be home more. They don't have a real marriage and they need to be able to build up to one. Can't wait to see the next chapter.