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Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 9:14 PM Title: Epilogue

Another great story.  As usual you weave an amazing plot line into some tear jearking moments and pulse racing lemons.  I can't wait to read the next one. 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 3:42 PM Title: Epilogue

Great story. I'm glad I finally read it. Do you have any plans for a future-take...perhaps something with Lucy and the baby and being a doc? Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Jennaeve13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 40

I am loving your story, but Bella is freaking out about a million dollar house?  I live in the Pacific Northwest (Vancouver, bc) and a 1br, 1ba starter condo here is about $350,000.  Houses typically run 3/4 to 1 million dollars for nothing special. 

 

But i continue to read and enjoy!  But please tell me Bella isn't going to be kidnapped during her move?? ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 3:00 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it. Sad it is over. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 4:55 AM Title: Epilogue

good

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 7:40 PM Title: Epilogue

Great fic! Loved it!!

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 7:40 PM Title: Epilogue

Great fic! Loved it!!

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 2:33 AM Title: Epilogue

aw, sweet ending

thanks for sharing

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 5:05 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 7:30 PM Title: Epilogue

Nice ending.  Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 10:59 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank  You!!!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 1:55 PM Title: Epilogue

Good story

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 10:22 PM Title: Epilogue

great story...

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 10:01 PM Title: Epilogue

I'm in tears!  Thank you for the wonderful story.  I loved it from the beginning to the end.  So happy that they got their Happy ever after!  Thank you for sharing can't wait for some outtake!!!!!   

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 4:44 PM Title: Epilogue

They day all good things must come to an end. I guess it is true. I hate to see this story end but you have done a great job with wrapping everything up. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. Great job. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 83

You have made them so normal. Thus was definitely a fight or argument that was going to happen at some point.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 82

A perfect honeymoon!!!!!! But real life got them when they got back home. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 1:56 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story.   Great ending 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 4:49 AM Title: Epilogue

Another beautiful story, thanks so much for sharing.

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 83

poor bella, glad she managed thru all that, hard enough as the biological parent

keep it coming

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 1:10 AM Title: Epilogue

What a lovely epi! You certainly covered a lot of ground, and did it very well! I'm satisfied with the way everything turned out, especially how Tanya ended up. She never changed and it killed her. Grandparents before they're 50? That's pretty unusual, but with such a big, supportive family, I'm sure Lucy and Hunter will be just fine. Thank you so much for another wonderful story!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 11:03 PM Title: Epilogue

Great ending! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 83

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 81

They are finally married!!!!!!!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 81

The end is near

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Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 83

I think we all say things in anger that we don't mean and I think Edward and Bella handled this very well. It's good that they are going to therapy to help get them all through this troubling time. Thanks for giving us a wonderful story, full of realistic life. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 83

I loved this chapter. I think all step parents or adoptive parents experience this.  I remember doing some of that with my stepdad and I was around 9. And like Liam, I felt extremely guilty.  And I've had my own children tell me they hate me. My comeback was always, "Well I'm sorry you feel that way, but I love you."  

Can't wait to se what they've been up to in the epilogue!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 83

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 83

I am sad it is almost over. That is a family I have been called all kinds of names by my kids but they love me.  I have always been afraid of the your not my mom thing because we adopted all of our kids but not one of them have ever said that I feel lucky about that.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 82

Wow what a great place to have a honeymoon.  Love the tat so cute

Reviewer: GinnyD Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 83

Excuse me, but the Tampa Bay Rays are s MLB team... sorry a fan here

The minor league team is the Durham Bulls

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 83

Nice seeing they aren't perfect.  B handled it wonderfully

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 83

Loved it!  Drama filled chapter! 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 82

great story, can't wait to read the epi...

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 82

Great update

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 82

Awesome chapter.  Love they got some time just to themselves.

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 82

oh reality, it will bite

keep it coming

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 82

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 82

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 82

I'm glad they had that two weeks of their honeymoon all to themselves.. Now back to their regular routine, they won't have that much time to themselves, but it will still be great. Thanks for all this. They really deserve some true happiness now.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 82

:) 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 82

Fabulous story. One of your best.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 81

aww sweet ceremony

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 81

great update...Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 81

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 81

Oh how beautiful I loved it

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 81

aw, sweet day

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 81

Sigh....it was perfect 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 81

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 81

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 81

OMG that made me want to cry that was the best adoption ever. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 80

Poor Edward may have blue balls by his wedding night. Lol. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 81

What a wonderful wedding! Yay! I have loved reading this story, even through the angsty times.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 81

What a wonderful wedding! Yay! I have loved reading this story, even through the angsty times.

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 81

Loved it! 

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 80

too funny!

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 79

so cute, glad things are better for them and the wedding is coming along

i go married in key west, so wonderful, so beautiful, highly recommend to anyone

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2017 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 80

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2017 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 80

nice update

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2017 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 80

Heheheh heheheheh I loved it 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 80

Life is good they are so sweet together

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 80

Honeymoon Baby??????

READ YOU SOON ๐ŸŒบ

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 80

good

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 80

These two are just so adorable! The twins also, but I meant Edward and Bella. I'm glad that Bella reined Alice in with her too ambitious plans. What they ended up with was just fine! It seems so long since any lemony time. Guess we'll have to wait until the honeymoon, right? OK. I'll wait. Thanks for this altogether too cute story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 80

These two are just so adorable! The twins also, but I meant Edward and Bella. I'm glad that Bella reined Alice in with her too ambitious plans. What they ended up with was just fine! It seems so long since any lemony time. Guess we'll have to wait until the honeymoon, right? OK. I'll wait. Thanks for this altogether too cute story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 80

These two are just so adorable! The twins also, but I meant Edward and Bella. I'm glad that Bella reined Alice in with her too ambitious plans. What they ended up with was just fine! It seems so long since any lemony time. Guess we'll have to wait until the honeymoon, right? OK. I'll wait. Thanks for this altogether too cute story!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 80

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 80

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 80

The wedding shower gifts were not cool with Lucy there.  Those should have been saved for later.  Glad they are having the kid conversation.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 79

Sweet chapter. Glad she's letting Esme doing something

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 78

Great update!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 79

Love this chapter. Glad Esme and Bella get along so well. 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 79

nice update

 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 79

good

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 79

Can't wait!! 

READ YOU SOON ๐ŸŒบ

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 78

good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 79

Heheheheheh I loved it

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 79

Heheheheheh I loved it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 79

I love how things are coming together for them.  Got to love Esme she will be a kick ass mother -in-law :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 79

:) 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 79

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 79

great story

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 78

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2017 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 78

awesome party.  Glad they had some fun family time

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 78

What a great birthday party.  I love those places.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 78

Loved the party!!  I have boy/girl twins and it's so much fun having birthday parties that were just like Liam and Lucy. My twins, Taylor (girl) and Tyler, just turned 17 last week so we're past the jumpy place, but they do have fun on the trampoline still. Now we have pool parties. And I'm always surprised if we make through some of the things without someone getting hurt in some way. Lol. Never a dull moment.  Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 78

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 78

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 78

Awe to sweet I loved it 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 78

Life as a family of four is busy. I'm sure it will get even busier when Bella starts traveling.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 78

Life as a family of four is busy. I'm sure it will get even busier when Bella starts traveling.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 77

Perfect start to their new life as a couple.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 77

Things are falling into place for Dr. Superhero and his ProfessorElla.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 76

I'm finally getting the chance to catch up to the rest of your fans.
Everything is finally falling into place for Dr. Superhero and his ProfessorElla.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 76

I'm finally getting the chance to catch up to the rest of your fans.
Everything is finally falling into place for Dr. Superhero and his ProfessorElla.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 76

I'm finally getting the chance to catch up to the rest of your fans.
Everything is finally falling into place for Dr. Superhero and his ProfessorElla.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 76

I'm finally getting the chance to catch up to the rest of your fans.
Everything is finally falling into place for Dr. Superhero and his ProfessorElla.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 76

I'm finally getting the chance to catch up to the rest of your fans.
Everything is finally falling into place for Dr. Superhero and his ProfessorElla.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 76

I'm finally getting the chance to catch up to the rest of your fans.
Everything is finally falling into place for Dr. Superhero and his ProfessorElla.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 76

I'm finally getting the chance to catch up to the rest of your fans.
Everything is finally falling into place for Dr. Superhero and his ProfessorElla.

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