Date: 03 Apr 2017 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Funny the character who made the biggest impression was Hunter, would love to hear his story.
Also the story of the space station and what happened to those who survived the explosion. The Universe you created and its back story are infinate, rise and fall of civilizations.
Interesting choice. I like this character named Hunter. I picture him as gruff and a bit surly. Someone who has denied himself affection and love because of his scars and history and because of his guilt about Liam. He has had to lead a double life for a long time, protecting the secrets he knows about their society, yet at the same time tired of it and ready for everything to just be over. I think he developed a true affection for Edward despite his reluctance to train him and his anger at being forced to do so.
The space station and the surviving scientists would be an interesting choice too. Then there is Elizabeth and Ares and their love story. So many choices, so many stories to tell!
Thanks for your thoughts. Chapter 28 soon!
Date: 01 Apr 2017 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for you to finish so I can reread it complete. There have been a few occasions when I have had such viseral reactions to a story. Each of the writers have already published or are in the process. When you finish this get someone to look at it with a view to publishing, I will say it again"It is that good" Looking forward to future stories.
Grinning *hugely* here! Thanks again
Date: 31 Mar 2017 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 27
It is wonderful, i love the way you have brought it to this point meshing it into our time line. The detailed world you have created with your words, supports the story and makes me want to know more. it feels like there are many more tales to be told within this universe.
Thanks again! I appreciate your kind words and support. It's true there could be many spinoffs from this story. Whose would you think would be most interesting?
Date: 29 Mar 2017 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for all your responses glad you liked the reviews. It is not often I find a story that is worth reviewing and I can count the number that every chapter is worth making a comment on.
I startred The Protector and a few chapters in I had to go back reread and review. Every chapter was worth a review. I love your writing, especially the descriptions of, well... everything!!!
The flow, twists, pace and setting of this story is just right as are the emotions you elicit. I look forward to reading anything else you care to share and do let me know when you are published.
Have not read a good scifi story in ages.
Thank you for your lovely words! Wow, you made my day. LOL This is the first story I have ever attempted to actuallly complete. I have several others that were started, but never finished. Perhaps I will revisit them, now that I know I am actually capable of finishing somethng. As far as publishing, well don't know about that, but we will see. Chapter 27 just posted, I'm anxious to read your reaction. Thank you again for your kind words! Janet
Date: 28 Mar 2017 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Korinth is eerie...great writing.
Thank you. I have to say, I loved chapter 15. I guess because it was just Edward and his thoughts and that whole feeling of aloneness in his world. The storm was exciting to write and the emptiness of Korinth added to the mystery. I'm glad you enjoyed it too.
Date: 27 Mar 2017 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the small personal vingets inside the larger world story.
Thank you. Emmett has always been one of my favorite characters, although we will not see a lot of him in this story. Again, thanks for reading.
Date: 23 Mar 2017 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
While I'm glad edward finally got told what was going on, the way it was done was really stupid. Its no wonder he went off the deep end. But at least they've gotten back on the path they want to follow.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 12 Mar 2017 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow so worth the wait. I still don't think Edward has all the answers but what an amazing shield. Thank you for writing.
You are so very welcome. Thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave a review. It is very much appreciated.
Date: 24 Jan 2017 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
Congratulations !!Congratulations !!Congratulations !! on your award I voted for you because I adore your story and Protector.
Thank you so much! Your vote is very much appreciated, as well as your support for this newbie author. Thank you again.
Date: 16 Jan 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
wow. Sounds like only certain people have to make extrodinary sacrifies..wonder if those who don't recognize that.
Thanks for reading. Well, most of them don't know too much now; but they will soon.
Date: 08 Jan 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad that Bella and Edward finally talked. I think this was good for both of them. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
I'm glad you liked the chapter. Their talk continues in chapter 23. thanks for reading.!
Date: 08 Jan 2017 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh how I have missed you happy new year I will follow you until complete. You are an amazing author thank you for everything.
Thank you! Sorry it took so long to get this chapter posted. I was waiting until the new site was finished and running and then had lots of family and holiday stuff happen. I appreciate your sticking around. We are getting very close to the end of this adventure. Lots of things to be revealed. Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Nov 2016 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for the explanations. Poor clueless Edward, in more ways than one. I am so enjoying your story.
Thank you! Yes, a lot has been kept from him; but more answers are coming soon. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Date: 13 Nov 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my God! What an amazing story you have created!!! I couldn't reading once I started... the proof it's now 1:52 am... Looking forward to a new chapter!
Thank you so very much for your enthusiastic words! I'm very flattered that you are enjoying my story, especially as I realize it is not everyone's cup of tea, so to speak. Chapter 21 is undergoing an edit and should be ready soon. Thank you again for reading.