Date: 12 Jun 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG! I bet Edward is freaking out looking for Bella. And Bella is a Cullen and she can do what she needs to do. I on the other hand would have lost my shit! LOL. That would be scary as hell to be locked in a pitch black room with body parts. I wonder who it was that said boo?
Date: 07 Apr 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
Man the sex scene shaded to black...I'm a lemmon whore I know. I am glad they had sex and reconnectee, if I remember it's been awhile since they had sex...was the last time right before the Russian shoot out? No wonder edwards grumpy it'd been months since he had sex, granted that's his fault he left her.
Date: 05 Apr 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well, I think maybe Bella is growing up a little. She did not scream and yell when she got aggravated with Edward or Marcus. Love what she told and word in the shower. Can't wait to read more. Was so excited to get this update.
Date: 14 Feb 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad Esme was there for her. She really needs someone like her. I'm sure she will start getting better now and hopefully Edward will try to be the kind of husband she needs and start actually being there for her. Great chapter as always.
Date: 17 Oct 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Nora, unfortunately ended up as collateral damage. Maggie put her nose where it didn't belong. Interesting that Edward felt the need to compensate her father for the loss.
Maybe Edward finally realized the only constant Bella felt she still had was Marcus. It's about time they begin to work together as the powerful couple they really are.
Date: 13 Oct 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
I wonder what Edward did to compensate Maggie's father for her life? Just curious. Everyone that made Bella feel uncomfortable was eliminated! I hope they will be happy in Detroit.
Thanks for writing,
Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can't believe he shot him in front of her. They really need to sit down and talk and he actually needs to be home more. They don't have a real marriage and they need to be able to build up to one. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
So glad Edward took care of Liam. also glad Marcus called Edward & told him what was going on. But Bella was going to talk to him she just didn't get the chance. I hope he calms down enough to understand why she went to Marcus. She wants to talk to him but he needs to be around. They both are frustrating. Love the story.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
One down one more to go. Up next the house keeper. Edward and Bella needs to talk (not shout) and lay everything on the table. Please let what Marcus did earn him some brownie points with Edward and released from prison. He needs to get back to watching out for Bella and sniffing out the rats in the family.