Date: 28 Sep 2022 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love this story
Date: 28 Sep 2022 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love this story
Date: 28 Sep 2022 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love this story..
Date: 28 Sep 2022 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love this story..
Date: 28 Sep 2022 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love this story..
Date: 28 Sep 2022 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love this story..
Date: 28 Sep 2022 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love this story..
Date: 15 Mar 2020 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG!!! Please come back I really want to read part 2 of this!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2020 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG!!! Please come back I really want to read part 2 of this!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2020 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG!!! Please come back I really want to read part 2 of this!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2020 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG!!! Please come back I really want to read part 2 of this!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2020 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG!!! Please come back I really want to read part 2 of this!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2020 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG!!! Please come back I really want to read part 2 of this!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2020 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG!!! Please come back I really want to read part 2 of this!!!
Date: 24 Jul 2017 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 21
I just wanted to let you know that I started to read the story today and couldn't put it down. I love it! Great twist there w the whole sorceress thing. Can't wait for more!
Date: 27 Jun 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
GREAT STORY HPE YOU DO THE SECOND PART, LOVE TO READ THE SEQUEL RIALY GOT ME GOING .
Date: 18 Jan 2017 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
How is this story complete when you left off at that point? Did you just decide to stop writing?
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG! That can't be happening. Please update soon!
Date: 26 Oct 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow! So exciting! More please
Date: 24 Oct 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh my god!!! This is so exciting! :)
Date: 21 Oct 2016 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yea..i love this Bella.
Date: 21 Oct 2016 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
So far so good..will keep on reading..
Date: 18 Oct 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
This has been very good ! I can't wait for the next installment !
Date: 18 Oct 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
oooh my. quite a cliffy you are leaving us with. TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Cant blame E for not wanting to leave her
Date: 17 Oct 2016 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
I wonder what Bella's powers are.
Date: 17 Oct 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
Goodness that sounds painful.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2016 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
:) loved this. Looking forward to reading the next part
Date: 15 Oct 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Maybe if everyone works together, they might be able to defeat Cronus? I'm sure putting my money on Bella and her new family!
Date: 15 Oct 2016 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella and Edward both have good reason to fear this earlier than usual transformation, I'm afraid! It must be caused by something pretty dire!
Date: 15 Oct 2016 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well Bella seems cohereant and definitely in charge of things,
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2016 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
scary for everyone....
Date: 26 Sep 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Gah!!! Now I have to wait for updates! Love this story!
Date: 23 Sep 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
It's a good thing Charlie is out of town.
Date: 21 Sep 2016 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
Dang. Poor Bella.
Date: 20 Sep 2016 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
I really enjoy your story and I can't wait to see where you are going with it
Date: 20 Sep 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
ooh a slow change taking place? Interesting
Date: 19 Sep 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my god! Is she turning into a vampire?
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm guessing that Bella is changing????
Date: 18 Sep 2016 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
Looks and sounds as if Bella has begun her transformation! I wonder why now? Good luck with finishing up the moving!
Date: 10 Sep 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
So exciting... (:
Date: 09 Sep 2016 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm curious about her dream...
Date: 31 Aug 2016 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Bella. I would rather be a vampire than burned alive with acid for a week. Thank God she has support. How is Charlie going to handle this?
Date: 30 Aug 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
oooh now THAT is a cool new twist. Rose is so jealous. Wonder how long till she does something unforgiveable like go to the V or get Tanya to come bug E.
Date: 30 Aug 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
I cant wait until the next chapte! Does this mean she wont be a vampire? Will her and edward be able to have kids?
Date: 30 Aug 2016 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
oooh can't wait to see who the woman is. He should have waited till the end of the day to stress the talking to Carlisle part. That would drive me crazy all day too.
Date: 30 Aug 2016 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh, and thank you for using the name of my favorite goddess as your immortal sorceress , or are you saying that she is originally from Egypt ? That would be cool. Her name has gotten a lot of bad press lately .
Date: 30 Aug 2016 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow ! I really like this story ! Can't wait to see where you go with it! Keep up the great work !
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wonderful job I love it
Date: 29 Aug 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow I love it
Date: 29 Aug 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wonderful
Date: 29 Aug 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow I love it
Date: 29 Aug 2016 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Fantastic
Date: 29 Aug 2016 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love it
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
WOw this is awesome
Date: 29 Aug 2016 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
I was way off base, guessing the vision might have been Elisabeth Masen! This twist is fascinating, what with Bella being a future immortal sorceress! I can see why she and Edward were drawn to each other, and how it will have bearing on their future together! I can hardly wait to see where we go from here!
Date: 29 Aug 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
I have a strong hunch that Bella has met Edward's biological mother!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow that was awesome
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow I love it.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow I love it,
Date: 29 Aug 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
Not what I was expecting, but I like that it's unique. I wonder when Bella's change will occur.
I hope we get to see Jake go down soon for hurting Bella and breaking the treaty :-p
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow I love it,
Date: 18 Aug 2016 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm liking how open with each other they are
Date: 18 Aug 2016 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
I just have a hard time liking Jacob at all.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm glad she speaks up for herself.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm loving your story
Date: 18 Aug 2016 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love this more rational Bella.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm so happy that they are moving along (:
Date: 17 Aug 2016 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ah Rose being Rose...can we expect anything else? lol. Good family meeting. Hyper Alice is too funny.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
So glad Edward wants to change her. This is much better than the original Twilight :)
Looking forward to the confrontation with the wolves.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loving it. I got the fibroids after my last kid was born. It is a serious condition that can cause anemia, I am anemic and last year I almost got a transfusion.
Date: 15 Aug 2016 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
I really love this version. Thank you
Date: 15 Aug 2016 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Very smart to have a valid medical reason for Bella's attitude towards motherhood! I hope your moving goessmoothly and you get all settled in okay. This story is getting more dramatic as the wolves are now involved, so I look forward to upcoming chapters!
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
I just hope the other wolves don't side with rogue Jacob. And agree that Jacob broke the treaty.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
I knew Bella would accept Edward's truth, because she experiences some supernatural things too. I still think Bella should have showed those bruises to Charlie so she could get a restraining order on him.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Bella needs to be told the facts immediately. And she needs to show Charlie what Jake did to her.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm glad that Edward is being more forward, for him at least. Their date was cute. I love that Bella is musically talented as well.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad Bella likes shopping and heels a little bit at least. But Alice is still insane about it and needs to cool it.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah that won't get the 2 slutties to back in any way. They are just like Mike and can't comprehend words. ugh... And Rose ...just ugh....
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
I really liked that everyone gave them some time alone. At least for a while.... Rose still being a jealous, bitchy shrew still bothers me a lot.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well I figured that Bella would get along with Esme and Carlisle. But I wonder about the siblings.... hmmmm... Mike is still making me nervous.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, I think Bella is going to be honest with Edward before he can be honest with her. Chicken shit men!! LOL
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Mike still glaring at Bella worries me... But Bella and Edward need to really 'talk' soon, so Bella doesn't think she is going crazy with these 'pull' feelings.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
I loved how Bella told off Mike. It was probably still too subtle for his dumb ass though. LOL
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hate that Rose has to be a bitch about everything. sigh... Hopefu;lly Bella will be a bitch back to her.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
It's great that they feel the same. Poor Bella doesn't know what the feeling is though. I hope Edward tells her everything soon. And I really hope his family is all supportive, even Rose.