[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Nora, unfortunately ended up as collateral damage. Maggie put her nose where it didn't belong. Interesting that Edward felt the need to compensate her father for the loss.
Maybe Edward finally realized the only constant Bella felt she still had was Marcus. It's about time they begin to work together as the powerful couple they really are.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2016 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
So glad your back ! Love reading your story.Can not wait to read more your a wonderful writer!
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2016 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well I'm not surprised that Edward killed Liam and Maggie. Not quite sure why he killed Nora, unless he found out something about her. Glad that Marcus is coming back, he seems to get these 2 to talk.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2016 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
FINALLY! !!!! She's accepting the fact that she is a "mob wife" and not just any mob wife "EDWARD THE DON'S MOB WIFE" I look forward to seeing Bella come out of her shell and kick some ass. READ YOU SOON 💖
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2016 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
Hooray Marcus is getting out!!
Date: 14 Oct 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 13 Oct 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
I can not believe that Edward just up and killed those people. I was hoping that deep down in his heart that he really was not that cruel to just kill without proof.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2016 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bon chapitre!
J'espère qu'ils vont être un peu plus heureux.
Date: 13 Oct 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
Just maybe she is growing up.
Date: 13 Oct 2016 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
I wonder what Edward did to compensate Maggie's father for her life? Just curious. Everyone that made Bella feel uncomfortable was eliminated! I hope they will be happy in Detroit.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 13 Oct 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wonder if E will remain seemingly calm with her or he's just a volcano waiting to burst
Date: 13 Oct 2016 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow lot of shit going down. Why was Bruno wanting to go after one of the cleaners I say alway trust your dog.
Date: 13 Oct 2016 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow, got rid of nora and maggie
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
It's been ***2 months since Last Update*** Could U Please Update this intriging & captivating Story again Please!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
Holy.... What just happened? I'm surprised Bella is going w her gut for once. I feel bad for Liam. Can't help it. Great chapter!
Annie B
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2016 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG , Loved this Chapter ,Can not wait to read more Love Love it great writing wonderful story !
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn! Emotionally, I'm on the fence with outright killing Liam. Altho, I know there was no other way. This is the mafia & he was acting weird:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
She took that well! Now if edward can forgive her for disobeying!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
It is really a terrible world!
Fortunately Bella is going to try to hold her place correctly.
Thank you. Kisses.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
damn that was intense , liam had it coming. but Edward is right Bella should have gone to him. but she still young. great chapter.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story ever going see some kind happiness ?
Date: 22 Jul 2016 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can't believe he shot him in front of her. They really need to sit down and talk and he actually needs to be home more. They don't have a real marriage and they need to be able to build up to one. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well, that takes care of the Liam issue.
Now, Edward has to find a way to finally connect with his wife.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
Glad to see an update! Been missing this! Can't wait for more! ;)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
So glad Edward took care of Liam. also glad Marcus called Edward & told him what was going on. But Bella was going to talk to him she just didn't get the chance. I hope he calms down enough to understand why she went to Marcus. She wants to talk to him but he needs to be around. They both are frustrating. Love the story.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
He also touched her in the car on the way back.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
One down one more to go. Up next the house keeper. Edward and Bella needs to talk (not shout) and lay everything on the table. Please let what Marcus did earn him some brownie points with Edward and released from prison. He needs to get back to watching out for Bella and sniffing out the rats in the family.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Had to happen as he obviously didn't have he respect he should have for Edward and it would have gotten worse with Bella. Please update soon.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ohhhh mu god!!!!!####!###!
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMGOSH!!!!!! I can't believe that he just shot him like that and especially in front of Bella. I would be screaming my head off. No, I probably would have fainted.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
Longer chaps! Please!
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella did the right thing. I didnt trust Liam he was touching her way to much and he knew better.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
I didn't think he would kill someone right in front of her. I wonder what he will do to her now? Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
I just hope that Edward doesn't put Bella to clean the mess he left in the house.
just wanna thank you for all the updates
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
Can't blame E in this case. Liam def overstepped.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella needs to grow up and be honest with Edward. Her crap is getting old. Shouldn't she be in school or something.
Date: 15 Jul 2016 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 12 Jul 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am glad she at least talked to him. She and Edward need to talk to each other. THen again in this story she is childiish. :-( not my favorite Bella I must say.
Date: 10 Jul 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella can be honest with Marcus but nit her husband. That's not right. I am glad that she at least told Marcus.
Date: 10 Jul 2016 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
She is one stupid gigt!! She needs to grow up and fast!
Date: 08 Jul 2016 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
Too short but thanks for the update. READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 07 Jul 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my goodness she is a glutton at making bad decisions! Thank you for this update! It was a nice surprise!!
Date: 07 Jul 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
More! Please more!
Date: 07 Jul 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
Not like Edward will actually talk to he though......but Marcus is right. Liam is not to be trusted.
Date: 07 Jul 2016 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh no poor Bella, I hope Liam doesn't try anything else. I also hope she has the guts to tell Edward about her visiting Marcus and concerns regarding Liam. Maybe Edward can get Marcus out of jail? So glad you've managed to update but please update soon x
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
thank you for the update...well done...Bella has a hard head...what is Edward going to do with her...Liam better watch his back..I think Marcus will be out before we know it and laim will be sleeping with the fishes...lol...until you post again
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh boy, Isabella is in for another round of angry ranting from Edward. Though it will be well deserved.
Marcus will call Edward anyway. His job to keep the boss informed. Is Marcus on the inside for other nefarious reasons?
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for this! I've been missing it! Hope to read more soon! 😊
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh you know that Marcus is going to call Edward, right away. Telling him everything that Bella just told him. For one reason to save Bella from herself.
Bella & Edward need to start communicating again, that was there problem in the beginning & its there problem once again.
So glad your back. Hope things are going better for you. Have a good trip.
Date: 07 Jul 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
She needs Marcus out and Marcus is right she needs to tell Edward all if she can before something happens.
Date: 22 Jun 2016 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really enjoy your stories...can't wait for more 😀
Date: 11 Jun 2016 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 11 Jun 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMGosh, now I don't trust anyone around Bella but Edward. Maggie is up to something. Now I think Nora is sedating the dog. Liamy has feelings for Bella that he shouldn't have.
Date: 11 Jun 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
I don't blame Bella for going to the club. I understand why Edward is mad. I want to know what Maggie's deal is. What is she up to?
Date: 10 Jun 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella please use your brain and not be a lemming. Edward has more patience with her than she deserves.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2016 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
I may want to slap Bella around but it does seem like there's no one she can trust. Something's 'off' with both Maggie & Liam.
Date: 07 Jun 2016 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow!!! Bella is gonna make yet another mistake to infuriate Edward. Bella is coming off as a Bimbo Bella.....why? I think it's time for Bella to show everyone she is not to be f***ked with. READ YOU SOON🎀
Date: 07 Jun 2016 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
hmm Liam is getting a little too friendly. Maggie is trouble. Bella needs a real friend and/or confidante
Date: 06 Jun 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh no Bella always go with your gut. Liam is going to be trouble I just know it.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Go with your gut bella! He shouldn't have toughed you or even been in your bedroom. He is a deadman if edward finds out & we all know he will!
Date: 06 Jun 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad that she sent Maggie away. Drama that you do not need.
Date: 06 Jun 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think trusting Liam is a bad idea. At least she will be on guard since she has a bad feeling about him. Maybe Bella will start to make better decisions. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Your first reaction is usually the right one. Bella needs to start trusting her instincts & stay far away from that Maggie, as well as Liam. She needs to start telling Edward things & trust him. If she feels uneasy about Liam, then there's probably a good reason. And I don't think Liam should've put his hands on Bella in Maggie's defence. Touching the boss's lady that way in the mafia, & then going into her room is a BIG no-no! If she wanted to pull that bitch's hair & throw her out, the that's her prerogative. Unless Bella's being hurt, he should've never intervened. Same goes for Nora too. And WHY was Maggie sitting in Bella's house without her there? Both Nora & Liam need a stern talking to! I don't trust Nora either. The sweet little old lady act only goes so far. I don't like that she's making Bella's dog practically useless. It sounds pretty intentional. Edward needs to set some examples, starting with Liam & Nora.
Can't wait for more! 😊
Date: 06 Jun 2016 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm liking that they are starting to think as a team.
Date: 06 Jun 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
She should go with her feelings. Edward loves her and Maggie is up to something no good
Date: 06 Jun 2016 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
she should have told e
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2016 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
No Bella, your instincts are very much guiding you. Listen closely.
There is something about Liam's and Maggie's behavior that is not setting right.
Will Edward have a someone check out who the two guys were from the mall?
Is it possible Maggie already knows them and was trying to get Bella mixed up with them?
How old is Liam? And did he have designs on Bella before Charlie arranged her marriage to Edward?
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2016 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
oh she should tell him. She should go with her gut feeling. At least they have started mending fences.
Date: 05 Jun 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
Uh oh. Our Bella has a lot of growing up to do.
Date: 05 Jun 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
This Maggie is going to be trouble.
Date: 04 Jun 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
They went completely the opposite direction in their relationship. I was expecting her to play her role as a badass Mafia wife.
Date: 04 Jun 2016 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
secrets and Maggie is someone to stay away from. I know she needs friends but not her.
Date: 04 Jun 2016 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward needs to try a little harder to relate to where she is coming from,
Date: 04 Jun 2016 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love all of your stories. My problem with this chap is that it was to short and to long between updates! LOVE YA
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
I really don't trust Maggie. Edward & Bella need to talk & spend time together. They need to heal and work through the mistakes.
Date: 03 Jun 2016 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
Did you change the name of this story?
Bella just keeps sticking her foot in it doesn't she? She is learning though. I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 03 Jun 2016 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for the update. Bella cant help it she is young and Maggie is trying to cause shit I think.
Date: 03 Jun 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
E doesn't make it easy to trust him or his word. JMHO. Glad Liam is looking out for her though
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2016 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
That might not be a goid thing that he is keeping secrets. I knew maggie was trouble!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2016 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
What is Maggie's game. Why is she toying with Isabella's head regarding her marriage?
Edward may be a mob boss but her has a very young wife that is continuing to fall apart emotionally.
Taking her back to New York did not reinstate her life and friends as it was before.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2016 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
Like I said before, I think Maggie is BAD news. E&B still aren't handling things right. :( And I'm not too sure I trust Liam's intentions either. I hope he gives B her gun back.
Can't wait for more! ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow the cat is out of the bag now. I wonder what he will do when he finds out she knows. O who is the three guys. I am like bella not a good idea to be with them.
Date: 24 May 2016 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh crap please don't let Edward be a cheater I honestly don't think Bella could handle another person letting her down. Oh I hope she gives him hell for not telling her about the place too. Glad your back.
Date: 23 May 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
Bella can be so stupid, but at least she realized that those guys were no good. She should go home and check on Bruno.
Date: 23 May 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Maybe Bella needs to go to school. She needs something to occupy her time. Edward has to work. Bella really should know this fact.
Date: 23 May 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
She is so inconsiderate. Edward has been working and busy. He is not perfect, but who would want to hang out with such a brat. She chose to shoot her family. He didn't want her to get involved.
Date: 23 May 2016 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is such a brat and doesn't deserve Edward.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella really needs to dump Maggie. Maggie's either just an idiot or something's going on like with Bella's sister. Glad that, at least for a little while, Bella's using her brain cells::))