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Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

All these secrets and wasted years.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 14

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2017 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 13

This is crazy how they could keep this hidden.  They know Bella and Renee.  Did they never meet Renee's husband or Bella's dad? 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 13

Looking forward to the next chapter. What a place to leave us!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

Thanks!

Author's Response:

You're welcome :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2017 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 12

:) 



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Thanks :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'm glad Bella has Edward. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks!

Author's Response:

You're welcome :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Bella 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks !

Author's Response:

Thanks to you :)

Reviewer: vampireGirl 1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

The bodyguard mess everything up!!



Author's Response:

Damn him! But everything will turn out right ;)

Thanks hun

Reviewer: vampireGirl 1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 8

The ball going to be interesting.



Author's Response:

It sure was ;)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

Omg ! Love your story can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks! You make me blush :)

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2017 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

Eewwww!  So ho is the old man and the young lady?



Author's Response:

It will be revealed in the next chapter ;) You'll be surprised.

Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2017 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 9

:) 



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Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 



Author's Response:

Hi!

Thanks hun.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2017 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 8

Your story is wonderful ! Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Hi!

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2017 10:12 PM Title: Prologue

I wonder how that's gonna work out.

 



Author's Response:

Hi!

You'll see ;)

Thank you.

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2017 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

What a female dog!!! That was soooooooo mean.



Author's Response:

yes. And Charlie wants them to be friends, so foolish.

Thank you.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2016 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

I don't blame bella for not wanted to be friends with Angela.



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No, as a matter of fact, I think a line is forming to kick Angela's ass. And there's more still to come ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2016 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)



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Thanks hun :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm sure her mom will help her.



Author's Response:

Well, she has to. She's keeping a lot of information for Bella and Charlie's sake :)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

Edward when through a lot at a young age.



Author's Response:

Yeah, fame wasn't gentle to him :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2016 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks hun! I'm always thankful of your support :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

Bella don't sound happy about edward being with a girl.



Author's Response:

she soon will learn she has nothing to worry about ;)

Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)  Those furry caterpillars seem to be getting everywhere 



Author's Response:

Yeah :) Those sneaky little things ;)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2016 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 3

Charlie made a big mistake.



Author's Response:

He's not the brightest parent :)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Bella.  Charlie is smothering her 



Author's Response:

Yeah, not the best parenting decision.

Thanks hun :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)



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Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

This is getting good so far.



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Thanks :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent, but can I suggest you get a beta, or proof reader.....I love how the story is going, just needs to be tweaked a little

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm working on that (the beta), I really hope I'll have good news soon ;)

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2016 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love the flow so far



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2016 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Edward really want to ask bella to be his girlfriend.



Author's Response:

We just have to hope he find the courage to do it soon ;)

Thanks my friend :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 10:56 PM Title: Prologue

Great Start, so 19yrs later we will see Edward

Author's Response:

Hi!

Yes, Edward will tell us his story; how his father's fame affects him and how he will struggle to get his girl ;)

I really hope you'll like this story :)

Thanks!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 10:31 PM Title: Prologue

OMG ! Love it already and can not wait for more to read ! I remember that band lol ! This is going to be great I just know it ! Good Luck with the writing you will do great !



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for cheering me up!

I'm glad you remember them, I wasn't sure if they were really known outside latin America.

I really hope you'll like this story :)

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 4:09 PM Title: Prologue

Hey!!!! Menudo was big in th US too! (he he he) I'm not sure I like the idea that this will be a short story when it obviously has the potential to go further. (just a thought) READ YOU SOON  : )



Author's Response:

Hi!

I wasn't sure if they were known in the US ( oh those memories!)

Well, let's see how talkative these characters get ;) They have a lot to say.

Thank you so much for your support and I really hope you'll like the story :)

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 1:49 PM Title: Prologue

Cant wait i love your work!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I really appreciate your support :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 8:02 AM Title: Prologue

Looking forward to reading more :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks hun! I really appreciate it :)

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 6:50 AM Title: Prologue

Great start



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you'll like the story :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 4:05 AM Title: Prologue

Good start!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun :)

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