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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 73

:) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 73

nice update

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 73

Edward is making progress. That is good. Loving this story. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 73

They will all need counseling for a while because of Tanya, the bitch.  Ugh..

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2017 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 72

nice update

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 72

Tanya got what she deserved. Her outbursts tell me she still has no idea that what she did was wrong. Maybe she never will. Maybe now Edward and Bella can have some peace.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 72

I am so glad that Tanya got what was coming to her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 71

I am glad that Edward is addressing his issues.  

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 72

What does Tanya have that could result in paying off her debt to Jacob?
How will Edward's relationship with his twins be affected by his knowledge of Tanya's betrayal?
Will Bella recover​ totally or will residual damage cause her to leave teaching?

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 72

Glad the judge gave her the harshiest sentence.

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 72

glad that is behind them, keep it coming

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 72

good

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 72

Justice was served!!! I await the Happily Ever After. 

READ YOU SOON 😋

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 72

I know it your story, but I doubt she's no go to trial.  Ah well.   Still glad everyone got to have their say.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 72

So glad she is going away for a long time.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 72

Make the bitch lick envelopes....a penny an envelope...! Hahaha

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 72

:) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2017 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 71

great update

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 71

Jake's visit was a nice way of keeping them on a path to friendship. Will Jake every get back any of the money Tanya embezzled?
Edward's being very open about his intimacy and trust issues. This will go a long way in helping Bella heal as well.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 71

Jake's visit was a nice way of keeping them on a path to friendship. Will Jake every get back any of the money Tanya embezzled?
Edward's being very open about his intimacy and trust issues. This will go a long way in helping Bella heal as well.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 71

Wow, what a messed up bunch

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 71

Good chapter!  

READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 71

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 71

Glad that Jake came to see her. Hope they can be friendly if not friends.  Don't blame E for wanting to scrub himself raw.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 71

They both have a lot to work out but they love each other so much

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 71

So everyone is moving to Tampa? They'll have plenty of support, then. Tanya's sentencing. That's where you were going this chapter. LOL. Maybe next time? Edward is so cute when he's OCD...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 71

:) 

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 71

aw, glad they are there for each other

keep it coming

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 70

great update

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2017 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 70

glad she is awake and edward is getting help

keep it coming

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 70

Glad Charlie made him go talk to someone. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2017 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 70

Glad Edward is getting help. Glad that they all will be getting help.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2017 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 70

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2017 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 70

good

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2017 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 70

Wow, emotional chapter.   Glad she came out of it and the twins got to see her. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2017 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 70

Wow, emotional chapter.   Glad she came out of it and the twins got to see her. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2017 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 70

I am so happy Bella is awake and ready to kick Tanya's ass. 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2017 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 70

: )

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2017 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 70

I'm still not getting STARS notifications, but am seeking out new chapters here when I see the FFn chapters post. It seems they are having trouble with their email.

I knew she would want to kill Tanya once she found out. Good thing Edward didn't let her out of bed. I love the stuffed cat with the doctor outfit on. Great choice! I supposed we were nearing the end. I hope Tanya gets what she deserves. Renee certainly did!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 69

Tanya's confession was almost too easy. Did Jacob go to the cops with the information he over heard? Is that what prompted her to wave council and spill the details of her deceit?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2017 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 69

Wow  Skankya really is a nut job.  Poor Kids.

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 69

a very packed update, poor edward, stay strong!

keep it coming

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 69

:) 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 69

Wow! There are bitches and then there's Tanya all in a class of her own. I was really hoping that by some awesome miracle..... Bella was carrying a little bundle of joy.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 69

FINALLY THE BITCH GOT CAUGHT.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 69

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 69

Tanya is a piece of dog shit she is even more evil than Edward could ever imagin. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 69

Is Tanya really that ignorant?

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 69

Tanya deserves to rot in jail.  Poor Lucy and Liam!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 69

Tanya deserves to rot in jail.  Poor Lucy and Liam!!

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 69

I hope you have some evil planned for her, she needs to suffer. Thanks for the update :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 69

Ugh....  Everyone is traumatized for life except the bitch that caused it all.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 69

Glad TAnya is going to jail.  I just wonder what made her confessed. I am glad that Edward is going to get the kids some help. Heck, they all need help. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 69

This chapter, here on STARS, did not arrive in my inbox, despite the new chapter being here, so I found it and read it on my preferred site. I favorited it again so hopefully the next chapter will arrive when you post it. The FFn posting did come to me. I wonder what happened.

Thank God you cut this business with Tanya short by having her confess to Edward! I'm glad it's over. Maybe someone will off her in prison...What is the deal with Edward's car getting towed? Is someone at work out to get him? I don't remember that. Thanks for this chapter. I continue to be your faithful reader. 



Author's Response:

He wasn't at his hospital. He works at St. Joseph's Children's Hospital. Bella is at Tampa General. He just parked in an open spot, not caring where it was. That's why he was towed. It was out of malice ... 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2017 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 69

Yeah down with the HOE!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 69

Here here! The bitch is done for! 

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2017 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 68

oh damn

but at least tanya is arrested

and bella is getting better

keep it coming

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2017 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 68

Tanya will burn!

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2017 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 68

thanks for the update, cant wait for more :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2017 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 68

can't wait to find out about the charges

Reviewer: vwatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2017 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 68

Yikes! Poor Bella, but she sure kicked butt. Tanya is way crazy, hope that this is the end of her.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 68

Loved it can't wait for more 💙 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 68

Love Love your story can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 68

More please!!

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 68

THANK YOU!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 68

Was Jacob factor into any of Tanya's attack plans?
What did Tanya mean when she said a blow-job allowed her into the aquarium? Is that the sexual assault being charged against her?
Whose identity did she steal?
The twins will need counseling

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 68

oh wow.  you agnst queen!!!  Hope she'll be ok

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 68

To bad Bella was not able to stick that stun gun in Tanya's mouth and set it off.  Poor kids they are so scared.  Edward is freaking out and what the hell did Tanya do? did she assault Mr. Johnson? or maybe Jacob Black?

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 68

Way to go Bella

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 68

Good job Bella.  Wondering who Tanya sexually assualted?

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 68

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!  Go Bella!  I really hate Tanya! 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 68

:O :O :O :O 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 68

Sorry that Bella was injured but glad that she didn't take either kid. I wonder was Tanya lying about the officer or did the officer just betray her?

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 68

OMG....... 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 68

OMG they have been through SO much. I hope this is the end of their troubles. Tanya needs to be locked up, for good. Sexual assault? Maybe on Mr. Johnson? Tanya did say she sucked him off...

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 68

well she is caught.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 68

OMG!! This is fantastic!! I am so excited for more!!! ;)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 68

My goodness Tanya is messed up in the head now will Bella be ok will the twins be ok 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 68

So glad that Tanya was stopped. I hate that Bella was hurt. Who did Tanya sexual assault?  Wished this chapter was longer. My heart is breaking for Lucy. 

Reviewer: trojangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 68

OOOO it just got good.  I really hope Tanya gets what is coming to her.  Tired Edward was kinda snarky... LOl

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 68

Tanya is royally screwed!  But what is the sexual assault charge?  That's something we haven't heard about.  I hope Lucy and Liam are ok. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: vwatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 68

Yikes! Poor Bella, but she sure kicked butt. Tanya is way crazy, hope that this is the end of her.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 68

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2017 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 67

Did Nick get a picture of Tanya before the field trip so he would recognize her?
Lucy will be smart enough to use her phone to call daddy, right?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 67

Glad she is listening to her instincts. Ugh skankyya. 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 67

Tanya just signed her arrest warrant-hope she gets caught!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 67

I knew she would show up!  She's in violation of the restraining order and should be arrested! NOW!  Thanks for the chapter.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 67

Ugh...Tanya....I want to rip that bitch's throat out!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 67

Ummmmmm... Have Bella get that woman ARRESTED PLEASE?! She was stupid enough to walk right up to them after all....

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 67

Loved it can't wait for more 💙 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 67

Oh no!  Bella's gut instinct was right about something happening.  I'm not sure what Tanya can really do since they're at a public place even though she confronted them in the bathroom but since she's completely lost her mind, so there's no telling. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 67

:) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 67

good update

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 67

Don't Stop There!!!!

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 67

Don't Stop There!!!!

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 67

Don't Stop There!!!!

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 67

Don't Stop There!!!!

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 67

Don't Stop There!!!!

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 67

Nooooo..... Why would you do me like that 😫😢😭....please update soon!!!! 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 67

:O :O :O 

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