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Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Thanks for an entertaining story.

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Great Story.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 8:15 AM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Great & sweet little story. Loved it.  Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

thank you for sharing this sweet little story with us ;D

Reviewer: danqat Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 6:12 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Great story. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Loved it d84;a039;

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 7:41 AM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Thanks so much for another great story.  I always look forward to more :)

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Good story, just too short.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Thank you. I've enjoyed this but as anything good, I wanted more.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Sweet ending.  TY for writing and sharing

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

:)  loved this story.  Going to miss this Edward and Bella too 

Reviewer: jenni1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 4:17 PM Title: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Oh I loved it. Short but oh so sweet at the end.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 1:31 AM Title: Chapter-14

That was so sweet he picked his right time

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter-14

Lovely  story !  I only wish  it was  longer ! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter-14

awww so nice of him to bring Rose

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter-14

<3!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter-14

Lovely

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter-14

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter-13

Edward needs to step up and declare his love.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 4:03 AM Title: Chapter-13

Alice will give him the right shove lol

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter-13

he can offer her a great love that maybe she will stay for.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter-13

Men can be so clueless.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter-13

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter-13

Lol medicine taste isn't much better today. 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter-12

Will this little fic have a lemon? 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 6:28 AM Title: Chapter-12

Glad someone told e where he went.  Gawd people of that age were stupidly superstitious 

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 3:24 AM Title: Chapter-12

Still loving this tale together at last.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter-12

good chapter thank you

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter-12

He told her what she needed to here

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter-12

That explains her sudden disappearance.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter-12

:) 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 4:46 PM Title: Chapter-11

overwhelmed I would venture a guess.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter-11

She is hot for him!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter-11

Good thing Aro stayed quite

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 9:44 PM Title: Chapter-11

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter-11

oooh B recognizes him.  Hope she doesn't try to run.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 2:14 PM Title: Chapter-10

Burn Aro and his religious pricks.  The Laird would lose the respect and confidence of his subjects if he goes through with it.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 9:36 AM Title: Chapter-10

Oooohhh. This is getting good Edward as a champion...yes and please.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter-10

You my sweetie are the tease! Giving us just enough to wet our whistle and then bammm!!! it's gone.(lol) READ YOU SOON 😋💞d24;

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter-10

Aye and so he will save her from death.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 3:47 AM Title: Chapter-7

Oh my

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter-3

Sad

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 12:09 AM Title: Chapter-10

Go Edward!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter-10

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter-10

OMG he will fight for her love it

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter-9

hurry up Edward you have to fight for her or your Mama will not get healing.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 2:06 PM Title: Chapter-8

Well they did that in that day. Sad isn't it what people do when they don't understand the differences of others.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter-9

Great chapter!  Unfortunately, many women lost their lives this way during that time.  Idiocy!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 5:09 AM Title: Chapter-9

SO GOOD.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter-9

Lord Edward to the rescue!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter-9

Edward will be that Knight

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter-9

Poor Isabella 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter-9

Aro and all his "brethern" should be burned at the stake. Stupid men

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter-8

Edward will get to her and when he figures out who she is nothing will stop him

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter-8

Aww, I feel bad for Bella.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter-8

Loving this and on pins & needles.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter-8

Men.....Sigh.  lol for E calling out Crowley

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter-8

I I like this story  very  much    it is a big  change  from  your  usual  type  of  story, and I  am  glad  to  see  you  are  branching  out into different  genres .    Keep up the good work ! 

I only have a couple of slight corrections  to  note.  When you refer to the "land of the Scots," you should use only  one "t" or you are talking  about  property belonging to a family  named "Scott," not the  people  of  Scotland .    AND a person (usually  accused  of  heresy or witchcraft) being executed is said to  be  "burned  at the  stake " (singular ).  "Stakes" usually  refers to a horse race.

Really like your work and look forward  to  the  rest  of  the  story .  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter-8

Father Aro has too much power 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 6:52 AM Title: Chapter-7

LOVE IT!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter-7

Men always think they know best, esp religious ones

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter-6

I feel for Edward and Esme. I hope they can find help for her in time!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter-7

Father Aro needs to feel the equivalent pain of child birth 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter-7

Aro didn't like Bella s help

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter-7

Is Edward going to miss her because she was arrested already? I don't think Edward had anything to do with that.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter-7

ut oh. hurry Edward

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter-2

the simple mind of a child.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 4:27 AM Title: Chapter-5

Now to find the healer is that Bella?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter-5

oooh the plot thickens

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter-5

Good start, write another chaptersoon and maybe longer ones please

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter-5

I enjoy mystical stories with surprising twists.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter-5

:) 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter-5

I hope something can be done for her. I wonder if the healer will be Isabella....

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 6:44 AM Title: Chapter-4

I love the story so far, but the chapters are so short. THAK YOU

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter-4

I like this  one  so far.  Very interesting !   Keep  up  the  great  work !  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter-4

:) 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter-4

Prejudice over the centuries.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 5:29 PM Title: Chapter-4

Poor Edward.  Hope Alice can help.

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 4:39 PM Title: Chapter-3

This story intrigues me. Keep posting 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter-3

LOVE!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter-3

That is so sad why was she crying

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter-3

So sad...... 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 5:56 PM Title: Chapter-3

This makes me so sad. I can't wait to find out what is going on. Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 5:15 PM Title: Chapter-2

I love Isabella! She must keep her Mother busy!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter-3

awww poor kids

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 4:52 PM Title: Chapter-2

Rosemaria...too cute

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 4:52 PM Title: Chapter-1

aww little E is cute

 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter-2

Awwwwwww..they're both so sweet! ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2016 7:30 AM Title: Chapter-2

She was so proud of herself



Author's Response:

Lol. Little ones are like that, don't you think? ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: KBB Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 9:58 PM Title: Chapter-2

More please.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter-2

:) 



Author's Response:

:D

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 4:35 PM Title: Chapter-2

So sweet I love your stories I am a long time fan.

Author's Response:

Aww ... you're sweet. :*

Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 3:54 PM Title: Chapter-2

They sound so cute. About what age?



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Edward is about 10 and Isabella is 8.

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 11:16 AM Title: Chapter-1

The good beginning!

Has tomorrow



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you.

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 11:07 AM Title: Chapter-1

Looking forward to reading more



Author's Response:

Hey Deb. *waves*

It's always great to have words from you, hon. :*

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 10:47 AM Title: Chapter-1

I can't wait to see how this plays out! Thanks!

Author's Response:

You're welcome. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 7:15 AM Title: Chapter-1

So far so good.



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you.

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter-1

Sounds good cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you.

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter-1

I'm in....Wooooo hooooo!!! daily updates too. Hello my friend it's been a while but your magic has sucked me in 😊 READ YOU SOON 💖💙💚💛



Author's Response:

Hey! Hi! How have you been?

Yes, it's been a LONG time. :)

It's good to hear from you again.

Welcome aboard on this journey. ;)

Take care.

Ann xo

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter-1

Kitten, thanks so much for doing this for Granpa! He's excited, and truly your FanboyinGranpa! *Giggles* 

Loved working with you again...we make a great team! All my regular reviews will be on FFN. But my love for you will go wherever you go! *winks*

Love you so much! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- Your Granma Dee (FangirlinGranma)



Author's Response:

You're welcome, Granma. I'm glad to have you with me on this journey. :)

Love you too.

xo

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