Date: 23 Nov 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 56
That is so sad
Date: 23 Nov 2016 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 55
Oh my. Hope Carlisle doesn't go after them.
Date: 23 Nov 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 55
I can't believe that Edward sent her and the kids away and Carlisle did not know about it. He took a big chance there.
Date: 23 Nov 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 55
Boooooo on them not being together
Date: 23 Nov 2016 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 55
Edward means what he says his family will be safe.
Date: 19 Nov 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 54
Edward did the right thing now Bella needs to relise how much she needs him and go back to him
Date: 19 Nov 2016 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 54
I feel for them both and hope for the kids there can be a happy reunion~
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 54
I think she'll miss him
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 54
What is edward going to do?
Date: 19 Nov 2016 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 54
To me this is so sad chapter. Bella has finally gotten what she wanted so she thought. Can't wait for another update.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2016 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 53
Oh no i didn't expect him to send her away!
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2016 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 53
They need to sit down and have a proper conversation
Date: 11 Nov 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 53
seems like no hea in this one
Date: 10 Nov 2016 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 53
I understand Edward being upset because Bella got hurt because of his job but he needs to man up and get his head out of his ass and quit being a coward. Leaving her not talking to her is what got them were they are.
Date: 10 Nov 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 53
Bella is acting like a child. I agree Edward should have told her when he lost his job and not left like he did. He should have realized Paul was up to no good. But he now has to work for Carlisle and Bella needs to get used to it. It was her own fault she was attacked. You don't go running around where you don't know anyone or the language.
Date: 10 Nov 2016 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 53
OK that broke my heart.
Date: 31 Oct 2016 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 52
OH Shit someone came to her rescue had to be Edward because he has no little finger.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 52
Hopefully little finger is Edward
Date: 27 Oct 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 52
My guess is Edward is Little finger since he is missing his. I really hope he saves her!
I can't wait for the next update.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2016 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 52
Oh wow she is going to get to see edward is action & how good he is at his job!
Date: 27 Oct 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 52
OMGosh, I hope Edward got there in time or at least one of Carlisle's men. .
Date: 26 Oct 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 51
Algo malvado esta manera viene
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 51
Say carlisles name to get these scum bags away from you
Date: 25 Oct 2016 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 51
Well, that was so stupid! Bella knows she in a dangerous place. That is one of the reasons why she is so mad at Edward for bring her there. I hope Edward can save her!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 25 Oct 2016 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 51
What were the men saying to Bella? I thought you would have translatedone it at the bottom of the chapter or right after the sentence in the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 51
I hope one of Carlisle's men was following her
Date: 25 Oct 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 51
in the first frase you can change the "damita" for "señorita"
in the second phrase the correct translations must ve "si yo fuera usted no iría por ahí, es peligroso. Puede ver cosas que no le gusten" it is very rare, when men saw beautiful women they speak to them as if they were married (that where the term SEÑORA appeared) they usually use SEÑORITA or MAMACITA, MUÑEQUITA
as a translation for the third phrase you can change it to "ESTA MUÑEQUITA PARECE PERDIDA"
in the third phrase, they don't use the term PUTA if they saw the women as someone with a Little bit of reputation, PUTA is a derogatory term, they must know about her sexual history to call her PUTA. As I told you before, they use some not so "rude" terms, like MAMACITA, CHIQUITITA, SEÑORITA,
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 50
Crap i can't even fathom what the kids are thinking.
Date: 22 Oct 2016 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 50
OH Shit that was not good
Date: 21 Oct 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 50
Bad form Bella! I can get being mad at Edward, because I still am too, but that was a horrible thing to stay! Especially when the kids were there. How will she ever make that right?
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 21 Oct 2016 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 50
Edward is right. They do need to talk. They need to hash things out. In Edward's line of work Bella could get her wish real quick.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 50
I can understand why Bella ia angry. She needs to accept that this is her life, for now, for her children's sake.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 49
Bella handled the phone call very well.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 49
Wow that is what she needed
Date: 19 Oct 2016 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 48
It is his own fault for leaving her alone why didnt he tell her about the phone before.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 49
I hope he snuggles with her.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 49
For once, Edward finally did something right.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 18 Oct 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 49
I really want to hate him, but .... i just can't. Sigh
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 48
So he is giving her babysteps in freedoms.
Date: 16 Oct 2016 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 48
Wow, I am surprised that Edward is even letting her call home.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 47
Wow they got to move! I hope he didn't give up another finger for that.
Date: 13 Oct 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 47
Wow, they got to move. I am surprised at that.
Date: 13 Oct 2016 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 47
I'm glad they are moved out of the compound. Can Bella really be happy with Edward after all that he has done to them?
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 13 Oct 2016 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 47
Things are going like a family again.
Date: 31 Aug 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 46
What was so wrong with baking Carlisle a cake? Edward was the one that got them in this awful situation. How will he ever get them out of it? He should have just let them be. They were way safer when Bella worked at The Rub.
I wouldn't trust any of his plans. Edward is an idiot!!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 46
I don't think she realizes how dangerous this all is.
Date: 28 Aug 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 46
Edward is freaking out he is afraid she is going to do somthing that will get her hurt.
Date: 28 Aug 2016 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 46
I don't see what was wrong with her baking Carlisle a cake. She was just being nice.
Date: 15 Aug 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 45
Did she poison it?
Date: 11 Aug 2016 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 45
She is trying to earn her freedom
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2016 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 45
Her cake idea might soften him but he cut her husbands finger off so it's safe to assume he isn't going to soften enough.
Date: 10 Aug 2016 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 45
Unfortunately she is not in a good position but has decided to try and make the most of it. Maybe they all can try to be happy. You have been missed.
Date: 31 Jul 2016 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 44
I can understand Bella's reluctance to accept any of this. Edward took her away from her family and friends and everything she knows. She is trying to go along with it all to protect her children. She now knows her husband is a murderer too. I would think that would be a little hard to live with.
Date: 30 Jul 2016 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 44
Well they are starting to talk
Date: 29 Jul 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 44
Thank God for Emmett. I happy that Edward opened up a little more to Bella.
Date: 29 Jul 2016 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 43
I'm not mad at Edward for freaking out on Bella for going out. Garrett was there but at the end of the day, if anything were to happen his first reaction isn't going to be to jump in front of a bullet to protect Bella and the kids. His first reaction is going to be to get to Alice.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 44
I think i see a reunion on the horizon.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2016 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 43
Something big is going to happen next chapter!
Date: 29 Jul 2016 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 44
Glad they got to talk some. I feel for Bella. But Edward is right, there is no leaving the cartel.
Date: 28 Jul 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 43
Edward isn't working on winning Bella's forgiveness acting like that!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 28 Jul 2016 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 43
What is Edward's problem? I think I like Garrett. As long as she was with Alice, who is Carlisle's daughter, you know she is safe. Can't wait to find out what Edward's deal is.
Date: 28 Jul 2016 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 43
p ...... qui croit qui les a lui parler comme sa il a l'air d'avoir changer par rapport au bien de se que disai bella vite un autre chapitre stp merci
Date: 28 Jul 2016 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 43
Edward was scared
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 43
If he wants Bella back he needs to lighten up
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 42
Thank goodness she can get out for a bit. Edward probably won't like it but OH WELL!!
Date: 25 Jul 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
This just what she needed
Date: 25 Jul 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 42
Even though Alice says they are not prisoners, they still kind of are. She can't go back home. I'm glad Bella has Alice at least.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 25 Jul 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 42
Thank God for Alice!
Date: 25 Jul 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 42
So glad that Bella has Alice. Maybe she will find some happiness there after all with being friends with Alice.