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Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 67

OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! I love this and I am dying for the next update!! ;)

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 67

Can't wait to see what happens next. READ YOU SOON 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 67

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 67

OMG what is she going to do? Bella needs to kick Tanya's ass

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 67

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: nubian cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 67

I hope Bella snaps, send Lucy in a stall or to Nick and beat Tanya like she stole something ๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿพ

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 67

Ugh a cliffie???? NOOOOOOO

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 67

Always listen to your gut!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 67

Wow, Tanya is out of hiding. You have left us hanging!!!!!!

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 67

Seriously? No fair to stop it like this 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 66

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 66

I know you write the magic and I do appreciate it but.....I'd hate for the twins to be taken while Bella has them with her. I think it would destroy her relationship with Edward. ( just a thought)    READ YOU SOON ๐Ÿ’œ

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 66

So sweet!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 66

Jacob is ridiculously stupid to trust Tanya with money.  I hope you are writing this so Tanya gets caught before she snatches the kids.

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 66

bella, please watch your back, oh that tanya is freaky

keep it coming!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 66

LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! ;)

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 66

nice update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 66

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 66

OMG love them kids.  Tanya is just plan EVIL

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 66

good

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 66

Lucy is to sweet!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 66

wonder how long till Jacob catches on.  Hopefully before she does some real damage to his business.

Aww for pics

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 66

Will Jake ever figure out Tanya is embezzling from his company? Let's hope he meets someone sharp enough to catch on to her.
The twins are just as anxious to add Bella to the Cullen clan as Edward.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 66

Wow Tanya is her own enemy how will she go down hmmmm and how sweet was Lucy too cute and Edward so dreamy 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 66

Wow Tanya is her own enemy how will she go down hmmmm and how sweet was Lucy too cute and Edward so dreamy 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 66

Lucy is so sweet!  I loved the family photos.  Tanya is beyond psycho. She's actually thought about kidnapping her own children, although it shouldn't surprise me. Nothing should where that woman is concerned.  With the kids being so well watched, I have a feeling Bella will end up being her target.  Love this story!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 66

I can absolutely envision the beautiful beach photos. Such an adorable family.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 66

So as of right now Jacob is gullible.  I hope that if Tanya some how kidnaps the kids or hope it is not when Bella has them. That would be awful. Love Lucy wanting to call Bella moma. 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 66

Loved it!  Can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 66

Tanya is an idiot. Jacob will eventually notice that money is missing, won't he? He can't be a business owner and be THAT much of a dolt, can he? What is with Bella still having such insecurity? Doesn't she know YET that Edward loves her? Doesn't she love him? I wish she would become more secure in her feelings...thanks for the chapter.

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 66

Tanya is a greedy, bitch!! I hope Jacob will not side with her!!! ugggg 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2017 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 65

Oh no....if Tanya finds out the connection between Jacob & Bella, you know what's going to happen 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 65

nice update

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2017 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 65

the kids are too cute.  Ugh NeedleDick and Skankya...that is going to be soooo not good.

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2017 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 65

Pencil Dick and trash Tanya.  Wow

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 65

Maybe Jake will straighten her out!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 65

LOVE THIS!! :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 65

good

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 65

What a bummer so we have pencil dick to look forward too huh?  (lol).  I hope he helps Bella's situation instead of hinder it but only you know how that will play out So... Wait I shall do. READ YOU SOON.  : )

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 65

Bella's troubles keep following her.
Jacob will eventually figure out the fine details of Tanya's ability to lie, swindle and take. For his sake, let's hope it's sooner than later.
How will Bella find out he's in her territory now? What will Charlie think about Jake?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 65

oh no! what a pair! Jacob and Tanya. I wonder what will happen when he learns that her ex is dating his ex. Interesting!  Love that Lucy wants to call Bella mommy. Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 65

I'm surprised that Tanya didn't work off her debit to Jacob on her back. Lol. Can't wait for more drama.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 65

OH shit this will not be good will Jacob want in or revenge because she is happy??

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 65

:) 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 65

Loved it  and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 64

Can't wait for the next updates!!!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 64

great update

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2017 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 64

Great update

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2017 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 64

That's what I want for my birthday too! (lol) Edward is perfect!!! READ  YOU SOON : D

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 64

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: Fungirl18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love your stories! Is there really going to be a Mafia Princess sequel? I would really enjoy that! This story is great!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 64

Edward did that celebration oh so right.

Reviewer: jmeb Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 64

I have enjoyed the plot concept of this story, but it feels like it has stalled out. Any plans for the plot to move again soon?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 64

Ahhhhh.....I could use that massage!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 64

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 64

Wow that was a hot night OMG

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 64

I loved it how romantic he really went all out 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 64

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 64

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 64

I  need a birthday like that!!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 64

keep it coming!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 64

LOVE IT!!! :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 64

I know you were having a difficult time writing this, but it came out beautifully. Sweet, romantic, sexy. Just wonderful. Thanks!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2017 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 64

I wonder if Bella wished Tanya would be caught and put away for ever!!! lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 64

:) 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 64

wonderful birthday smexy times

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 63

Sounds like he's planned a wonderful birthday weekend.  Don't blame him for being stressed about the Skankya thing.  Desperate people do crazy things

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 63

Love this chapter can't wait for more!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 63

Now those are the kinds of birthday presents every woman should get! I love the sexy stuff, but that scrapbook was the sweetest, most thoughtful gift. Thanks for a lovely chapter!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 63

Loved it! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 63

Scrapbook idea is so sweet!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 63

10/10 great updates

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 63

Wow he really knows how to plan a birthday surprise it has everything she could ever want I loved it thank you 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 63

Great way to start her birthday :)

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 63

Next Saturday is too long to wait.   : (  So next update......we have some lemony goodness to look forward too...Mmmmmm! READ YOU SOON 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 63

I wish I had a birthday celebration like this one! Wow.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 63

It's about time Edward started spoiling his Bella.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 63

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 63

I amean sooo loving this story.  Love the Scrapebook idea. 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 63

:O :O

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 63

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 62

wondering if there is anything up with miss archer

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 62

Dr. Cullen put the fear of failure into the poor unsuspecting young teacher. He may be justified but his methods are harsh.
Seth seems a step closer to get his hands on Tanya.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 62

Hopefully the school will do what they are supposed to.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 62

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 62

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 62

Tanya living  near where Bella teaches, what can possibly go wrong?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 62

Tanya is living by the university where Bella is not good. 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 62

No Tanya! No drama! I'd say it was a good chapter. READ YOU SOON. : D

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 62

No Tanya! No drama! I'd say it was a good chapter. READ YOU SOON. : D

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 61

nice updates

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 62

Hi I hope Tanya isn't the child's teacher!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 62

Love the visual imagery of the picture that the kids drew for Bellas first day at school.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 62

I wonder if  Edward caught that her apartment is close to the university.  Glad Bella could help Lucy feel better about school.  Glad Bella's first day of classes went good. I am worried about Tanya showing up at the University.  

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 62

Oh come on, please post soon, love your work

 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 62

Love this!! :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 62

Well school for all three of them is going great but will,the find Tanya soon

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 62

Awww the note for Lucy and Liam was so sweet!! I dont like that Tanya is living close to the University. I hope she dosent do anything bad to Bella!!!

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 62

Ok let's catch the witch. Shall we?  She is definitely playing I their heads 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 62

:)

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