Date: 27 Jul 2016 1:35 AM Title: Prologue
Freaking terrific start!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2016 6:03 AM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
in love with this..awesome!!
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2016 6:16 PM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
I AM SO SORRY FOR THE LOSS OF YOUR HUSBAND, BUT VERY GRATEFUL THAT YOU ARE WRITING AGAIN.
I HOPE IT WON'T BE TOO FAR IN THE FUTURE THAT "TABOO" WILL BE UPDATED.
THIS IS THE SECOND TIME I HAVE READ THIS STORY. IT IS EVEN BETTER THE SECOND TIME! PATTY
Date: 22 May 2016 10:40 PM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Great writing and I loved the story. So glad Bella got to be the one to kill Officer Mark.
Date: 16 May 2016 2:49 PM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
good
Date: 16 May 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
good
Date: 15 May 2016 3:45 PM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Great ending. Bella keeps Edward on his toes.
Date: 12 May 2016 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 25 Isabella vs. Daddy C and Daddy C
good
Date: 12 May 2016 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 24 He said vs. She said
good
Date: 12 May 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 23 The people of Oregon vs. Isabella Marie Swan
good
Date: 12 May 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 22 Edward’s heart vs. Edwards head
good
Date: 06 May 2016 4:06 AM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Loved it!
Date: 06 May 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 24 He said vs. She said
Atta girl!
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2016 2:25 PM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
You did change this a some. It scared me on this last chapter.
Date: 03 May 2016 12:19 AM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Okay, so, I LOVE THIS STORY!! You had me nervous quite a few times during this story! ;) I am not sure of the epi....I have mixed feelings. I am glad that they got their HEA...I am unsure of who it was she snuck off to meet. Who would be smacking her ass? He's says those awful things to her and then after three days she proposes...o.O Anyway, I just thought it was an odd way to end it all. I really did enjoy the story! Thanks for sharing it!
Date: 30 Apr 2016 9:10 PM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
I enjoyed this fiction very much. It's a beautiful story and you know how to share the feelings. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
Date: 30 Apr 2016 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
Thats a different position to lose your vcard in....i like it
Author's Response:
I did too!!!laughs....thanks!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 23 The people of Oregon vs. Isabella Marie Swan
Umm it skips chapter 23 it goes from chapter 22 then to this chapter,24......what happens after edward has the gun to his head?
Author's Response:
wow you are the only one that caught that! It was totally my error! you read it correctly there is no other chapter i am so so sorry about that!! But thank you!!!
As always I love your reviews!
Date: 30 Apr 2016 5:19 AM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 1:42 AM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Whew, that was frustrating in the beginning of the chapter. Secrets increase insecurities. Silence turns to anger.
It's a good thing they were destined to figure out the importance of a true hearts devotion.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:55 PM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Thank you x love your stories
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:35 PM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
That was awesome!! I loved all of it, but this was the perfect icing on the cake!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 6:54 PM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
You had me going there for about a minute! I thought, "no, she wouldn't", and no, you didn't!! Perfect ending! I'm keeping this one....
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2016 4:56 PM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Hehe hehe I loved it I knew she wouldn't hurt Edward like that. it was awesome thank you
Date: 29 Apr 2016 2:33 PM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Perfect ending
Date: 29 Apr 2016 11:23 AM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Loved this fic! Great ending!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 10:46 AM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Love love loved this story! Thanks for sharing!!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 8:45 AM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
Thank you
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:16 AM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
I loved it thanks so much
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2016 6:40 AM Title: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent
:):)
Date: 29 Apr 2016 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
What a great way to end. I'd love to see that house, it sounds amazing!
Author's Response:
i posted it in my group sweetie...and thank you so much for all your awesome reviews! hugs!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
Holy snap that was awesome Mark is dead her mom is dead and Bella is free and with Edward I loved it I am only sad that Esme got shoot
Date: 28 Apr 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 25 Isabella vs. Daddy C and Daddy C
two Daddy C's had me cracking up
Date: 28 Apr 2016 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
Loved it 😍
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 21 Bella’s virginity vs. Edward’s primal urges
Bella is so broken :(
And that would kind of be a kick to the gut hearing that someone only wants to sleep with you to hurt someone else.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
You managed to get some intense foreplay in as they explored their deep desires for one another. Then topped it off with a devirgining in their new home. I'd say your stories now complete.
I'm going to imagine that Isabella completed all her credits required to graduate and the school board gave her the diploma to prove it. She can now go to university if she desires.
Thanks for the ride.
Author's Response:
i got one more for ya!! promise!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
Loved it!!!!d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: 28 Apr 2016 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
Thank you for your wonderful writing, look forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 25 Isabella vs. Daddy C and Daddy C
:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 24 He said vs. She said
:)
Date: 28 Apr 2016 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
How very sweet her happy ending loved it
Date: 28 Apr 2016 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
I don't ever remember reading a Virginiity taken from behind!
so hot. Great story
thank you
Date: 28 Apr 2016 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 25 Isabella vs. Daddy C and Daddy C
So happy for them what a homecoming ;)
Date: 28 Apr 2016 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 24 He said vs. She said
Love it thanks
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence
Excellent story, as usual. Thanks lady!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 25 Isabella vs. Daddy C and Daddy C
you'd better be just kidding!! LOL! He's checking to see if she's wearing panties, right? You are evil for making us wait!
Author's Response:
laughs...I am editing as fast as I can!!! i needed to eat food ! ♥
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 25 Isabella vs. Daddy C and Daddy C
Edward has more appreciation and respect for his woman than to de-flower her in a limousine.
Does Edward stay in his position of probation officer?
I can't remember, did Bella graduate?
Author's Response:
yes he does....lol...and yes he could retain his position if he wants to....she didn't graduate from high school....
Date: 28 Apr 2016 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 24 He said vs. She said
yes! I'm loving the new ending, but very much need those lovely lemons!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 24 He said vs. She said
Of course you would find a way to allow Bella the final say in the death of her tormentor. Well played.
This has been quite the journey for Isabella.
To stand back and let more lies cover up the strange reality of the case must have been excruciating for Edward. But Esme needed him. He almost lost his mother as well.
Will Charlie and Bella return to their little town or will they move away from the pain and sadness? Possibly closer to the Cullens.......
Date: 28 Apr 2016 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 24 He said vs. She said
Thank you
Date: 28 Apr 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 23 The people of Oregon vs. Isabella Marie Swan
not guilty! yay! yes, missy, you certainly do have a reputation to uphold...!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 23 The people of Oregon vs. Isabella Marie Swan
You have lead us to believe that Edward is presumed dead..........but that's not your standard Modus Operandi.........
Details are missing........
At this point, who cares about sex. Where is our hero Edward?
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 23 The people of Oregon vs. Isabella Marie Swan
So sad..... Even though it was a good verdict
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 22 Edward’s heart vs. Edwards head
That's not good....
Date: 27 Apr 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 22 Edward’s heart vs. Edwards head
Omg how did he find them
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 22 Edward’s heart vs. Edwards head
What happened to Edward's parents? Are they okay?
I'm presuming Mark found their location and entered the house.
Date: 27 Apr 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 22 Edward’s heart vs. Edwards head
oh no! It's good you're posting multiple chapters today so I won't have to wait to see what happens! I applaud and encourage your burst of creativity, what with all these new chapters we're getting!
Author's Response:
awww thank you hunni!!!!!!!! hugs you hard!!!
Date: 27 Apr 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 21 Bella’s virginity vs. Edward’s primal urges
yeah, you did! I had marked this complete. Is there more? I like this way better than the old way.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 21 Bella’s virginity vs. Edward’s primal urges
Is this complete?
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 21 Bella’s virginity vs. Edward’s primal urges
The outcome of their heated encounter seems fitting for their complicated circumstances. Bella's head and heart are in two very different places. She would always wonder if Edward really felt anything for her or just decided to give her what she thought she needed.
The painful feeling of rejection will not last once more information about Mark surfaces.
Will the town's people every see Bella as a victim of a twisted man's game?
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 21 Bella’s virginity vs. Edward’s primal urges
Poor Bella
Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 21 Bella’s virginity vs. Edward’s primal urges
good
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 21 Bella’s virginity vs. Edward’s primal urges
Thanks for the update, loving this story
Date: 27 Apr 2016 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 21 Bella’s virginity vs. Edward’s primal urges
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 27 Apr 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 21 Bella’s virginity vs. Edward’s primal urges
So glad you are back I was missing you lol. It is a good thing Edward is using his top head .
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
Hello I am so sorry it has taken me so long I am behind in my reading I just read it all and I love listening be love it I wish it was done so I could have read more I can't wait for the next update
Date: 18 Apr 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
Edward needs to let her know that the attraction is not just physical. He really should not cross that line until this is settled, but I understand why he wants to comfort her physically. He loves her.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
Yay! I finally caught up to the present on this story . It is excellent! Keep up the great work !
Date: 15 Apr 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 8 Cullen vs. Isabella's Journal
You are doing a great job , and I can definitely see the improvements you have made. This is a very interesting story ; keep up the great work !
Date: 14 Apr 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 19 Edward and Carlisle vs. That giant fucking Panda
You are Killing us.....The Suspence......I cant remember the end....
Date: 13 Apr 2016 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
Shes doing this cuz shes scared mark will get her and she doesnt want him to have her virginity? Will edward stop or give in?
Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
Love it.........This is such a awesome story......I love it more this time around.......
Date: 12 Apr 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 19 Edward and Carlisle vs. That giant fucking Panda
A carnival like that brings out the little boy in every man...it's cute to see him competing with his dad to win the panda.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 8:21 PM Title: Prologue
Thank you for reposting this story - it's my favourite of all your stories and I was sad to think I might not read it again! Really, thank you :)
Date: 12 Apr 2016 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
Thanx for the update!!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 19 Edward and Carlisle vs. That giant fucking Panda
Thanx!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
good
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 Edward and Carlisle vs. That giant fucking Panda
good
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 18 Dr. Cullen vs Swan
good
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 17 Cullen & Swan vs. Time is running out
good
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 ullen vs. Sleeping with demons
good
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
He has to stop this, there first time shouldn't be because Bella is upset and needs the comfort, he is in a position of authority and should wait until he isn't.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
Will Edward compromise his position of authority and guide to his young, beautiful ward?
He could lose his job if he follows through with their desires.
But if he back off now the rejection could do more harm to Isabella's psyche. She is an adult though. What is motivating her right now? The grief of her mother's death or the idea that someone other than Jessica has shown compassion and the need to protect her?
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
:)
Date: 12 Apr 2016 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 20 Chief Swan vs. Heartache
She is in so much pain she just needs him
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 9:57 AM Title: Prologue
wow - what a first chapter!!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 Edward and Carlisle vs. That giant fucking Panda
She was happy about the kiss
Date: 12 Apr 2016 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 18 Dr. Cullen vs Swan
How could they not love her just like he does
Date: 12 Apr 2016 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 17 Cullen & Swan vs. Time is running out
Mark is one creepy dude they need to take him down.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 16 Edward vs. Mark
Edward is going to take that bastard down Charlie better be OK
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 19 Edward and Carlisle vs. That giant fucking Panda
:) :)
Date: 12 Apr 2016 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 19 Edward and Carlisle vs. That giant fucking Panda
So sweet!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19 Edward and Carlisle vs. That giant fucking Panda
He's alive! at least that's what I hope that means.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 18 Dr. Cullen vs Swan
The pieces are meticulously being gathered against the Deputy. I wonder when an another attempt on Isabella will take place? Is Charlie physically injured?
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 17 Cullen & Swan vs. Time is running out
Edward's parent's home would be the first place her tormentor will look. Once he realizes they gave him the slip.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 16 Edward vs. Mark
Enter Emmett.
The walls are closing in on all involved.
Where is Charlie?