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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 16 Jun 2023 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Vampirelady13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2020 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really he is just going to get rid of her house without asking her first. He really does not want his marriage to work. How does he know she even wants to keep it

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2020 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

Hello, I love this story and I hope you will one day finish it. I know RL can pile crap upon crap on us. I love that you and others allow us to escape for a little while into another world. Thank you. Hope to see you someday soon.

Your fan

Elaine

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2020 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 18

Kara, my dear friend, will you ever finish this story? I hope you will someday soon!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2019 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 18

Please update and finish this story 

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2019 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 18

More, please.

Reviewer: PuepleRain27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 18

Love love love this story. I love mobward, I would have to say he is one of my favourite Edwards.

 I look forward to an update l can’t wait for the conclusion of this story.

Well I’m off to read your other Mobwards.

Reviewer: hallosummer Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

So yesterday i brought myself up to date and read this again. Of course hoping you will be updating this soon. So the housekeeper is dead and there must be another reason then just beeing a bit to nice, and Maggie too. who was certainly pushing it and being a bit to cosy with the housekeeper. I mean when you out to get to know someone, your not back before the person you ll send on a wild chase. The rat is someone close to them. 1 day to organize that stunt Japer? Afterall Alice suggested it. so imagen me with big blue eyes, pouting in the hope for an update. Pretty, please ! greetings Susanne Nossek

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18

ack what a cliffy.   I wouldn't have wanted E to leave without an escort either.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 18

Omg love your story can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG!  So who is waiting for Edward?!  The Russians maybe?  Or Volturi?  

I went back and re-read through the whole story again starting with The Ties That Bind!  I love this series and loved it even more the second time.  Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2017 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

Omgosh!!!!! Another cliff hanger. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

How is it Edward's home didn't have any special security measures in place?
Emmett must know he needs to follow his brother for safety purposes. Why didn't Jasper bring Alice to the main house so the guys could be together to figure out their next move?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh no who is it? And r they the ones that have bella hidden?

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 18

thank you for the update...I sure hope Carlise and Bella are alright...and who is the rat?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 18

Edward will get her back and kill the ones that took her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 18

can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 17

Bella is definitely a danger magnet.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2017 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 17

My mind is blank!  That is freaky! Edward must be losing his mind looking for her!!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh wow! Poor Bella everything was going so good, she was so happy. Now she is stuck in this creepy place. Hopefully Edward is out looking for her and not thinking that she is dead. 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

OMG WHO IS IT ? 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it can't wait for more 💙 

Reviewer: starlight 12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

Uggg Cliff hanger 😣😣😣

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

When will Bella ever learn to quit traipsing off by herself?!? 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 17

That chapter was so creepy, It gave me the shivers.

Reviewer: rosesblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh carnt wait for next chapter :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 17

Omgosh!!!!! Poor Bella.  Someone is playing mind games with her. Glad to have you back. Can't wait for the next update 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

Holy crap, you just stopped here? Please post soon

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG!  I bet Edward is freaking out looking for Bella.  And Bella is a Cullen and she can do what she needs to do. I on the other hand would have lost my shit!  LOL. That would be scary as hell to be locked in a pitch black room with body parts.  I wonder who it was that said boo?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh man.....so good!  Hoping you update soon.  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

I  think  I  would  have  fainted, too!  Keep  up  the  great  work ! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 17

yikes

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

Holly SHIT OMFG someone is messing with her bad. Is it Maggie and the Rusain dudes?  Where is Edward.  So many questions I need answers stat lol.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG!! I hope you can update soon I want to know what's next

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 17

 What a CLIFFIE!!!!! Hopefully, the next update will be soon! :)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow.  She's holding it together better than I expected.   Reminds me of the scene in Silence of the Lambs when she is in the house and he has the infrred goggles on.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2017 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

Bella needs to think before she acts. It is time to grow up.  Edward has been so patient.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 16

He is so unsure of himself he is so silly

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

thank you for the update...well done

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can't wait for more 💙

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2017 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

 Nice! Glad they talked it out! 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

Man the sex scene shaded to black...I'm a lemmon whore I know. I am glad they had sex and reconnectee, if I remember it's been awhile since they had sex...was the last time right before the Russian shoot out? No wonder edwards grumpy it'd been months since he had sex, granted that's his fault he left her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

It's about time one of them finally spoke up about their feels of increasing love within the confines of their unique situation.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love it can't wait to read more ! Hope you feeling well. My prayers are with you 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

Yay!  Marcus is back for Bella to annoy because that's what she'll do even within ur trying   Her confession to Edward was so sweet and heartfelt. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 16

Finally!! Marcus saved the day again!!  I hope edward didn't beat him up!!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 16

Finally some one talked.  Communication any kind is good.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

A handbook would be nice. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 16

Well, I think maybe Bella is growing up a little.  She did not scream and yell when she got aggravated with Edward or Marcus. Love what she told and word in the shower. Can't wait to read more. Was so excited to get this update.

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 16

Finally!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

good

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

Awe Edward just loves her so much but they are so stubborn lol

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 15

They really need to have some fun together!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2017 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more 💙

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad that he took the time to come talk to her for a few.  Sounds like she's learning about talking to him about what Alice wanted to do

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 15

Perhaps enough people have died she has finally stopped being head strong and will listen to him.

Reviewer: mollyf2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bless her heart, she just needs her Edward. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

Edward is trying. Bella is getting mixed messages from Esme. This is just a mess. There is no communication between the two which will cause all kinds of problems.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Pleased to see an update to this story.
Some time being free to enjoy life will be good for them. But somehow, someway, trouble always enters the picture.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Pleased to see an update to this story.
Some time being free to enjoy life will be good for them. But somehow, someway, trouble always enters the picture.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad Edward came up for Bella and stayed with her till she fell asleep.  But she needs to be honest with her feelings.  

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

good

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 15

So glad to see an update. I absolutely love your stories!! XOXO 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

She is changing I think she is worring Edward now that she is not fighting anything.  So happy to see your post.

Reviewer: MissEmJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 14

Looking forward to some updates ;) love this story so far.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2017 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 14

I'm still not clear on why he killed Nora and Maggie...... why the housekeeper? I can undwrstand a lottle about Maggie...but still.

It would be nice to hear Edward's reasons.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2017 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella needs to put her big girl panties on before it gets Edward killed.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

Glad Esme was there for her. She really needs someone like her. I'm sure she will start getting better now and hopefully Edward will try to be the kind of husband she needs and start actually being there for her. Great chapter as always.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, please post the next chapter soon

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

Glad Esme listened and let her get it all out

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

She needs some lovin from edward & all will be alright!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 13

She is coming around to this way of life so much better!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

Esme helped Bella put her big girl pantys on. I see a big change in the way Bella acts she will grow up

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella needs a mom now. I'm glad Esme is being one to her now.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

So excited to get this update.  Loved reading your story the RUB. I am also enjoying reading the ALPHA. Can't wait for it to update again. So glad that Bella has Esme to give her motherly advice.  

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

good

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 14

A little direct talk from her only mother figure should be just what Isabella needs to put here life on a direct path to being the wife a man like Edward needs.

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