Date: 21 Jun 2017 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you for finishing this story...a happy ending for Edward and Bella.
If you decide to do another, I miss the one you started where Bella left Edward to tour Europe and do volunteer work. When she returned, he had already moved on (even though they'd been together for 7-9 years and she was only gone 6 months). I guess you removed it, since it's no longer here. I'd love to see it finished.
You get very good numbers in reviews for this site. Look around...many multi-chapter stories only get 2-3 per chapter.
Thanks. I have been really lucky with people reading and reviewing my stories. I have only ever posted on this site. What holds me back is every day details, such as, going to school, college, university. It's all different from what I've been used to in England. It makes it harder to write about something you have had no experience of. I think that is what happened with the story you spoke of, I did take it down. I tried to put too many facts in (from the internet) and the story itself got bogged down and lost. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. Knowing people are reading my stories and seem to be enjoying them, gives me the encouragment to continue.
Date: 28 Oct 2016 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 27
I love your story and can't wait to read more! But I has to ask you had Bella graduate from college in the beginning and then when she went to the strip joint you had her underage? How old is she? Just curious ! Anyway great story so far .
Date: 28 Aug 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 25
I feel Bella is inappropriate at times with her temper. She overreacted banning Esme from her son's house and contact with grandchidren. They say you catch more flies with honey than vinegar. Bella has gained a powerful enemy.
Date: 27 Aug 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
Okay so apparently reason will not work with Carlisle either as he has apparently been completely by Esme. Rose really should tell everyone why Esme was told to leave, because she basically said she hated her own children, Rose and Jasper, Rose overhearing her cruel comments and also flat out telling Bella that she would be getting her out of Edwards life by any means possible! I totally agree with Bella, the woman obviously had mental health issues which should have been treated, it is Carlisle's own fault he did not get her help as she obviously was not all THERE and she basically ended up killing herself. The woman was crazy enough that I would not put it past her to purposely kill herself in hopes of separating Edward(her only child she loved) from Bella! Looking forward to the next chapter to see what chaos ensues!!! Happy Writing!!!
Date: 24 Aug 2016 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 24
Perhaps a new regime is looming on the horizon. Something must be going on. I can't believe Carlisle would want that for his daughter. Does Esme have something to gain from this? Curiouser snd curiouser.
Date: 21 Aug 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am sooooo glad that Edward is defending Alice now too!!!! As for Aro, EWWWWW!!!!! Poor Bella, I agree with her that he is QUITE CREEPY! Just saying! Also, I am really looking forward "ESME THE MANIPULATIVE WITCH" being knocked down a few dozen pegs. It looks as though Edward and Rose have joined Jasper in FINALLY seeing her for the schemeing and manipulative woman she is, who cares more about how things "look" and what her so called "friends, acquaintances, "FAMILY", business associates, etc." think rather than whether or not her chidren are HAPPY. She doesn't seem to care AT ALL if they are happy or not!!! I'm glad Edward listened to Bella and not only noticed how happy Alice makes Jasper, but commented on it as well. Totally got to say that Esme's comment about Jasper being "OFF HIS MEDS" was a REALLY LOW BLOW and not very MOTHERLY at all!!!! I definately do not see her winning any "MOTHER OF THE YEAR" awards and I am REALLY starting to think that she herself needs to begin taking meds ASAP as it appears that she is "NOT AT ALL RATIONAL"!!! Unfortunately it is her children, daughter-in-law, Alice, and Emment who are the victims of her being COMPLETELY INSUFFERABLE!!! POOR, POOR THINGS! and Happy Writing!!! As always, I'm REALLY looking forward to the next update!!! SEE YA LATER!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2016 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm kind of wondering if Bitchme will find a way to retaliate. Will Jasper start to appreciate Bella as he realizes she genuinely likes & befriends Alice? So glad Edward explained that he does love her. Can't wait for more updates.
Date: 19 Aug 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
I was so excited to see this new chapter posted! Loved it!!! They are finally hitched!!! Just got to say that I totally agree with Bella, Esme has got some nerve, by first flat out telling her how much she dislikes her and how she isn't good enough for Edward, and then proposing a truce specifically so that she (Esme) doesn't lose Edward or so that he isn't angry at her(Esme). Go Bella for telling her where she can stick her so called truce and exactly what YOU think of HER! She so had it coming and I'll bet that she no longer considers Bella to be MEEK and TIMID! Hah!!! I'm also glad that Jasperis coming around and being nicer to Bella now that she and Alice are friends. He is like a completely different person where Alice is concerned, as she seems to bring out the best in him! I have a feeling that Bella will need all of the Allies she can get with Esme as an enemy, just saying!!! It is just such a shame that Carlisle and Esme are completely disregarding Jasper's happiness and his love for Alice and their unborn child and choosing not to acknowledge their own granddaughter, not to mention that they're forbidding him to give HIS daughter HIS last name. I think that they're the ones that will be missing out and they only have themselves to blame. I am glad that Alice and Bella met and became friends (MUCH TO EDWARD'S DISMAY), as I think that they were both probably VERY lonely without many friends or relatives and both having to be very careful of who they do befriend because of the BUSINESS with which the men that they LOVE are involved. As always, I am anxiously awaiting and REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!!! Great work and Happy Writing!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2016 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
With them worried about Bella because of the families in town, I was surprised to see her out and about alone. I know she has protection, but since they didn't help her with the bouncer at the club, they aren't close enough to be effective.
Thanks for the chapter.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 21
GO BELLA!!! She not only smacked a bouncer and stripper around, putting them in their places; but Edward too!!! Although Edward so had it coming for his behavior, atleast he had enough sense not to cheat and he actually listened to Bella and what she said about Esme. I do hope that he manages to put her(Esme), in her place and let her know that he will not tolerate her mistreatment of Bella. Also, on a happy note, they BOTH said THE L WORD to each other!!! YEAH!!!! Just got to say that the aforementioned bouncer better hope that neither Bel!a nor Emmett mentions to Edward of his treatment towards Bel!a, I have a feeling that he would not take to kindly to knowing that he touched HIS FIANCEE. 😉