[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2020 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
You had Emmett and Rose in front of each other, and had him mate with Angelica?!?!?!? Blasphemy Clo, blasphemy. ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2020 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
So Alice is not a vampire?
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2020 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting. Loving it so far.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2020 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very unique. Love it
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2018 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Please update soon - I really like this story and the way you are writing it.
Date: 28 Jan 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
This is a very intriguing story. I hope you will continue it.
Date: 05 Jan 2017 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
I was wondering are you planning on finishing this story because you have a good start here I didn't even want to stop reading it and it's only 5 chapters!
Date: 15 Nov 2016 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Rose must be mated to Emmetts twin. Look forward to more
Date: 11 Oct 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
awww for Angelica's new wings
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Very cool that they are all very mystical. Hope to see more and maybe longer chapter's?
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
J'aime ce chapitre!
Je suis impatient de lire la suite.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 08 Oct 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, my! Well, since Emmett pretty much "imprinted" on Angelica, I'm goin' out on a limb and surmise Rose's enchantment with Evelyn's animal, which sounds like a beautiful white horse, is indicative of a deeper connection!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well that was a surprise. 🙂 Thank you for updating. I really enjoyed this chapter.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm confused. I thought Rose was drawn to the white fur animal, which is Emmett. But then Angelica was Emmett's mate. Unless Rose is drawn to Emmett's sister. I went back and read and it is not clear which one is the white fur animal. I just assume that it was Emmett.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well I didn't see thank coming but now they have two more for their group what and who will they find next
Date: 08 Oct 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
WHAT!!!! Emmett and Angelica not Rose???? You have us all confused.
KEEP WRITING!!!!💖🚑🚒
Date: 08 Oct 2016 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was beautiful, I loved the end it was great, amazing simply amazing I love it... Deb
Date: 07 Oct 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
What a marvelous imagination you have!
Date: 07 Oct 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
thought Rose was going to meet her mate- Emmett. Is it Royce?
Date: 07 Oct 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow thought emmett was going tobe roses mate butoh well look forward to next update x
Date: 07 Oct 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
That's interesting hat Emmett mates with Angelica and not Rose.
Date: 07 Oct 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm guessing you didn't want to be predictable and have Emmett bond with Rose. Since she felt such a strong pull to the pair, she may be the mate of Evelyn.
Date: 06 Oct 2016 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Do you know when you will update again. I love these fantasy stories. Right now yours is at the top of my favorites list.
Date: 23 Sep 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
So good. Love the pictures. So Edward is a human blood drinker at this point in time? Waiting with bated breath for next update.
Date: 23 Sep 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
Awww. This is so cool. Insanely curious what everyone else will be like.
Date: 02 Sep 2016 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wonderful story. My only concerns is you don't turn whoever Bella Mate is into and animal drinker vampire. The fact Bella is already judging her unknown mate is already pissing me off. This story has great potential and I hope it doesn't turn into every other vampire/human fics out there cause I can't deal with those. Hope our Bella get a backbone and worthy of her mate
Date: 24 Aug 2016 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Emmett is watching ? I love the art work very cool.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
A wonderfully intriguing story. Just enough info to compel us to read on. Love it. Thanks
Date: 16 Aug 2016 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter!! I like the friends she's making. Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2016 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Ohhh, how I love this world so far, I never want the chapter to end and come back to my real one. But I'm sure there are perils and drama ahead that could change my mind quick enough. Hehehe! Angelica is adorable with her gossipy little bird friend who tells all. And now the red-eyed stranger. Well my first guess is a vamp, but not Edward cause I'm thinking her compass would know. So I'm hoping it's Emmett drawn to Rosalie. And I hope he's good and winds up having a connection to an equally good Edward.
Can't wait for more! Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 15 Aug 2016 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
Ofcourse Edward
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
I loved it wow more have joined them what will they learn on the way and when will the one following them make himself known
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
I already saw your images of Emmett and I'm pretty sure that photo is Edward .... anyway love the story can't wait to read more !! 💋💋
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
Cant wait for more
Date: 14 Aug 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh wonder if it's Edward or maybe emmett look forward to next update xx
Date: 14 Aug 2016 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
The watcher is either Rosalie's mate, or Bella's! The red eyes are bound to be a vampire! I'm glad Alice and Alec and now Angelica, are joining up, there should be safety in numbers! Bella's dream sounds like a warning, or an omen, so I hope she believes!
Date: 14 Aug 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 14 Aug 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm thinkin' we might be about to meet Rose's mate! Can't be havin' Bella's mate appear on the scene too soon LOL!
Bella's entourage is growin' leaps and bounds with two more added after Alice and Alec! She'll need everyone she can get to get where she needs to be in one piece!
Date: 14 Aug 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm guessing it's Emmett. Such an original story and I love it.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2016 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
LOVED IT!!! I'm gonna go with Emmett being next :)
Date: 14 Aug 2016 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Lone traveler huh!?
Thanks for the update!
Date: 14 Aug 2016 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think through stranger is Emmett and his pull is to Rose. Thank you for updating. So excited to get this update.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Dun dun dun.... oooo I think it's Edward. This story is amazing sauce! I love it. I can't wait for more!
Date: 14 Aug 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm guessing it's Emmett since the compass seems to be leading the party away from him, and he seems to be following them. I suppose it could be Edward, but I'm still thinking Emmett right now
Date: 14 Aug 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ok that is a cliffy but it is great I happen to like a little cliffy now and then, bit I am asuming the guy covered from head to toe except his red eyes is our Edward...
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2016 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm enjoying this mystical journey.
My guess is that it's Emmett?
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2016 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Il est certainement un vampire!
Edward? Emmet? Un misérable ou d'une personne gentille?
Je suis impatient de lire la suite.
Merci. Bisous.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Is doesn't look like Edward.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very good, I hope the watcher is Edward
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
This chapter was purrrrfectly wonderful! I thought it just might be Jasper meeting his mate Alice first...but once again I love the twist on things. I'm suspecting they may run into Emmett (in some shape or form. LOL!) for Rose next. But, of course, I'm most anticipating Bella and Edward's introduction to each other.
I immediately recognized the Lincoln Monument and knew they were in D.C.! The descriptions of the world thru their eyes was so childlike and innocent, explaining things they'd never seen before. Loved Rose's summation of the owl...they ARE "strange" and "different" birds! *Giggles* Brilliantly written, my BB!
I adore this unusual storyline, the unique characters and the world you've created. But most of all, I adore you for sharing them with us. Please write on. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hello I really like this so far it's very different and I love e different
Date: 27 Jul 2016 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Enjoying this immensely, mankind is cruel but not irredeemable hopefully,
I like how the other races have saved themselves and once you put the Vampires
back in their place, all will be well xx
AAP
Date: 27 Jul 2016 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Liking this so far, nothing wrong with a bit of mystical now and then xx
AAP
Date: 23 Jul 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm really enjoying this story it's unusual and a great read look forward to next update x
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Il est un très bon chapitre.
Je suis impatient de lire la suite.
Je vous remercie.
Date: 20 Jul 2016 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Cool loving this thanks so much
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hope Alice will go with them. That way Bella will have more protection.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Woohoo!!! Jasper found his mate!!! I am gonna say they meet Emmett or Carlisle & Esme. Ehy? Cause you always save the best for last and Edward is the best.
Look forward to seeing the history of Alice's people
Date: 19 Jul 2016 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
So interesting. I do like the AU you are creating. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2016 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
Fascinating. Thank you
Date: 19 Jul 2016 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
So, they were in the Library of Congress and that was the Lincoln statue so the long black wall must have been the Viet Nam wall of the fallen. Washington DC is on my bucket list *sigh!*
So, didn't take long for at least one of the three to meet their mate LOL! Well, the more protectin' Bella, the better!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
I might think roses mate
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love love loved it!!! I really like Alice and that she's a guardian with cats. Very cool. I hope Rose and Bella get their HEA too.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
Sorry it took so long on reviewing but we don't work on Monday. Lol!!!
OK so Jasper found his mate next will be Rose finding her mate????
I showed the teaser to some of the crew and the bear is Emmett and we think the next picture is Carlisle????
KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑💖
Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it. Can't wait to see who they will meet next...
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Cant wait for more
Date: 18 Jul 2016 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love that Alice and her cat have the same coloring! Good for Jasper , to have found his mate, now if only Bella can find hers!
Date: 18 Jul 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Short & sweet
Date: 18 Jul 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
awww for Jasper finding alice already
Date: 18 Jul 2016 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 18 Jul 2016 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Soooo cool really liked it!!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 18 Jul 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it. Sitting on edge of seat chewing finger nail.
Date: 14 Jul 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm really looking foreard to reading more. This started off very good!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2016 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like how a hidden virus destroyed mankind.
I don't think Bella's quest will be an easy one.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2016 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm excited to read this. I'm so ready for some fantasy.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2016 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
The description of the outside world and the fall of man was so sad, yet not too hard to imagine it really happening that way...including the mystical creatures (hehehe).
Got a feeling Jasper may meet an interesting...Alice? Perhaps Rose will find herself a HUMAN to rescue? I sure do hope that Bella's mate is full of light, as she is worthy of such a match. So I'm thinking he is, but I've been wrong oodles of times before. *Giggles* I can't wait to find out what's in store for this trio.
I'm loving this story, and you, Honey Bunny! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 10 Jul 2016 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Like this a lot ! Keep up the great work !
Date: 10 Jul 2016 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 10 Jul 2016 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
So glad this is continuing! I hope we get to see more soon. I wonder what other odd things they will find on their journey.
Date: 09 Jul 2016 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Leavin' your home for the scary world outside is always fraught with danger so it's a good thing Bella has Jasper and Rosalie with her! At least they now have some knowledge of what to expect...they just need to be extremely careful *nail bitin' already!*
Date: 09 Jul 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love it to be in your head must be a wild place lol Thanks
Date: 09 Jul 2016 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am thinking the pull Jasper and Rose are feeling will be Alice and Emmett. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 09 Jul 2016 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love this concept so far.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2016 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ë Avis de Mon fils futur compagnon sérums non Être plein de lumière ...
Merci. Bisous.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2016 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
Think I'll go out and buy some ginsing tomorrow:) Can't be too careful:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2016 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
A great 1st chapter. Just enough to get me hooked!
Date: 08 Jul 2016 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
Intrigued!
Date: 08 Jul 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really enjoying this story, can't wait to read more.
Date: 08 Jul 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Her mate will be full of light on the inside but black on the outside.
KEEP WRITING!!!!💖🚑🚒
Date: 08 Jul 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is wonderful I love it and I like that it is gensing that protected mankind for the virus very very ingenious. I can'wait for chapter 3... Deb Walsh