Date: 30 May 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am loving this story. Edward is falling for Bella. I'm surprised he has not made his move. Why did Rosalie say something about Edward wearing a red bowtie? I know it matched Bella's dress. Did it mean they were together and Edward did it so no one else would approach Bella at the party?
Date: 28 May 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'll bet Edward is seriously confused now, but I am really glad that Alice is coming around to the idea of them together. Also, it's so sweet that he gave her his mom's necklace. I'm still really confused aboutâ€‹ Carlisle though, what is with him and Esme? I'm still dieing to know what exactly Edward said to Esme!
Date: 30 Jul 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
I have been reading your story for a little while and have been following and awaiting each new chapter.
But lately I haven't been able to keep up with the stories as my health has been a bit complicated.
I have enjoyed your characters and the way the story is progressing. Please keep it going.
Date: 07 Jul 2016 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
I was about to say that this was way to short and I'm hungry for a little more but I'm not one to skip author's notes. I'll look for the story on fanfiction, I'm the same username thank goodness! I'm excited to read more.
Date: 05 Jul 2016 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Tragedy - what a cliffhanger.... Waiting on the update
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Date: 30 Jun 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm loving this! I'm still a bit confused about what darkness is being foreshadowed but I can't wait for the next update! Lemons would be awesome because this Edward and Bella have a special intensity that I haven't read before! Can I please have EPOV? What should I do to receive it?
Date: 30 Jun 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
Tragedy - and yet, Edward cannot resist her. Was Alice equating Edward to Aro? Because I don't exactly see the comparasion. Yes, maybe she doesn't want to see Bella hurt but this conversation should have taken place much sooner in order for that to be possible.
Let's see if "they" are meant to be. Love has conquered many obstacles.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
So loving this story. Really wondering what is up with Edward. Like that he is treating Bella a little better. But I am still very apprenhensive about what his true intentions are. Looking forward to your next update as I read all 10 chapters in one sitting today! Also, hoping I am not too late to get that Edward POV. :)
Date: 29 Jun 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
I do hope that Edward proves his sister wrong about him and his feelings for Bella, I do hope that he is being completely sincere with her and how CUTE is it that Romeo helped him with their customers! Too, too CUTE!!! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!!!
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoying the story. It's very insightful to get to see Alice's candid thoughts about Edward. Though it's clear she loves her family fiercely you can also see the bond she has with Bella by sharing her story and weariness about her dating Edward.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow. Thoes two are realy something. The question is what tragedy did Edward think of, when he gifted Bella the roses. Does he mean him self as a person who brings the tragedy or does he think, that the whole dating thing is a tragedy.
Uuuhhh yes lemons 😁
Hey, Edward didnt exactly think of the flowers as some sort of tragedy and neither does Bella, really. Its just a thought that Bella has that foreshadow's the path of their love story...but no worries this story will have a HEA :)