Date: 23 Jul 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 41
She will start to relax a little maybe
Date: 23 Jul 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 41
I can't believe he didn't tell her himself. Edward is making so many mistakes.
Date: 23 Jul 2016 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 41
I feel bad for her. Maybe this split will be enough to get them both to speak to each other when he returns.
Date: 23 Jul 2016 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 41
Absence makes the heart grow fonder.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 40
Edward has a lot to work out I amost feel sorry for him but what he put Bella through does he really expect her to just get over it so fast.?
Date: 22 Jul 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 40
His world revolves around respect. Well, respect is a two way street. He didn't respect Bella enough to be honest with her about what was going on in his life before he left. He didn't show her any respect when he made her leave her home without any say. And he isn't respecting his family by holding them prisoner in the compound where they have no say in anything. Did he really think she and the kids would actually be happy living there? He really isn't trying to get her to forgive him. Such an idiot!! Bella will probably be happier while Edward is gone.
I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 22 Jul 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 40
They have so far to go.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 40
OMGosh, he is leaving. I hope to goodness that he tells Bella that he is leaving. I know he can't tell her where or how long. Bella will be pissed if he doesn't. Plus the kids will think he had abandoned them again.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 40
OMG, He's a "Pozolero"?!?!?!?
yuuukkk
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 39
I CANT WAIT FOR MORE
Date: 20 Jul 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really want to kick Edward's ASS!! Can I?? Pretty please? So he tries to steal from Carlisle and then because he doesn't like his wife doing what he sees as unsavory or whateverthefuck is going on in his head, he comes and drags them away into this prison environment.... Best start GROVELIN' there son!!! LOL Anyway I love your writing so please continue to enthrall me!! XOXO
Date: 20 Jul 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 39
Respect him!!!!!! He does not deserve her respect. He is going to have to earn respect now after what he did
Date: 20 Jul 2016 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 39
Can we get a pov from Edward
i feel like it would be insightful
but not right now. Maybe Bella should be a bit more harsh, perhaps push a few more buttons
Date: 20 Jul 2016 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 39
Something has happened to him to make him so hard
Date: 20 Jul 2016 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 39
Way to go bella
Date: 20 Jul 2016 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 39
What does he expect from her just to roll over and be happy
Date: 19 Jul 2016 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 38
How long will she be able to hold her toung?
Date: 18 Jul 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 38
Edward should be very afraid
Date: 18 Jul 2016 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 38
Bella is nothappy. And I do not blame her. She and Edward need to go somewhere where the kids can not heard them and Bella needs to scream her head off at him and get it all off her chest.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 38
I too want to stab Edward!!!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 18 Jul 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 38
This story is yet another of your ....keeps me checking my email for updates every five minutes... stories.
Date: 10 Jul 2016 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 37
This story is okay, but I found myself beginning to lose interest. I will check in again when morec chapters have been posted. I uusually enjoy your stories.
Date: 08 Jul 2016 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 37
I wondering if Bella's mom will get to come visit and will hook up with Carlisle.
Date: 08 Jul 2016 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 36
Well, that did not good well.
Date: 08 Jul 2016 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 35
Well, Oliva is not much of a daddy's girl now.
Date: 07 Jul 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 37
Well old? is not important, whether you get to live is
Date: 07 Jul 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope Edward doesn't think they are going to be one big happy family now. If, I were Bella I wouldn't give him the time of day. Did he really think for all intents and purposes kidnapping them would be ok? That Bella would be ok with her children living like this? That she would be accepting of the people he brought her to??? That she would share his bed and be his wife again??? I think not!!! unless you write it that way, which, I hope you don't.
Date: 07 Jul 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 37
I have a creepy feeling.
Date: 07 Jul 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 36
This is such a turn of events. I'm figuring edward is about to turn really dark & commanding. I hope alice can ease bella into this new life & finger missing edward. Haha!
Date: 07 Jul 2016 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 37
A friendly Carlisle must be a relieft. :D
Date: 07 Jul 2016 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 37
She was expecting a monster Surprise !
Date: 06 Jul 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 36
What she is not getting is Carlisle could just have her killed. Oh my..
Date: 06 Jul 2016 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh, dude. You`ve made big mistake! But actually, I`m really sorry for both of them. Thank you for a new chapter!
Date: 06 Jul 2016 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 36
Not going very well
Date: 05 Jul 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 35
I don't know if I should feel sorry for Edward or help Bella give him a kick. Wonderful stuff.
Date: 05 Jul 2016 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 35
They are all in for a rocky ride.
Date: 05 Jul 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 35
He's not going to have it easy - and rightly so!!!!
Date: 05 Jul 2016 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 35
All kinds of shit goes bad when your baby does not have there fav toy.
Date: 03 Jul 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 34
I can't even imagine where her head is. Edward is in need of a really hard junk punch!
Date: 02 Jul 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 34
Its nice to meet Alice and Jasper, I wonder if Jasper will be trouble. Awesome stuff.
Date: 02 Jul 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 34
Hopefully Alice will be able to help Bella understand things and make it a little easier.
Date: 02 Jul 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
What a stupid, stupid man!!! How could he bring his kids to this place? I hope Bella lets him have it. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 02 Jul 2016 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 34
It is like she is on another planet
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 33
I don't blame Bella for being upset with Edward. I would be pissed too. She and the kids have had their life turned upside down twice now. We'll now I have to wsit for now update. Hopefully it won't be to long of a wait.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 32
OMGosh, I was right. The Mexican Mafia. Wow.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 31
Is Edward working under cover? Or for the Mexican Mafia? Lol
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
I need some answers. This is driving me crazy.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 29
Ok, what the hell???????
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 28
What the heck??? Why does Edward owe is life to Emmett? Where is Paul?maybe we will get some answers now.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 27
She does need to have some time for herself. I just hope she doesn't run into to anyone.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
Is Emmett just a nice guy or does he have something to do with Edward's disappearance.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
I thought Rose and Emmett were already dating. Is he a cop? Are does he have something to do with Edward's disappearance.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
I hope Jacob doesn't cause any problems for Bella. I am assuming that the phone call was from Edward.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bella needs to get mad. She needs to scream and shout and get it out of her system. I can not believe that Edward has not made any contact.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
I still want to know why Edward lost his job.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
I understand why Rose did not tell her.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella handled that pretty well. She needs to have a talk with Rose and fine out more of what is expected of her. She needs some details.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella is doing better than I would be doing. I don't know if I could do it. Maybe Bella needs to ask Marcus what he was wanting done.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Awkward!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Bella. She is between a rock and a hard spot.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow, I can't believe that Rose did not give her some insight before letting her just walk in there blind.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
Paul and Edward are missing. Can't wait to find out more. You are not giving away anything.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
What in the world is Rose got in store for Bella? Are Rose and Emmett married in this story?
Date: 29 Jun 2016 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
What does Rose have planned?
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
I keep wanting to think that some how all of this is NOT Edward's fault but it is really getting hard. Can't wait to see what is going on with Edward.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
I wondered if Edward has been paying the bills if he has not had a job for a while. Bella needs to go to the bank or call the bank and see if they have any money.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Poor kids.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
Will we be hearing from Edward? What is going on with him?
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad that Bella has Emily and Sam.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, Edward has not had his job for a while. What has he been doing? I hope he did not leave Bella destitute.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 33
Holy crap! He is missing a finger!!!!
Date: 29 Jun 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 33
no choices She is just has to adapt to the mess he has made.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow so does this mean Emse willeventually meet Carlisle? I rather feel for Bella and don't blame her for being upset.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 33
he needs a reminder by his wife...
Date: 28 Jun 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 33
What did he think she was going to do just go oh great your back not that girl
Date: 28 Jun 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella handled that very well.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can't believe Edward just left like he did. He took the cowardsway out.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
I use feel so sorry for Bella.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds like The Client List
Date: 28 Jun 2016 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 33
Edward is such a stupid ASS! How can he think their life will be fine. I would hate him.
Thanks for the awesome updates. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 28 Jun 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 32
If I were Bella I would kick his balls of and after kill him