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Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh wow! Poor Bella everything was going so good, she was so happy. Now she is stuck in this creepy place. Hopefully Edward is out looking for her and not thinking that she is dead. 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2017 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

OMG WHO IS IT ? 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: starlight 12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

Uggg Cliff hanger 😣😣😣

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

When will Bella ever learn to quit traipsing off by herself?!? 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 17

That chapter was so creepy, It gave me the shivers.

Reviewer: rosesblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh carnt wait for next chapter :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 17

Omgosh!!!!! Poor Bella.  Someone is playing mind games with her. Glad to have you back. Can't wait for the next update 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

Holy crap, you just stopped here? Please post soon

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG!  I bet Edward is freaking out looking for Bella.  And Bella is a Cullen and she can do what she needs to do. I on the other hand would have lost my shit!  LOL. That would be scary as hell to be locked in a pitch black room with body parts.  I wonder who it was that said boo?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh man.....so good!  Hoping you update soon.  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

I  think  I  would  have  fainted, too!  Keep  up  the  great  work ! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 17

yikes

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

Holly SHIT OMFG someone is messing with her bad. Is it Maggie and the Rusain dudes?  Where is Edward.  So many questions I need answers stat lol.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG!! I hope you can update soon I want to know what's next

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 17

 What a CLIFFIE!!!!! Hopefully, the next update will be soon! :)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow.  She's holding it together better than I expected.   Reminds me of the scene in Silence of the Lambs when she is in the house and he has the infrred goggles on.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

Bella needs to think before she acts. It is time to grow up.  Edward has been so patient.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 16

He is so unsure of himself he is so silly

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

thank you for the update...well done

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can't wait for more ’

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2017 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

 Nice! Glad they talked it out! 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

Man the sex scene shaded to black...I'm a lemmon whore I know. I am glad they had sex and reconnectee, if I remember it's been awhile since they had sex...was the last time right before the Russian shoot out? No wonder edwards grumpy it'd been months since he had sex, granted that's his fault he left her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

It's about time one of them finally spoke up about their feels of increasing love within the confines of their unique situation.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love it can't wait to read more ! Hope you feeling well. My prayers are with you 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

Yay!  Marcus is back for Bella to annoy because that's what she'll do even within ur trying   Her confession to Edward was so sweet and heartfelt. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 16

Finally!! Marcus saved the day again!!  I hope edward didn't beat him up!!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 16

Finally some one talked.  Communication any kind is good.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

A handbook would be nice. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 16

Well, I think maybe Bella is growing up a little.  She did not scream and yell when she got aggravated with Edward or Marcus. Love what she told and word in the shower. Can't wait to read more. Was so excited to get this update.

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 16

Finally!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

good

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

Awe Edward just loves her so much but they are so stubborn lol

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 15

They really need to have some fun together!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2017 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more ’

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad that he took the time to come talk to her for a few.  Sounds like she's learning about talking to him about what Alice wanted to do

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 15

Perhaps enough people have died she has finally stopped being head strong and will listen to him.

Reviewer: mollyf2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bless her heart, she just needs her Edward. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

Edward is trying. Bella is getting mixed messages from Esme. This is just a mess. There is no communication between the two which will cause all kinds of problems.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Pleased to see an update to this story.
Some time being free to enjoy life will be good for them. But somehow, someway, trouble always enters the picture.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Pleased to see an update to this story.
Some time being free to enjoy life will be good for them. But somehow, someway, trouble always enters the picture.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad Edward came up for Bella and stayed with her till she fell asleep.  But she needs to be honest with her feelings.  

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

good

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 15

So glad to see an update. I absolutely love your stories!! XOXO 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

She is changing I think she is worring Edward now that she is not fighting anything.  So happy to see your post.

Reviewer: MissEmJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 14

Looking forward to some updates ;) love this story so far.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 14

I'm still not clear on why he killed Nora and Maggie...... why the housekeeper? I can undwrstand a lottle about Maggie...but still.

It would be nice to hear Edward's reasons.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella needs to put her big girl panties on before it gets Edward killed.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

Glad Esme was there for her. She really needs someone like her. I'm sure she will start getting better now and hopefully Edward will try to be the kind of husband she needs and start actually being there for her. Great chapter as always.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, please post the next chapter soon

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

Glad Esme listened and let her get it all out

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

She needs some lovin from edward & all will be alright!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 13

She is coming around to this way of life so much better!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

Esme helped Bella put her big girl pantys on. I see a big change in the way Bella acts she will grow up

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella needs a mom now. I'm glad Esme is being one to her now.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

So excited to get this update.  Loved reading your story the RUB. I am also enjoying reading the ALPHA. Can't wait for it to update again. So glad that Bella has Esme to give her motherly advice.  

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

good

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 14

A little direct talk from her only mother figure should be just what Isabella needs to put here life on a direct path to being the wife a man like Edward needs.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

Nora, unfortunately ended up as collateral damage. Maggie put her nose where it didn't belong. Interesting that Edward felt the need to compensate her father for the loss.
Maybe Edward finally realized the only constant Bella felt she still had was Marcus. It's about time they begin to work together as the powerful couple they really are.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 13

So glad your back ! Love reading your story.Can not wait to read more your a wonderful writer!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2016 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 13

Well I'm not surprised that Edward killed Liam and Maggie.  Not quite sure why he killed Nora, unless he found out something about her.  Glad that Marcus is coming back, he seems to get these 2 to talk.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

FINALLY! !!!! She's accepting the fact that she is a "mob wife" and not just any mob wife  "EDWARD THE DON'S MOB WIFE"  I look forward to seeing  Bella come out of her shell and kick some ass. READ YOU SOON 💖 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

Hooray Marcus is getting out!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

I can not believe that Edward just up and killed those people. I was hoping that deep down in his heart that he really was not that cruel to just kill without proof. 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

Bon chapitre!

J'espère qu'ils vont être un peu plus heureux.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 13

Just maybe she is growing up.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

I wonder what Edward did to compensate Maggie's father for her life? Just curious. Everyone that made Bella feel uncomfortable was eliminated! I hope they will be happy in Detroit.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wonder if E will remain seemingly calm with her or he's just a volcano waiting to burst

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wow lot of shit going down.  Why was Bruno wanting to go after one of the cleaners I say alway trust your dog.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 13

wow, got rid of nora and maggie

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

It's been ***2 months since Last Update*** Could U Please Update this intriging & captivating Story again Please!!

Reviewer: Belighted Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

Holy.... What just happened? I'm surprised Bella is going w her gut for once. I feel bad for Liam. Can't help it. Great chapter!

Annie B

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

OMG , Loved this Chapter ,Can not wait to read more Love Love it great writing wonderful story !

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

Damn! Emotionally, I'm on the fence with outright killing Liam. Altho, I know there was no other way. This is the mafia & he was acting weird:)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

She took that well! Now if edward can forgive her for disobeying! 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 12

It is really a terrible world!

Fortunately Bella is going to try to hold her place correctly.

Thank you. Kisses.

Reviewer: jaspee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 12

damn that was intense , liam had it coming. but Edward is right Bella should have gone to him. but she still young. great chapter.

Reviewer: chritbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story ever going see some kind happiness ? 

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 12

Can't believe he shot him in front of her. They really need to sit down and talk and he actually needs to be home more. They don't have a real marriage and they need to be able to build up to one. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

Well, that takes care of the Liam issue.
Now, Edward has to find a way to finally connect with his wife.

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

Glad to see an update! Been missing this! Can't wait for more! ;) 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

So glad Edward took care of Liam. also glad Marcus called Edward & told him what was going on. But Bella was going to talk to him she just didn't get the chance. I hope he calms down enough to understand why she went to Marcus. She wants to talk to him but he needs to be around. They both are frustrating. Love the story. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

He also touched her in the car on the way back.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

yikes

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

One down one more to go. Up next the house keeper. Edward and Bella needs to talk (not shout) and lay everything on the table. Please let what Marcus did earn him some brownie points with Edward and released from prison. He needs to get back to watching out for Bella and sniffing out the rats in the family.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

Had to happen as he obviously didn't have he respect he should have for Edward and it would have gotten worse with Bella.  Please update soon.

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

Ohhhh mu god!!!!!####!###!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wow

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

OMGOSH!!!!!!  I can't believe that he just shot him like that and especially in front of Bella.  I would be screaming my head off. No, I probably would have fainted.  

Reviewer: JMART664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 12

Longer chaps! Please!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 12

Bella did the right thing.  I didnt trust Liam he was touching her way to much and he knew better.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

I didn't think he would kill someone right in front of her. I wonder what he will do to her now? Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

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