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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2016 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 42

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 41

She will start to relax a little maybe

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 41

I can't believe he didn't tell her himself.  Edward is making so many mistakes.  

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 41

I feel bad for her.  Maybe this split will be enough to get them both to speak to each other when he returns. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 41

Absence makes the heart grow fonder. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 41

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 41

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 40

Edward has a lot to work out I amost feel sorry for him but what he put Bella through does he really expect her to just get over it so fast.?

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 40

His world revolves around respect. Well, respect is a two way street. He didn't respect Bella enough to be honest with her about what was going on in his life before he left. He didn't show her any respect when he made her leave her home without any say. And he isn't respecting his family by holding them prisoner in the compound where they have no say in anything. Did he really think she and the kids would actually be happy living there? He really isn't trying to get her to forgive him. Such an idiot!! Bella will probably be happier while Edward is gone.
I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 40

They have so far to go.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 40

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 40

OMGosh,  he is leaving. I hope to goodness that he tells Bella that he is leaving. I know he can't tell her where or how long. Bella will be pissed if he doesn't.  Plus the kids will think he had abandoned them again. 

Reviewer: GinnyD Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 40

OMG, He's a "Pozolero"?!?!?!?

yuuukkk

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 40

:)

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 39

I CANT WAIT FOR MORE

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really want to kick Edward's ASS!! Can I?? Pretty please? So he tries to steal from Carlisle and then because he doesn't like his wife doing what he sees as unsavory or whateverthefuck is going on in his head, he comes and drags them away into this prison environment.... Best start GROVELIN' there son!!! LOL Anyway I love your writing so please continue to enthrall me!! XOXO

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 39

Respect him!!!!!! He does not deserve her respect. He is going to have to earn respect now after what he did

Reviewer: Claire_bates Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 39

Can we get a pov from Edward 

i feel like it would be insightful 

but not right now. Maybe Bella should be a bit more harsh, perhaps push a few more buttons 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 39

Something has happened to him to make him so hard

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 39

Way to go bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 39

What does he expect from her just to roll over and be happy

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 39

yikes

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 38

How long will she be able to hold her toung?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 38

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 38

Edward should be very afraid 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 38

Bella is nothappy.  And I do not blame her. She and Edward need to go somewhere where the kids can not heard them and Bella needs to scream her head off at him and get it all off her chest.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 38

I too want to stab Edward!!!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 38

This story is yet another of your ....keeps me checking my email for updates every five minutes... stories. 

Reviewer: nep51 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 37

This story is okay, but I  found myself beginning to lose interest. I  will check in again when morec chapters have been posted. I uusually enjoy your stories.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2016 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 37

I wondering if Bella's mom will get to come visit and will hook up with Carlisle. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2016 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 36

Well, that did not good well. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2016 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 35

Well, Oliva is not much of a daddy's girl now. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 37

Well old? is not important, whether you get to live is

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope Edward doesn't think they are going to be one big happy family now. If, I were Bella I wouldn't give him the time of day. Did he really think for all intents and purposes kidnapping them would be ok? That Bella would be ok with her children living like this? That she would be accepting of the people he brought her to???  That she would share his bed and be his wife again??? I think not!!! unless you write it that way, which, I hope you don't.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 37

I have a creepy feeling.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 36

This is such a turn of events.  I'm figuring edward is about to turn really dark & commanding. I hope alice can ease bella into this new life & finger missing edward.  Haha!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2016 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 37

A friendly Carlisle must be a relieft.  :D

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2016 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 37

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2016 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 37

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2016 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 37

She was expecting a monster Surprise !

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 36

What she is not getting is Carlisle could just have her killed. Oh my..

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 36

Poor Bella

Reviewer: NelkaLife2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 36

Oh, dude. You`ve made big mistake! But actually, I`m really sorry for both of them. Thank you for a new chapter!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 36

Not going very well

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 36

yikes

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 36

Yowza!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 35

I don't know if I should feel sorry for Edward or help Bella give him a kick. Wonderful stuff.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 35

good

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 35

They are all in for a rocky ride.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 35

He's not going to have it easy - and rightly so!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 35

All kinds of shit goes bad when your baby does not have there fav toy.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 34

I can't even imagine where her head is.  Edward is in need of a really hard junk punch!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 34

Its nice to meet Alice and Jasper, I wonder if Jasper will be trouble.  Awesome stuff.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 34

Hopefully Alice will be able to help Bella understand things and make it a little easier.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 34

What a stupid, stupid man!!! How could he bring his kids to this place? I hope Bella lets him have it. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 34

It is like she is on another planet

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 34

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 33

I don't blame Bella for being upset with Edward.  I would be pissed too. She and the kids have had their life turned upside down twice now. We'll now I have to wsit for now update. Hopefully it won't be to long of a wait.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 32

OMGosh,  I was right. The Mexican Mafia.  Wow.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 31

Is Edward  working under cover? Or for the Mexican Mafia?  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 30

I need some answers.  This is driving me crazy. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 29

Ok, what the hell???????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 28

What the heck??? Why does Edward  owe is life to Emmett?  Where is Paul?maybe we will get some answers now. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 27

She does need to have some time for herself.  I just hope she doesn't run into to anyone.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 26

Is Emmett just a nice guy or does he have something to do with Edward's disappearance.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

I thought Rose and Emmett were already dating. Is he a cop? Are does he have something to do with Edward's disappearance. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 24

I hope Jacob doesn't cause any problems for Bella.  I am assuming that the phone call was from Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 23

Bella needs to get mad. She needs to scream and shout and get it out of her system.  I can not believe that Edward has not made any contact.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

I still want to know why Edward lost his job. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 21

I understand why Rose did not tell her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

Bella handled that pretty well. She needs to have a talk with Rose and fine out more of what is expected of her. She needs some details.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

Bella is doing better than I would be doing.  I don't know if I could do it. Maybe Bella needs to ask Marcus what he was wanting done. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

Awkward!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Bella.  She is between a rock and a hard spot.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow, I can't believe that Rose did not give her some insight before letting her just walk in there blind.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

Paul and Edward are missing.  Can't wait to find out more. You are not giving away anything.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 14

What in the world is Rose got in store for Bella?  Are Rose and Emmett married in this story?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

What does Rose have planned? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 12

I keep wanting to think that some how all of this is NOT Edward's fault but it is really getting hard. Can't wait to see what is going on with Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 11

I wondered if Edward has been paying the bills if he has not had a job for a while.  Bella needs to go to the bank or call the bank and see if they have any money. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor kids. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

Will we be hearing from Edward?  What is going on with him?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

I am glad that Bella has Emily and Sam.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow, Edward has not had his job for a while. What has he been doing? I hope he did not leave Bella destitute.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 33

Wow so good 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 33

Holy crap!  He is missing a finger!!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 33

no choices She is just has to adapt to the mess he has made.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 33

Wow so does this mean Emse willeventually meet Carlisle? I rather feel for Bella and don't blame her for being upset.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 33

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 33

Wowza!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 33

yikes

Reviewer: GinnyD Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 33

he needs a reminder by his wife...

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 33

What did he think she was going to do just go oh great your back not that girl

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

Bella handled that very well.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

I can't believe Edward just left like he did.  He took the cowardsway out.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

I use feel so sorry for Bella. 

Reviewer: Jane Rivera Vargas Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

This sounds like The Client List

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 33

Edward is such a stupid ASS! How can he think their life will be fine. I would hate him.
Thanks for the awesome updates. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 32

If I were Bella I would kick his balls of and after kill him

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