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Reviewer: KBB Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

Nasty bitch Tanya.



Author's Response: Yeah, her actions don't help them any.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 1:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Really enjoyed this story



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 9:29 PM Title: Epilogue

:)  loved this 



Author's Response: Thank you, Deb. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, Deb. :)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 8:43 PM Title: Epilogue

Great ending. Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 40

Finally back where they should be! 



Author's Response: Yeah, they really are!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2016 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 40

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 39

You're doing a good job pulling it together.



Author's Response: That's really nice of you to say. Thank you very much.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 39

:) 



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2016 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 38

I am so happy for them!



Author's Response: Good! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 38

Thinhs are coming along. But honestly, you guys justbhad a baby and esme keeps her? Like esme is more important to please? I never get it in fics, this hogging of the baby like the parents don't matter. Anyway, wonder how she'll get this Jake thing sorted and out of her life for good. Charlie is such a fitting name, is it Charlie Renee Cullen?

Author's Response: Esme is staying in the house with them, to let them get some sleep. Alice set up the guest room for her, she didn't take her away to Forks or anything. They will talk in the next chapter about Jake and all the rest. I did make it Charlie Renee.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you for always rating me at 5 coffee cups!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 37

:)



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Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

😊



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Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 2

That was sweet and informative 😊



Author's Response: Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

😊



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Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 1:54 AM Title: Prologue

Okay!   I've been eyeing this story debating should I start now or wait til it's complete. I had to do it but now I'm a little scared since Edward just walked out on Bella and I can feel her pain. B/E stories with a HEA are my forte. Sooooooo! Here goes caution to the wind. For now I'll trust that this sadness is short lived. READ YOU SOON



Author's Response: It is very close to being completed posted. It will be done by the end of the month. It takes several chapters to catch up to the prologue.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 36

:) 



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Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 36

Finally....why did they wait so long!



Author's Response: To make you all squirm, lol.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 36

Aaaaaaaaw!!!!!!! <3



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Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 35

Thank goodness  you  wrote  those  last  four  lines!  I LIKE Bella  and Edward stories, not Bella-Jake stories!



Author's Response: I know! I was going for New Moon vibes, but no way would she ever end up with Jake.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2016 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 35

Right decision!!!



Author's Response: It was pretty fun to write, too.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2016 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 35

I am glad she told him to leave. He always tries to get her when she is vulnerable. 



Author's Response: Yes. She's not falling for his crap anymore.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 



Author's Response: :) Thank you!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 34

Not  sure  why  Bella'swaiting  so long.



Author's Response: She doesn't want to have Edward come running back until she has been in therapy long enough to be whole again. She doesn't want to patch their problems without actually fixing them. She's feeling stronger and mostly healed, so it'll be soon.

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 34

I don't understand the whole wedding thing 

I think it's inappropriate to have these types of reunions , and conversations at someone's special event.

they should meet just before on neutral ground 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 33

I like see both sides of the story.  Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response: Thank you! It wasn't quite what Edward thought.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 33

Jacob is pushing her to forget about Edward. He wants her for himself. 



Author's Response: That's very true.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 33

Jacob has his own agenda 



Author's Response: Does he ever.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 33

I can't wait to see Exward and Bella together. Thanks for writing !! 



Author's Response: Just a few more chapters before that happens!

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 33

They really need to talk and Edward should see a therapist too!



Author's Response: Something like that, very soon.

Author's Response: Something like that, very soon.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2016 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 31

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 30

So sad for them both.  They need to talk 



Author's Response: That's true.

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 29

First time reviewing. But I also read reviews, you replied to someone with this;

Author's Response: You're right about that. He'll suffer some more (because I felt he had to), and he'll understand more where she's coming from.

cqn I ask why you feel he needa to suffer? Moat authors put so much on the male character's like they aren't human and can read minds to solve problems and possess no have feelings.
I don't get why a guy who lost 'his' child too and feel he failed his wife needs to 'suffer' to understand the same pain his wife is feeling.

And unless Edward is seen with another woman also, I don't get how it's fair Bella having jake around. I'm sure Edward would then think she cheated, any hurt person would. Right?

Anyway, awaiting the next chapter. Eagerly.

Author's Response: The response about me feeling the need for him to suffer comes from the place of, he really shouldn't have left her. In reality, he should have stayed by her side, if he's as devoted to his vows as it seems his character would be. On the other side of that coin, it was really freaking tough for him, too. He didn't know what to do, he was at a loss. He thought she would be happier without him, but that doesn't make him right. I don't want to give anything away with Jake, except I will say their relationship is very canon.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 29

I have never liked Jacob in any story. He is always there to cause problems. Bella and Edward have enough problems without Jacob causing more. Please don't let her start seeing him. Edward already thinks he isn't good enough for her.



Author's Response: You're right about Jake, he is there to serve a purpose. Remember it's an hea.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) 



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Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 29

Edward is going to feel bad when he finds out she is pregnant.   I think she needs a firend if that is what it takes for her to get better. 



Author's Response: That's a very diplomatic way to look at it. I know Jacob haters are going to be less diplomatic.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 28

Now that Edward has let his emotions out maybe he will be able to understand more how Bella felt and then add on losing her parents and anyone would shut down.



Author's Response: You're right about that. He'll suffer some more (because I felt he had to), and he'll understand more where she's coming from.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 28

I hope they find their way back together 



Author's Response: Soon!

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2016 11:59 PM Title: Prologue

Great, I love this story because you have given the 'grief' a real time line and a real struggle.  Other authors 'skim' over these types of topics.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response: Well, gosh, thank you!

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2016 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 27

Will you be turning this into a HEA?



Author's Response: Absolutely. Things start looking up at chapter 36.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2016 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 27

I don't blame Edward, but this isi heart wrenching.



Author's Response: :( It'll get better.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2016 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 27

So sad..... 



Author's Response: I know! :(

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 26

Would love to see the Rose/Bella interaction ...I Just put your other story on my TBR list :) 

 

-Kate



Author's Response: Outtake RPOV I went quietly into the master bedroom, which was in a shambles. Edward told me how Bella had thrown a fit and tossed the room, and he wasn't kidding. A hand mirror was smashed, broken pieces of glass scattered on the dresser and spilling onto the carpet. There were clothes strewn everywhere, the bed linens had been torn off and balled up in a corner. The curtains were hanging askew, and a few pictures were at drunken angles on the wall. Bella was sitting in an armchair, her knees drawn up to her chest, rocking. She was disheveled, tears staining her face as she rolled her desolate eyes to mine. Bella, you have to listen to me, I urged. I was wrong. You know how much Ive grown to love you, and Id have to be blind not to see how good you and Edward are together. Dont give up on yourself. I know shit is hard right now, but you can work through it. Let Edward help you. I cant, Rose, she sobbed. Ill ruin him, like you said in the beginning. You saw it more clearly than even I did. Im toxic for him. Im dragging him down, Im useless! The idea that she believed that had shame stabbing me in the gut. No, sweetie. Youre hurting, and thats okay. But so is Edward. Just hang in there, please? I wasnt above begging. Youre perfect for him, no matter what I said when I met you. You don't have to try to be anybody youre not. Youre perfect the way you are. I wanted to help, but it seemed that Edward was right; she was beyond casual help. You know I don't bullshit, Bella. Just think about it, okay? I pulled her stiff body into my arms, holding on as tears came to my own eyes. She softened enough to hug me back briefly, then stepped away and sat back in her chair by the window. I sighed heavily, knowing I had failed to fix anything.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 26

Poor Edward.  I'd love to have the Rose/Bella talk.



Author's Response: Outtake RPOV I went quietly into the master bedroom, which was in a shambles. Edward told me how Bella had thrown a fit and tossed the room, and he wasn't kidding. A hand mirror was smashed, broken pieces of glass scattered on the dresser and spilling onto the carpet. There were clothes strewn everywhere, the bed linens had been torn off and balled up in a corner. The curtains were hanging askew, and a few pictures were at drunken angles on the wall. Bella was sitting in an armchair, her knees drawn up to her chest, rocking. She was disheveled, tears staining her face as she rolled her desolate eyes to mine. Bella, you have to listen to me, I urged. I was wrong. You know how much Ive grown to love you, and Id have to be blind not to see how good you and Edward are together. Dont give up on yourself. I know shit is hard right now, but you can work through it. Let Edward help you. I cant, Rose, she sobbed. Ill ruin him, like you said in the beginning. You saw it more clearly than even I did. Im toxic for him. Im dragging him down, Im useless! The idea that she believed that had shame stabbing me in the gut. No, sweetie. Youre hurting, and thats okay. But so is Edward. Just hang in there, please? I wasnt above begging. Youre perfect for him, no matter what I said when I met you. You don't have to try to be anybody youre not. Youre perfect the way you are. I wanted to help, but it seemed that Edward was right; she was beyond casual help. You know I don't bullshit, Bella. Just think about it, okay? I pulled her stiff body into my arms, holding on as tears came to my own eyes. She softened enough to hug me back briefly, then stepped away and sat back in her chair by the window. I sighed heavily, knowing I had failed to fix anything.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 25

Wow, this was a hard chapter to read as it is gettiing very depressing for Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 26

Edward is so confused 

my heart breaks for both of them 

thank you



Author's Response: Outtake RPOV I went quietly into the master bedroom, which was in a shambles. Edward told me how Bella had thrown a fit and tossed the room, and he wasn't kidding. A hand mirror was smashed, broken pieces of glass scattered on the dresser and spilling onto the carpet. There were clothes strewn everywhere, the bed linens had been torn off and balled up in a corner. The curtains were hanging askew, and a few pictures were at drunken angles on the wall. Bella was sitting in an armchair, her knees drawn up to her chest, rocking. She was disheveled, tears staining her face as she rolled her desolate eyes to mine. Bella, you have to listen to me, I urged. I was wrong. You know how much Ive grown to love you, and Id have to be blind not to see how good you and Edward are together. Dont give up on yourself. I know shit is hard right now, but you can work through it. Let Edward help you. I cant, Rose, she sobbed. Ill ruin him, like you said in the beginning. You saw it more clearly than even I did. Im toxic for him. Im dragging him down, Im useless! The idea that she believed that had shame stabbing me in the gut. No, sweetie. Youre hurting, and thats okay. But so is Edward. Just hang in there, please? I wasnt above begging. Youre perfect for him, no matter what I said when I met you. You don't have to try to be anybody youre not. Youre perfect the way you are. I wanted to help, but it seemed that Edward was right; she was beyond casual help. You know I don't bullshit, Bella. Just think about it, okay? I pulled her stiff body into my arms, holding on as tears came to my own eyes. She softened enough to hug me back briefly, then stepped away and sat back in her chair by the window. I sighed heavily, knowing I had failed to fix anything.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 26

So sad for them both 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 26

I really hate that Bella has pushed Edward into thinking everything is his fault. She needs to see a doctor herself and get help. I know she is grieving for her parents and probably has postpartum depression. She is also grieving for the baby she lost. She needs to get some help.



Author's Response: You're right about all of the above.

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 26

Hey! i like the story but im not sure if it is a HEA.. can you tell me?



Author's Response: It is. There's 40 chapters,so a long road ahead. I'd like to send you the outtake privately, if I can.

Reviewer: TwilightLovers101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2016 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 9

What did rose say Emmet



Author's Response: She said, I bet they were both stiff.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 25

So sad 



Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 24

So sad.  Poor Bella 



Author's Response: She can't handle any more, that's for sure.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2016 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

Sad.  Does this end with a HEA?  Feel like we may need some hope in all the despair.  



Author's Response: There is an HEA. :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 23

This is when things go down, as a woman who tried to get pregnant for a long time and to finally get pregnant at 31 only to miscarriage a couple weeks after finding out, I was devastated.. but we go on I was able to get pregnant again and have a beautiful girl a year later. So I feel for Bella, but that is no reason to shut people out of your life...Did I mention I had also left my state and family behind because of my stalker..It was not easy but with Jesus's help I made it thru.

Author's Response: It's intuitive of you to realize this is actually going down. She's masking her feelings. I'm sorry you had to go through a stalker and a miscarriage, but I'm glad you had your faith to see you through.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2016 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 22

Please tell me that this does have a HEA. Poor Bella is so depressed, sheneeds to get help from someone. And Mike needs someone to kick his behind into next century 



Author's Response: It does have an hea,but it's a long road to get there.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 22

Poor Bella 



Author's Response: She's got a lot on her plate.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2016 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 21

Wjhat is up with MIke?



Author's Response: He's crazy.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2016 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 21

Mike is insane 



Author's Response: Yeah, he is.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 20

I don't think Mike is going to go away.  I want to buy her more than mace!!! 



Author's Response: He's not, you're right. And maybe karate lessons, or a tazer?

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

GOOD CHAPTER

Author's Response: :) Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Saleen123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 12:00 AM Title: Prologue

Omg ! Your story is awesome. Keep it up :-) Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response: I appreciate that so much! Next update is Sunday!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 



Author's Response: You're back to smiley faces! I hope that means you liked it.

Author's Response: You're back to smiley faces! I hope that means you liked it.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

So I just found this while I was scrolling in PattyRose's group on facebook ....so amazing! Can't wait to read more.  Do you have a schedule that you update on certain days? 

 

-Kate

 

Oh and I sent a request to join your group as well.  :) 



Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it! It updates Sundays and Wednesdays.

Reviewer: shaz308 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

If Bella is pregnant in the prologue is it Edward's baby?



Author's Response: It is, absolutely.

Reviewer: shaz308 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 3:50 AM Title: Prologue

Just found this story, so gutwrenchingly sad. I hope they find their way back to each other.



Author's Response: I promise that they do.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

Poor Bella.  Jessica isn't doing her job properly 



Author's Response: That's true, she's not.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

SHE NEEDS TO QUIT, NO JOB IS WORTH THIS BULLSHIT.

Author's Response: So true.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Bella.  She needs to report him



Author's Response: You're right!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

mike is a sleazy guy, sexual harassment, and if he gets the job things can get uncomfortable.

Author's Response: Things are getting uncomfortable for sure.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 2:37 AM Title: Prologue

WOW....WHAT HAPPEN TO HER TO MAKE HER SHUT DOWN, SHE WAS TAKING A PREGNANCY TEST, THEN HE WAS LEAVING...my look on this is something happened and she lost the baby making her upset and she has postpartum syndrome....hopefully all is not lost.

Author's Response: Him leaving was a flashback, so the pregnancy test was taken after he left.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 17

Mike is a pig. She needs to report his behavior before he tries something to hurt her. She should also tell Edward and start looking for another job.



Author's Response: Yes! You really are right.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 17

Mike is an ass and she should be taking notes and reporting him!



Author's Response: You are so right.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 16

:)



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

Awesome



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing each chapter.

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 5

cool



Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 4

Fantastic.



Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

That was awesome. Mike is a Tool



Author's Response: He sure is.

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wonderful



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome



Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

Ready for the drama to start.  :)



Author's Response: Good, see you on Sunday. Lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

:)



Author's Response: :)

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Date: 02 Jun 2016 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 14

:)

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Date: 29 May 2016 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 6:48 PM Title: Prologue

Interesting start



Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you get the chance to read the rest.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 12

:)



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 9

So far Bella and Edward have a lovely romance going. What happens to make him leave? I hope this is a HEA and not like the ending of the song.



Author's Response: It's chapter 16 before we see what starts to go wrong. There's definitely an HEA. And Rose said, I bet they were both stiff.

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

I keep wondering what goes wrong 



Author's Response: There's a bit left of their romance before things go south. Rose said, I bet they were both stiff.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)



Author's Response: Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

Are we going to learn soon why she's, "Angry All The Time?"



Author's Response: It's chapter 16 when we start to see what's going wrong. Although there are hints along the way, that is the turning point.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

:)



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2016 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

Looking forward to reading more 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Lara

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 2:47 AM Title: Prologue

This is off to a good start. Please continue with this. THANK YOU



Author's Response: Absolutely! I have most of it written already.:) Thank you for the review!

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